My first fake
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posted01/14/2007 01:01 AM (UTC)by
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Hikari715
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01/07/2006 12:56 AM (UTC)
The sprites were inspired from here.


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Yeah, the lifebar for Mileena is a bit off and oh, constructive criticism is greatly welcome.

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fijikungfu
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01/07/2007 01:24 AM (UTC)
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The sprites are good... the Mileena one just needs a teeny bit more...
Jade should be darkened though, so that it looks like she's actually behind the tree... but overall cool sprites and costumes... 4/5
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Arctic
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01/07/2007 01:28 AM (UTC)
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Well, as a considered exceptional sprite editor, I must tell you. Look at Mileena's and Jade's boobs. (Not that way.) They look like you just drew on them. The best thing to do to fix this is to learn how to shade better. Look at some renders to help you with that. The backround could've been edited but I won't hold that against you. Yes as you metioned, the lifebars are not bad but they could have been placed properly and given the score and "Wins:"

So... you got yourself a pretty good fake. Nice job. Finally something from you.

3.5/5
Arctic Wrote:
Well, as a considered exceptional sprite editor, I must tell you. Look at Mileena's and Jade's boobs. (Not that way.) They look like you just drew on them. The best thing to do to fix this is to learn how to shade better. Look at some renders to help you with that. The backround could've been edited but I won't hold that against you. Yes as you metioned, the lifebars are not bad but they could have been placed properly and given the score and "Wins:"

So... you got yourself a pretty good fake. Nice job. Finally something from you.

3.5/5

I agree with Arctic also Kitana's head kind of looks like it's fused with the rest of the body,it looks like she doesnt have a neck.But the Jade is excelent.

3.7/5
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Iori9
01/07/2007 02:16 AM (UTC)
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its OK, nothing too great but since it is your first Il give you a 3.9
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Keith
01/07/2007 02:18 AM (UTC)
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Fantastic! Especially considering that it's your first fake. Well done. I love the subtle yet lovely details and changes you've made to the three girls, Mileena in particular. Keep at it, you've got buckets of potential! 5/5 grin
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01/07/2007 02:29 AM (UTC)
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Compared to a lot of the "first fake" threads that wind up posted here, this is a pretty good one. Like what Arctic said, the breasts don't seem realistic, but I like what you did with their outfits. I'm not a sprite editor or anything, but they look cool. Keep it up.
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Hikari715
01/07/2007 02:34 AM (UTC)
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Thanks everyone esp. to Arctic for the advice! Yeah, I admit the breasts aren't realistic.
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KingBellsprout
01/10/2007 09:52 PM (UTC)
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Hikari715 Wrote:
The sprites were inspired from here.


Sprites:


Yeah, the lifebar for Mileena is a bit off and oh, constructive criticism is greatly welcome.

smile


This is actually really good. I just think that Kitana looks like she is laughing because her hand is covering her mouth. The blood is good and the placement of the fan is great. I give this sprite (users first) a 5/5
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01/11/2007 12:10 AM (UTC)
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Well i liked it.

Tell me was it fun to make ?

Because, i never tried making one because it just didnt look too satisfying.
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UltimateRyu
01/11/2007 12:44 AM (UTC)
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Nice job here. At first glance I thought all the MK2 sprites were just a copy and paste job from MKW, but then I noticed all the subtle edits you made to make them look like the MKDA+ eras.
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illu§ion
01/11/2007 01:02 AM (UTC)
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How can that fake get so much positive approval if it's just Kitana jumping on the air as Mileena is getting hit? There is no uniqueness behing it. No sprite editing. Nothing great about it. Not to hurt you feelings, but for your next fake...brainstorm something that is more kick ass and appealing.
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Zentile
01/11/2007 08:26 PM (UTC)
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illu§ion Wrote:
How can that fake get so much positive approval if it's just Kitana jumping on the air as Mileena is getting hit? There is no uniqueness behing it. No sprite editing. Nothing great about it. Not to hurt you feelings, but for your next fake...brainstorm something that is more kick ass and appealing.


The edits are so good, our friend Marcel didn't even notice them.

Great job, brother. Hope to see alot more of your stuff.
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KingBellsprout
01/12/2007 10:13 PM (UTC)
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illu§ion Wrote:
How can that fake get so much positive approval if it's just Kitana jumping on the air as Mileena is getting hit? There is no uniqueness behing it. No sprite editing. Nothing great about it. Not to hurt you feelings, but for your next fake...brainstorm something that is more kick ass and appealing.


there may be no uniqueness in the fake but it is still a kick ass job.

Just because people want to do things that are simple doesn't mean that those things don't look good and appealing to other people. Yea you are right there are only a few tweaks and changes but it is still good.
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Godzilla
01/13/2007 12:40 AM (UTC)
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Looks nice. But yeah, Jade could be shaded/ made smaller, since she's hiding in the background.
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01/13/2007 07:36 PM (UTC)
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First let me just say that I can't edit sprites to save my life. It looks like it takes tons of patience that I just don't have lol. I'll just stick to drawing thanks tongue


Having said that, I gotta say that I think this is a great job. ESPECIALLY since it's only your first. From what is seen here, and if you take the great advice that was given to you in this thread, I bet you will be great at making fakes.


Very good pic 4/5 smile
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Iori9
01/14/2007 01:01 AM (UTC)
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now that I think of it , the sprites are nice for a begginer
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