That was wrong in so many ways...

please explain?

o, it was retarded in so many ways...

Don't expect the scream to win the contest (if that's what it's for.) I can picture someone standing in a middle of a huge crowd and screaming it, scaring the shit out of everyone at a quiet moment. That's my idea of a winner...

And the fighting, I didn't really get the point in that. The excessive blood was alittle too staged (don't stop in the middle of a fight, or whatever, to vomit it) and unnecessary as well. Maybe a little spitting, and some around the face woulda been fine.

Also, again, I'd picture fighting around a big crowd (Jackass anyone?) where spectators are watching and getting concerned (or laughing; up to them) so it adds a nicer, funnier, more realistic touch.

Although, I like the directed camera angles, made to look like a short movie instead of a shitty 1-shot, camera made video. The music and sound effects are also a nice touch, they fit (and are timed) well.

Also, if this is for the contest, then you shoulda shown what a huge fan you were (room, posters, action figures, games, etc...) Instead of randomly stopping in the middle of something (an interview, or review?) to go out and fight eachother and vomit blood all over the place.

No offense bro, but this wasn't even comical.