Again, the sprites are too small, and the word "fatality" shouldn't be on the screen if he's halfway through it, becaue that doesn't appear untill after the fatality.
Of course there should be lifebars and such too, why you didn't bother to add them i don't know, but it really lowers the quality of the fake without them.

Try spending a good amount of time on your future fakes. Play around with different ideas and try to find something simple and original, then really take your time to make the idea into something decent by adding the small details and trying to make it actually look like it could be a shot from the game.

First of all in this and your other fakes is that the background is to big and the sprites r in the wrounge place, as said above the word fatality souldent be there have half through it.

-Foot

best thing to do (this is what i did for mine cos i couldnt remember the set up) is use mkwarehouse for the sprites. background and effects and watch a fatality in the fatality theatre to see how its done professionally

thanx to the last person eho replied i will do the fatality theatre thanx for tryin to help but all yall others do is complain and tell me it sux but don't tell me wuts wrong....plez show me of your own so i can get an idea

No, we gave a critique, we're trying to help you.
We tell you what you need to improve, so you can improve it and make great fakes (because at the moment, your fakes are nothing great, but thats because you've just started, which is why we're trying to help you here).
If you don't want people to comment on your art, don't make it public.

We're not complaining at all. Wait until you meet some of the more harsh members on this forum.

EDIT: Actually i didn't say "it sux" at all, nor did anyone else, and we did give you some pointers and advice.

i dont like it too much....keep working on them and they will get better, just put more time in it, i just think its way to plain, and yea everyone else pointed out the other problems

why dont you just post the picture

here better?