Idea is nice, rest is...naaaah.

Sorry, 4/10.

The lightning you drew is horrible. I don't see why the hell lightning would make you bleed like that. It's supposed to electricute you, not stab you like a damn sword. The only thing you did half-way right was coloring Rain.
1/10

its right its supose to burn him and his cloth

i see u fixed it thats will not give u a 10/10 but thats way batter good job. but its still a lighning dont make a person bleed. it make a person burn.

ok

i made it so the guy is on fire, but im putting it on 2nd page cus i dont like it, i only done this because i think its what people were asking for

The whole fake and idea still just sucks. You're better off starting from scratch.

Hypocrite. You don't start from scratch, you just paste stuff everywhere.

Anyway, the lightning looks a lot better, but it looks kind of...well, it needs an impact or something. Like an explosion on the character would fit nicely.

Even though I've seen this type of fake done with Rain its ok for u. I've seen where ur coming from with the fake. You're getting better. Just keep at it.
1/10



And acid goes through people like an arrow.

hahaha lol

i think the new version ROX!! thats so cool howd u do the thunder and lightning

ty mark, i made the lightning...

i started a new fake yesterday, should be up late today...i personally reckon its my best, or 2nd best.

and to mark, i see your improving in your work, at least your not as cocky and everything as MKVII -D