A) It makes no sense. What the hell is going on?
B) Nobody likes to see robots have sex.

well then u must be retarded.

If anything is retarded, it's that animation.
Cyrax looks like he has a stick up is ass and is dancing like a faggot. The animation looks choppy ass hell... I'm sorry, but this sucks. I can even see where you fucked up the transparencies in the animation. Damn, you're pretty lazy. You're still acting like a noob when you should have figured out by now how to improve.
Don't even tell me it's up to the users on this forum to tell you how to improve. You should take what we say that sucks and fix it. I don't have time to sit here and type up a report about what you need to do. Sit your ass down and figure it out yourself. That's what all the old school fakers, including myself, did to improve. And guess what? We actually improved.

o...........k........... why did smoke show his pole into cyrax's chest?

and why did cyrax drop on his and started break dancing?

lmao! that was funny. as for the amimation its goog but its choopy. but this is good for comic relife.

blackcyborg_the_origanal Wrote: yes i know parts are choppy..and the leggs move...cyrax has been malfunctioned hes not throwing a fit lol.

My warehouse comments:

I see, this version is slightly different.
But I still stand by this:
"I'll tell you why it's choppy. Because it is! You don't have enough sprites in this to make it smooth, sometimes, one frame he's standing and the next he's not.
As for the 118 frames, well, I would say it's more of 30 frames, that have been copied and pasted over and over and over and over and over again.
Now, let's move on to some more points:
- I am wondering about the one win mark because of several reasons:
a) There are NO one win rounds in MK, or at least none that you can do a fatality with.
b) The win mark appeared AFTER, he did a FATALITY!!!!! It should appear along with the finish him text, speaking of which.
- The finish him text is pretty bad too, it flies in, flies out, but tries to come back to us, and realizes it cant, then goes away again.....?
- The background has not been darkened for this fatality.
- Lifebars - no wins texts and the names should be in lifebars with correct font, though these aren't too bad.
- Timer however, is uninspired.
- Fatality appears with NO "smoke wins" text.
- I must say, the idea for this is kinda boring really. It's meant to be a fatality, not a tickle stick.
- The background is doing the frickin Macarena.
- It is choppy, as stated above.
- Not a huge variety on the frames here, as I said, not alot of them are entirely different."
WITH the new version, I still give you a 3.5 because the change was better, but it was so poorly executed it makes no difference, so as before:
"With fixed lifebars - 4.5/10
Darkened background 5.5/10
All appropriate texts included - 6.5/10
No dancing background and fixed the "win mark" issue 8/10
I had to take one point off for the idea - 9/10
Last point to add any extra stuff that looks good, but isn't necessarily required for an animation. "

i love this animation, its the weirdest thing i ever seen, not the worst thing i ever seen, just look at michael jackson for the worst, but i watch this to make me laugh, first cyborg porn, then break dance lessons, YAY

noob_sareena Wrote: i love this animation, its the weirdest thing i ever seen, not the worst thing i ever seen, just look at michael jackson for the worst, but i watch this to make me laugh, first cyborg porn, then break dance lessons, YAY

LMAO!!
This all cyborg porn and the break dancing is hilarious(sp?).

Now points:
5/5 for originality
1/5 for the animation itself
1/5 for the actual fatality setup (incorrect as stated with tim above)
2/5 for the motions but too choppy
overall impression
.5/5

I refuse to believe that you, blackcyborg, can look at that ani you made and say to yourself ''yap. I'm satisfied with it.''.

Yeah.

Zentile Wrote: I refuse to believe that you, blackcyborg, can look at that ani you made and say to yourself ''yap. I'm satisfied with it.''.