His head is a little to big, but ohterwise it's great. 4.5/5

Thanks for the reply. Ya I know I rushed it a little bit so things are a little outta proportion . Hey if you could give me an Idea for a costume for Baraka I'd really appreciate it, I've been workin on him for the longest time and the bodies good, but he's naked. Thanks

Nice details but his head is huge

Well I think I'm going to try coloring and make a few alterations thanks to your guys opinions, don't expect it anytime soon though I'm not a good at coloring

yea. i agree the head could be smaller. Other than that its a good idea. Maybe some more time and detail it would be awsome.

Well I have resized the head but for some stupid ass reason I can't get the eyes right now, stupid piece of crap, after that, i was thinking of adding some form of detailing on the head any suggestions. WHen that is all done I'll just have to try to convince my girlfriend to color it for me, because if I do it I will ruin it completely.

The head is large but that's not that big a deal. To me some parts are drawn cartoony and others are more realistic looking. It's hard to get a fix on it as big as it is. The musculature on the arms is good, the abs not so good. The pose seems a little stiff as well.

Very nice, keep it up.
Wyatt

As for Baraka, I'm thinking Clyde Beaty. Unless your going for serious.

Wyatt

WHOA!!! dude! His head!.... Well, your shading is nice and the body is fine to. Yes, coloring this would be a good idea. I also think It would be a more interesting picture if you added the rest of his body and maybe a background.

i dont know whats w/ all the low ratings but when i saw that pic my jaw hit the floor. good job dude. that weapon also looks perfect for him. And i like the excessories you gave him too. 5 out of 5

just make his head smaller and u got sumthing good going on for ya 4/5

Well I've finalized the sketch and I think he looks alot better now, I appreciate the suggestions that you all made and look forward to your replies to my altered version. I will be posting him before the end of the week, this is just the new version, no coloring just to get a response on the new desing before I begin to color him.