o and o yes i no about the lifebars i messed that up and the transparenty on mileena just focus on the Fatality please

I feel an 'out of retirement' fake coming in the near futeure from SST, :-p.

Anyway, I think this one is kinda good. Though I don't really see how her Sais are able to rip Rayden's torso off like that. Mileena is in perfect position to be performing this feat though. Though you said you messed Mileena up, I think you should have continued on with it, a sprite edit. It looks like the beginning of a design in a way, it would have been cool if you would have worked with that.

Since you mentioned the lifebar, I won't bother you there. But you still forgot to give Mileena her Win tokens. The 'fatality' text is not needed I think, its up too soon. Mileena is still performing it, and the text should only be there if the character has already won. You could have slightly darkened the screen, but it is dark type arean like the wastelands... but in my opinion the darkened screen would have looked good here.

Rayden's torso looks sliced, its far too squared to have been ripped off. The blood is pretty good, I think you have the right amount present, but I would think some of it would be a bit closer to the ground. Not on the ground, just slightly below the torso area. And Rayden's pose... well he kind of looks like as if something nasty has gotten on him and he's throwing his hands up in suprise, lol.

This isn't bad though, better than your 'retirement' fake in my opinion.

It's very, very basic really.
Anyhow:

- Lifebars, timer, win marks, wins text, as you said, you know .
- Your lifebars do actually fill up the wrong way. They should gain more damage going to towards the player's names.
- There is a huge transparency on Mileena, and I think you can see where it is .
- Mileena's Sai do not look like they are actually impaled in Raiden. Infact, they don't look like they have even pricked him. They should be further inside of him.
- Background has not gone dark for the fatality.
- Shadows would be a nice addition .
- The blood, while not overly excessive, is all the same. And that makes it look really naf. Experiment with the blood (if you ever do another), try to use various "shapes" etc.
- Raiden does indeed look like he is saying "Eeww!" more than in pain, lol. Perhaps a better sprite, possibly from his "hit back" sprites could be of better use here.
- Idea is overdone, and pretty simple.
- Was there blood on Raiden's torso? If there was, you have covered it with a blood splatter thing, and that makes the torso look boring and a bit square at the top.

Good things
+ Everything else is pretty much okay, nothing stands out as such, it's just average .

If you do ever come out of retirement, experiment around with blood. Good blood means good eye candy .

Overall, I think the fake is a little big below average. Below average to most of the fakes on this forum I should say.

Like in almost every fake here, there are those damn transparencies. How can you not notice them on Mileena? It's so damn obvious. You didn't bother adding a timer, or the icons to symbolize Mileena winning both rounds, and FATALITY shouldn't appear until after the fatality takes place. The fatality idea has been done before, time after time, and the blood looks pretty simple. Mileena's health bar is messed up. The red should be on the other side of the bar.

yea sum of those things i wrote in my reply and i did no about the mileena transparency thing i just didnt wanna mess it up so i left it

balkcsiaboot Wrote: Like in almost every fake here, there are those damn transparencies. How can you not notice them on Mileena? It's so damn obvious. You didn't bother adding a timer, or the icons to symbolize Mileena winning both rounds, and FATALITY shouldn't appear until after the fatality takes place. The fatality idea has been done before, time after time, and the blood looks pretty simple. Mileena's health bar is messed up. The red should be on the other side of the bar.

well it is very basic, well i cant say get better now that u dont make fakes anymore so. 2.5/5