Great job man

i like it. it's pretty cool. i like how clean everything looks. i think you did the left side excellently, with everything very well proportioned and well drawn. however, the right side looks a little distorted in a few areas with bumps and lines that shouldn't be there. notably, the face is a little scewed. the eyes dont line up right as well as the cheak bones and he looks puzzled instead of angry. another thing that doesnt look quite right is the shoulder on the right, it should be higher towards the neck and lower towards the point on the far right. the arms look really cool, very sharp and well drawn. and i like the hands (i hate drawing hands) in my opinion, it's pretty good over all. i'd like to see a color job done with it.

thanks for the compliments and the pointers. I'm a new artist so I'm in the process of learning. Yeah I tried to make the eyes right but failed everytime so I left it the way it is now. As for the hands believe it or not but the hands took me a good hour and a half to get it the way they are. I seriously suck at drawing hands. but anyway thanks for the tips, peace.

Nice Drawing...Nice and cleanly drawn.

I saw this colored somehwere...but I can't remember where......great job anyway.

not bad, but like mentioned earlier it looks kind of odd in some places , gj over all.

This is pretty good, the only problem I really see is that his costume could stand more detail. Granted, this is a sketch, but a few designs or such would look cool on his chest and torso area. As someone mentioned, the shoulder does look odd at first, but to me Scorpion looks like he is standing at an angle, not straight, so it makes sense to me for the shoulder to look that way. The eyes dont have that 'evil' look, I think you should cut down on the brow above his eyes. In my opinion, that may help some. Everything is shaded well, just his left arm needs some work. Other than those things, I like it.

I'm just gonna say a few things... You definatly did better on this one than on your other ones... I kinda remember this pose from a magazine... Maybe... GamePro? Any way... GJ... You might want to consider playing with shadows....


-Spart

yeah, i usually draw hands maybe 3 or 4 times before i get a result i like. tell me, when you drew the face, what technique did you use? usually, if you do the wire frame thingy as a planning stage, then your face will turn out much better. the head is usually a sphere with a wedge on the front of it. and if you make the wire frame right, then you your eyes will end up livel and better in perspective, and you wont get that big indent you have on his cheek on the right, that line will took more natural.

iffrit Wrote: yeah, i usually draw hands maybe 3 or 4 times before i get a result i like. tell me, when you drew the face, what technique did you use? usually, if you do the wire frame thingy as a planning stage, then your face will turn out much better. the head is usually a sphere with a wedge on the front of it. and if you make the wire frame right, then you your eyes will end up livel and better in perspective, and you wont get that big indent you have on his cheek on the right, that line will took more natural.

Who are you talking to?

-Spart