Oh My God........

I'm speechless.....

That Athleena girl was so hot in her 8 pixel circle MSPaint brush.


And your backgrounds were so clear and so well thought out.,


Plus the story didn't jump around at all. It was amazingly on key.


The characters were so well thought out. I could read what everyone was saying without having to stop the video and squint!


Your sprite cuts were perfect. No White edges.


That hospital bed fit well with the rest of the strip and was well done.


SO WOULD I BE CONSIDERED AN ASSHOLE IF EVERYTHING I JUST TYPED WAS ME BEING VERY STUPIDLY SARCASTIC???

It wasnt ment to be perfect you fuckin' dick!!!!

Oh and you wouldnt have to stop, and squint to read, if you had put it in full screen like i said to do!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He didn't say you need to make it perfect. He is saying you need to make something that is actually good. More-less something that doesn't suck.

0/5

Okay you need to calm down. If you expected endless praise then you're on the wrong website. You have to learn to take the bad with the good.

i wasnt expecting endless praise.In fact i was expecting just the opposit.But not like dickless over there, who wants to be the smooth asshole.Im done posting my animation on here.

Last one was better, this one...I just could not understand at all...what is going on and who is Kung Lou? Its Kung LAO. L-A-O. And whoever he is, why is he having a one night stand in a hospital with a random stick person named "Atheena"?

I agree with Sharpeye, that was way unnecessary, you could have just said you didn't like it, and maybe told him how he could fix the things that are wrong with it. So I don't blame Sharpeye for flying off the handle when he wanted constructive criticism, and got a long, drawn out, glorified insult.

thx Grotuesque.

Hes not doing it with her in the hospitle bed.Thats the after math.And sorry for messing up Kung-LAO's name.

Oh. I'm still a little confused though, was the sex THAT rought that he got put in the hospital...and why'd Kung Lao do it with her in the first place?
And its okay, just make sure you check peoples names. I got Liu Kangs named spelled wrong a few times in Ninja Mart before.

Did the girl beat up Kung Lao for being a perv or something? Also I suggest drawing the hospital instead of just copy and paste. All you have to do is trace it and color it in. This animation needs alot of improvement. First of all, there are no backgrounds. Instead of a real sprite you drew a girl named Atheena. You should've used one of Kitanas or Mileenas sprites and maybe pallete swapped it.

And the biggest problem of all. It isn't funny. If you have a succesful flash, make it funny. It doesn't matter how cool it looks. If you have a joke, show one of your friends and see if he/she thinks it's funny. If not, don't use it. Me and Superawesomeness are brothers so all we have to do is make up jokes, a storyline and make a Ninja Mart. If you want to make a Komedy, write a script on some paper or in a notebook.

I'm sorry, but you need a lot more practice... You need:
-clearer fonts. Half the time I couldn't even read what they were saying. Heck, I never noticed the Kung Lao error.
-clearer backgrounds. I couldn't tell where everything was taking place without studying each picture.
-better planning and story concepts. So Shang and Kung go to a bar, Kung meets a stick lady, she tells him to give into "dakr desires", and he winds up as a cut-out in the hospital? Why is he in the hospital? What did he do to get there? Where is Shang and "Atheena" in this? Not everything is really obvious, and the concept isn't great either.
-learn to fix the size. Everyone is so small. Please fix that.
That's all I can think of right now, I'm sure other users can come up with other things to point out.

Ok.Im going to remake this toon.

where do you get Mk sound FX

Really, I was just looking through the MK 1992 forum or whatever its called, and some dude had a full zip file of sounds that he posted a link to, it was a long time ago though.

im not even going to waste my time with a response


0/5

Ugh

1/5 for trying.

Maybe i was a little rude with what I said earlier. But please, watch the video yourself, then with a friend, then again yourself before posting it here. So one you can see yourself if you made sense, 2 your friend can see if you made a good one, then yourself again so you can decide for yourself if you think its worth to post.


and a word of caution. When posting you work here on these boards anyone has the right to bash it, smash it, and thrash it. So if you are going to flame hate the people who do that then maybe this board isn't right for you.

I could spend all night critiquing your work, but i do not believe I would be the best to do that for. Instead I had to give my harsh opinion. Please, think before you post.


THINK BEFORE YOU POST, JUST DON'T WALK INTO A POST WHILE THINKING.