Um....

WTF is this....

1/5

Eh... the quality is terrible and the humor is lacking. 1/5

I thought this was pretty good.... 3/5

It's not funny. 0/5

You think it's funny because you are TylerExtreme's clone.

So why didn't you give yourself a 5?

Screw you! WE ARE NOT THE SAME PEOPLE!!! Jesus! Nobody trusts no1 in this damn forum!

also, you can tell the difference in their personality's.

LOL! Good one!

As said before, the quality is pretty bad. The humor is apparently not there, and the comic is generally nonsensical, in a bad way.

wtf......0/5


And I wonder when the hell will Arctic become a Warrior?

Fassive Mailure

While I would agree Zentile is a little over zealous, and rarely seems to offer any kind of constructive criticism, or positive counter points -- posting multiple threads under multiple accounts isn't really helping matters.

I tend to agree with the sentiments of others.
This one went further than pasting two sprites together, but the layout is a little difficult to follow. It doesn't really flow very well as a sequential story.

Stemming out of that, it's probably worth reassessing the required length of the gags too. Goro, if anything, would do better being more clearly situated at the end of the story (assuming that's the gag), or perhaps being cut all together. Or, at the very least, cut something out of the middle.

I'm assuming this is a riff on the WB cartoons, of which I'm a HUGE fan.
It's probably one of my all-time favourites (clock-in! Whoooo! Mornin' Ralph!), but it isn't very evident in the material itself.
If you could try to emphasise the concept more, that might help deliver the gag better. Likewise, maybe scaling down the physical space used, and tightening up the dialogue to be a little less cardboard might help wtih that.

Definitely a much better effort than 'DX Sub-Zero,' but still plenty of room for improvement.

Likewise, Zentile's critiques could improve some, too.

0/5

WTF is this supposed to be?

err if you're talking about zentile and liking to see him do better, unless im mistaken he's actually realyy good at art i think (or im conmfusing him with someone else) and he probably could do better. as for tghe comic i don't really like it you used crappy effects that aren't eye attractive and you always leave out the pure whites. why not use some speech bublees?

I wish, the fan submission engine won't accept my stuff!