You should make the moving sprites go on...

say what now?

You should make the moving sprites go on...

wtf are you guys talking about!!!

You should really make the moving sprites go on...

It was pretty cool ; )

This is actually so bad for a second I thought it was a joke animation and had to check back to see if it really had been you to make it. 2/5 for the sound.
You want me to tell you why it's so bad?

yes please.

Alright, last chance. This time don't tell me to leave you alone or completely ignore my post. Read it, SEVERAL times, apply what I'm telling you and you'll get better.

I'll get the nitpicks out of the way first. No shadows, the picture is stretched, the lifebars are totally wrong, and they just disappear without warning when the fatality begins, dispite there being no darkening of the stage.

Now to the stuff you need to get right before you start taking care of nitpicks:

The characters shouldn't just freeze just because they're not moving. Kano should stay groggy until Rayden starts putting the hurt on him, and Rayden should remain in an animated fighting stance.

Now the lightning looks god awful. It looks like you went on MS Paint and made a few zig zags with a yellow pencil. Not to mention the fact that each bolt lasts a frame. That doesn't make it animated, it makes it sloppy and ugly to look at.

The staff just shows up out of nowhere. It doesn't look like the lightning spawned it at all. A way to make this effect better is to have the lightning bolts actually become the shape of the staff and then slowly dissipate while the staff is showing up. That would look much nicer.

The killing animation is just abysmal. Abysmal is a damn strong word. Again, you're lacking dozens of frames. It doesn't look animated it looks like I'm watching a shitty webcam with a bad connection that keeps lagging.

Once again the blood just disappears in mid air.

The lightning effects are extremely shitty and simple.

The lightning SOUND effects are way late.

The electrocution doesn't look painful at all. Kano's just always in the same position, and there are no cries of pain.... It just looks like the worst part is over.


Now your FATALITY in terms of killing your own animation. You did this before with another of your animations. The word ''FATALITY'' came up and not only is the text yellow, it's inside a yellow square. I don't remember seeing this in any MK game, and to be honest I don't even understand why that's happening. It's really weird and a mystery, I know you can place a perfectly good FATALITY sign on MS Paint without fucking it up.


Anyway, read and pay attention and you'll get better.

dude i wish yu would stop maknig these cos they areally are bad no offence but they really suck

you know he won't. if he hasn't listened to you before, i highly doubt he'll pay attention to this



true.

* first off, sharpy, usually for fatalities, the backgrounds dim. -1

* kano is not dizzy -1

* your fatality word and Raiden Wins are hard to read -1

* no short little music after raiden finishes the little combo thing to perform the fatality but yet you've never made anything with the games real music just music of your own -1

* not to mention, this fatality lacked in pain, horror, and gore -1

i would go on, but you just ran out of pts. 0 / 5

You've done your best, but you should have gotten some MK4 sounds by using the MK4Strip program.