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04/04/2004 02:41 PM (UTC)by
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Fubu4057
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03/08/2004 06:13 PM (UTC)
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buterbals113085
04/02/2004 03:19 AM (UTC)
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I really like all the detail you used. I like the texture used on her wings and also her arm with the hair and stuff. The only thing i didnt like is her outfit, its too simple. I say you should add something to her.
That's pretty cool.

I think you should add some strong highlights and shadows.


I didn't notice the shadows until I looked at the pic for the second time.


They are way too light, and keep in mind also that this is a dark scene. Where is the light coming from to make her so bright?


You see what I mean?


Another thing I see is that the size of the rain drops are all the same.


You should make the rain drops in the back small, and the ones in front of her longer, and less of them.



For the lightning, you might want to make one single bolt, and make the glow on it almost invisible. The bolt itself should be brighter, almost white, and a little thicker.

Also in the pic. here notice how the clouds are lit up where the lightning is coming from.



For the clouds in the background of your pic.
They need to look more natural, maybe make them more transparent, or blur them some, so it doesn't look so much like the clouds filter.


Just mess around with it some and see what looks best.

You might want to put some mist in front of her too, but make it almost invisible, and very little, so it doesn't cover up the pic.


You could use a large airbrush for that.
That's a great drawing. It's pretty cool. I love the wings, tattoos and the skull. The face is too simple tho but it's OK.
Good job.
5/5 Dragon Points.
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Sub-ZeroMasta
04/04/2004 06:49 AM (UTC)
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That's a really good drawing imo. I love the way her wings look. Nice use of color i think. The skull on the staff adds alot to her. I can see her being a nice rival for Nitara. Good job 4/5.
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Anything war can do, peace can do better.
04/04/2004 01:45 PM (UTC)
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Have I seen this picture submited before? I swear I have seen it somewhere....
Well anyway it's really good.
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JoRdANMan
04/04/2004 02:41 PM (UTC)
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i like the picture, the char looks cool. But i think her wings looks bad, they r too small 4 me. Maybe u should give her ig wings like a birds, those look to much like Nitaras. Besides that i give u a 4/5
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