I really like what you did here. I like how you made the full body pic and then the up close face in the inset. Good details on the face portrait up close. The full body pic looks good. Altho I think that her stomach is too little for the rest of her upper torso that you drew. Coloring looks good except I dont care too much for the greenish yellow face. Other than tho, good job.

Wow, it's very cool!!!
May I put it on my Jade Fanart site???
Check it here: www.geocities.com/hevibevi

It looks pretty good. I don't really like the costume you put her in, but the picture was drwan very well. The detail is good and this is awesome knowing thatthis is your first full color picture. Just great. 4.5/5

jaded-raven Wrote: Wow, it's very cool!!! May I put it on my Jade Fanart site??? Check it here: www.geocities.com/hevibevi

Yeah, no problem! Glad you like it. Fatality.

Good job. (I thought she was black....well its your redesigning)

Well I must really admire the fact that this is colored with pencils. I gave that up a long time ago after ruining a few illustrations.

Anyway, her proportions are a little odd in a few places. Mostly the narrow lower body (waist and butt) and the wide upper body (chest, arms and neck). I suppose someone could look like that but that's usually avoided in drawings. The hands could use a little work but I know how aweful they can be to make.

The weapon design is very ingenius. It almost looks like a giant punch-down tool. If it is then YOWCH. Talk about some pain after that shot into you.

Take it easy
Wyatt

Great work on the drawing of jade, the concept makes her look more asian which is great. You've done a great job in expressing her facial features as well, that staff is also cool. Nice job, 5/5.

L-O-V-E...

I think Jade looks awesome! Sorta a tan asian, eh? Well, I'm not sure what nationality she is, anyway (Asian in MKA, maybe African in MKIII, white in MKII, WTF?)... whatever, she looks hot. Oh, and good, too. 4/5.

I think this is a alright drawing, but noway, Isn't Jade a Black asian type female,I think the ideal is cool, it,s just not happening sorry :)

She was a white asian in MKA, so I think I can create her as a tan asian. Actually, she's much darker in my original sketch, but my scanner washed out much of the color. Fatality.