This sucks....still.

The sprites jump around constantly, even when they're supposed to be standing still. You need to work with Flash, or something with layers, instead of MSPaint and Moviemaker (or whatever you use.)

And your background needs to be this size:

With sprites being this size in relation to it:

Darklord_Xel Wrote: The sprites jump around constantly, even when they're supposed to be standing still. ___________________________________________________________ i wrote: the only time they jump around is when there supposed to i watched closely.You wouldnt stand still if a mortal kombat character was doing a combo on you, while you were blocking it all.would you?

Boring, as usual. I'm sure with enough practice and enough realization that these aren't good you'll become better at it and maybe entertain us for once.

He's not referring to jumping in the literal sense.

He means that the sprites shake unnecessarily.

Look at the character's feet when you're creating each frame. For example, when performing an uppercut, his feet should be in the same place. Your sprites "jump" around because you haven't placed them in the correct place in each frame.

And as far as continuing the "story" - there is no story that I can follow. If you seriously want to create a story you need to think about how you are going to put that across to your audience.
A rather RANDOM fight and a singular line of cheesy dialogue isn't going to do the trick.

Instead of trying to churn these out rapid fire, perhaps slow down a little and WORK on one for a couple of days. Look at it over and over again several times until you can improve on it.

And for GODS sake - FIX THE BACKGROUNDS!!!!!

ditto

I know thats what he meens, by jumping around.Im not stupid for gods sakes.I said that the only time they do that is when he gets hit.And i know what im saying.

I know it seems like one doesnt it.Its supposed to be like that.You'll see in the next episode.

hint:(these were UMK3 sprites,hmm...)

Well man I guess I will leave your stuff alone, you are a piece of work. It is almost like you think you know more then what everyone around here is telling you... but continuously your animations " Episodes" or lack there of bite a big one. You are not good, you are not even ok by any means. You need practice... but you should stop humiliating yourself by posting this piece of garbage nonsense on these board. Have a nice day Jr.

No i dont think i know more than every one else.I listen to there constructive critisizm.But you-->, you are areal peice of work.You always tell me i suck... thats all you say!!Your not constructive!Your just a bendeckoh!So good by, and good ridins!!

what is a "Bendeckoh" ? and what in the world is a "listen to there constructive" ? listen, i know it says in your little profile that your "10000000... " years old, but honestly, my three year old little cousin can spell way better than you can.

but getting on to what you call "constructive critisizm seeing how thats not how you spell it...

1. your sprites are choppy, they do not stay in one place in which you've already know that from other posters but i like to make it repeat itself once again.

2. DO NOT and i repeat DO NOT EVER put a damn good song in your sprite-toons unless it is FUCKING good. metallica and your toons do not mix ever. watch the simpsons? the episode where metallica is on for like a few seconds and they bitchslapped otto? that's what they're going to do to you if they ever see this toon.

3. why did sub-zero freeze scorpion and just left him there? should there be some sort of fatality? or a little bit of IM GOING TO FUCKING KILL YOU? out of sub-zero, the little word action going on there? honestly what's the point with ditching a frozen body?

seeing how i skipped watching this and the second one and posted my beliefs on your 4th "Reptile Story" im still not changing what i said on that post.

therefore pal, you still get a 0.5 / 5 because you placed an awesome metallica song in your crappy toon. and if this isn't constructive enough then stop posting your work on here, because i've describe using examples in the majority of this post so far, and if you cannot handle this, then you're never going to handle working at a job.

Sub-Zero was left alive for a reason.Just keep watching the series.

sub-zero was left alive? okay, now you're confusing me. i thought it was scorpion... i mean scorpian as how you spell his name,

you can't even remember who was killed and who is still alive in your series, now that's embarassing.

I think it's a horribly misspelled attempt to insult you in Spanish or something.

Spanish for asshole.

I dont spell is name scorpian, i spell it normal,I did that only twice.Kiss off!

what the heck is a kiss off? im only pointing out little details constructively.

oh and what you said before... im kissing off now.