not cool...

Not funny...

Not Shou Kahn... its Shao Kahn

This whole thing is NOT ENTERTAINING...

and you are NOT getting better...

This or anything else you have made so far does NOT deserve a 1/5...



0/5

well i knew nothing good was going to come from you.It wasnt ment to be funny.Please, dont reply to my posts any more.Im getting down on my hands and knee's begging you not to reply to my post anymore please!!please!!!!!God your critisism!!Im going to critisize you on your critisism.Here we go:

1:Youve got no reasoning behind your posting.


2:You use every one on this post to discribe yourself!

3:Your critisism is unconstructive.

4:You've posted on absolutly every thing that ive put on this forum!Leave me alone!!


I hope you realy think about this.

get better...

yes very constructive indeed.

Great background there, chief. Next time, why don't you you use one from the games? It'd at least look decent.

Animation was clunky, the characters were miniscule compared to the beige background of doom, and there was no sound, which might possibly be a blessing in disguise.

My suggestion to you is to use actual MK stages that are the right size. Also in MK even when they stay in the same place they are still moving in their stance like so .

Really, really bad. It has no sound, sprites are small but the screen is huge. The background is horrible. It's a plain color with some props floating above it. The story is just random. I have no idea why Reptile is fighting Kahn. The sprites don't stay in place. It was boring.

Eew. What the bloody blue hell is this?

I'm not even sure if this guy is worth helping. Even Thunderstudent improved, even if it was only a little.



Ka-Tra

Okay, first things first.

1 - I hate sprite movies being called cartoons, all you're doing is trying to put a story across using the game's graphics, or trying to replicate the look of the game to put across new ideas or both. It's almost insulting.
2 - You took ALL the advice?

How could you possibly be half way through the "cartoon" when you realised you didn't make it smaller?
What program are you possibly using that doesn't let you change the size of it when you start work?

Anyway, this one suffers from the same problems as all your others, the background is enormous and the sprites are small.

The background itself is SO boring, and what's worse is that the fight takes place in the most boring part of it!

The animation is chunky, the characters keep darting about with no fluency, look at Reptile's feet when he's doing an uppercut, why is he bobbing around?

Your one with Kintaro, while still immensely flawed, was actually better than this.
'Fraid this is a step back.

What program are you using?

I was wondering about the program too... Better could be done with any .gif-animator. But I ́m not starting to bash you here, it ́s not that horrible, just make the screen smaller, and have some good background. And make the sprites stay in place.

you can't ban someone from posting anything on your threads because he didn't like your catoon, everyone has the right to judge your work, so don't go so offensive becuase he has yet liked any of your work, i haven't. every bit of your work has not once shown some improvement.

i have no idea why you keep mispelling mk characters, seeing how you get your sprites from MK Warehouse, don't you look at the name of the character your trying to add to your wonderful sprite-toon? seriously, that's so far two characters' names you've mispelled.

no background but just a prop. your sprites do not move like they should, they stop with no movement. Shao Kahn has not yet once look like an old man, yes he may be very old in age, but there's no grey hair or wrinkles, therefore that little part in your movie did not make any sense.

and last but not least, why was everything so small? take a look at everyone's animations and see how close up they are. i could barely see what the heck was going on and what the FUCK popped out of reptile's mouth after he ate SHAO kahn? a skull? usually reptile dosen't spit anything out of his mouth.

this is very poor, this doesn't deserve a point, but half a point becuase it's still something, but not something that i would watch and enjoy over and over again,

its like fighting a lvl 13 warlock in horde territory as i am a 43 (i know) and yet they still come back to life right next to you. by now they should learn to resurrect somewhere else, not right next to a person who is a skull compared to them. as i am comparing this to you, that by now you've should have learn from your horrible "in the eyes of scorpain" (I know i mispelled his name but that is of course the title) that you need to improve.... a lot. and i'm really trying so hard not to be a total bitch about this, but i am back home an artisy-type of person who's friends want me to draw pictures for them. i give you:

0.5 / 5

No just the ones that are not constructive, and have no point.Its because of users like him that i "dont get any better".

no he didnt!

seriously, listen to me, people in this world never listens to the rules. you're always going to get one person that will never give you constructive critisism. never. i'm not trying to act like a mob as you people call them, but you can't order people around, forcing every single person on this site to actually tell you what you did wrong and what you did right... okay, pal? besides how did he use everyone around him to describe himself? that didn't make any sense.

and stop trying to insult me and make me feel like an asshole becuase i would rather watch jamanji rather than these series and i have no idea what the fuck is actually going on here. okay, you're probably that noob lvl 13 player on the horde side trying to actually fight a lvl 43 human priest in your own territory but fail miserably. honestly, you're probably shockwave, who i fought yesterday... seriously. contrinuously trying to fight someone bigger than you, when you should have learned the first time not to mess around with, why is that in here, because im comparing it to you, you have not once shown any improvement, and when people are telling you something to fix, you do not learn the first time, instead you continue to do it over and over again. therefore this comparison is a good example of your work.

First off Sharpie I'm not the reason you don't get better, you are the F***ing reason you don't get better. I do believe in your first shitty movie I tried constructively to help you... but you keep repeating the pure shit techniques and lack of effort, I can make a better animation then that one handed and sleeping. Helen Keller could make a better ani then that. (No offense to Helen she was a remarkable woman). Now back the matter, don't try to blame anyone else for your lack of effort and horrible techniques. Ive tried to help but now have to resort to bashing to maybe get it through your head. I don't know much about lvl 13 warlocks and lvl 42's but i think it about sums this whole thing up. You continuously post crap that isn't anything better then what you posted before.

Seriously, maybe what you need is one of to come over and show you how to use your program... who knows. Why don't you stop this whole non making sense reptile crap, take about 4weeks and make a good animation.... you ever wonder why you dont get any respect here?!?

If anyone disagrees with me here please, by all means, let me know it. But I think i speak for the majority of people here... i think.

I didn't like it that much, but I made a crappy animaton too:
http://www.freewebs.com/weirdal95ny/mk%20dance.swf