I'm sincerely confused what I'm looking at.

What's coming out of his shoulder?
Does he have four feet, or are those just insanely large kickers?

Two eyes? Three eyes?
Is that the classical Iron Man chest piece I see?

I don't think Smoke when I see this.

When I look at this I can't stop thinking about the Power Rangers...

Well he came out crappy because he was well over 500kb and then I had to downgrade him to atleast 250k. Sorry about but try lookin closer next time! :)

Missile pod on one shoulder, gatling gun on the other, big glowing circle on the chest...

That's not Smoke, it's War Machine.

Looks like it didn't take you long to make this. F-, now go to your room and don't come back until you can make something decent.

Rude. Now go to your room until you can add something constructive.

it looks like a kid's drawing sorry

Not everyone has the ability to be an awesome artist, and every artist starts somewhere.

Instead of tearing him down, why not offer HELPFUL comments instead. There is really no reason at all to barrage him with negativity.

I couldn't agree more.

As for me, well I like that he's bulked up and has a lot of gizmos and gadgets. I mean, what's the point in turning someone into a cyborg if you're not gonna furnish them with some appropriate weaponry, right? My advice would be to try and make your lines cleaner or aim for some definition just to make the individual aspects more apparent. It's an interesting idea - cleaner lines and perhaps some shading or depth would really make it pop. Keep at it.

I agree too. just keep practicing and you'll get better in know time. Also studying the human body helps me with poses and pr