whoa, if the rest of the comic is as good as that, whoo your gonna get a hell of a lot of dragon koins, let me start by giving you five

Suit, out of curiosity, how big are these before you place them on the internet? What size paper do you draw them on? I draw in a sketch pad where the paper is barely smaller than the typical lined paper.
And yeah, the cover is cool. The only thing about your drawings is that they're just plain complicated most of the time. Still 5/5.

I love u Suit i i i i mean i love your picture good job
Ninjai

Woah! Kick ass work man. Five dragons for you.

wow that is great one of my favorite pictures of yours, i dont find it that confusing, i can tell this will look good colored too, i really love the facial thisthingisdisabled you gave the human scorp, the eyes are amazing for some reason not known to me lol, and i see some spawn influence on the inner demon, but thats a good thing .
4.5/5

it is cool, but as it is it's quite busy- hard to work out what`s what straightaway because there are so many lines the same thickness.

If this is going to be coloured in then that's fine, but otherwise (if you're going for comic-book black on white only look) you could try making some of the lines thicker, or black out some areas, and try some shading (like cross hatching).

I can`t really fault you on the proportions or anything else though.

I can find no cheesy flaw to comment on. You guys persevere. I've done enough internet projects to know how difficult they can be to finish. Looking at this I can see the hard work will be worth every bit of the results.

Keep it up
Wyatt

Suit, great work as usual man. The detail really caught my eye, and I love the "literal reflection of ones inner demon" theme.

It's seXeh!

Seraph, it appears you've bumped 3 old threads. That's against forum rules. In the future, don't comment on fan art that isn't on the first or second pages of the fan art forum.