Its very good, I like it, exelent Detail.

One problem, its a bit unclear, pencil lines smudged too close together, which makes it look like theres shading where you did not intend..stuff like that.

Try Tracing over the already drawn image, to clear it up a bit, try to keep your hand from smudging along the paper as mutch as possible, Oh and most importantly, KEEP THE PENCIL SHARP, nothing ruins a picture more than when the first half of your picture has nice thin lines, and the other has thick lines.

I am no great artist, but a few tips help right....that is if you could be arsed to take the time to improve it...i certainly would'nt.

Yeah I will take the time to improve, i'm not gonnaa flame people for telling me what's wrong with it.

Not bad but the background could use more work. It's pretty messy too.