You have the basic idea but you need to emphasize on the muscle structure first, shading too, and texture design. Nice effort, nonetheless.

there isn't much going for this picture..but hey, atleast you can tell its scorpion..kinda??

This drawing is alright for your first time. Some things you need to work on are:

Shading-This will add some realism and depth to your drawings.

Detail-I can see you put some muscle detail on his chest and neck but, his arms also need detail. Put some detail on his face, like around the eyes.

Weapon-Since he is holding a sword, put some blood on it. This gives the drawing a great effect.

Include these things in your next drawing and it will turn out a little better. Good luck on future submissions.

Agreed. You should make his arms longer but still muscluar. Add detail to his outfit and make it so you can see the sword. Put detail on it. Lol its cute.

elbarto Wrote: This drawing is alright for your first time. Some things you need to work on are: Shading-This will add some realism and depth to your drawings. Detail-I can see you put some muscle detail on his chest and neck but, his arms also need detail. Put some detail on his face, like around the eyes. Weapon-Since he is holding a sword, put some blood on it. This gives the drawing a great effect. Include these things in your next drawing and it will turn out a little better. Good luck on future submissions.

I am sorry, but I think that deserves a skull.
Not only did he bump a thread... but he bumped it with a one smile post. Spam indeed.

MortalKombat6688 - Please don't bump threads that are of this long of age. You can tell how old the thread is by the date above the post. Bumping old threads might come to skulls, or even being banned. Same thing with spamming, so try not to do those two things.
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Well, it's ok for starters, let's see. The face mask could have some more detail, the pants could have maybe been colored to get that dark feeling that it's black. Also, the vest he's got on, it's more of a shape of a V, maybe you could add the back of it a little as well, you know where you can see it bend backwards to his back cause it looks like its going straight up instead of going behind his back. Also, the spear looks pretty good, it's just that how come it's flying in the air? just wondering. He doesn't have a grip on it. The arms and feet are ok, needs some more work tho. Hope to see more future art from you, keep it up. 2/5

I agree. Anyways, the drawing still needs some work. Keep working harder. 0.5/5

Yikes, and I don't mean that in a good way.

Edit: I should've looked at the start date.

Its a fan submission, people CAN bump fan submissions so don't try to earb DPs please.

It isn't my point directly. He bumped it with one little smile.

Yea thats stupid but hey those are n00bs.