He looks a little too skinny...

well heres my second one, its only the face. i went for realism on this one, and its sub-zero not scorpion (not that you can really tell the difference). Sorry thats its so light, it looks much darker in person. BTW- thanks for telling me whats wrong with the once before, im probably gonna get started on fixing it now that I know. I knew sometihng was terribly wronge, but i didnt know what!

it is awesome......i like the way he looks...you should have drew some flames in the background , then it would rock.....and his arm is a little too skinny.... besides that it is awesome.......i think you should get a 4/5....good job........can't wait to see it colored and with a cool background

thanks for the comment, but I don't color. I've never really had the tools to properly color my sketches, so I leave them Black/White. Maybe for Xmas I'll get some REAL tools and do it, but colored pencils won't cut it. I'm glad that you like it, because frankly, I hate it =) I'm probably not going to fix the first one and just go onto drawing more MK Art. Do you like the second one? I'm still not sure if I should finish it and add in the neck. What do you think?

It looks OK, you just need to make the arm longer.


For example, let your arm hang and see how the elbow aligns with the belly button.

Now look at your drawing, you have his elbow at like the bottom of the pec.

It's just too short.


Also if you wanna get more in to it, the anatomy needs work. Just look at some anatomy drawings and some pictures of real people and figure out how it needs to be.

The face looks pretty good.

Check these out

Arm anatomy

Arm anatomy

Arm anatomy

meh, i know the first one is a disaster. does anyone have anything to say about the second one?

for the second one I'd say move the upper part of the mask up.

It's too low right now.

Look at Noob's mask in your signature. It's pretty much aligns up with the eye sockets.

And maybe give the eyebrows a different shape. Like more triangular.

Just check out some comic book art and you'll see what I'm talking about.