Scorpion Wins. Fatality!
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Scorpion Wins. Fatality!
10/30/2010 02:43 AM EST
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RE: Fan Submission: Scorpion Wins. Fatality!
10/31/2010 04:03 PM EST
The characters look cool and it's drawn really well. The one thing I have against it is the way Scorpion is kicking. His back is a little too straight. Other than that, great job
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RE: Fan Submission: Scorpion Wins. Fatality!
10/31/2010 04:47 PM EST
I have to agree with Jedi, TL. A tip I picked up was to use action lines.

I did a quickie with them in aqua to help you out. Basically they dictate a predetermined shape for the body, and the more curvaceous, the more action you will get out of your pose and the less 'stiffness'. You can still make the picture look like exertion is happening with the lines you use over top to show taughtness, but stiffness is a bad thing in fighting and general life, unless of course you're getting some nookie.



>this is a proper tutorial to help as well.
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RE: Fan Submission: Scorpion Wins. Fatality!
11/01/2010 02:41 PM EST
Thank you for the comments and info. :D Im looking into those tuts atm lol. I've always asked myself what was off about a lot of my drawings actually. Showed them to a friend and said the picture was dead, go figure. wow

Anyways, really appreciate the critiques and links. Will definitely come in handy grin
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