I have to admit, this is not something I like seeing on here. It's not just because of the joke, although it is tired and I heard it several times in some form or another. What I really don't like is that it seems to have taken little to no effort to put together. All it consists of are a few MK2 sprites probably taken from the MK warehouse and a few ms-painted dialogue bubbles.
The most important thing about fan art to me is that some sort of effort went into it. I know you don't want to submit drawings yet, but in this case I think actual drawings, even if they weren't that good, would have made the picture better than those sprites. I cut some slack for your Heromachine version of Jade because it at least gave an original design for the character. But, I'm sorry to say I don't feel the same about this one.
Don't get discouraged. It's not just you, it's the idea of these minimalist sprite comics that I don't like. This isn't the first one I've seen. You should keep working on actual drawings.