Awesome, the only thing I would fix is the coloring, and the straps on her left leg. Make them more curved, because right now, they are too straight, and the make her leg look flat.

And the head, I just don't like the manga look, but that is my own taste, I like them more realistic.

thanx bleed.yeah i know how alot of ppl dont like manga style.anyway thanx for the crits.

You got it bro, always glad to help.