Not bad.
Reminds me of one I made years ago,
here.
I quite like it, but:
- The deadpool music doesn't fit the stage for me.
- The "soul" effects are a bit rubbish imo. - weird shapes and just a green gradient?
- More bones would be cool.
- When he explodes, there's no shaking or a flash or anything. It needs something to make it more dramatic.
- The green body parts - what's goin on there? They don't look at all like the corpsed body, too dark - they look like green rocks. Also - is that just a movie clip of straight motion tweens played twice?
Experiment with some more interesting effects, motion guides perhaps.
Also, with movie clips it's pretty easy to add more pieces.
I liked it, but I think with the stuff above it could be much more dramatic.
2.5/5.
