Sub-Zero Accepts Shang Tsungs Offer
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Sub-Zero Accepts Shang Tsungs Offer
08/28/2012 03:58 PM EDT
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RE: Fan Submission: Sub-Zero Accepts Shang Tsungs Offer
08/31/2012 12:04 AM EDT
This is a nice little fanfic for tying up that story detail the MK movie swerved away from. It is written pretty good too!
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RE: Fan Submission: Sub-Zero Accepts Shang Tsungs Offer
08/31/2012 03:00 AM EDT
Short, well-written, enjoyable, and works with the film canon; therefore, it works for me. 5 DPs!
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RE: Fan Submission: Sub-Zero Accepts Shang Tsungs Offer
09/03/2012 08:56 PM EDT
Would've been better without the spoiler title.
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RE: Fan Submission: Sub-Zero Accepts Shang Tsungs Offer
09/06/2012 08:27 PM EDT
Zentile Wrote:
Would've been better without the spoiler title.

Zentile has a point; without the opening question and the title, there would've been an interesting dimension added, especially for those on the site who've not seen the film... The whole two users perhaps, but revealing that Scorpion's working for Shang Tsung without introducing us to the fact that this is an idea from the film would trigger an "oh shit, it's a film reference" cue from users like me, and generate a more surprised reaction from readers. You don't necessarily have to do it, but it's something to consider for future submissions. smile
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RE: Fan Submission: Sub-Zero Accepts Shang Tsungs Offer
09/23/2012 12:43 PM EDT
Duly noted. Thanks for the constructive critiques.
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