This is by far one of the best new Character designs that I've seen on these forums for a good while now. I'm loving everything that u've done with this pic. The outfit is just incredibly done, proportions are accurate. Hands look kinda funny but it's not that major cause hands are hard as hell to draw. Man keep up the good work...5/5 dragons.

I really love this character. Her outfit looks really awesome. Its very original. Her boots look awesome too. They really go with her look. The powers around her hands could have looked better. I dont really like her hair. Give her something more different, original. Overall its a super job 5/5

izzy_daman Wrote: This is by far one of the best new Character designs that I've seen on these forums for a good while now. I'm loving everything that u've done with this pic. The outfit is just incredibly done, proportions are accurate. Hands look kinda funny but it's not that major cause hands are hard as hell to draw. Man keep up the good work...5/5 dragons.

Thanks, I'm so glad you like it. I wasn't sure if I should post the Tai pics...turns out it was a good idea lol. Your right: I have such a hard tim with hands. Thanks again.

buterbals113085 Wrote: I really love this character. Her outfit looks really awesome. Its very original. Her boots look awesome too. They really go with her look. The powers around her hands could have looked better. I dont really like her hair. Give her something more different, original. Overall its a super job 5/5

Thanks for the nice words and very generous rating.. I am glad you like it so much. Her full bio will be up in the Deception Forum soon.

This is really good. The drawing is damned near perfect, aside from a few things. The only thing that stands out a lot as being funny is the loose fitting boots. The only other minor complaint is her hair. Up and to the right it comes to a sharp point, I would fix that. OK one last thing, I promise, is the font could be better.
Man I hope you color this soon.
Great job, 5/5

Font? You meant the letters of her name? Or did you mean to type Front?

I messed up. See her hair is like that because of wind, however I failed to realize until this point that If that was the case i should also have made her skirt thing blowing to the side. *shrugs* I messed up.

I am glad that you like this pic anyway, I always look forward to your comments.

thats really good man 4.5/5

Sarcasm Wrote: thats really good man 4.5/5

Thanks, And I appreciate the nice rating as well.

Personally I like this concept piece better than the other one, I think this should be her standard look and the other should be the alternative. I like the way you’re putting more muscle definition in than you have with you’re earlier pics, the material folds also look good and add to the picture. If I had to find fault I’d point out the energy circles, they look like rushed squiggles, but from what I’ve seen it’s you’re first attempt at them and I’m sure they’re not easy anyway. But practice makes perfect so keep at it.

Excellent character concept, man! This costume is great and the outfit rocks! You've done a great job! 5/5

moosie_fate Wrote: Personally I like this concept piece better than the other one, I think this should be her standard look and the other should be the alternative. I like the way you’re putting more muscle definition in than you have with you’re earlier pics, the material folds also look good and add to the picture. If I had to find fault I’d point out the energy circles, they look like rushed squiggles, but from what I’ve seen it’s you’re first attempt at them and I’m sure they’re not easy anyway. But practice makes perfect so keep at it.

Yes, I like this one better too. The only reason the other one is her standard instead of the alternate is because the cloak is a BIG part of her back story because it's the source of her power over dark matter. If you like this character you should check out he bio in the Deception Forum.

Thanks tgrant. Actually you were the first one to see her, I'm glad people are taking pretty much the same view as you did for her as a character. Thanks for the high rating man.

This is a much better concept than the other one. To me the other just looked like same old same old. Spandex, nurnies on the side, major cleavage.

While this one isn't a major departure it does show a more original design. Plus I like her facial e xpression and the caught in the moment effect. The other looked to much like posing for the camera.

Wyatt

Thanks RaMeir, I agree, like stated above, I like this altenate better than the hooded one. Thanks for replying.

WOW, she's cool!!!

Thanks, I know she isn't Jade, but I'm still glad you like her.