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The Adventures of Kurtis Stryker (Part 15 and 16 Added) *Click*
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posted09/26/2006 03:42 PM (UTC)by
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Ninja_Mime
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02/17/2006 01:47 AM (UTC)
I have 6 made, but there will be more.

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Part 5

Part 6

Enjoy?
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I am a happy well adjusted emotinally disturbed person, and for some reason all the raiden sprites keep staring at me I mean it tell them to stop, they are scaring me hides

my friend pred gave me this one, and the avvy that goes with it, but I love the ones flameshang and darkryder gave me too, so expect a cycle of these three folks

 •03/31/2006 02:07 AM (UTC) •
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I got to say this GO STRYKER!!!! he shot the mean old thunder god good for him

yes I still find raiden scary as hell *hides from the above siggy* I can't help it
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 •03/31/2006 02:33 AM (UTC) •
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It has potential. The plot seems to follow fluidly, but try to make the humor a little more tastier, unless seriousness was your goal.

3/5
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 •03/31/2006 06:02 PM (UTC) •
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Nemesis316 Wrote:
It has potential. The plot seems to follow fluidly, but try to make the humor a little more tastier, unless seriousness was your goal.

3/5


Well, can you give some examples of tasty humor?

I was trying to make it funny at the start, but then I was trying to keep a storyline, so maybe that's what caused it to be unfunny.
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 •03/31/2006 08:18 PM (UTC) •
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Hehe, pretty enjoyable. 4.5/5
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 •03/31/2006 08:59 PM (UTC) •
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Stuff like Allusions, dry sarcasm, a bit of wit and a touch of idiocy without going overboardingly stupid kinda help make a comic better in terms of humor.

Also, some one-panel pauses kinda accentuate humor as well.
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 •03/31/2006 09:38 PM (UTC) •
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Nemesis316 Wrote:
Stuff like Allusions, dry sarcasm, a bit of wit and a touch of idiocy without going overboardingly stupid kinda help make a comic better in terms of humor.

Also, some one-panel pauses kinda accentuate humor as well.


I'll think about that when I write the next parts.
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 •03/31/2006 11:57 PM (UTC) •
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Those got me to chuckle a bit, not bad at all. Take Nemesis' advice, and they'll get better.
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 •04/05/2006 09:18 AM (UTC) •
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I like it! Keep going, and in my opinion you shouldn't take that guy's advice on making it funnier because every lame comic does the stuff he recommended.
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 •04/05/2006 11:14 AM (UTC) •
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I like it! Keep going, and in my opinion you shouldn't take that guy's advice on making it funnier because every lame comic does the stuff he recommended.


Really? Give me an example of a comic that has all of these and you think is lame.
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 •05/02/2006 01:20 AM (UTC) •
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It's been a long time since I made a Stryker comic, but here is the next part.

Part 7: The Man Behind The Tombstone.
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Torchia
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 •05/02/2006 01:41 AM (UTC) •
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I actually laughed at the last line.
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 •05/02/2006 01:00 PM (UTC) •
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torchia Wrote:
I actually laughed at the last line.


Good.

(Yeah I bumped it, so what?)
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 •06/04/2006 05:51 AM (UTC) •
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New Comic:

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Nemesis316
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 •06/04/2006 02:16 PM (UTC) •
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This is getting better and more funnier with each one.

Keep at it dude.
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 •06/04/2006 04:20 PM (UTC) •
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This is getting better. 5/5
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 •06/05/2006 01:19 PM (UTC) •
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This last comic was pretty much made to get the next part of the storyline out, which I'm making now.

Yes, there is an actual storyline.
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 •06/06/2006 11:58 PM (UTC) •
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Here's Part 9.

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 •06/07/2006 12:00 AM (UTC) •
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Lol, The Stryker sprite edit looked decent. 5/5
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 •06/07/2006 12:02 AM (UTC) •
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Hikari715 Wrote:
Lol, The Stryker sprite edit looked decent. 5/5


I originally made it for Dark Ryder and his MK Krystal comic.
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 •06/07/2006 01:00 AM (UTC) •
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Dildo part got me cracking up.

4/5
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 •06/07/2006 11:10 PM (UTC) •
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Nemesis316 Wrote:
Dildo part got me cracking up.

4/5


Stryker is rather awkward to be in conversation with.
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 •06/10/2006 08:19 PM (UTC) •
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Nemesis316 Wrote:
Dildo part got me cracking up.


It would be funnier if he explained! tongue
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 •06/11/2006 01:16 AM (UTC) •
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Arctic Wrote:
Nemesis316 Wrote:
Dildo part got me cracking up.


It would be funnier if he explained! tongue


I left that open for you guys to develope any disgusting little answer that you wanted. wink
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 •07/22/2006 12:07 AM (UTC) •
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Part 10

I finally added Part 10. In this comic, I've ditched the title panel, so there's no longer going to be titles. Also, they're going to be slightly shorter now. Think of it as a semi-rebirth for the series.
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