Lol, 4/5

Glad you found it funny.

Would you please read my MK: Resurrection comic? The link's in my signature, and nobody's reading, so it's pretty pathetic.

Where's the "hysterical part" in this.?

I mean no harm, nor am i trying to be offesive. I just didnt get the comedy of these. Stryker killing cage?

IMO the kahn aspect of it would of worked better since kahn was responsible for the death of the innocents & the riot brigade in NY.

If you don't like them, don't read them. I'm not forcing you to.

The only reason he killed Cage is because he took a swing at him. He wasn't done at the machine.

Ok well then i would of had it like.

Stryker is playing cage taps his shoulder.

Cage: yo kurtis whats up.

Stryker: Not now im owning.

Cage: Taps his shoulder a 2nd time.

But kurtis i need to talk to you, it's about sonya's peroid.

Stryker: NOT NOW! what do i look like a f'n shrink.

Cage: Taps his shoulder again for the 3rd time, im really EMO over this whole thing.

Stryker: MF'er! you made me lose. The the stage goes black and he kicks off cages head.

That IMO would of been better.

Me being the stryker fan i am, would find a logical yet serious funny way of doing it.

Nice sprite of stryker in #9 i like that ALOT.

Yeah. With the first comic, I was just bored, and it was my very first comic. I didn't think I would make anymore. So that might explain the crapiness of the first few.



Thanks.

that was the best thing ive ever seen MINION

Maybe he should make his own series.

deffinately should make his own series.

MINION (Stryker) VS Ninja_Mime(Chameleon) because your dedication changed every week

Yeah... But it's not really "changing". I just have two comic series running at the same time.

Unfortunately, it wouldn't.

Oh, do explain then. Im dying for your explanation.

I'm sorry, but it's just not funny. There's nothing there that makes me want to laugh, and it's a bit cliche` as well. Ninja Mime's didn't make me laugh as well, but it had a chance to have made me do so when i'm in the right mood, this one just wouldn't make me laugh under any circumstances.

Well of course dude, im 22 and dont laugh much either.

It was called "my opinion", and a suggestion to a better path. If this stuff isn't funny nor to your liking you should'nt be here in the "fan" submission right?

Only makes sense.

Uh, I actually find some things funny and to my liking at the Fan Submission, plus I (used to) have a comic series here as well.

But whatever, just my opinion, don't take it so seriously.

Part 11

Warning: May contain some Adult Material not suitable for all viewers.

Fujin one was BRILLIANT, but everything else is either not funny, or just sort of kinda almost decent. Keep it at though, the Fujin one made me laugh.

well i think they are great keep up the good work !


P.S .did I just see Sonya...Stryker...*shivers at the thought*

Keep it up!

Oh, I hadn't seen the last one yet. Perfect example of what's wrong with most mk sprite comics: Oh, a blowjob. How can you go wrong with that? It has a penis. So it must be funny. Wrong. Just like with the dildo joke before, and like all the fart jokes that I saw when the sprite comic thing was still in fashion and there were all these kids trying to make cool ones by pretty much ripping off the good stuff from Shirt Ninja and ]{ombat, and turning it into cheap ass crap. Seriously, don't you think you could've come up with something better than a blowjob?

I'm not trying to rip off Shirt Ninja and ]{ombat, if that's what you're saying. And yes, I could have come up with something better than a blowjob, but I didn't. I'm sorry if my comic does not please you.

My suggestion; don't read these anymore if it bothers you so much.

Zentile is right though, Ninja Mime. Sexual jokes are way too overused to be funny, you're better than that. Your comics were all funny until Part 11. Keep at it, but watch out and don't fall under temptation for the use of stupid jokes.

The dildo part was acceptable because it was just out of the ordinary, but next time be careful of what gags you might use. You've got a lot of potential and I want you to fulfill that.

Yes Nemesis, I will do as you ask.

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Part 12

Here's Part 12... hopefully it will make up for Part 11...

Much better. 4/5