The Black Dragon Bible
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The Black Dragon Bible
03/18/2008 10:37 PM EDT
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RE: Fan Submission: The Black Dragon Bible
03/28/2008 12:26 PM EDT
Overall, it's not bad, but some pockets of bad grammar/spelling make it kind of funny to read (training in "gorilla kombat" techniques when you meant "guerrilla combat"). I think that you could have done more with it, like make it into your own complete mythology. Most of this information wouldn't go together at all (Special Forces and the comics are generally ignored in the canon), and I think that you could've taken advantage of the foreign material to make it more accessible to users who aren't familiar to it.
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RE: Fan Submission: The Black Dragon Bible
03/29/2008 01:37 AM EDT
Yeah, basically my mission here was to not reiterate the canon Black Dragon storyline that everyone knows. So I did use alot from non-canon MK material. Grammar errors?, yeh, anyone who's read anything by me before knows I suck at spelling and all that, lol. I appologize in advance.
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RE: Fan Submission: The Black Dragon Bible
03/29/2008 05:13 AM EDT
Great Job, It was an excellent read.
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