The Black Dragon Bible
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03/29/2008 09:13 AM (UTC)by
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GrotesquetheBeast
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I need a new sig, something with Kabal from UMK3 would be sweet. Just imagine that here
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04/01/2007 07:32 PM (UTC)
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Jerrod
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03/28/2008 04:26 PM (UTC)
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Overall, it's not bad, but some pockets of bad grammar/spelling make it kind of funny to read (training in "gorilla kombat" techniques when you meant "guerrilla combat"). I think that you could have done more with it, like make it into your own complete mythology. Most of this information wouldn't go together at all (Special Forces and the comics are generally ignored in the canon), and I think that you could've taken advantage of the foreign material to make it more accessible to users who aren't familiar to it.
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I need a new sig, something with Kabal from UMK3 would be sweet. Just imagine that here
03/29/2008 05:37 AM (UTC)
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Yeah, basically my mission here was to not reiterate the canon Black Dragon storyline that everyone knows. So I did use alot from non-canon MK material. Grammar errors?, yeh, anyone who's read anything by me before knows I suck at spelling and all that, lol. I appologize in advance.
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03/29/2008 09:13 AM (UTC)
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Great Job, It was an excellent read.
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