Lol, I liked it, and I'm not one for sprite komics.
Favorite part was when Subby took the train...poor Smoke.
Btw what was the Kahn and Shang part all about? Didn't quite follow that.
Anywho, looking forward to Part 2!

Very good, salbeinit. You put two MK characters into the roles of MK fans with a thrilling setting. You chose brilliant characters too. Keep up the good work.I'd suppose Shao Kahn commanded Shang Tsung to confront his archenemy.

lol I especially loved the part where Sub-Zero jumped on the back of the train

Hm, I like where this is going, reminds me of the comic stories some of the veterans used to make around here. I'm looking forward to the next part.

This is a mess. You really ought to read this.

Grammar/punctuation.

thanks for the advice, ill try to make it better next time.

First one was pretty funny. Second one was lacking.

But yea, you've really gotta work on that grammar and spelling.

here is the part 4

I actually laughed at the Hefner joke, but couldn't get any farther than that.

Not bad, not bad at all, but the joke with Shang Tsung imitating Shao Kahn wasn't that strong.

Lol, writers block...

part 5

wanted to do more but it was becoming too large, so i hope to continue in part 6

by the way, do you know of a file storage that doesnt deformate my images?

You can try imageshack.

Btw apart from some grammar fuckups this is actually pretty decent. Could use better bubbles though.