The Reason Shang wanted his youth back...
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posted05/10/2004 11:05 AM (UTC)by
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SuperMarioBro
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05/09/2004 10:47 PM (UTC)
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I get the humor, but I didn't laugh. Sorry. Keep trying. (IMO)
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SuperMarioBro
05/09/2004 10:58 PM (UTC)
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Back to the drawing board...
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05/10/2004 12:56 AM (UTC)
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I like this, until the last panel with Reptile, I don't get why he says what he says or why he even showed up or anything

Also, I wouldn't use the MKII font for every single piece of dialogue, but if you do want to use it at least keep all the letters the same size (except for purposes of emphasis, etc)
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SuperMarioBro
05/10/2004 01:18 AM (UTC)
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I keep forgetting about the font! Oh, and Reptile randomly appears, and the line he says is a referance to the Cap
n Crunch cereal.
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the_shirt_ninja
05/10/2004 10:02 AM (UTC)
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The humor is not bad at all, but here are some tips to improve the comics:

- Get rid of those HUGE speech bubbles
- Get a better font. I know you guys love the MK fonts and all, but get a good comic font anyway, it just looks better. No, MS Comic Sans is not a good comic font.
- Punctuation is your friend. Commas are your friends! Use them. smile
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SuperMarioBro
05/10/2004 11:05 AM (UTC)
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Geez you guys are keeping me up late!

I'll try to find a new comic font and better bubble.
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