The Specters Stare....*in colour*
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posted12/03/2006 06:17 PM (UTC)by
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dagonzombie
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07/29/2006 03:42 PM (UTC)



Drawn by me, coloured by Arctic.

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Ninja_Mime
11/30/2006 12:38 AM (UTC)
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It's decent, but the proportions are way off. 2/5.
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Hikari715
11/30/2006 12:44 AM (UTC)
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The proportions are way off. The head is too big, the arms are awkward and the feet needs work, too. The coloring is okay. 2.5/5
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11/30/2006 01:10 AM (UTC)
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YAY! It's here!
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Kombosus
11/30/2006 02:03 AM (UTC)
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Don;t knock the proprtions too bad. They are wrong but I c what he was going for. Scorpion looking up at you and the damera pointing at a downward angle. Your mistake is common. People focul on trying to get the front of the pic in b4 they realize the true blue view of the camera angle.



Remeber he is looking up at you so you don't want toshow too much of his body It could slide like you were looking down a hill. A for effort. And good job colouring arctic.
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dagonzombie
11/30/2006 06:59 PM (UTC)
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Kombosus Wrote:
Don;t knock the proprtions too bad. They are wrong but I c what he was going for. Scorpion looking up at you and the damera pointing at a downward angle. Your mistake is common. People focul on trying to get the front of the pic in b4 they realize the true blue view of the camera angle.



Remeber he is looking up at you so you don't want toshow too much of his body It could slide like you were looking down a hill. A for effort. And good job colouring arctic.


Yeah, this was my first time trying the angle.

And NM read what he said, and re-rate.

And Hikari... how did my score go down from when it wasn't in colour?
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JediTommy8
11/30/2006 07:50 PM (UTC)
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It's pretty good.But like said,the proportions are way off.Scorpion's head looks too big compared to his small arms and legs,body,etc.The coloring is pretty good,although his armor in Deception was more of a darker orange-y color.

2.8/5
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dagonzombie
11/30/2006 10:40 PM (UTC)
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Tommy, did you read the apove post?



that's it not in colour...

duh.
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Ninja_Mime
11/30/2006 11:52 PM (UTC)
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dagonzombie Wrote:
Kombosus Wrote:
Don;t knock the proprtions too bad. They are wrong but I c what he was going for. Scorpion looking up at you and the damera pointing at a downward angle. Your mistake is common. People focul on trying to get the front of the pic in b4 they realize the true blue view of the camera angle.



Remeber he is looking up at you so you don't want toshow too much of his body It could slide like you were looking down a hill. A for effort. And good job colouring arctic.


Yeah, this was my first time trying the angle.

And NM read what he said, and re-rate.

And Hikari... how did my score go down from when it wasn't in colour?


I'm not going to rerate it. I know it's from a downward angle. The proportions are still off.

The eyes are way too far apart, as well.
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dagonzombie
12/01/2006 11:17 PM (UTC)
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eyes? far apart? no. but okay.
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EdboonFan
12/01/2006 11:40 PM (UTC)
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guys calm down, not everyone on here is professionals. We al got to start somewhere, i think its great! better then what i can draw.
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Ninja_Mime
12/02/2006 05:17 AM (UTC)
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EdboonFan Wrote:
guys calm down, not everyone on here is professionals. We al got to start somewhere, i think its great! better then what i can draw.


I didn't say everyone here is a professional. I'm critiquing the art, which is what you're supposed to do.

Yes, the eyes are far apart. His head is way too fat, and his mask is all crooked and squished.
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Kombosus
12/02/2006 05:51 AM (UTC)
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Yes but you are being very cruel.
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Ninja_Mime
12/02/2006 05:58 AM (UTC)
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Kombosus Wrote:
Yes but you are being very cruel.


Cruel?

"It's decent, but the proportions are way off. 2/5."

"I'm not going to rerate it. I know it's from a downward angle. The proportions are still off.

"The eyes are way too far apart, as well."

"Yes, the eyes are far apart. His head is way too fat, and his mask is all crooked and squished."

Hardly.
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dagonzombie
12/02/2006 09:13 PM (UTC)
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Ninja_Mime Wrote:
Kombosus Wrote:
Yes but you are being very cruel.


Cruel?

"It's decent, but the proportions are way off. 2/5."

"I'm not going to rerate it. I know it's from a downward angle. The proportions are still off.

"The eyes are way too far apart, as well."

"Yes, the eyes are far apart. His head is way too fat, and his mask is all crooked and squished."

Hardly.


The eyes arent too far apart... by much... and the mask crooked? I made his head wide to be Scorpion's (scorpion's head is skinnier.
dude w/e
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Zentile
12/02/2006 11:30 PM (UTC)
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Jesus Christ buddy, get a fucking grip on yourself. I enjoy the picture, but there ARE things wrong with it. Why dont you just admit it? People critisize you for a REASON, man, what is it with these kids? They go crazy at criticism.
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dagonzombie
12/03/2006 04:16 PM (UTC)
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Zentile Wrote:
Jesus Christ buddy, get a fucking grip on yourself. I enjoy the picture, but there ARE things wrong with it. Why dont you just admit it? People critisize you for a REASON, man, what is it with these kids? They go crazy at criticism.


Dude, i agreed with him. I'm just asking him to be more specific. I admit its not perfect, nothing is, my picture does have some proportion problems.

Thanks any ways

ZOmbie
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Ninja_Mime
12/03/2006 04:21 PM (UTC)
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dagonzombie Wrote:
Zentile Wrote:
Jesus Christ buddy, get a fucking grip on yourself. I enjoy the picture, but there ARE things wrong with it. Why dont you just admit it? People critisize you for a REASON, man, what is it with these kids? They go crazy at criticism.


Dude, i agreed with him. I'm just asking him to be more specific.


I gave you pretty straight forward criticism. How can you not understand "The eyes are too far apart"?
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beliver22
12/03/2006 06:17 PM (UTC)
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just look at what people say and go fix it
if most people say the same thing it must be true
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