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10/25/2005 05:46 AM (UTC)by
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10/24/2005 08:43 PM (UTC)
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I think its great. I dont like Hotaru AND Fulgore but i think its cool. Except hotarus face. 4/5
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10/24/2005 08:59 PM (UTC)
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Well kinda goes I guess. I don't like Fulgore, but I'm a sucker for Hot Taru (it's a food name).

Well the hair if intentionally changed: to "mangaoid" Hotaru has a good touch of slight egyptian, Arab design to his face, but also vvery caucasian. The gin makes him look rather as a barbarian. The arms are Extremely disproportionate, even though your def. style is the bulk-matter you should still tone them down. You put too much curves into the muscles what have flat surfaces many times.

The symbols are wrong on the flag, lol.

Whats the connection between Fulgore and Taru? And kudos for this one looks less reminiscent (at least for me) in outlines to Jax007's works. 2/5
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10/24/2005 09:22 PM (UTC)
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you know Rufix, I really liked the idea of you revive Killer Instinct characters. That game was great for combos and fun play.

That art is great. I really liked it.

Could you make Sonya Blade (or Kitana) and Orchid?
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10/25/2005 12:32 AM (UTC)
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Chrome Wrote:
Well kinda goes I guess. I don't like Fulgore, but I'm a sucker for Hot Taru (it's a food name).

Well the hair if intentionally changed: to "mangaoid" Hotaru has a good touch of slight egyptian, Arab design to his face, but also vvery caucasian. The gin makes him look rather as a barbarian. The arms are Extremely disproportionate, even though your def. style is the bulk-matter you should still tone them down. You put too much curves into the muscles what have flat surfaces many times.

The symbols are wrong on the flag, lol.

Whats the connection between Fulgore and Taru? And kudos for this one looks less reminiscent (at least for me) in outlines to Jax007's works. 2/5


2/5? That's harsh considering I completely changed my style to stray away from JAX007's likeness. I actually put more detail into this drawing than any other. How come you're not this critical on your own drawings? And the symbols are right, lol.
Cool drawing


I like all the detail you put in to it.



My list of fixes goes as follows:

Hotaru's face is not as good as the rest of the drawing.
It just looks awkward. For next time, I would suggest for you to use a reference. Look at your self in the mirror, use an old action figure, or find some photos online to help you draw the face better.

Hotaru's right arm is too long and too thick compared to his left arm
Just look at the two and you can see the difference.

A trick to avoid this is 1) Keep perspective in mind. Things further back are smaller than things closer to the camera. 2) If you are right handed, draw the right arm first, then draw his left arm. This way, your hand won't be in the way and you can compare the size better while drawing.


"Study anatomy" right away, I can see muscles that are missing and some that don't exist.

You can just use reference photos for that too. Or just do some anatomy exercises. Draw a realistic arm, a leg, a torso, whatever. Just focus on different areas till you can do it right from your head.
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10/25/2005 02:44 AM (UTC)
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His right arm is at an angle so he can wield his weapon in an intimidating pose, that's why it looks like it's longer. His face, well I agree that I screwed it up. My first intention was to make him wear his mask, but I wanted to draw his hair (you can't have both because these MK fans will get on me for that). Nobody mentioned how Fulgore looked, so I guess he came out OK.grin
Yeah, Fulgore looks good.
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10/25/2005 05:46 AM (UTC)
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RUFIX Wrote:
Chrome Wrote:
Well kinda goes I guess. I don't like Fulgore, but I'm a sucker for Hot Taru (it's a food name).

Well the hair if intentionally changed: to "mangaoid" Hotaru has a good touch of slight egyptian, Arab design to his face, but also vvery caucasian. The gin makes him look rather as a barbarian. The arms are Extremely disproportionate, even though your def. style is the bulk-matter you should still tone them down. You put too much curves into the muscles what have flat surfaces many times.

The symbols are wrong on the flag, lol.

Whats the connection between Fulgore and Taru? And kudos for this one looks less reminiscent (at least for me) in outlines to Jax007's works. 2/5


2/5? That's harsh considering I completely changed my style to stray away from JAX007's likeness. I actually put more detail into this drawing than any other. How come you're not this critical on your own drawings? And the symbols are right, lol.


Ah yes, I stand corrected, I remembered the symbols reverse-wise. You are right, I thought the fire kanji(?) was on top. Besides, I can't criticise my own drawings, I'm too biased about them..thats why you're folks out there.

'bout 2/5. I regard my drawings at best 3.5/5 at best, 4/5 and higher are reserved for Wingedsiamese and perhaps Jax007. Peace.

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