Through the Eye of the Tortured Chapter 4
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Through the Eye of the Tortured Chapter 4
05/20/2011 09:10 PM EDT
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RE: Fan Submission: Through the Eye of the Tortured Chapter 4
05/21/2011 08:50 PM EDT
*Big round of applause*
Excellent, excellent, excellent!
Can't wait until the finale! grin
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RE: Fan Submission: Through the Eye of the Tortured Chapter 4
05/22/2011 05:28 AM EDT
great story, keep up the good work
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RE: Fan Submission: Through the Eye of the Tortured Chapter 4
05/22/2011 05:57 PM EDT
Thanks for reading my work, guys, it's greatly appreciated, especially since I feel like I've jumped the shark with "The Tears of a Queen." This was probably the most amusing chapter to write because of the fact that there's so little on the rest of the Black Dragon members from Special Forces, so it was fun taking bundles of clay and shaping it to something more entertaining than what they were in Special Forces.
The ending will be shocking and leave you wishing it was longer. smile After this one's done, back to biographies!
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RE: Fan Submission: Through the Eye of the Tortured Chapter 4
05/22/2011 07:31 PM EDT
Woo-Hoo!!...Man, Tasia's such a, dirty girl. grin
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RE: Fan Submission: Through the Eye of the Tortured Chapter 4
07/11/2011 06:31 PM EDT
WHATT THE FUCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XV9tftd6kzw&feature=g-all-u
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RE: Fan Submission: Through the Eye of the Tortured Chapter 4
07/11/2011 06:47 PM EDT
MKIceVsFire Wrote:
WHATT THE FUCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK


Could you at least contribute to the thread?

An yes Spider Tasia is a dirty girl wink
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RE: Fan Submission: Through the Eye of the Tortured Chapter 4
07/12/2011 04:03 AM EDT
MKIceVsFire Wrote:
WHATT THE FUCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK

Clarification please, is the story weird, cool, bizarre, beyond words?
Also, why'd you bump this chapter? I definitely don't mind, but I'd have expected Chapter 5 since it's more recent.
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