Well, I liked the idea of how you made him up as parts of the ninjas. But then after that you should've changed his color with pallet swap. Anyways, the bio itself is pretty cool. I think you did a good job

Black-Rose

The bio is great, and very nicely written. But you shouldn't use Comic Sans for everything. It doesn't look very Mortal Kombat-ish. 9/10.

As for the picture, it's pretty badly cropped. To make it better, you should have also taken each individual part, and pallette swap it to match. The colours don't go nicely together. Neat idea though. 5/10.

1. I unfortunately cant download pallete swao software because of a crap computer so all I have is paint
2. Well at least you liked the Bio

The whole thing is assembled pretty poorly. The white font blends in with the glare of the prison background, making everything harder to read.The cropping is very poor and very jagged. If you used a pen tool for selections, you might want to feather it by at least 1 pixel to make it smoother and get rid of the harsh white edges.

As for the bio itself, it really lacks depth, and has almost no personality. We don't see any part of Tremor's personality, aside of being a whore in the sense that he'll do anything for some gift. You should take out the part about him being loyal to anybody, especially to his clan. The very fact that he left the Lin Kuei, and now abandonned the Black Dragon clearly shows that he has no loyalty. His involvement with Onaga is way too sudden, but then, I guess that's typical of an MK bio.

All in all, this bio is on life support and needs some serious help. Two scores: 3/10 for the picture, 5/10 for the bio.

Whats everyone with Tremor? Wheres the hell does he come from?

Tremor was in MK Special Forces as the level 4 boss keeping you from getting to Kano in Outworld, he is blindly loyal to Kano, he is a Bulky Brown ninja swap and has Earth powers and three way fireballs

he is eager. EAGER!

HJEJEJEJE!!!!! he is eagerly eager!!!
seriously tho... not a bad concept...
Vash, u have a lot of creativity!!! dont waste in on paint!!! Go to the free download of art programs thread and start using those.... I recommend GiMP

There was nothing i could dowload there, can someone please give me a download link for a good FREE art program

Thanks for the good laugh.

The font style doesn't blend well. The bio is ok I guess. 6/10 The picture doesn't look that great. Sorry. 5/10

Man, you usually come up with better stuff in paint Vash. First off, don't ever do something like this unless you can pallete swap. The bio is hard to read because of the color. You should've changed it. The bg with Tremor looks terrible. I like the way that you cut out the parts of other characters and put them together. Overall I think you can come up with better stuff 1/5 srry

If all you have is paint, then you shouldn't even attempt this level of difficulty. 'Nuff said. Most people with a high-end computer rig wouldn't be able to pull this off, so why try when all you have is crappy old MS Paint?

I have to agree.

I have to say that it's all horribly executed. The mixing of the different renders doesn't look great and you've left a whole in the chest. You can see right through it.

The bio contradicts itself and is poorly developed.

Better luck on your next try.

You could've added what shit he do, whats his powers.
Anyway. This is bugging the hell outta me.

Is that a rock or a hole? I say its a Rock.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v58/noob_sareena/lolness50.png

yes, to show his earth powers