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Kung Lao slicing through Cage. Jealousy!
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submitted 06/13/2004 09:26 PM (UTC)by
steamingbag


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06/08/2004 08:10 AM (UTC)

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The lifebars are right and I think you would only need 1 dragon icon under the Kung Lao lifebar.
You also have a timer, not set at 99, which is good.
You want this fake to look as real as possible, so you should include shadows. Since he is performing the fatality, I think the hat should be still slicing Cage, not already done slicing him. Other than that its an alright fake, 2/5.
You also have a timer, not set at 99, which is good.
You want this fake to look as real as possible, so you should include shadows. Since he is performing the fatality, I think the hat should be still slicing Cage, not already done slicing him. Other than that its an alright fake, 2/5.
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Hmm. I don't think I have ever seen a fake with balloon text in it. I'm not sure if I like the idea. The placing of the lifebars and the timer being counted down is good. But Kung Lao's energy is draining the wrong way. Also some shadows are needed. Kung Lao also needs another dragon icon under his lifebar. Just take a lil more time on the little things and you will get better.

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Completely utterly. I will tell you how you can improve.
First off, you need to think of creative ideas. Honestly, Kung Lao getting his hat and slicing you in half seem boring since it has been done practically forever. Challenge yourself by doing actual editing. Although I did notice, you did try to put effort in Kung Lao's hat by adding blood. However, due to the low quality of the jpeg you formatted--it lost its quality, which is not visible.
Effects are sloppy and the blood is exaggerated. You need to detail your effects more.
Not much going on in the background. You are missing WINS on top of your lifebars. Screen needs to be darken due to a Fatality. No shadows. Realism is the key.
I think the idea of adding a balloon to the fake is stupid. Try harder and your skills will increase if you put your mind to it.
First off, you need to think of creative ideas. Honestly, Kung Lao getting his hat and slicing you in half seem boring since it has been done practically forever. Challenge yourself by doing actual editing. Although I did notice, you did try to put effort in Kung Lao's hat by adding blood. However, due to the low quality of the jpeg you formatted--it lost its quality, which is not visible.
Effects are sloppy and the blood is exaggerated. You need to detail your effects more.
Not much going on in the background. You are missing WINS on top of your lifebars. Screen needs to be darken due to a Fatality. No shadows. Realism is the key.
I think the idea of adding a balloon to the fake is stupid. Try harder and your skills will increase if you put your mind to it.

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Yeah next time dont add text to it. It makes the fake look...fake. I like it though. Kinda original. At least its nasty! 3/5


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As a fake goes its pretty good because it pretty much just looks like a normal screen shot. Like what was previously mentioned shadows and an extra dragon win coin are needed. My main observation is that you havent added any originality to the picture and it could almost be a normal screen shot with the text over it. As far as the text goes perhaps coloring the speech bubble white would have helped the words stand out better.
Anyways Johnny deserved it so good work.
Anyways Johnny deserved it so good work.


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Yeah, I've realised that the text messed it up. There is no text in fatalities. The JPEG conversion darkens the shot and I can't really add the shadows. What do you suggest i do? Colour the animation black and largen it? I'm using microsoft paint and I know most use photoshop. Should I download this and how do I add a pic to this message. It says to give url but thats for the net, right?


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I don't really like this. The quality is too low & the concept is overdone. And you can barely read the speach.

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steamingbag Wrote: Yeah, I've realised that the text messed it up. There is no text in fatalities. The JPEG conversion darkens the shot and I can't really add the shadows. What do you suggest i do? Colour the animation black and largen it? I'm using microsoft paint and I know most use photoshop. Should I download this and how do I add a pic to this message. It says to give url but thats for the net, right? |
Make two copies. One as a jpeg. Then the other as a PNG.
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