Unfinished flash project feedback
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posted01/20/2010 10:59 PM (UTC)by
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Kamionero
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06/29/2003 04:54 AM (UTC)
...i've ran out of ideas!!!
take a look at my flash MK movie (still missing all FX and most music) that I have to finish...

Post any suggestions etc...

I was thinking about saving the big battle against the Tekunin for the next part, but i'm not sure.
I need an ending! and make it good MKO!!!!

CLICK HERE!!!
click anywhere on the movie or press space to pass text

btw, this is the 3rd installment of my MK movies, so a shitload of characters are dead.
PART 1
PART 2
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fedegita
01/16/2010 02:53 AM (UTC)
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The first one is very well done. Can't say i like the idea of Shang Tsung holding dominion over the likes of Raiden and Kahn and the dialogue seems a little off for characters like Scorpion. But the animation is good (the Shang Tsung puppet-master sequence was genius). Will watch the other two soon
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Zentile
01/17/2010 07:41 PM (UTC)
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Creatively, there's a lot that I don't agree with.
Some of the dialogue is way wrong too.

But there is some seriously cool shit going on, some very nice sequences. I enjoyed it, I hope to see more.
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Chimera
01/18/2010 09:21 PM (UTC)
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hmm, maybe Quan Chi's in the Nexus or Goro and the Shokans or maybe Shang of an alternate world, well whoever it is Shang has no control over them
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Kamionero
01/19/2010 06:11 AM (UTC)
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Zentile Wrote:
Creatively, there's a lot that I don't agree with.
Some of the dialogue is way wrong too.

But there is some seriously cool shit going on, some very nice sequences. I enjoyed it, I hope to see more.


Dialogue is by no way final... some of it is REALLY corny, so i will b changing some of it.

There is a large chunk of 'splainin of the story that would go first that kinda explains why Tsung does have control of these ppl (basically same as Shaolin Monks... so many ppl died that he gained a lot of power from their souls).

I think i'll just go with a battle against a tekunin army for the end, since they represent a threat to tsung since they dont have souls to take
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UltimateRyu
01/20/2010 10:59 PM (UTC)
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Khameleon's and Sonya's introductions are top class. I'd love to see you make a full blown fatality animation with that Khamaleon intro. The other material pales in comparison. Make a nice fight sequence from the mentioned scene combo and you might have a winner on your hands.
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