ZXVanX FanFic - Alliance beyond hatred
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NOTE : Before reading the fan fic, notice that I have given myself a name to some characters and that this fan fic is a request, I have created a story from the Ideas of Grotesquethebeast.

Request by : Grotesquethebeast
Request completed by : ZXVanX


Outworld midnight, Sub-Zero who is on a personal hunt for scorpion, runs in outworld in hope to find the japanese ninja, leader of Shirai Ryu, in order to slay him to get his personal revenge for the death of his brother Noob Saibot.

Sub-Zero Noticed a presence on a cliff.
His Screams echoed strong as he said,

Sub-Zero : Show yourself Scorpion! I KNOW YOU'RE HERE!
Scorpion : Well..Well.. if it Isn't Sub-Zero.
Sub-Zero : I finally tracked you down!
Scorpion : Haha! YOU tracked ME down?
Sub-Zero : It doesn't matter! I came to avenge! The death OF MY BROTHER NOOB SAIBOT! Who vanished into darkness because of you!!!!
Scorpion : The armageddon just finished and yet you foolish Lin Kieu still have a death wish,
Sub-Zero : I will not allow you to live any longer! Fight Scorpion! To your very last breath!

Scorpion : As you wish!

Sub-Zero and Scorpion rotated clockwise fixing each other, Sub-Zero got out his Kori Blade while Scorpion only summoned fire from the ground surrounding zero neutralizing his ice abilitys,

Scorpion : Are you still sure about your choice Lin Kieu warrior?
Sub-Zero : I will fight to my last breath! for I am Sub-Zero! Leader Of Lin Kieu! protector of earthrealm! I Will hunt you lke the beast you are!
Scorpion : Haha, You really are a fool! FIGHT!

Scorpion took out his Mugai Ryu and preapared for hell fire battle,

Sub-Zero jumped in the air attemping to freeze scorpion from air, wich was a failure due to his teleporting leaving a silhouette of fire given from the ninja who stroke sub-zero from behind with an aerial kick.

Sub-Zero : Coward Ninja!
Scorpion : I'm only toying with you, you poor fool!
Sub-Zero : This is it ! I will go serious now! YAAAAHH!!!

Sub-Zero Dashed towards Scorpion hitting him with his move : the cold shoulder, causing Scorpion to fall in his back and lose some armor parts,

Sub-Zero : What the ?
Scorpion : You've unmasked me, I guess its no use anymore, Lin Kiue Warrior.

A female removed the scorpion looking armor, showing a kunoichi ( female Ninja) with a tight black costume on her hugging her body forms.

Sub-Zero : You are not Scorpion! Who are you ?

I, Am Anuy, Sister of Scorpion, I am filling in for the real scorpion because he's off in the netherrealm hunting down Oni for Lord Shinnok, and he din't want you Lin Kiue rats to disturb him!

Sub-Zero : I am not here for you! I want Scorpion! And I will track him down!
Anuy : Cool down, this is no use, you are only running to your own death if you go afther him now, and I've had in mind to enjoy you a bit.

Fight?!

Sub-Zero moved his head in sign of disagreement,
Anuy : You are so lame! Anywho, tell me what's going on between you and my brother ?

Sub-Zero, He killed my brother, Noob Saibot, Since then, I promessed to avenge my brother by killing Scorpion by my own hands!

Anuy : haha! and you really think you stand a chance?
Sub-Zero : Why not?
Anuy : I like you! you are funny!
Sub-Zero : ........you... are not like your brother...
Anuy : we we're raised from different ways, when I was a kid who was raised in hell with his father, since then. his cruel and heartless, but I do not really have a choice to help my family,

All I remember from that night, was my meeting with scorpion's sister Anuy and the fun I had with her, since then, we became really close friends, everything was fine, we even made an alliance towards our clan, untill scorpion came back, we somehow afther multpel fights settled down, I am married to his sister, we finally could live in peace, We had two little kids who are called : Sub-Scorp and Scorp-Zero. they are now 8 years old, yes, they are twins, Everything was just fine, untill someday.


Father!!! NOOOOOO!!!!
Sub-Zero : Scorp-Zero!!!! Sub-Scorp!!! DAMN TARKATANS! THEY HAVE TAKEN AWAY MY CHILDRENS! I WILL NEVER FORGIVE THEM!

Anuy : peace finally prevailed... if we go back into fight we wi- -
Sub-Zero : If we stay here doing nothign they will end up as diner for tarkatans! I refuse!

Anuy : I'm going with you.
Sub-Zero : No, First, you must go get Scorpion and the others, it seems like another of Baraka's plan, I will meet up with Scorpion Later,

Anuy : But!
Sub-Zero : JUST GO!

Sub-Zero grabbed his Lin Kiue suit and left the earthrealm village where his wife and sons used to live happy untill July 23.

When finally in outworld, standing up a cliff, Sub-Zero gaze upon the Horizon, There they are! damn tarkatans!

Sub-Zero jumps from the edge and falls near the tarkatan army transporting multiple humans,

*Sub-Zero : so they we're afther earthrealm's human's afther all, but why?*

Tarkatan 1 : Grrr.. This Smell! ITS LIN KIUE!
Sub-Scorp : FATHER !?
Tarkatan hits Sub-Scorp - : SHUT YOUR TRAP HUMAN OR I EAT YOU RIGHT NOW!

Sub-Zero : STAY AWAY FROM MY SONS YOU SUNAVA !!!!!!!!!

A sharpened Kori Blade slices the foolish and cruel tarkatan in two.

I WILL KILL YOU ALL!

Scorpion: better leave some for me too !

Sub-Zero : SCORPION! There you are!
Scorpion : I hate you Sub-Zero, but NO ONE TOUCHES MY FAMILY!
Sub-Zero : Heh, That's really you Scorpion!
Scorpion : These Rats!

GET OVER HERE!

Over 100 of tarkatans attacked our heros like insects on an abandonned rat corpse. COLD SHOULDER! Aaaaaaaaaand STRIKE! 5 Tarkatans got Thrown in the air by the single strike of Sub-Zero and his magnificent cold shoulder,

Baraka : ARGH! YOU FOOLS! I WILL GET RID OF YOU MYSELF!!!

Baraka joins the fight attacking Scorpion from behind who was enjoying the view of the tarkatan head he was holding in his hand.

Scorpion got hit in the back by a powerfull punch, and then bounces on the ground to recover balance and Throw his Scorpion to baraka's neck, wich baraka dodged wich caused a random tarkatan to be caught,

* Scorpion : !? Dammit! Still better then nothing! *

Scorpion Swings the Tarkatan in the battlefield like a cowboy swingning his lasso,causing multiple enemys to be hit and criticaly damadged.

Baraka : TARKATAN OFFICERS! RUN WITH THE KIDS!

Sub-Zero & Scorpion : NO!

Both warriors chased the tarkatan officers as more of those minions got in their way,OUTTA MY WAY YOU FOOLISH CREATURE!

Scorpion : Run Sub-Zero! I will take care of them!

Sub-Zero : But! how can YOU LEFT ALONE defeat them all ?

Scorpion : It matters not! RUN!!!!

Sub-Zero : I will be right back! Just hang on Scorpion!

Scorpion : easier said then done!

Sub-Zero Frozen the first tarkatan holding one of the kids causing him the instantly drop him on the ground,

Scorp-Zero : Dad! Sub-Scorp is still in there! he is further north!

Sub-Zero : Got it, you stay with me,

Sub-Zero grabbed his son and left to save his other one,

NOW THAT DOES IT! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!

Tarkatan Officer 2 : ARGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Anuy : I always enjoyed the view of a tarkatan corpse! Come on Sub-Scorp! we gotta hurry!

She grabbed her son and left to see sub-zero,

Anuy! what are you doing here? its total crisis!
Anuy : I cannot let you go on your own Sub-Zero, you should know!
Sub-Zero, It matters not! Escape with the childs now! I have a battle to finish!

without waiting for an answer Sub-Zero runs as fast as he can to reach Scorpion.

Scorpion : ARGH! Let go you little piece of !
Sub-Zero appears from an Cold Silhouette and twists the head of a tarkatan holding Scorpion's left arm.

Sub-Zero : Best Timing Ever!

Baraka : Argh.... TARKATANS! RETREAT!

All the tarkatan's retreated towards their hidden village leaving Sub-Zero and Scorpion in a waste land in outworld.

Sub-Zero and Scorpion we're breathless afther this hard fight.


ARGH!!GRRRRRRRRRRR! THIS IS FAR FROM OVER! Said baraka as he vanished into darkness leaving hate in the hearts of the 2 new allys.

How is this battle going to end ?
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03/25/2008 11:57 PM (UTC)
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NOTE : Before reading the fan fic, notice that I have given myself a name to some characters and that this fan fic is a request, I have created a story from the Ideas of Grotesquethebeast.

Request by : Grotesquethebeast
Request completed by : ZXVanX


Outworld midnight, Sub-Zero who is on a personal hunt for scorpion, runs in outworld in hope to find the japanese ninja, leader of Shirai Ryu, in order to slay him to get his personal revenge for the death of his brother Noob Saibot.

Sub-Zero Noticed a presence on a cliff.
His Screams echoed strong as he said,

Sub-Zero : Show yourself Scorpion! I KNOW YOU'RE HERE!
Scorpion : Well..Well.. if it Isn't Sub-Zero.
Sub-Zero : I finally tracked you down!
Scorpion : Haha! YOU tracked ME down?
Sub-Zero : It doesn't matter! I came to avenge! The death OF MY BROTHER NOOB SAIBOT! Who vanished into darkness because of you!!!!
Scorpion : The armageddon just finished and yet you foolish Lin Kieu still have a death wish,
Sub-Zero : I will not allow you to live any longer! Fight Scorpion! To your very last breath!

Scorpion : As you wish!

Sub-Zero and Scorpion rotated clockwise fixing each other, Sub-Zero got out his Kori Blade while Scorpion only summoned fire from the ground surrounding zero neutralizing his ice abilitys,

Scorpion : Are you still sure about your choice Lin Kieu warrior?
Sub-Zero : I will fight to my last breath! for I am Sub-Zero! Leader Of Lin Kieu! protector of earthrealm! I Will hunt you lke the beast you are!
Scorpion : Haha, You really are a fool! FIGHT!

Scorpion took out his Mugai Ryu and preapared for hell fire battle,

Sub-Zero jumped in the air attemping to freeze scorpion from air, wich was a failure due to his teleporting leaving a silhouette of fire given from the ninja who stroke sub-zero from behind with an aerial kick.

Sub-Zero : Coward Ninja!
Scorpion : I'm only toying with you, you poor fool!
Sub-Zero : This is it ! I will go serious now! YAAAAHH!!!

Sub-Zero Dashed towards Scorpion hitting him with his move : the cold shoulder, causing Scorpion to fall in his back and lose some armor parts,

Sub-Zero : What the ?
Scorpion : You've unmasked me, I guess its no use anymore, Lin Kiue Warrior.

A female removed the scorpion looking armor, showing a kunoichi ( female Ninja) with a tight black costume on her hugging her body forms.

Sub-Zero : You are not Scorpion! Who are you ?

I, Am Anuy, Sister of Scorpion, I am filling in for the real scorpion because he's off in the netherrealm hunting down Oni for Lord Shinnok, and he din't want you Lin Kiue rats to disturb him!

Sub-Zero : I am not here for you! I want Scorpion! And I will track him down!
Anuy : Cool down, this is no use, you are only running to your own death if you go afther him now, and I've had in mind to enjoy you a bit.

Fight?!

Sub-Zero moved his head in sign of disagreement,
Anuy : You are so lame! Anywho, tell me what's going on between you and my brother ?

Sub-Zero, He killed my brother, Noob Saibot, Since then, I promessed to avenge my brother by killing Scorpion by my own hands!

Anuy : haha! and you really think you stand a chance?
Sub-Zero : Why not?
Anuy : I like you! you are funny!
Sub-Zero : ........you... are not like your brother...
Anuy : we we're raised from different ways, when I was a kid who was raised in hell with his father, since then. his cruel and heartless, but I do not really have a choice to help my family,

All I remember from that night, was my meeting with scorpion's sister Anuy and the fun I had with her, since then, we became really close friends, everything was fine, we even made an alliance towards our clan, untill scorpion came back, we somehow afther multpel fights settled down, I am married to his sister, we finally could live in peace, We had two little kids who are called : Sub-Scorp and Scorp-Zero. they are now 8 years old, yes, they are twins, Everything was just fine, untill someday.


Father!!! NOOOOOO!!!!
Sub-Zero : Scorp-Zero!!!! Sub-Scorp!!! DAMN TARKATANS! THEY HAVE TAKEN AWAY MY CHILDRENS! I WILL NEVER FORGIVE THEM!

Anuy : peace finally prevailed... if we go back into fight we wi- -
Sub-Zero : If we stay here doing nothign they will end up as diner for tarkatans! I refuse!

Anuy : I'm going with you.
Sub-Zero : No, First, you must go get Scorpion and the others, it seems like another of Baraka's plan, I will meet up with Scorpion Later,

Anuy : But!
Sub-Zero : JUST GO!

Sub-Zero grabbed his Lin Kiue suit and left the earthrealm village where his wife and sons used to live happy untill July 23.

When finally in outworld, standing up a cliff, Sub-Zero gaze upon the Horizon, There they are! damn tarkatans!

Sub-Zero jumps from the edge and falls near the tarkatan army transporting multiple humans,

*Sub-Zero : so they we're afther earthrealm's human's afther all, but why?*

Tarkatan 1 : Grrr.. This Smell! ITS LIN KIUE!
Sub-Scorp : FATHER !?
Tarkatan hits Sub-Scorp - : SHUT YOUR TRAP HUMAN OR I EAT YOU RIGHT NOW!

Sub-Zero : STAY AWAY FROM MY SONS YOU SUNAVA !!!!!!!!!

A sharpened Kori Blade slices the foolish and cruel tarkatan in two.

I WILL KILL YOU ALL!

Scorpion: better leave some for me too !

Sub-Zero : SCORPION! There you are!
Scorpion : I hate you Sub-Zero, but NO ONE TOUCHES MY FAMILY!
Sub-Zero : Heh, That's really you Scorpion!
Scorpion : These Rats!

GET OVER HERE!

Over 100 of tarkatans attacked our heros like insects on an abandonned rat corpse. COLD SHOULDER! Aaaaaaaaaand STRIKE! 5 Tarkatans got Thrown in the air by the single strike of Sub-Zero and his magnificent cold shoulder,

Baraka : ARGH! YOU FOOLS! I WILL GET RID OF YOU MYSELF!!!

Baraka joins the fight attacking Scorpion from behind who was enjoying the view of the tarkatan head he was holding in his hand.

Scorpion got hit in the back by a powerfull punch, and then bounces on the ground to recover balance and Throw his Scorpion to baraka's neck, wich baraka dodged wich caused a random tarkatan to be caught,

* Scorpion : !? Dammit! Still better then nothing! *

Scorpion Swings the Tarkatan in the battlefield like a cowboy swingning his lasso,causing multiple enemys to be hit and criticaly damadged.

Baraka : TARKATAN OFFICERS! RUN WITH THE KIDS!

Sub-Zero & Scorpion : NO!

Both warriors chased the tarkatan officers as more of those minions got in their way,OUTTA MY WAY YOU FOOLISH CREATURE!

Scorpion : Run Sub-Zero! I will take care of them!

Sub-Zero : But! how can YOU LEFT ALONE defeat them all ?

Scorpion : It matters not! RUN!!!!

Sub-Zero : I will be right back! Just hang on Scorpion!

Scorpion : easier said then done!

Sub-Zero Frozen the first tarkatan holding one of the kids causing him the instantly drop him on the ground,

Scorp-Zero : Dad! Sub-Scorp is still in there! he is further north!

Sub-Zero : Got it, you stay with me,

Sub-Zero grabbed his son and left to save his other one,

NOW THAT DOES IT! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!

Tarkatan Officer 2 : ARGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Anuy : I always enjoyed the view of a tarkatan corpse! Come on Sub-Scorp! we gotta hurry!

She grabbed her son and left to see sub-zero,

Anuy! what are you doing here? its total crisis!
Anuy : I cannot let you go on your own Sub-Zero, you should know!
Sub-Zero, It matters not! Escape with the childs now! I have a battle to finish!

without waiting for an answer Sub-Zero runs as fast as he can to reach Scorpion.

Scorpion : ARGH! Let go you little piece of !
Sub-Zero appears from an Cold Silhouette and twists the head of a tarkatan holding Scorpion's left arm.

Sub-Zero : Best Timing Ever!

Baraka : Argh.... TARKATANS! RETREAT!

All the tarkatan's retreated towards their hidden village leaving Sub-Zero and Scorpion in a waste land in outworld.

Sub-Zero and Scorpion we're breathless afther this hard fight.


ARGH!!GRRRRRRRRRRR! THIS IS FAR FROM OVER! Said baraka as he vanished into darkness leaving hate in the hearts of the 2 new allys.

How is this battle going to end ?
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03/26/2008 08:12 PM (UTC)
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ZXVanX Wrote:
Sub-Zero : Scorp-Zero!!!! Sub-Scorp!!! DAMN TARKATANS! THEY HAVE TAKEN AWAY MY CHILDRENS! I WILL NEVER FORGIVE THEM!



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03/26/2008 09:23 PM (UTC)
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O-M-G! It's better than how I saw it in my dreams!

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04/27/2008 03:07 PM (UTC)
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That's awesome! Grotesque had the idea, but props to you for bringing it out in such beautiful form! I was almost in tears when the Tarkatans took the twins!
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Want an MK fan fiction made with your favorite mortal kombat character? contact me and I will get to it!

New Fan fiction made! check it out! its called : Johnny Leads the cage !

04/27/2008 08:11 PM (UTC)
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That's awesome! Grotesque had the idea, but props to you for bringing it out in such beautiful form! I was almost in tears when the Tarkatans took the twins!


Thanks for your nice comment ! I appreciate that you liked it :P
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04/28/2008 12:12 AM (UTC)
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Can you continue this story for me please? In the sequel, Sub tracts down his children's kidnappers. But his kids have been turned evil by Baraka. He has to show them the power of good. " You must Believe in the ice" he says to them before he enters kombat with Baraka. Sub-Zero vs. Baraka, the winner gets the hearts and imaginations of the children, the loser....dies.

That would be sweet, I'm picturing it now.
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