kontinued kombat part two.
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posted03/12/2006 05:13 AM (UTC)by
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12/28/2005 06:34 PM (UTC)
kahn's palace(the dungens)

kung;'why did'nt they kill us?'
taja;'i dont think they can,their preist's'
siro;'but their evil'
taja;'but still holy men'
kung;'i think taja's right'
taja;'so if we're here kitana must be here too
siro;'yeah but we saw her get killed'
kung;'no we saw what they wanted us to see'
taja walks over to the cell door
taja;'HELLO IS THERE ANYONE THERE
vorpax;'TAJA IS THAT YOU?'
taja;' guys its vorpax she's alive'
vorpax;'IM HERE WITH OMEGIS REPTILE AND KIRI'
taja;' WHAT ABOUT SHANG AND QUAN-CHI?'
vorpax;'NO BUT I DID SEE THEM SOMEWHERE'
just then kai walks into the dungen
kai;' stop shouting'
kung;' who are you?'
kitana;' his name is kai he is my cousin'
kitana walks in and stands next to kai
kai;' we are here to save you all'
taja;'all as in them too'
taja points to the other call with reptile and kiri in
kitana;'yes taja we will need all the help we can get to escape kahn's palace'
taja;'ok fine but if reptile looks at me funny i will kill him myself'
siro;'and i will help her'
kai;' ok ok lets get this door open'
sub-zero walks in
sub-zero;'i got this one'
sub-zero freezes the door then kicks it,it shaters into bits
then the next one
kai;'ok lets go we have to save raiden'
kung;'lets go'

the hall outside raidens cell
kai;'its just through here'
kai turns the handle to open the door
his hand glows purple
taja;'whats that glow?'
kai;'the door is locked it takes my powers to open it'
taja;' ok'
inside raiden sits in the corner crying over the loss of his champions
kung;'raiden are you ok?'
raiden;'kung lao?'
kung;'yes raiden its me'
raiden;' but kahn said you were all dead'
siro;'he lied raiden we have to get out of here'
raiden;'i dont have any powers here'
kai;'i know i got this'
kai shows everyone the crystal
raiden;' thats good but it needs charging and i cant do it'
vorpax;'what about omegis?'
omegis;'i dont have that much power but maybe with shang and quan-chi's help'
kai;'then let's go get them'
reptile;'do you know where they are?'
kai;'yes kahn would have put them in a magic prison'
kiri;'why not put them with us?'
raiden;'because he cant take the chance that they would ecape'
vorpax;'shang has power in the cobolt mine so he cant go there'
kai;'no i know where they are'
taja;'i cant beleive im saying this but lets go save shang-tsung'
raiden;'we need to hurry if we are dicovered kahn will send hi generals to stop us'

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BiohazardEXTREME
03/12/2006 01:48 AM (UTC)
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First of all, Shao Kahn declared everyone of them as "Dead." He said so himself. Secondly, Kai didn't exist until the later generations, along with Liu Kang. That's like having Johnny Cage there, it won't work.

Third, why are you making two separate threads for your one story? That's pretty much spam.
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03/12/2006 05:13 AM (UTC)
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Yeah, there's no need for you to make two seperate threads. Just keep everything in one. You can copy Part Two and add it to the first thread.


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