It's MKA all over again with too many characters. The problem is that too many characters will water down the story and only make you say, "Look, it's... Mickey Mouse, Stone Cold, Papa Smurf!" or whatever. The story would benefit with a limited mumber of characters.

Interesting story!


GD

ghostdragon Wrote: It's MKA all over again with too many characters. The problem is that too many characters will water down the story and only make you say, "Look, it's... Mickey Mouse, Stone Cold, Papa Smurf!" or whatever. The story would benefit with a limited mumber of characters. Interesting story! GD

Well, Raiden takes a back-seat for most of the movie, Liu Kang dies early, and we don't see much of the second-tier characters until they're needed, after which most of them die off very quickly.

The only 'core' characters in the movie are Fujin, Kung Lao, Johnny Cage, Bo' Rai Cho, Kitana, Sonya, Jax, Quan Chi, Shinnok, Tanya, and possibly Scorpion and Sub-Zero. The other characters just set up the fight sequences in the movie, to further the story, of course.

SynjoDeonecros Wrote: ghostdragon Wrote: It's MKA all over again with too many characters. The problem is that too many characters will water down the story and only make you say, "Look, it's... Mickey Mouse, Stone Cold, Papa Smurf!" or whatever. The story would benefit with a limited mumber of characters. Interesting story! GD Well, Raiden takes a back-seat for most of the movie, Liu Kang dies early, and we don't see much of the second-tier characters until they're needed, after which most of them die off very quickly. The only 'core' characters in the movie are Fujin, Kung Lao, Johnny Cage, Bo' Rai Cho, Kitana, Sonya, Jax, Quan Chi, Shinnok, Tanya, and possibly Scorpion and Sub-Zero. The other characters just set up the fight sequences in the movie, to further the story, of course.

That's exactly what he meant. Look at MKA- The only core characters are Liu, Jax, Sonya, Kitana and the villain Shao Kahn. Rain, Ermac, Sheeva, Baraka, Nightwolf, Sub-Zero, Scorpion are all there to just ''set up the fight sequences''.

Sorry, but I have to agree with the other guy. It's MKA all over again, maybe even worse.

Okay, so help me out, here. I know the story for the movie is great, other people have already esablished that. So, what characters should be left in, and which should be left out? Personally, I'd say Fujin, Shinnok, Kung Lao, Quan Chi, and the rest of the 'core' good guy team (minus Liu Kang, who can die early, like Johnny did in Annihilation), but we also need an even balance of fights and good guys/bad guys in the mix. With the original director and producer now onboard for the third movie, I think it doesn't really matter how many characters are in it. They'll still find a way to fit them all in with their own little, yet important, role in the movie (like I was planning for with the characters I put in there).

Are you actually trying to get this screenplay writen to get considered by the producers?


GD

Oh no no, I think the story's terrible aswell.

Zentile Wrote: Oh no no, I think the story's terrible aswell.

Then you, sir, have no concept of good scriptwriting.

And, no, I'm not planning on pitching this idea to New Line. I've already missed the boat, on that one. Still, I highly doubt that they director and producer would just chuch Annihilation from the series (it still made money, and it did stay at least somewhat true to the story for MK3), and they could feasably create a good movie using a lot of characters, putting those characters in roles that will not only provide good fight sequences, but to fill out the story and give it depth, as well.

This is just the story that I would use for the movie. If you need details on some of the character's roles, just let me know, and I'll explain them to you. It's not like it's going to turn into the actual movie script, y'know...

I guess another war that happens out of nowhere is good script writing then. Forgive me for not agreeing with you, for my taste is truly bad.

Alright now, have these people in it...

Fujin
Kung Lao
Sub Zero
Scorpion
Noob Saibot
Shinnock
Sektor
Frost
Reiko
Nightwolf
Drahmin
Moloch

THAT'S ALL YOU NEED!

Here's how it might go down including your version in outline form:

[>] Quan Chi frees Shinnock and raise an army led by General Reiko (He has to be a real badass general or he won't be worth it).

[>] Rayden gives asks Fujin to lead the Earth Warriors. And Fujin can't ba a punk either. When Liu hears about the threat, Liu Kang takes Sub Zero and Nightwolf along to stop them.

[>] Fujin belives that Liu is too hasty in challenging Shinnock army too soon, but is too late to stop him.

[>] Liu Challenges Shinnock, but Quan Chi challenges Liu. Liu is killed by Chi.

[>] Fujin realizes that the threat is great and goes to Earth realm to seek Kung Lao. Kung Lao then seeks to avenge Liu.

[>] Knowing that he will need help, Sub Zero inlists the help of his pupil Frost.

[>] Quan Chi tricks Scorpion in assisting as long as he kills Sub Zero.

So far...

Earth: Kung Lao, Fujin, Sub Zero, Frost, and Nightwolf

Neitherrealm: Shinnock, Quan Chi, General Reiko, Scorpion, Sektor, Noob Saibot(Personal bodyguard to Quan Chi), Drahmin, Moloch

So here's the fight break down:

[>] Kung Lao vs. Quan Chi--> Quan Chi dies.
[>] Nightwolf vs. Reiko--> Reiko dies.
[>] Sub Zero vs. Scorpion--> Defeats Sub Zero.
[>] Kung Lao vs. Drahmin--> Defeats Drahmin.
[>] Kung Lao vs. Noob Saibot--> Noob dies.
[>] Frost vs. Noob Saibot--> Defeats Frost.
[>] Fujin vs. Shinnock--> Shinnock dies.
[>] Scorpion vs. Drahmin & Moloch--> Drahmin & Moloch die.
[>] Sub Zero vs. Sektor--> Draw.
[>] Nightwolf vs. Moloch--> Defeats Moloch.
[>] Frost vs. Sektor--> Sektor dies.

These fights and thier outcomes work well with half of the character list you had in mind. You had like 22 people! Although the 12 I have seems large my MKA standards, the fact that they aren't seen once and then never seen again is better than what MKA had. There are no guest appearances! Everyone is on a side and they all fight. Some even twice! The Sub Zero vs. Scorpion thing could play out similar to how it did in MK4 when Quan Chi admits that Zero didn't kill Scorpion's family or somethin. I dunno. Then the deal with Scorpion turning on Chi and having to fight Drahmin and Moloch could play out.

I think it's what you intended also. An number of great fights. But with my rotser and the use of economy, I think it works well. Since it's not a tournament based on rules, it's appropriate that some characters are defeated and still allowed to fight again. Of course I'm adding some of my thoughts into the scenarios. 11 fights does seem quite much and maybe three or four fights could be thrown out, but this is what came to mind.

All that's needed is a good story to tie all this shit together.


I'm Ghost!

Ghost Dragon

ghostdragon Wrote: Alright now, have these people in it... Fujin Kung Lao Sub Zero Scorpion Noob Saibot Shinnock Sektor Frost Reiko Nightwolf Drahmin Moloch THAT'S ALL YOU NEED! Here's how it might go down including your version in outline form: [>] Quan Chi frees Shinnock and raise an army led by General Reiko (He has to be a real badass general or he won't be worth it). [>] Rayden gives asks Fujin to lead the Earth Warriors. And Fujin can't ba a punk either. When Liu hears about the threat, Liu Kang takes Sub Zero and Nightwolf along to stop them. [>] Fujin belives that Liu is too hasty in challenging Shinnock army too soon, but is too late to stop him. [>] Liu Challenges Shinnock, but Quan Chi challenges Liu. Liu is killed by Chi. [>] Fujin realizes that the threat is great and goes to Earth realm to seek Kung Lao. Kung Lao then seeks to avenge Liu. [>] Knowing that he will need help, Sub Zero inlists the help of his pupil Frost. [>] Quan Chi tricks Scorpion in assisting as long as he kills Sub Zero. So far... Earth: Kung Lao, Fujin, Sub Zero, Frost, and Nightwolf Neitherrealm: Shinnock, Quan Chi, General Reiko, Scorpion, Sektor, Noob Saibot(Personal bodyguard to Quan Chi), Drahmin, Moloch So here's the fight break down: [>] Kung Lao vs. Quan Chi--> Quan Chi dies. [>] Nightwolf vs. Reiko--> Reiko dies. [>] Sub Zero vs. Scorpion--> Defeats Sub Zero. [>] Kung Lao vs. Drahmin--> Defeats Drahmin. [>] Kung Lao vs. Noob Saibot--> Noob dies. [>] Frost vs. Noob Saibot--> Defeats Frost. [>] Fujin vs. Shinnock--> Shinnock dies. [>] Scorpion vs. Drahmin & Moloch--> Drahmin & Moloch die. [>] Sub Zero vs. Sektor--> Draw. [>] Nightwolf vs. Moloch--> Defeats Moloch. [>] Frost vs. Sektor--> Sektor dies. These fights and thier outcomes work well with half of the character list you had in mind. You had like 22 people! Although the 12 I have seems large my MKA standards, the fact that they aren't seen once and then never seen again is better than what MKA had. There are no guest appearances! Everyone is on a side and they all fight. Some even twice! The Sub Zero vs. Scorpion thing could play out similar to how it did in MK4 when Quan Chi admits that Zero didn't kill Scorpion's family or somethin. I dunno. Then the deal with Scorpion turning on Chi and having to fight Drahmin and Moloch could play out. I think it's what you intended also. An number of great fights. But with my rotser and the use of economy, I think it works well. Since it's not a tournament based on rules, it's appropriate that some characters are defeated and still allowed to fight again. Of course I'm adding some of my thoughts into the scenarios. 11 fights does seem quite much and maybe three or four fights could be thrown out, but this is what came to mind. All that's needed is a good story to tie all this shit together. I'm Ghost! Ghost Dragon

Well, at least you helped out more than Zentile did...

Yes, that is similar to what I was thinking, but I also wanted to show what happened to the other earth warriors, namely Sonya, Jax, and Johnny Cage (since the actor who plays him has signed up for the third movie). I don't really see Frost as a neccesary character in the movie, especially since there doesn't seem to be a way to fit in her betrayal anywhere. I would also replace Nightwolf with Bo' Rai Cho, to tie things up with the Deadly Alliance storyline and flesh out Kung Lao's part just a little more. Kitana and Sindel's disappearance should also be explained. And, finally, I was hoping to explain away the change in character for Raiden between the first two movies.

Just to build off your idea:

After Quan Chi releases Shinnok, they arrive at Edenia, take control of Tanya, and attack the palace, killing off Sindel and just barely wounding Kitana enough for her to warn her friends before collapsing into a coma. This would give Liu Kang the reckless motivation he needs to set up his suicide mission against Shinnok.

Raiden, learning of Shinnok's return, is unable to convince his fellow Elders to let him take care of the threat, and instead sends Fujin out. Fujin, although understandable to the situation, is still bitter towards the Elders and Raiden, in particular. Seems during MKA, Shinnok convinced the other Elders not to let Raiden engage with his brother, Shao Khan, and instead forced Fujin to masquerade as the Thunder God (the switch occured while Raiden consulted the Elders in their temple, thus allowing both Christopher Lambert [as Raiden] and James Remar [as Fujin] to return in the third movie). Neither Fujin nor Raiden wanted this, but were superceded by the Elders, and, since Raiden automatically gained the role of Elder God for being Shinnok's son, Fujin is not quite as forgiving to either for having him be a decoy for Shao Khan. His resentment, though not making him a 'punk' per se, does blind him enough to fail to prevent Liu Kang from going after Shinnok and dying in the process. Meanwhile, Raiden continues to fail to convince the Elders to let him deal with his own problems (like he should've done with Shao Khan in the last movie), and eventually relinquishes his status in order to do so. This sets up a rivalry battle between Fujin and Raiden, with Fujin believing Raiden was sent with another cockamaime scheme for him, and Raiden, learning about Liu Kang's death, after the fight, ordering Fujin to take the earth warriors out of Edenia so he could face Shinnok alone, like he should've done in the first place.

Sonya and Jax are left behind to take care of Kitana, with Nightwolf lending aid. Shinnok could send a few of his warriors (Noob, etc.) out to terminate Kitana, setting up a big burly match with Jax, Sonya, and Nightwolf. As for Cage, he could learn of Liu Kang's death at the hands of Quan Chi, and slip out of Heaven to try and find his buddie's soul in the Netherealm or something. Or, Raiden could ressurrect Cage by his request to accompany Fujin.

The fights could be thus:

[>] Kung Lao vs. Quan Chi--> Quan Chi dies.
[>] Johnny Cage vs. Reiko--> Reiko dies.
[>] Sub Zero vs. Scorpion--> Defeats Sub Zero.
[>] Jax vs. Khameleon--> Khameleon dies.
[>] Sonya vs. Noob Saibot--> Noob dies.
[>] Raiden vs. Shinnok--> Shinnock dies.
[>] Scorpion vs. Drahmin & Moloch--> Drahmin & Moloch die.
[>] Sub Zero vs. Sektor--> Sektor Dies.
[>] Bo' Rai Cho vs. Moloch--> Defeats Moloch.
[>] Fujin vs. Raiden--> Draw.
[>] Kitana vs. Tanya--> Tanya Dies, Kitana badly injured.
[>] Nightwolf vs. Baraka--> Baraka dies.
[>] Kung Lao and Fujin vs. Bo' Rai Cho--> Defeat Bo' Rai Cho.
[>] Liu Kang vs. Quan Chi--> Liu Kang dies.

Not only would each character have his or her own place in the storyline, but they'd all have a fight, and it would all be logical and fit perfectly in place with a good script.

Thanks for the help, and I appreciate any constructive comments on my revised 'script'.

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From 22 characters to 20?! Plus 14 fights?! I don't see that many fights fitting into a 1hr 45min movie along with all the development you're thinking of. I think it's gotta be slimmed down by half for both characters and fights.


LE Dragon Fantome

ghostdragon Wrote: ??? From 22 characters to 20?! Plus 14 fights?! I don't see that many fights fitting into a 1hr 45min movie along with all the development you're thinking of. I think it's gotta be slimmed down by half for both characters and fights. LE Dragon Fantome

Okay, but I don't want some of the other characters (like Kitana and Jax) to just fall off the face of the planet. There's gotta be some explination for what they're doing while the main cast are duking it out.

Bo' Rai Cho and Nightwolf can be cut, definitely. So can Baraka. I would cut Johnny Cage, but he's confirmed back in the movie, so we've gotta figure a way to fit him in. Tanya would die early, after aiding Quan Chi with the release of Shinnok. I think we can drop Drahmin, since we only really need one Oni for the movie. Kitana, like I said, could kill Tanya and then make her escape and warn the main cast before falling into a coma from her wounds. I just don't see any other way to motivate Liu Kang to go on a suicide run at Shinnok, except to kill her, and that would raise some major holy fanboy wrath. I still would keep the Fujin/Raiden fight in, though, just to settle the rivalry between them that'll build up during the movie. Besides, it's Raiden's father they're fighting, after all; He should be the one to face off against Shinnok.

So...

Kitana vs. Tanya--> Tanya dies, Kitana seriously wounded. (quick fight)
Liu Kang vs. Quan Chi--> Liu Kang dies. (quick fight)
Sonya vs. Khameleon--> Khameleon dies.
Jax vs. Noob Saibot--> Noob Saibot dies.
Kung Lao vs. Reiko--> Reiko defeated. (quick fight)
Fujin vs. Raiden--> Draw. (quick fight)
Kung Lao vs. Quan Chi--> Quan Chi defeated, later killed by Scorpion.
Sub-Zero vs. Sektor--> Sektor dies.
Scorpion vs. Sub-Zero-->Sub-Zero defeated.
Jax and Sonya vs. Moloch--> Moloch dies.
Johnny Cage vs. Reiko--> Reiko dies.
Raiden vs. Shinnok--> Shinnok dies.

If need be, we can cut out the Johnny Cage/Reiko fight, and have Kung Lao kill off Reiko during their fight. BTW, the fights with (quick fight) beside them mean just that: quickie fights that last only a few minutes, instead of the long, 10+ minute fights that the other battles are. Although quick they do serve the purpose of furthering the story (like Kitana's quick fight with Tanya in order to prevent Shinnok's return, or the Raiden/Fujin battle settling the score between them). So, in all, there are around 7-8 total main fights, and 14-15 main characters (if you want to count Johnny Cage, and Kitana, Liu Kang, Tanya, and possibly Raiden don't count, since they either die early in the movie, or are otherwise incapacitated for the remainder of it), so that should be enough for a good movie, but not too much for oversaturation.

okay, but what about Noobs role?I mean, how does he play in the story, and how the hell can you kill him off? he's a badass as portrayed by his killing of Goro, a four armed monster, so he's obviously pretty tough.and what about goros role, becuase in the games he wanted revenge for his defeat?

maninthebox Wrote: okay, but what about Noobs role?I mean, how does he play in the story, and how the hell can you kill him off? he's a badass as portrayed by his killing of Goro, a four armed monster, so he's obviously pretty tough.and what about goros role, becuase in the games he wanted revenge for his defeat?

In the movies, Goro is dead, so we won't have to worry about that.

As for Noob, he would lead the task force assigned to track down Kitana and eliminate her before she could warn her allies about Shinnok's return. As for how he'll die, agreed, it'll be tough, but I'd imagine that Jax could trap him somewhere then perform a modified version of his Head Smash fatality, or (preferably) fight Noob into a balcony, trap his arms against the railing, then kick him off it, ripping his arms off in the process, a la his Arm Rip fatal from the game. Still, it won't be easy for him.

SynjoDeonecros Wrote: maninthebox Wrote: okay, but what about Noobs role?I mean, how does he play in the story, and how the hell can you kill him off? he's a badass as portrayed by his killing of Goro, a four armed monster, so he's obviously pretty tough.and what about goros role, becuase in the games he wanted revenge for his defeat? In the movies, Goro is dead, so we won't have to worry about that. As for Noob, he would lead the task force assigned to track down Kitana and eliminate her before she could warn her allies about Shinnok's return. As for how he'll die, agreed, it'll be tough, but I'd imagine that Jax could trap him somewhere then perform a modified version of his Head Smash fatality, or (preferably) fight Noob into a balcony, trap his arms against the railing, then kick him off it, ripping his arms off in the process, a la his Arm Rip fatal from the game. Still, it won't be easy for him.

Yeah, that sounds cool. I wasn't bothered by killing him off, as long as you make it seem hard.And about goro, yeah, but he was kinda dead in the game.I was just wondering what you thought about him, and it's probably better to let him stay dead, cause I hate when people come back to life for no reason.also, I was looking over your posts and now wonder about khameleon. will it be the male or female version?(you said something about reiko, but it is the spelling used for the female version.)I commend you for adding a character most people overlook, and would like to know what story your giving he/she/it.And I'm sorry if the comments about noob seemed a bit rude. I really like the idea for a script and I'm trying to ask questions, unlike some of the people.

maninthebox Wrote: SynjoDeonecros Wrote: maninthebox Wrote: Yeah, that sounds cool. I wasn't bothered by killing him off, as long as you make it seem hard.And about goro, yeah, but he was kinda dead in the game.I was just wondering what you thought about him, and it's probably better to let him stay dead, cause I hate when people come back to life for no reason.also, I was looking over your posts and now wonder about khameleon. will it be the male or female version?(you said something about reiko, but it is the spelling used for the female version.)I commend you for adding a character most people overlook, and would like to know what story your giving he/she/it.And I'm sorry if the comments about noob seemed a bit rude. I really like the idea for a script and I'm trying to ask questions, unlike some of the people.

It's alright. I don't mind. It's just the mindless criticizms that I don't like.

As for Khameleon, she'll be the female version (with Kitana and Tanya only showing up in about the first quarter of the movie, we need *some* kind of female balance to the overwhelming male character population). Pretty much, she's a spy for Shinnok, and had aided Quan Chi in locating the Dragon King's army for him (as a bit of a sidenote and tie-in to MK:DA. Supposedly, I was going to have Shinnok ressurrect the DK's army and add it to his own, using his new unstoppable force to decimate the Elder Gods). She was put on Noob Saibot's team because of her tracking and espionage skills, hoping that, if Kitana succeeded in waring her friends and allies about Shinnok, she could infiltrate their circle and throw them off balance just enough for the rest of the strike team to take them out.

Hmph, just a thought, but are you going to bother explaining the history of lesser known characters, such as Reko and Tanya, Or will you just leave that to the imaginations? And finnaly, are you ever going to finish your script up and post it? It seems like it would be an entertaining read, and I have been wanting a good fanfic(if you prefer to call it that) to read.

maninthebox Wrote: Hmph, just a thought, but are you going to bother explaining the history of lesser known characters, such as Reko and Tanya, Or will you just leave that to the imaginations? And finnaly, are you ever going to finish your script up and post it? It seems like it would be an entertaining read, and I have been wanting a good fanfic(if you prefer to call it that) to read.

Actually, the 'script' itself is nonexistent. This is just my desription for the storyline for the movie. However, once I get past my writer's block, and get enought requests, I may write the script for it.

As for Reiko and Tanya, I'd just leave their backround to the imagination for the most part, only telling enough about their past to explain why they're there and why they're doing the things they're doing.

SynjonDeonecros, on your first post you have Jarek and chameleon as the same person. I never remember hearing anything about them being the same person. Are They?

SynjonDeonecros, on your first post you have Jarek and chameleon as the same person. I never remember hearing anything about them being the same person. Are They?

I dont think the movie shud go that way...since Shinnok was sent to the nether realm in the end of MKA, he shud just be left there and the story shud go on from deadly alliance so that everything from MKA wont be remembered....OK, i think that it shud start off with Shinnok lookin all beaten up in the beginning of the movie and a guy comes up to him (Quan Chi) Shinnok is weak so Quan Chi kills him and he escapes from the nether realm bla bla bla and the dragon logo pops out and the movie officially begins. From here, all the characters are gonna be doing their own thing...ex. Sonya and Jax are doing there special forces, Liu kang is training with Kai at his temple, and Kitana is in Edenia with her mother.

Now let me say something, since the way im kinda doing it is with the story in MKDA, i think that some characters from MK Gold shud also be added.

Now, from here Quan Chi is still pretty weak from being in the netherrealm for all that time (making as if there wasnt really a mk4 tournament) and he is in the wastelands in outworld and Baraka pops up into him. Quan Chi tells Baraka to find a way to get the amulet from Rayden and so on. Baraka gets his friend Mileena to do the job. Mileena disquises herelf as Kitana and she goes to Rayden. There they talk about the amulet and Mileena attacks rayden and steals the amulet. From here, the story starts to get complicated. Rayden starts finding all of his mortals beginning with the special forces and so on. Once Quan Chi has the amulet to his possession, he gives Mileena and Baraka the pleasure of doing what they want (taking Edenia). Then Quan Chi allies himslef with Shang Tsung and they start to some up with a plan and bla bla bla.

Kitana is in her throne with her mother, and they get a surprise attack from Mileena and Baraka. They get their throne invaded and are forced to leave. Kitana leaves with Sindel and Baraka and Mileena are left in the throne. Kitana then finds Tanya and tells her to please take care of her mother becuz Kitana had to go inform Rayden. Tanya instead beats the crap out of Sindel and takes her to Quan Chi. A few days pass, and Quan Chi and Shang tsung are almost ready to make their attack. When rayden calls everyone to meet in Shang Tsung's old island, Quan Chi and Shang Tsung are in the temple of light killing Liu Kang. When Rayden is letting everyone else know whats going on, Chi and Tsung appear with Liu's dead body and tells them the war has begun.

From here, is when most of the fights start to take place.

ok, i wrote too much, and i still need to add a few stuff since i didnt explain it that well. But heres a list of fights and their discriptions.

Shang Tsung and Quan Chi vs. Liu kang=
Liu Kang dies and u know wat happens

Sonya vs. Frost=Frost gets controlled by Quan Chi and she attacks Sonya. No one dies, but frost is left in critical condition and thats wen Sub Zero finds her. From here, the fight against scorpion begins.

Final Fight between Scorpion and Sub Zero=Sub Zero is with frost in a fortress and Sub gets attacked by Scorpion and hes left almost dead, until Quan Chi shows up and tells him the truth about scorpion's true family killer.

Tanya vs. Kitana= tanya is left dead

Kenshi vs. Mavado= Mavado dies, but Kenshi is left in critical condition, and thats wen sonya appears to help him.

Sonya vs. Kano= Kano dies

Jax vs. Hsu Hao= Hsu hao dies

Cyrax vs Sektor= Sektor dies

closing battles

Mileena vs. Kitana= Mileena is sitting in Kitana's throne and Kitana gets her out by killing her in an awesome katfight!

Final fight:
Shang Tsung vs. Kung Lao= Kung arrives at the right time and gets to kill shang tsung and during this time, quan chi is trying to escape, but he gets attacked by Scorpion...

ninjafan Wrote: SynjonDeonecros, on your first post you have Jarek and chameleon as the same person. I never remember hearing anything about them being the same person. Are They?

They are not, technically, but I had it that Chameleon was posing as Jarek. In my original post, I had it that Khameleon (the female one) masqueraded as an OIA official in order to assassinate Jax and Sonya, but Chameleon (the male one) ruined the plan by posing as Jarek in order to lure Jax and Sonya into some kind of trap or something. It sounds really lame, now, and I'm glad I rejected it.