do you speak turkish

waste

Masterfully done, however there are several points what I don't really like:
-the new characters. IMO it variates away too much from the general feel of MK as a "chinese tournament". This is subjective.

-storyteling is kinda expectable.

MK hasn't been about a chinese tournament since MK3, dude. Where have you been?

And thats exactly the problem. I miss the ground of all schemes: how to invade Earth throuh the tournament. Brought up several schemes and a lightly complicated story.

Well MK5 and 6 haven't even taken place on Earth. They're about Outworld.
And the Mortal Kombat tournament is only supposed to be held once every fifty years. The next game to revolve around a tournament would either have to have an almost entirely new cast, or a really stupid plot to explain why the villain would waste his time giving the good guys a fighting chance.

waste

Those are some great concepts, I especially like the Scorpion/Raven one.

XiahouDun, You have ALOT of time on your hands...

Even thouh it's anice thread, don't bump.

waste

i will agree on what you have to say

i will give you a thums up

hey man ur ideas for fujin were great
the whole idea that he was there to wish raiden victory but then realized he was killed at the hands of the deadly alliance
I find his bio a great, definite way to re-introduce fujin

Incredible! Thes bios and endings are rock solid and fit together perfectly.

In particular, I absolutley love Sonya and Mileena's.

Mileena
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First of, you've used Mileena's twisted insanity in a new way, she seems very vicious but also vulnerable. In her ending, the fact that she couldn't kill Kitana even though she was given the chance works brilliantly because now neither of them have to die. Again, you've given Mileena an evil, yet likeable personality.

Sonya
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Finally! Sonya's evil! Yay! Sonya has had nothing to do since MK1 really, well nothing interesting and now she's perfect. She has emotions, and thank god she killed Jax! Sonya's life has always been filled with loss and she's always had a reason to feel someway responsible, now she's every reason. And also, an alliance with Cage is a great idea, they're supposed to have a relationship when really they've never even interacted in the game.

I love them, they're perfect!

3 words dude " I LOVE YOU!" no i'm not gay but you made a great plaot,cast,Bios,and endings you are Fan fiction god.

They're the best bios I've read so far in my stay in MKO

I agree... these are the very best bio's and endings on this site. Hands down. I saved these in order with each character, bio to ending (and with the "Where are they now")

>_> I think Ed Boon and Co. are half down with MKA so soon because they came through here and said "my god...someone get a pen"