As promised, I present Saika, a new creation
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posted07/11/2004 02:02 AM (UTC)by
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This is a character I thought up at work, hope those who see it like it.(Character not finished yet)
Name:Saika
Race: Mostly Human (Part genma, although she doesn"t know it)
Origin:Earth realm
Age:24
Weight:???
Height:5'5
Eyes:Blue
Hair:Black, tied in a ponytail w/ bangs in the front.(Anime style)
Measurments:B39-W30-H35
Blood type:O
Allaince:Good
Outfit Color:Purple.
Rank:S class Shinobi(Highest rank. Much like Hatsuma)
Power:Shadow weilder, (Others yet to be discovered)
Weapons:Twin kudachi.
Disciplines: Fan Qua, Tai Chi Quan, Ninjitsu
Special intrests: Hatsuma
Symbol:Cherry blossom. Family:Mother: human,(died giving birth to Saika) Father: Onimusha General.(Identity unknown) Care taker:Head sifu of Hatsuma's shinobi clan.

Design:
Saika wears a face mask similar to Kitana's. It covers only the bottom of her face. She wears a purple bandanna to keep her pony tail out of the way. The bandanna was given to her by Hatsuma. She wears a purple kimono which raises above her knees, and shows off some thighs since it has a slit on one side. She wears black stockings that go up four inches up past her knees. Her legs have shin armour which is also purple. Her mini kimono is sleeveless so only the shoulders are coverd. It has a ninja chain mail going down the center where there is no fabric. It shows off her sexy stomach, along with some cleavage. She has nihlon going down her arms, which from into finger gloves. Both middle fingers are the only ones covered with the rest of the nihlon. She has two golden armlets on her wrists to act as a decoration, as well as a shield from strikes. She wears a black sash around her hips. The sash also supports her twin kudachi which are tied in the back in an X shaped fashion. She wears a cherry blossom in her hair for decoration. She also has a strange tattoo on her upper shoulder.

Moves:
Shadow dancer: Saika uses her gift of shadows to warp across the areana in a starshaped fashion, striking the enemy with her kudachi on the pass by.

Bladed twister: Saika spins in a twister fashion at her opponent with her kudachi extended to th sides, cutting the opponet severly at neck and waist height, several times.

Cherry blossom wind: Saika takes petals from her cherry blossom and blows them at her opponent. The petals are razor sharp and slit the opponet several times, causing gashes and enormous loss of blood.

Shadow mine: Saika creates a ball of shadow energy in her right hand. She shoots it into the ground and at the opponet. This pops the opponet into the air, leaving them open to a juggle or any other moves.

Falcon Dive: Saika leaps twenty feet into the air. She extends out her kudochi and does a back flip of the the ceiling, or wall. As she pushes off she launches at the opponet with her kudochi in front of her and slices right through them.(Note: this move can also be done as a counter to a jumping opponet, it's called Rising Falcon.)

Cannon strike: This move is a variation on the Falcon strike series. If there is no wall for Saika to bounce off when doing a Falcon Dive she ignites with a shadow fire and lunges at her opponet like a cannon ball striking them through.

Guilloten drop: Saika leaps on her opponent's shoulders, muffling them with her legs. She then does a back flip, causing the opponet to come down on their head. She takes out one of her kudochi and slashes it across their face.

Concussion Kick: Saika does a whirlwind kick in mid air, kicking the opponent in the head twice, then comes down with a double airiel axe kick to the opponet's head.
Fatalities: Razor Web: Saika uses a classic ninja trick to wrap her opponets arms, body, legs, neck, and head with an invisible razor wire. The wire are connected to her finger tips as she moves her fingers slightly the wire lifts the opponent into the air. Shen thenmoves her fingers even more, causeing the wire to cut into the opponent's flesh. Blood drips down the wires and the become visible, their arrangement is reminiscent of a spider web. The opponet tries to scream in pain but chokes on their own blood. Finally, Saika swings her arms to the ground and the wire tighten. Within seconds the opponet's body is shredded to pieces. The flesh chunks come falling to the ground. Shadow Massacre: Saika sinks into her own shadow and vanishes from sight. The opponent is confused, thinking its over. Suddenly Saika's shadow runs towards her opponets, cutting them through. The shadow turns around and attacks the opponent's shadow again with a vicious slash combo with its twin kudachi. It then puts it's hand through the opponents shadow, blood spills on the floor. The oponent's heart is ripped out from his back and is floating in midair. Seconds later, the opponents shadow falls to pieces, and so does the opponent, left in a heap of flesh and meat. Saika appears behind the fallen opponents body holding their heart with her blood stained kudachi. Story: Saika was found as a baby orphan in the Dark Forest. A place rumored to be the conduit between the Earth realm and Genma realm. It was during a lightning storm that a band of Shinobi ninja happened to pass by the crying baby at the edge of the Dark Forest. Not knowing what to do, and fearing for the child's safety in such a place, the ninjas took her to their village. The sifu understood the circumstances of this aquisition and raised the child as his own. After taking her in, he noticed that she had a strange mark on her back. It was a tattoo of an ancient Genma clan. At first the sifu did not realize this and payed no attention to it. However, later on the child's untamed emotions began to impower the strange kanji on her back. Every time the child cried, strange things would happen in the village. Strange creatures would appear from time to time, slaughtering any ninja bold enough to stand in their it's way as they made their way to the sifu's hut. When the child stopped crying, the tattoo on her back would ceice to glow and the strange creauters would vanish as quickly as they appeared. Over the years the child had grown and showed promise in her skills. As she trained she learned how to manipulate the shadows around her with the use of her strange tattoo. As she grew older she developed feelings for a boy in the village named Hatsuma. They became the best of friends through the course of their training. One day while practicing a balance exercise on a platform of elevated poles thirty feet high, Hatsuma unleashed a swift kick to Saika's head, causing her to loose her balance and fall off the beams. As she plumited, Hatsuma beat her to the bottom and caught her before she could hit the ground. As he set her down he noticed that she was bleeding from the forehead. Feeling responsible, Hatsuma gave her his bandanna to stop the bleeding. Saika treasures the bandanna to this day. Ever since then, she longed for the day they can be togehter.It's part of her outfit. Then one day it happened Hatsuma left on his final mission to assassinate another kunochi. Before he left he gave Saika the first cherry blossom that bloomed that summer. This would be the last time she would see her secret love as a Shinobi ever again. Six days after Hatsuma left for his mission, word got back to his village that he let his target get away. He was now a runaway, a bounty for every Shinobi in the village, with the exception of Saika. Weeks and weeks passed by and extermintion squads were sent after Hatsuma. And every time they would come back wounded and broken. Saika couldn't bare the thought of seeing Hatsuma's lifeless body brought back to the village. She would cry herself to sleep every night since then. One day an extermination team did not return in tact. Their bodies were missing limbs, heads, and other body parts. It looked as though they had been mauled by some kind of savage animal. The few that did survive where in a state of shock, like they had just been to Hell and back. Finally the sifu ran out off options, he decided, that the only one who could bring Hatsuma back was the one closest to him, and that one person was Saika. She refused to hunt down the one she cared for the most. The sifu said that the sacrfice of one is for the benefit of the many. He said that it hurt him deeply to send out squads of his men to chase down their own brother, but the code of the Shinobi is harsh, and does not boed well of insabordination for any one. It was his desire to see the two be wedd someday, but that is not an option now. Especially since Hatsuma's attacks have become more and more brutal. Saika was reluctantly sent out on her mission to take down Hatsuma. As her search wayned, she got word that an azure ninja was seen, slaughtering a nearby village. Saika hoped the rumors weren't true. She knew that in her heart, Hatsuma would never committ such a massacre. However, to her dismay she found that Hatsuma did indeed kill all those people. As she walked into the village, the stench of death filled her lungs. The village huts were stained with blood, and decapitated bodies, of men, women and children where every where. Their heads were hung by their hair ona tree overlooking a hill filled with rage, Saika rushed up there to find Hatsuma in a trance with the look of fear in his eyes and blood on his hands. Saika broke out into tears when she witnessed her long time friend in such torment. As she approached him, Hatsuma snapped into a rage and viciously attacked her, ripping her kemono in two. He took out his chain whip and as soon as he was about to deliver the final blow he stopped him self. Surgeing with dark energy, tears ran from his eyes as his final words to her where"I'm sorry". Hatsuma instantly vanished in a tornado of black fire. After recovering from her assualt Saika set out on a mission to bring Hatsuma back to her, even if it means giving up her life in the processes to do it.
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nyplaya
07/07/2004 07:57 AM (UTC)
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Sounds too much like Kasumi.
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The_Cold_Kombatant
07/07/2004 07:58 AM (UTC)
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This Threads gonna get closed.
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deuce685
07/07/2004 01:29 PM (UTC)
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wow.....gay. i guess you have a lot of free time...
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07/08/2004 12:14 AM (UTC)
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That was extremely rude, and a bit uncalled for.

About the thread: I like her so far Smoke...when will you finish?
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Rabid_Wolverine
07/08/2004 01:02 AM (UTC)
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Wow,don't be a jackass man,I think the character is pretty good,and the guy who made the gay comment should be ignored.
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07/08/2004 02:36 AM (UTC)
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I'm not really bothered by their comments. To each his own. So if they don't like it, they have a right to say so. I had guys start flaming me over my Hatsuma concept before. It didn't bother me. As for finishing her, I'll do it today.
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07/08/2004 02:44 AM (UTC)
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It's a cool and really elaborated concept bro, but you have to learn to post in the correct forum, don't meant to be rude. Cheers. SuCh Is LiRFe.....
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07/08/2004 02:56 AM (UTC)
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Such as....? What forum can I post this in? I post some of my characters here to get feed back on them.
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07/08/2004 03:04 AM (UTC)
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This is the correct forum for this thread. There is no rule against users posting their created characters here, as it's the most appropriate place at this moment.

Carry on... in respectable fashion please.
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07/08/2004 03:30 AM (UTC)
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Cool descriptions SNC.
I'd like to see the rest of her
Keep it up, may the smoke fill your day with brightness* positive remark to smoke.

P.s.
I wonder...maybe she might be entering the 3rd tournament..?
hehe.....if so..be prepared young one, for it will be intense.
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iLLMatikk
07/08/2004 03:45 AM (UTC)
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nice concept. you should post up a concept drawing of her.
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Ok, this is the newly finished character concept. I know there's one at the top and this technically counts a double post, but this one is much more easier to read since I serperated the story from the fatalties for your sake. Enjoy.(This story has more emotion than my other character bios.) This is a character I thought up at work, hope those who see it like it.(Character not finished yet)
Name:Saika
Race: Mostly Human (Part genma, although she doesn"t know it)
Origin:Earth realm
Age:24
Weight:???
Height:5'5
Eyes:Blue
Hair:Black, tied in a ponytail w/ bangs in the front.(Anime style)
Measurments:B39-W30-H35
Blood type:O
Allaince:Good
Outfit Color:Purple.
Rank:S class Shinobi(Highest rank. Much like Hatsuma)
Power:Shadow weilder, (Others yet to be discovered)
Weapons:Twin kudachi.
Disciplines: Fan Qua, Tai Chi Quan, Ninjitsu
Special intrests: Hatsuma
Symbol:Cherry blossom.
Family:Mother: human,(died giving birth to Saika) Father: Onimusha General.(Identity unknown)
Care taker:Head sifu of Hatsuma's shinobi clan.

Design:
Saika wears a face mask similar to Kitana's. It covers only the bottom of her face. She wears a purple bandanna to keep her pony tail out of the way. The bandanna was given to her by Hatsuma. She wears a purple kimono which raises above her knees, and shows off some thighs since it has a slit on one side. She wears black stockings that go up four inches up past her knees. Her legs have shin armour which is also purple. Her mini kimono is sleeveless so only the shoulders are coverd. It has a ninja chain mail going down the center where there is no fabric. It shows off her sexy stomach, along with some cleavage. She has nihlon going down her arms, which from into finger gloves. Both middle fingers are the only ones covered with the rest of the nihlon. She has two golden armlets on her wrists to act as a decoration, as well as a shield from strikes. She wears a black sash around her hips. The sash also supports her twin kudachi which are tied in the back in an X shaped fashion. She wears a cherry blossom in her hair for decoration. She also has a strange tattoo on her upper shoulder.

Moves:
Shadow dancer: Saika uses her gift of shadows to warp across the areana in a starshaped fashion, striking the enemy with her kudachi on the pass by.

Bladed twister: Saika spins in a twister fashion at her opponent with her kudachi extended to th sides, cutting the opponet severly at neck and waist height, several times.

Cherry blossom wind: Saika takes petals from her cherry blossom and blows them at her opponent. The petals are razor sharp and slit the opponet several times, causing gashes and enormous loss of blood.

Shadow mine: Saika creates a ball of shadow energy in her right hand. She shoots it into the ground and at the opponet. This pops the opponet into the air, leaving them open to a juggle or any other moves.

Falcon Dive: Saika leaps twenty feet into the air. She extends out her kudochi and does a back flip of the the ceiling, or wall. As she pushes off she launches at the opponet with her kudochi in front of her and slices right through them.(Note: this move can also be done as a counter to a jumping opponet, it's called Rising Falcon.)

Cannon strike: This move is a variation on the Falcon strike series. If there is no wall for Saika to bounce off when doing a Falcon Dive she ignites with a shadow fire and lunges at her opponet like a cannon ball striking them through.

Guilloten drop: Saika leaps on her opponent's shoulders, muffling them with her legs. She then does a back flip, causing the opponet to come down on their head. She takes out one of her kudochi and slashes it across their face.

Concussion Kick: Saika does a whirlwind kick in mid air, kicking the opponent in the head twice, then comes down with a double airiel axe kick to the opponet's head.

Fatalities:
Razor Web:
Saika uses a classic ninja trick to wrap her opponets arms, body, legs, neck, and head with an invisible razor wire. The wire are connected to her finger tips as she moves her fingers slightly the wire lifts the opponent into the air. Shen thenmoves her fingers even more, causeing the wire to cut into the opponent's flesh. Blood drips down the wires and the become visible, their arrangement is reminiscent of a spider web. The opponet tries to scream in pain but chokes on their own blood. Finally, Saika swings her arms to the ground and the wire tighten. Within seconds the opponet's body is shredded to pieces. The flesh chunks come falling to the ground.

Shadow Massacre:
Saika sinks into her own shadow and vanishes from sight. The opponent is confused, thinking its over. Suddenly Saika's shadow runs towards her opponets, cutting them through. The shadow turns around and attacks the opponent's shadow again with a vicious slash combo with its twin kudachi. It then puts it's hand through the opponents shadow, blood spills on the floor. The oponent's heart is ripped out from his back and is floating in midair. Seconds later, the opponents shadow falls to pieces, and so does the opponent, left in a heap of flesh and meat. Saika appears behind the fallen opponents body holding their heart with her blood stained kudachi.

Story:
Saika was found as a baby orphan in the Dark Forest. A place rumored to be the conduit between the Earth realm and Genma realm. It was during a lightning storm that a band of Shinobi ninja happened to pass by the crying baby at the edge of the Dark Forest. Not knowing what to do, and fearing for the child's safety in such a place, the ninjas took her to their village. The sifu understood the circumstances of this aquisition and raised the child as his own. After taking her in, he noticed that she had a strange mark on her back. It was a tattoo of an ancient Genma clan. At first the sifu did not realize this and payed no attention to it. However, later on the child's untamed emotions began to impower the strange kanji on her back. Every time the child cried, strange things would happen in the village. Strange creatures would appear from time to time, slaughtering any ninja bold enough to stand in their it's way as they made their way to the sifu's hut. When the child stopped crying, the tattoo on her back would ceice to glow and the strange creauters would vanish as quickly as they appeared. Over the years the child had grown and showed promise in her skills. As she trained she learned how to manipulate the shadows around her with the use of her strange tattoo. As she grew older she developed feelings for a boy in the village named Hatsuma. They became the best of friends through the course of their training. One day while practicing a balance exercise on a platform of elevated poles thirty feet high, Hatsuma unleashed a swift kick to Saika's head, causing her to loose her balance and fall off the beams. As she plumited, Hatsuma beat her to the bottom and caught her before she could hit the ground. As he set her down he noticed that she was bleeding from the forehead. Feeling responsible, Hatsuma gave her his bandanna to stop the bleeding. Saika treasures the bandanna to this day. Ever since then, she longed for the day they can be togehter.It's part of her outfit. Then one day it happened Hatsuma left on his final mission to assassinate another kunochi. Before he left he gave Saika the first cherry blossom that bloomed that summer. This would be the last time she would see her secret love as a Shinobi ever again. Six days after Hatsuma left for his mission, word got back to his village that he let his target get away. He was now a runaway, a bounty for every Shinobi in the village, with the exception of Saika. Weeks and weeks passed by and extermintion squads were sent after Hatsuma. And every time they would come back wounded and broken. Saika couldn't bare the thought of seeing Hatsuma's lifeless body brought back to the village. She would cry herself to sleep every night since then. One day an extermination team did not return in tact. Their bodies were missing limbs, heads, and other body parts. It looked as though they had been mauled by some kind of savage animal. The few that did survive where in a state of shock, like they had just been to Hell and back. Finally the sifu ran out off options, he decided, that the only one who could bring Hatsuma back was the one closest to him, and that one person was Saika. She refused to hunt down the one she cared for the most. The sifu said that the sacrfice of one is for the benefit of the many. He said that it hurt him deeply to send out squads of his men to chase down their own brother, but the code of the Shinobi is harsh, and does not boed well of insabordination for any one. It was his desire to see the two be wedd someday, but that is not an option now. Especially since Hatsuma's attacks have become more and more brutal. Saika was reluctantly sent out on her mission to take down Hatsuma. As her search wayned, she got word that an azure ninja was seen, slaughtering a nearby village. Saika hoped the rumors weren't true. She knew that in her heart, Hatsuma would never committ such a massacre. However, to her dismay she found that Hatsuma did indeed kill all those people. As she walked into the village, the stench of death filled her lungs. The village huts were stained with blood, and decapitated bodies, of men, women and children where every where. Their heads were hung by their hair ona tree overlooking a hill filled with rage, Saika rushed up there to find Hatsuma in a trance with the look of fear in his eyes and blood on his hands. Saika broke out into tears when she witnessed her long time friend in such torment. As she approached him, Hatsuma snapped into a rage and viciously attacked her, ripping her kemono in two. He took out his chain whip and as soon as he was about to deliver the final blow he stopped him self. Surgeing with dark energy, tears ran from his eyes as his final words to her where"I'm sorry". Hatsuma instantly vanished in a tornado of black fire. After recovering from her assualt Saika set out on a mission to bring Hatsuma back to her, even if it means giving up her life in the processes to do it.
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07/08/2004 04:52 AM (UTC)
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Wow Smoke...I think she may be your best yet! LOVE the fatalities! and the story is very iteresting too! Excellent.
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07/08/2004 04:56 AM (UTC)
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Ok, I now have you saying that Sensui, Xion, and Saika are my best. Cool. Anyone in particular?
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Dedicated, hopeless...Li Mei fan.

07/08/2004 05:42 AM (UTC)
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Reminds me of a cross between Ayane from DOA and Ayame from Tenchu.
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07/08/2004 05:57 AM (UTC)
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Is that really a bad thing?
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Dedicated, hopeless...Li Mei fan.

07/08/2004 06:17 AM (UTC)
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Not at all! I love both Ayane and Ayame. grin
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07/08/2004 06:30 AM (UTC)
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Killer.grin
So do you like my concept?
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Dedicated, hopeless...Li Mei fan.

07/08/2004 06:45 AM (UTC)
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Yeah, it's very cool. The whole shinobi thing reminds me of a character that I thought up a long time ago named Sasuke.
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07/08/2004 06:56 AM (UTC)
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Did you ever play Shenmue? Just asking since Sasuke was a name that Ryo can sudjest for the baby kitten.
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07/09/2004 03:47 AM (UTC)
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i'm only doing this once.
*bump*
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Dedicated, hopeless...Li Mei fan.

07/09/2004 04:06 AM (UTC)
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Actually, I got the idea from Ranma 1/2. Specifically, Kuno's little ninja servant, Sasuke.
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07/09/2004 04:29 AM (UTC)
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SmokeNc-017 Wrote:
Ok, I now have you saying that Sensui, Xion, and Saika are my best. Cool. Anyone in particular?


LOL...So I have...Well they were said at different times...Cause they were created at different times...soooo I guess you could take that to mean that you are getting better with each character you create! Saika is my current fav...with Sensui a close second.
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ZenMasterMike
07/10/2004 05:05 AM (UTC)
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Wow!! Thats great in every way, top tier moves, stories, fatalities everything, nice job u should make more of these.wow
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