Character Concept (Hierou)
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posted08/10/2004 12:49 AM (UTC)by
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08/08/2004 10:42 PM (UTC)
I've got a character idea for the last hope against the DK.

His name is Hierou (Hi-Ro), he is somewhat of a fallen angel outcasted by the elder gods and has lived out his life studying his fighting dicipline waiting for the day he will be accepted back into the elder gods counsil once again. At note of the DK's hatching, Raiden began his quest to find Hierou and decided to strike a deal with him; for his help in the fight against the dragon king, he will be accepted back into the counsil if he is successful. Hierou is convinced that the MK warriors are doomed and sets out to find his sword, the leviathan, which was tossed to another region in Outworld. The sword was blessed by the high legion of gods and scorcerers, and holds within it the souls of the realms greatest champions defeated by Hierou. Will he make it back in time to defend our existance? Only time will tell. thanks for the input
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08/09/2004 08:31 PM (UTC)
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Sounds very interesting, man. You should make a full detailed concept for him and write up the story a little more. He sounds like he could be a very interesting character. As a mediator, he shouldn't really take sides though.
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08/09/2004 09:11 PM (UTC)
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that's it?
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08/09/2004 10:14 PM (UTC)
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please respond to this i want feedback to know if hes good enough to continue with
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08/09/2004 10:17 PM (UTC)
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It sounds pretty cool. I think you should continue with it. Expand on the story, look, and other things that make a character. I'd like to see more of Hierou.
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08/09/2004 11:45 PM (UTC)
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1 fatalities?
2 moves?
3 fighting style?
4 height, weight?
5 alliances?
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08/10/2004 12:28 AM (UTC)
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1. He Put his hand on the opponant chest and his hand starts to light up bright white, then the chest explodes and all thats left is the spinal cord attached to the head and legs (which falls down to the floor.)

2. He has three moves; Levitate, holy blast (beam of light shoots from his palm) and the halo kick (jumps foward, turns horizontal sticks on leg out and does a 360)

3. He studies Brazillian jujitsu, ninjitsu and his weapon is the leviathan (Pure white sword with horns at the handles)

4. hes 6'5" 258 ibs.

5. Alliance with Raiden due to deal made
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08/10/2004 12:45 AM (UTC)
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well I like it except for 2 things...
1. the name hierou is a little too similar to hotaru because of its first and last letters...i would consider keeping the H but usin some other letters.
2. I already created a move similar to the halo kick and it was on my character brock dirge and I called it the windmill kick...but if Im missreading yours and it is actually different then ill take back this comment.
also add some more depth to it and I would consider adding some mystery to his story, its good to tell their past but if you give them only tidbits of why they are in MK then people will actually want to see what happens to them.
for the most part its good but those 2 things were botherin me so just lettin you know my 2 cents...gj and keep it up wink
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08/10/2004 12:49 AM (UTC)
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thanks but you know dairou and darrius are similar too.
I see your point though.
Maybe you and I could work on some character concepts together and make a good story ourselves.

Also, explain youre windmill kick to me and ill tell if its the same
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