My new character,Codenamed:Ravage
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posted06/04/2004 08:21 PM (UTC)by
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SmokeNc-017
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(Wrote this while listening to MegaManX4 entrance.)
Name:Unit:TK-787
Codename:Ravage
Height:6'7
Weight:678lbs
Color/structure:Titanium
Alliance:Tekunin(for the momment)
Power source: Nuclear/ionic hybrid core
Disciplines:Every style of martial arts.
Favorite Styles: Berserker, Kio Kushin Kaio, Ninjitsu, self-taught.
Weapon(s):Dual laser surging iron tenticles, from wrists, plasma sabre handle on left hip. Razor claws twin beam sabers on his back.(Giving him a total of three swords. 1 as a weapon style, the other two as support weapons.These two aren't as powerful as his plasma sabre but can still do enormus damage.
Character useage difficulty:Very Hard
Overall:9 out of 10

Look:
Shoulders:hold two laser guided missle pods along with two shoulder fins.
Back:has two ion jets which give him lift plus two smaller fins for stabelising and assist in airel carobatics. Ion jets reach down from shoulder fins to just past the bottom of the torso.
Front:chestplate has two vents. Armor slims down a bit when approaching the waist. On the sides of the chestplate there are two twin mini missle pods.
Left hand: has a built in energy cannon.
Head:Protected by missle podes and five inches in from the front of chest plate. Head shaped in a Zone of Enders type shape. Red visor reaches across the face. The mouth plate has two smaller vents to release steam build up.
Legs have titanium plateing with side boosts to assist in lightning quick side to side manuvers.
Feet:Titanium shin plating with slots on the outer sides which dispense pulse daggers.Titanium shins have small front jets which complete optimal airel manuverablity.
Overall: Complete titanium plating. Each peace can individually seperate to show new ranged armement.Chest:Center laser. Lower sides:Twin gatling cannons. Feet:Sub-Machine gun barrels.

Special Attacks:
Jet Rush- Ravage uses ion jets to rush at his opponent.He grabs their head on the pass by an lifts into the air.After reaching a certian altitude he goes in a power dive with the opponet still in his grasp and crashes in the ground with the opponets head first.
Whiplash-Ravage grabs opponet with his wrist tenticles and first slams him to the ground in front of himself. Ravage then procedes to whip the opponet across the body with his iron tenticales thirty times.(Does not count as combo.)
Reverse Jet thrust-Ravage slams opponet to the ground, steps on his chest and reverses his jets to push down on the opponet with twenty thousand psi, crushin their chest cavity.
Ionic crush-Ravage takes lifts him self off the ground a couple of inches (you see a dust storm underneath him).He takes some of the energy from his engines and powers up his left arm/energy cannon and releases it at his opponent.
Jet swipe-An escape move where Ravage lifts several inches off the ground and uses his legs jets to side step an attack, long or near and appear in back of his opponet, leaving them open to a full on assult.
Berserker rush-Ravage flies into the air and locks onto the opponet. He then takes out his two beam sabres and dives at the opponet hacking at them to pieces.(Note only move which can be used as a fatality if done at "Finish Him" as a final blow)
Plasma wave(only when Plasma Sabre is equipped)-
Ravage generates full power to his sabre and unleashes it in a series of vertical and horizontal strikes which travel across the arena at the opponet.

Fatality:
Tri Saber Suffering- Ravage takes his two beam sabers and sticks them crossways into the opponets torso. He then takes his plasma sabre and cuts the guy up in seventeen different ways and retracts the sabre.Then takes out his two beam sabres and rips them out of the sides of the opponet and cuts down vertically two more times, spins his sabres in his hands then sheiths them in his back. The opponet then explodes in a cloud of blood and flesh chunks. At the end you see Ravage's armor covered in his opponent's blood.
Berserker rush-(See above in attacks)
Ground Zero: Ravage flies into the air and locks onto his opponet. He takes all the energy he can spare and puts it into one final attack.His armor opens up, showing his central laser, leg mounted gataling canons, shin mounted sub-mahine guns, side mounted mini missles and his shoulder mounted war hammer twelve missle pod launchers.He also takes out his beam sabres an puts most of his remaining energy into them. He then unleashes the central laser, surrounded by the missle and gataling asulte. Then Two giant beam waves from his sabres all conecntrated into one blast, completely annihalating the opponet, leaving nothing but a flaming crater.

Hari Kari:
Meltdown- Ravage sets his core to self destruct, taking him and the opponet out in a giagantic explosion.

Story:
Ravage was designed by the Tekunin as a last resort incase the tribe was threatened. They spared no expense at creating the ultimate killing machine. After the field test in Outworld, they hoped to mass produce ravage and lay seige to not only Earth and the Lin Kuei, but to also take control of Outworld and the connecting realms. This prototype however, possesed an unusual design tweak. The scientist who created him also implanted a conscieunce circut in Ravage to simulate a soul. The scientist did leave out the program of free will which would make Ravage easier to control. Since he is a full android and not a cyborg like the rest it was neccassary to install this circut so that although he would eventually be mass produced each of the units would develope their own preferences as to their techniques and fighting styles. An android can not learn new ways of killing or invent new strategies by itself. All this information would need to be downloaded constanly, unlike a cyborg who can analyze and adapt to a sitaution.The conscieunce circut would allow the android to learn and memmorise attack patterns, combining that with the android's power, it will increase it's fighting potential several times over.
However, on Ravage's first field test the conscieunce circut malfunctioned and went berserk. This caused Ravage to decimate the test site and any one around him. He was eventually stopped by Sektor, who was barely bale to take him down with an EMP pulse and his life intact. Sektor saw the potential in Ravage and ordered his scientists to repair him. He aslo realized that the OWI would also try to stop Ravage with an EMP device. To prevent this from happening, Ravage was repaired with an EMP neutralizer to prevent this from happening. The faulty conscieunce circut could not be extracted however. They did rewire it to flow in a different pattern to and decrease the berserker risk by 80%. With Ravage's first field test a moderate failure it would be some time before the Tekunin would try to reactivate him, let alone mass produce him. He was put in holding cell until the Tekunin could perfect the technology to fully repair him.
Unbeknownst to them, the conscieunce circut was still operational and acted more like a soul then they wanted by reactivating Ravage. Ravage awoke in a dark holding cell and preformed a full memmory check.He was shown a video of his battle with Sektor. He analyzed the video and incorperated it into his fightin style. He was then informed that his fight resulted in failure. Determined to redeem himself, Ravage set out to eliminate all those who oppose the Tekunin and to not only restore his worth but bring glory to his clan.He sets out on his journey, unaware of what power he really posseses.

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Grizzle
05/22/2004 08:33 PM (UTC)
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Great story and Concept.

It would look like Sub-Zero would have a lot of trouble on his hands if he were fighting a machine with no remorse and is very powerful. You put alot of time in your work and it impressed me as far as a concept character goes, if I were making this game I'd deffinatley put that in the story because the Tekunin is an unknown clan and a character like that fits perfectly with it.
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TomTaz
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"Retirement my ass!"

05/22/2004 08:40 PM (UTC)
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wow Wow. Great concept! Ravage sounds downright deadly. Very nice.


P.S. The Hatsuma pic is almost done, sorry for the delay, things have come up for me. He's coming I promise. grin
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tgrant
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Project MKK: Coming soon...

Currently working on: MKD & MKA - The One Ring Theory
05/22/2004 08:47 PM (UTC)
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Excellent concept! I agree with TomTaz! Ravage is deadly! You've done a good job!
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mangatropi
05/22/2004 08:54 PM (UTC)
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The ravage concept seems great and even better than some cyborgs like cyrax, great concept dude.
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SmokeNc-017
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05/23/2004 04:47 AM (UTC)
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Wow, sweet. Thanks guys! I was thinking of making a new character something that hasn't been really done yet. So instead of making another ninja, or cyborg I decided to go one way completely and make an android. Thanks for all your comments and I hope others see this as well.smile
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05/23/2004 07:58 PM (UTC)
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I wonder if I should enter Ravage or Hatsuma in the next concept tournement.tgrant,I hope you add this two your shortcut site.
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06/04/2004 08:21 PM (UTC)
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tgrant, do you think you can sticky this on your post like with my Hatsuma character?
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