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posted08/18/2004 11:33 AM (UTC)by
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In the past couple of days we have seen the forums surge with many new created characters for the MK universe. This thread is here to keep all of these characters in one thread, and easily accesable to anybody who want's to read up on them and comment on them. I'm hoping this cna clean up the thread a bit.
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08/09/2004 06:10 AM (UTC)
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I agree. Lots of cool ideas out there. We should try to get this thread stuck to the top so people can find it, and put in their koncept kharacters.
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Glad you agree. To start off I'll put my newest character up.

This is a new character that I have created which hails from the same realm as slim3ddi3g's Keilienaten. He's not done yet and I'm only posting him up to get some thoughts on if I should continue or not.

Name: Kamon
Age: Unknown (Rumored to be a couple of years older then Keilienaten)
Eye Color: Glow with sapphire blue flames
Height: 6’4
Weight: 234 pounds
Alignment: Neutral (Serves Anubis)
Hair: Black goes down past shoulders.
Skin tone: Copper, (Greyish blue in his true form)
Disciplines: Egyptian Martial Arts, Judo, Jujitsu, Pyramid Staff.
Place of Origin: Realm of Rahankutat.
Current where-about: Hamunaptra (City of the Dead)
Power: Can control the Plagues as well as a hidden power unknown to all but Anubis and himself.
Status: Undead General in Anubis' army.
Quote: "Like the Plagues, my wrath is unstoppable."

Weapon Description: The Pyramid Staff is an other worldly weapon. It is given to a general in Anubis' army and can only be used properly by a warrior with exceptional skill. The staff is made of an unknown metal. However, its eerie glow in the night sky resembles the light of a dying soul, glowing with a brilliant sapphire blue. On each end there are three blades, which come to a point, resembling a pyramid on both sides of the staff. They also glow a brilliant blue. The staff itself has a golden luster and has a intertwined serpent stretching the length of the weapon. There is a slit down the middle of the weapon which allows it to be separated with an ethereal chain and used as a flail type weapon. It must be noted that with this transformation, Kamon's reach infinitely increases as the chain isn't made of solid material.

Design
1st outfit: Desert Ninja
Kamon's whole head is wrapped in a turban to keep his identity secret from those around him, allowing him to move freely through the masses. The turbine covers his mouth, nose and head leaving only the eyes open. He wears a white vest with no sleeves and is opened in the front. The vest is kept on by a blood red sash that's wrapped around his waist. He also wears white pants which look much like the Prince of Persia's pants. They are tucked into black boots which have golden shin guards. He wears white arm guards which have curved blades coming from the middle of the fist and extend six inches past the fists. The blades are dual edged for easy inward slashes as well as outward strikes. This whole outfit renders Kamon virtually invisible in the desert sun.
2nd Outfit: Undead General
Kaman’s true form. He wears a jackal headdress in honor of his god. It's cobalt black with sapphire blue eyes. (Think Anubis from Stargate the Movie). He still retains his wrist blades, as well as his arm guards. He now wears a robe around his waist which has shorts underneath. He wears an upper bracer on his left arm in the shape of a cobra. He wears two golden gauntlets. However, these aren't in one piece. The wrist piece which holds the gauntlet together has five small apendages which go down the knuckles and are connected to five slots which is where the fingers go. The guantlets basicaly outline the bones on the back side of the hand. The tips of these gauntlets have diamond etched claws which makes them suited for a very effective close range weapon. Kamon's headdress is opened, revealing his face when he's not in battle, however when he sinks into his stance, the helmet closes and he sees through the sapphire eyes of the Anubis helmet. His boots are made of an unbrakeable steel, said to be used for the weapons of Anubis' army.


Moves: Serpent's Bite: Kamon sperates his whip and turns it into its flail form. He then shoots one end of the staff at the opponent. The blades at the end open up as the head of the staff gets close. When it makes contact the blades snap shut around the opponent's chest causing massive damage and heavey blood loss as Kamon pulls back to retract the chain.

Demonic Sling: This move uses the flail function of the staff to catch an opponent's projectile in between the blades and then shoot it back at them with twice the power and twice the speed.

Clawed Frenzey: Kamon locks his helmet and his eyes flare up. His body glows an undead sapphire blue flame as he rushes the opponent with his hand blades burning blue and unleashes on them a swift ten hit slash combo.

Savage Assualt: Kamon unleashes a series of strikes with his hand claws. However, they stay right infront of him until twenty slashes are suspended in mid-air, right in front of Kamon. He then lifts his hand and points to the opponet. The suspended slashes suddenly shoot out with blazing speed cutting and lacerating the opponet on the pass by.

Wave:(An update to Jax's Multi Slam) Kamon shoots one end of his staff into the opponet. The blades dig in, just like in Serpent's Bite. However, instead of letting go, Kamon starts to toss the opponet around the stage multipile times while holding on to the other end of the staff.

Undead Wind:Kamon charges a ball of spectral energy in his cupped hands. He then releases it in a blast of ethereal wind, filled with the hungry souls of the Undead. If this move makes contact, after the initial blast, the left over souls latch on to the opponent slowly draining his health.

Flaming River:Kamon powers up his hand and shoots it into the ground, unleashing the river Styks into this demension. The river burns like fire as it courses through the stage and at the opponent, surounding them and then igniting them from the feet up.

Strength of the gods:Kamon channels the power of his master into his body. This boost of power will increase his attacks exponentially as well as repelensish his some of his life.

Skeletal Cyclone: Kamon surrounds his opponet in a violent cyclone. The cyclone then rips the skeletal remaints of dead warriors from the ground and fuses it into itself. The bone shards become deadly projectlies as they shoot at the opponent inside.


Fatalities:
Scarab Eruption: Kamon shoots his staff into the ground unleashing a shock wave. Seconds later the ground splits open and a sea of flesh eating Scarabs shoots out of the cracks. The scarabs spot their prey, being the opponent and rush towards him. The opponet tries to flee, but it's too late. The scarabs overrun him and dig into the flesh. You can see the scarabs running around underneath his skin. The opponet screams in agony as blood drips out of his pores. Scarabs start pouring out og his mouth and on to the surface of his body. Soon the opponent is coverd in scarabs and then you hear a sickening crunch. The scarbs retreat, only leaving a hallowed out corpse, filled with holes and only parts of their bones.

Final Dawn: Kamon uses his power to cast the final plauge. He eclipses the sky. The fading light focuses on the opponet as the shadow envelopes everything. As soon as the shadow touches the opponet, he is instantly engulfed in flames. His skin melts, his organs rupture, his muscles burn. He bleeds uncontrolabley. The sky turns black and a cinder grey as the clouds are set on fire. A meteor storm starts and on of the meteors comes down on the victim. On impact the remaints of the opponents disintegrate in a cloud of blood and fire. As a visual flare, just to show the sope of this, the camera pulls back out of the areana showing the undead army of Anubis, numbered in the billions swarming the surrounding landscape, all summound by Kamon.

Story:
As a young boy, Kamon belonged to a well off family, which served under the pharoah Akhenaten. His father was a high priest and grand counceler to the paroah. As a young child, Kamon was a free spirit. He always ran off on adventures and caused mischief. But the kind hearted pharoah would only dismiss this as childs play. As Kamon grew older, he became intreseted in the art of combat. He wished to join the pharoah's mighty army. His natural ability to fight made him one of the top candidates for the position of General in the pharoahs army. His prefered styles were anything with short strong strikes and take downs. He learned the anatomy of the human body and therefore increased his knowledge of combat by studying the affects of pressure points and critical hits in important zones on the human body. His prefered weapon was the bladed staff. It's long reach and twin blades on both sides, made it ideal for long range and short range combat. As the years went on, Kamon's training increased as well as his skills. At the young age of 200 he became General in the pharoah's army. He lead them to countless victories against a rival empire. Kamon had a good heart, and instead of finishing off his opponents, he recruited them into his army, and made took rival empires under one rule. The pharoah's kind heart and Kamon's military expertiese allowed the empire to flurish, eventually encompassing the entire realm. However, their were still pockets of terrorists who threatened to break the ties of the empire and throw it into chaos. Among these terrorists, was the former general of Akhenaten's army, Sekhmet. He always held an ever deepening hatred for the pharoah's new general after being bested in combat, and loosing his right eye, to Kamon. His ties to the underground terrorists called, The Eyes of Ra. They were called so, because before a new member could be sworn in to the faction, he had to gouge out one of his eyes and replace it with a golden one, modeled after the Eye of Ra. Sekhmet developed a plan to get rid of Kamon and establish his rightful place at Akhenaten's side. In the fallowing weeks, their have been a number of strange disappearnces in the capital city. The officals believed that the Eyes of Ra terrorist faction was gathering hostages, for an upcoming ransom demand. Knowing that the pharoah would not want any harm to fall on his subjects, it made him an easey target. The officials reported to Kamon, telling him that they have uncovered the location of the hostages. It was at Scorpion's Gorge at the Desert's Bones, a rocky wasteland devoid of all life. Kamon lead a small task force to retrive the hostages. As his forces got closer, they were ambushed by a guerilla attack. Kamon was the only one who survived. Filled with anger at the death of his comrades, Kamon rushed towards the location. As he got their he witnessed a horryfic sight. The so called hostages where skinned and put on pikes as markers of the terrorist factions. The fouls smell of death filled the gorge as rotting flesh decomposed in the heat of the sun. Within minutes the Eyes of Ra jumped out of numerous outcroppings in the gorge, surrounding Kamon. Against all odds, Kamon, fueled with rage abondoned all honor and dignety and slaughtered the terroist factions. The caves of the gorge ran red with the blood of his enemies. He, did not come out unscathed however. His injuries severe, he knew he wouldn't be able to return. As Kamon wandered through the gorge, his life coming to an end he said his final prayer."Ne reku, no ham ne kewam ishtan amshare. Ti setzu ki kon aruer, no remier de rue karistar." "As I pass through the valley of darkness, I'm not afraid. And with my dying breath I am at peace." Kamon collapses and dies in the gorge. However, as his spirit passes into the next world, he is met by the death god Anubis himself. Anubis tells him, that Kamon's life was cut short. His valor has no meaning, he was decived and therefore threw his life away by surrendering to hatred. Anubis tells Kamon that he has a strong spirit and great potential. If Kamon agrees to a pact, he will be returned to the world of the living, to avange his death, and possibley save the lives of many others. In exchange, he turns over his soul to Anubis and becomes his general. Kamon agrees to the pact and is instantly returned to his body. He feels a new sense of purpose, and a new power growing inside. Anubis tells him that he has been bestowed with tremendous power. He can tear apart the heavens and bring forth the Wave of Drakness, Anubis' army. In exchange, he gives up almost all of his free will to Anubis after his revenge is complete, and honor restored. Kamon returns to his beloved city in disguise. He finds out that Sekhmet has once again become general. As he searches for his traitor he runs into the young princess Kielienaten, who doesn't recognise Kamon at all. Kamon's new gift lets him see a darkness growing inside of her but says nothing. Kamon finally corner's Sekhmet in his chamber. Before Sekhmet can react to his ressurected rival his blood is spilled on the walls, and entrails littered all over the room. As his opponent dies, Kamon can feel his free will being torn from his body. He is now the bringer of death, and weilder of plagues under the command of Anubis. His orders are simple, increase the army of Anubis, and crush all who stand before him. In the upcoming years Kamon would lay siege to what he helped build, as Anubis' army swept the realm. the pharoah and the queen are dead, and the empire has all but fallen into chaos. Keilienaten rules mercylessly, and the ranks of the Undead increase. Soon they will be unleashed like a plague on all the realms, ending the existance of the second race of humanity, just like they did eons ago, with Kamon leading the charge, from his own throne at the city of Hamunaptra a dark time will fall to the human race.
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Name:Hatsuma
Color:Azure
Age:Unknown
Height:6'4
Weught:190lbs
Eyes:Burn white with blue flames
Hair Color:black, shoulder length,(turns silver)
Clan:Shinobi
Alliance:Unknown
Discipline:Pheonix,Wolf,Dragon,Ninjitsu,Boshido,ZiQuan Whip Chain.
Abilities:Pyrokenesis,Gem Stone Control,Negativity
Attacks:
Diamond Fangs:
Shoots out diamond shards from fists that,after puncturing the opponent explode
Diamond Shell:
Creates an armor of diamond around him which renders him invulnerable for a short time.
Rising Pheonix:
Creates a pheonix out of flames which launches itself at the opponent engulfing them with flames.
Ruby Requium:
Upgrades whip with ruby spines. After entagleing the opponent, the spikes cut through the flesh and burn in the wounds.
Demension Shift:
A type of light speed. Hatsuma increases speed by jumping through different demensions randomly striking the enemy with his whip.
Diamond Wave:
Hatsuma raises a wave of diamond out of the ground and launches it at his opponent.
Black Chaos:
Hatsuma focuses all of the negative energy around him into one palm blast and releases it at the opponent giging up some of his humanity to do insane damage.This is strong enough to shoot through mountains. Fallen Phoenix: Hatsuma creates a phoenix from dark flame in mid air. It then fuses with Hatsuma giving him wings. Hatsuma rises into the air and then plunges at the opponent in a black fire spin dealing huge damage with a cyclone kick imbude with pure evil.
Fatalities:
Saphire Storm:
Hatsuma raises hundreds of Saphire from the ground.The saphires form into blades and launch at the opponent, piercing, cutting and tearing through the flesh like rain. The opponent bleeds to death before exploding ina cloud of blood and falling to pieces.
Emerald Dragon:
Summons a two headed dragon completely made of emeralds. As it comes up it intangles the opponent, puncturing the body with its spines. It moves in a counter motion, cutting the opponent into three pieces before lurking down and biting off the opponent's upper torso with both heads.
Extinguished Humanity:
Uses all of the negativity around him.Powers it up into one blast, combined with his pyrokenesis.He releases the blast which completely incinerates the opponent layer by layer.This is a stronger version of Black Chaos, and his ultimate attack. In the end Hatsuma is no longer a human. You see a blue spectre engulfed in flames with his soul burning in the back as a victory pose.
Hari Kari:
Inner Suffering:
Hatsuma completely surrenders his soul to the Black Chaos and has his soul ripped from his body and sent to the Netherealm. His body turns into coal and then wisps away in the wind.
Story:
Hatsuma is a runaway Shinobi. His powers are unique in the sense that he wasn't born with most of them, they are also deceptive in nature,since they have a life of their own.He was sent one day on a mission to assasinate a kunochi(female Shinobi) Little did he know that this mission would change his life.
In the beggining Hatsuma was born with the power to control fire.As he grew older his power increaesd and soon was implimented into his pheonix fighting style.In combat, Hatsuma was untouchable.His attacks were fierce and brutal. However, he never let this go to his head.He had an honor code which stated"never harm the innocent,and do not fight if you can avoid it."
One day he was sent to assasinate a runaway kunochi by the name of Iyaka. She was helping a family with bandit problems. According to the Shinobi code, this was punishable by death. When Hatsuma found her he couldn't kill her, he was in love.He alerted her to her peril and let her escape.This would prove to be his biggest mistake. He was monitored during this mission. When he let her go, he was marked for death. As a runaway he was forbbiden to return to his clan alive. Most of the extermination squads which were sent after him were sent home either injured or in more than one piece.One day, Hatsuma stumbled upon an old temple for shelter. When he went inside his eye caught a black luster on a Buddah Statue, when he approached it he discovered it was a black emerald. As soon as he picked it up he was engulfed in flames. The gem started to fuse into his body and into his heart.After the fussion Hatsuma fell, unconsceuss. When he woke up he felt a strange power growing inside of him.Unaware that he was discovered, Hatsuma stepped outside of the temple, as soon as he stepped out he was ambushed.Still weak from the fusion, Hatsuma couldn't defened himself.One of the ninjas rushed at him to cut off his right arm.As soon as the blade touched him,his skin turned into diamon and broke the blade on impact.Enraged,Hatsuma retaliated.He summoned a jade dragon which slaughtered his opponents. Hatsuma realized that he now had the power to control gem stones.He also realised that this new power came at the price of a piece of his humanity.
Late at night Hatsuma would wake up in a cold sweat, drenched in blood, with the bodies of those he slaughtered, among those was Iayka, the one he cared for the most. The Black Chaos would take over his body when he slept.After hundreds of lives taken, the Black Chaos evolved into part of his soul.It opened up a rift to Outworld using the negative energy of all the lives hatsuma took. The jewel promised him, that if he were to take more lives it would grant him anything he wanted. Hatsuma refused to willingly go against his code, even if it ment giving up a chance to see Iayka again. As he stepped through the portal, in the back of his mind, he knew there was someone out there that could give him piece or restor his humanity. He would find away to end his suffering, even if he had to sell his soul to do it.When he reached Outworld the jewel began to pulse. It started to take over his body. Almost all of his right arm was began to glow with the demonic power of the Black Chaos. This is where the Black Chaos was from. This is where it was strongest. As part of his soul the Black Chaos extended control into his mind. He was now a prisoner in his own body. "My will shall not be broken. I will free myself from this even if I have to go to the edge of death to do it." Hatsuma now wanders Outworld with the only thing that is keeping him himself is his will. As Hatsuma wanders through Outworld the Black Chaos is feeding of his soul. Slowly, Hatsuma becomes less and less human. The Black Chaos has consumed most of his soul. At one point Hatsuma collapsed from exhaustion, but his symbiotic soul would not let him die. Like all species, Hatsuma went through an evolution. The jewel consumed his right arm, transforming it from a state of solid matter to a state of spectral flame. The jewel needed to feed on the death of the innocent, and since Hatsuma's will and code kept it at bay, the jewel had no choice, it started to slowly devour his body. "No!!! I don't care what happens to me, I will not kill to feed your hunger." "You will kill, you will obey me and if you resist you will perish." Hatsuma's spectral arm was incased in a black diamond shell which could harness the savage power now in his fist. Like before, the price of power came at the price of his humanity. This time however, instead of taking over what the Black Chaos already had, it increased the rate of consumption of Hatsuma's body. His body is battered and beaten, Hatsuma's will begins to fade and the Black Chaos grows stronger. Hatsuma's natural gift of fire has been transformed into a dark flame which is no longer harnessed from his soul, but from the deepest reaches of the Underworld. Hatsuma is far from the ninja he once was, he is now smothing much more evil and much more mercyless.
P.S. If your wandering how his level ties with his story, here's an explanation. Hatsuma gives up hope of ever finding help. He learns of a technology that can extract souls from their bodies. He decides that is the only way he can stop himself. He now searches for this technology which happens to be in the Lin Kuei lab.
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Name:Saika

Race: Mostly Human (Part genma, although she doesn’t know it)

Origin:Earth realm

Age:24

Weight:???

Height:5'5

Eyes:Blue

Hair:Black, tied in a ponytail w/ bangs in the front.(Anime style)

Measurments:B39-W30-H35

Blood type:O

Allaince:Good

Outfit Color:Purple.

Rank:S class Shinobi(Highest rank. Much like Hatsuma)

Power:Shadow weilder, (Others yet to be discovered)

Weapons:Twin kudachi.

Disciplines: Fan Qua, Tai Chi Quan, Ninjitsu

Special intrests: Hatsuma

Symbol:Cherry blossom.
Family:Mother: human,(died giving birth to Saika) Father: Onimusha General.(Identity unknown)
Care taker:Head sifu of Hatsuma's shinobi clan.



Design:

Saika wears a face mask similar to Kitana's. It covers only the bottom of her face. She wears a purple bandanna to keep her pony tail out of the way. The bandanna was given to her by Hatsuma. She wears a purple kimono which raises above her knees, and shows off some thighs since it has a slit on one side. She wears black stockings that go up four inches up past her knees. Her legs have shin armour which is also purple. Her mini kimono is sleeveless so only the shoulders are coverd. It has a ninja chain mail going down the center where there is no fabric. It shows off her sexy stomach, along with some cleavage. She has nihlon going down her arms, which from into finger gloves. Both middle fingers are the only ones covered with the rest of the nihlon. She has two golden armlets on her wrists to act as a decoration, as well as a shield from strikes. She wears a black sash around her hips. The sash also supports her twin kudachi which are tied in the back in an X shaped fashion. She wears a cherry blossom in her hair for decoration. She also has a strange tattoo on her upper shoulder.



Moves:

Shadow dancer: Saika uses her gift of shadows to warp across the areana in a starshaped fashion, striking the enemy with her kudachi on the pass by.



Bladed twister: Saika spins in a twister fashion at her opponent with her kudachi extended to th sides, cutting the opponet severly at neck and waist height, several times.



Cherry blossom wind: Saika takes petals from her cherry blossom and blows them at her opponent. The petals are razor sharp and slit the opponet several times, causing gashes and enormous loss of blood.



Shadow mine: Saika creates a ball of shadow energy in her right hand. She shoots it into the ground and at the opponet. This pops the opponet into the air, leaving them open to a juggle or any other moves.



Falcon Dive: Saika leaps twenty feet into the air. She extends out her kudochi and does a back flip of the the ceiling, or wall. As she pushes off she launches at the opponet with her kudochi in front of her and slices right through them.(Note: this move can also be done as a counter to a jumping opponet, it's called Rising Falcon.)



Cannon strike: This move is a variation on the Falcon strike series. If there is no wall for Saika to bounce off when doing a Falcon Dive she ignites with a shadow fire and lunges at her opponet like a cannon ball striking them through.



Guilloten drop: Saika leaps on her opponent's shoulders, muffling them with her legs. She then does a back flip, causing the opponet to come down on their head. She takes out one of her kudochi and slashes it across their face.



Concussion Kick: Saika does a whirlwind kick in mid air, kicking the opponent in the head twice, then comes down with a double airiel axe kick to the opponet's head.


Fatalities:
Razor Web:
Saika uses a classic ninja trick to wrap her opponets arms, body, legs, neck, and head with an invisible razor wire. The wire are connected to her finger tips as she moves her fingers slightly the wire lifts the opponent into the air. Shen thenmoves her fingers even more, causeing the wire to cut into the opponent's flesh. Blood drips down the wires and the become visible, their arrangement is reminiscent of a spider web. The opponet tries to scream in pain but chokes on their own blood. Finally, Saika swings her arms to the ground and the wire tighten. Within seconds the opponet's body is shredded to pieces. The flesh chunks come falling to the ground.


Shadow Massacre:
Saika sinks into her own shadow and vanishes from sight. The opponent is confused, thinking its over. Suddenly Saika's shadow runs towards her opponets, cutting them through. The shadow turns around and attacks the opponent's shadow again with a vicious slash combo with its twin kudachi. It then puts it's hand through the opponents shadow, blood spills on the floor. The oponent's heart is ripped out from his back and is floating in midair. Seconds later, the opponents shadow falls to pieces, and so does the opponent, left in a heap of flesh and meat. Saika appears behind the fallen opponents body holding their heart with her blood stained kudachi.


Story:
Saika was found as a baby orphan in the Dark Forest. A place rumored to be the conduit between the Earth realm and Genma realm. It was during a lightning storm that a band of Shinobi ninja happened to pass by the crying baby at the edge of the Dark Forest. Not knowing what to do, and fearing for the child's safety in such a place, the ninjas took her to their village. The sifu understood the circumstances of this aquisition and raised the child as his own. After taking her in, he noticed that she had a strange mark on her back. It was a tattoo of an ancient Genma clan. At first the sifu did not realize this and payed no attention to it. However, later on the child's untamed emotions began to impower the strange kanji on her back. Every time the child cried, strange things would happen in the village. Strange creatures would appear from time to time, slaughtering any ninja bold enough to stand in their it's way as they made their way to the sifu's hut. When the child stopped crying, the tattoo on her back would ceice to glow and the strange creauters would vanish as quickly as they appeared. Over the years the child had grown and showed promise in her skills. As she trained she learned how to manipulate the shadows around her with the use of her strange tattoo. As she grew older she developed feelings for a boy in the village named Hatsuma. They became the best of friends through the course of their training. One day while practicing a balance exercise on a platform of elevated poles thirty feet high, Hatsuma unleashed a swift kick to Saika's head, causing her to loose her balance and fall off the beams. As she plumited, Hatsuma beat her to the bottom and caught her before she could hit the ground. As he set her down he noticed that she was bleeding from the forehead. Feeling responsible, Hatsuma gave her his bandanna to stop the bleeding. Saika treasures the bandanna to this day. Ever since then, she longed for the day they can be togehter.It's part of her outfit. Then one day it happened Hatsuma left on his final mission to assassinate another kunochi. Before he left he gave Saika the first cherry blossom that bloomed that summer. This would be the last time she would see her secret love as a Shinobi ever again. Six days after Hatsuma left for his mission, word got back to his village that he let his target get away. He was now a runaway, a bounty for every Shinobi in the village, with the exception of Saika. Weeks and weeks passed by and extermintion squads were sent after Hatsuma. And every time they would come back wounded and broken. Saika couldn't bare the thought of seeing Hatsuma's lifeless body brought back to the village. She would cry herself to sleep every night since then. One day an extermination team did not return in tact. Their bodies were missing limbs, heads, and other body parts. It looked as though they had been mauled by some kind of savage animal. The few that did survive where in a state of shock, like they had just been to Hell and back. Finally the sifu ran out off options, he decided, that the only one who could bring Hatsuma back was the one closest to him, and that one person was Saika. She refused to hunt down the one she cared for the most. The sifu said that the sacrfice of one is for the benefit of the many. He said that it hurt him deeply to send out squads of his men to chase down their own brother, but the code of the Shinobi is harsh, and does not boed well of insabordination for any one. It was his desire to see the two be wedd someday, but that is not an option now. Especially since Hatsuma's attacks have become more and more brutal. Saika was reluctantly sent out on her mission to take down Hatsuma. As her search wayned, she got word that an azure ninja was seen, slaughtering a nearby village. Saika hoped the rumors weren't true. She knew that in her heart, Hatsuma would never committ such a massacre. However, to her dismay she found that Hatsuma did indeed kill all those people. As she walked into the village, the stench of death filled her lungs. The village huts were stained with blood, and decapitated bodies, of men, women and children where every where. Their heads were hung by their hair ona tree overlooking a hill filled with rage, Saika rushed up there to find Hatsuma in a trance with the look of fear in his eyes and blood on his hands. Saika broke out into tears when she witnessed her long time friend in such torment. As she approached him, Hatsuma snapped into a rage and viciously attacked her, ripping her kemono in two. He took out his chain whip and as soon as he was about to deliver the final blow he stopped him self. Surgeing with dark energy, tears ran from his eyes as his final words to her were "I'm sorry". Hatsuma instantly vanished in a tornado of black fire. After recovering from her assualt Saika set out on a mission to bring Hatsuma back to her, even if it means giving up her life in the processes to do it.
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Name: Xion (She-on)
Age: 423
Height: 6’7
Weight: 268 lbs
Alignement: Nuetral
Family: All taken by sickness.
Wife was mysteriously slaughtered via decapitation.
Race:Demi-oni, half human
Place of origin: Feudal Japan
Blood type: Changed in transformation, Unknown
Disciplines: Boshido, Genma, Oni, Batojitsu
Weapon: Cursed Twin Kitetsu, Shield Gauntlet, Demon Fang blade.(Much like in Onimusha except this sword is made of an ancient oni's fang and is pure evil, like the Soul Edge)
Eye color: Glowing red.
Skin color: deep green w/ black muscle outlines
Hair: Long, white
Oni Rank: Genma Onimusha(Demon Ogre Samurai)

Design:Xion has pointed ears, and really dark green skin. Only his torso is visible. His upper arms and torso have three orbs, each a different color, white9torso), green(Right tricep), and red(left tricep). Since he was in the feudal area, and studied boshido, he's a former samurai. So he wears to samurai armor plates on his hips, black samurai pants, with golden dragons embroidered in them and black samurai tai boots with steel shin guards. He has his twin kitetsu tied on his left hip, one long and the other slightly shorter to compensate for a double unsheathing with the left hand. His oni shield gauntlet also has a jewel inside it, which glows blue, which gives him tremendous power. He has demon wings, bat like in appearance that have a twenty foot wing span, which act as a cape to cover his oni body. His Bishoman sword is in a sheath on his back.

Special Attacks:
Oni Sight:
The oni gauntlet's jewel glows bright blue and charges up a ball of energy in Xion's palm, the blast is shot at the opponent with extreme speed enlarging with every second causing massive damage to the opponent.
Devil's Eye laser:
A third eye opens in Xions forehead, the gijon eye. It glows an electric blue and shoots a crippling laser at the opponent. It can be shoot, at head level, up into the air at a jumping opponent, and it can be shot into the ground, traveling at the opponent.
Oni barrier:
Xion creates a barrier of demonic energy around himself, rendering him invincible for a short time.
Gauntlet Quake:
Xion slams his fist into the ground, sending energy into it causing an earthquake to accrue.
Possessed Seppuku:
Xion shoots one of his kitetsu into the opponent’s chest, binding them with oni energy. He takes his kitetsu and stabs himself in the stomach, transferring all of his damage to the opponent.
Blood pyro:
Xion cuts himself and shoots his oni blood out of his wound and throws it onto the opponent, igniting them.
Genma Tornado:
Xion channels all of his energy into his twin kitetsu they start to fly around him and circle, They start moving so fast that the energy they give off makes them look like one solid ring. he then lifts his hand at the opponent and the blades flying in a tornado fassion at the enemy. They then return to his hands, blood stained.
Wing lift:
Xion unclasps his wings and fully extends them. He then gives one giant swing, causing a tornado to appear under the opponent lifting them into the air.
Oni Chains:
Xion uses oni magic to immoblize the opponent in a chain of demon fire.

Fatality;
Fragile Humanity:
Xion immoblizes the opponent with his Oni Chains, making them fall to their knees. He then walks up to them and sticks his twin kitetsu into their shoulder, causing extreme pain and in the process cutting of their arms completely. The opponent screams in pain as blood drips from bloody stumps where their arms used to be. He then takes his Demon Fang and puts it to their forehead. He tilts their head back and plunges the glowing blade through their forehead and out the back of their skull. He then slices down the middle cutting through the mouth, spine and rib cage slicing the opponent in half, letting loose a fountain of blood from the vertical slice. The oni chains are then released and the opponent falls in two different directions.
Ceremony of Blood:
Xion takes his hand and extends his nails. He plunges them into the chest, through the heart. He ignites it with oni magic, causing it to boil the person's blood inside their body. The heart ruptures and explodes, with blood and chunks coming out of the persons mouth.
Xion takes the opponents head and cuts the top off. He scoops out the organs inside and creates a goblet. He then rips the head off the opponents body, causing a fountain of blood to shoot out of their neck. He fills the skull goblet with the victims own blood and drinks it. He then glows with blue flames, letting out a fearsome roar.

Story:
Sarakishi Tomukagi was a great samurai in the sixteenth century feudal Japan. His skills were on matched on the battle field. His disregard for death made him the perfect candidate for suicidal missions. He killed swiftley and silently, without regret and without mercy. His slices were presice to the point of inhuman. Before every mission it was said that he bathed his swords in holy fire to imbune them with mystical properties which would guide him on the battle fields. This was thought since, on late and foggy nights the only thing of his that was visible was an eerie blue glow from his twin kitetsu. He rightfuly earned the title Hitokiri Batoetsie with the list of people he killed.
On one of his missions for the Shogun however he was ambushed by the Kunai Clan a pack of renagade Shinobi who were sent by a corrupt businessman called Sekora Terakumo. He hired the Kunai clan to take out Tomukagi because he got wind that he was his next target. Terakumo was suspected of selling large quantities of Opium to small businesses. Tomukagi was well on his way to finishing the mission when he was shot through the heart with a poison arrow by one of the memmbers of the Kunai clan. As his last momments came to a close, he made a pact with the Genma lord that if he gave him one more chance at killing his target and diying with a perfect record he would sell his soul. His wish was granted. The wound in his heart, and the poison in his veins were removed. It was a rainy night, two days into his assassination and Tomukagi once again was imbuing his kitetsu in a holy flame. However, he accidently cut him self over the flame, and his tainted blood corrupted it and his kitetsu. As he grabbed the hilts of his weapons he felt a dark power surging through him. Any sense of honor and remorse was instantly stripped away. He finally apeared in front of Terakumo's door, with lighning shining and his kitetsu glowing blood red he came in with a sinister smile. Terakumo tried calling for help but Tomukagi slaughtered all of the maides, mistresses and servants in the house. The final things heard in the house were Terakumo's last screams before he was diced into pieces. With his mission completed, it was time to keep his end of the bargin, his body was then engulfed in a white flame and he was sent to the Genma Realm. The Genma Lord decided that Tomukagi would serve him better as on oni. The Ceremony of Blood was preformed. He was layed on a stone alter as lesser oni fested on his organs and drank his blood while he was still concious. The Genma King then made him drink his blood out of a goblet, which was his wife's skull. He resisted but then was force fed his blood. By swallowing it, he made a pact with the Oni Genma and he was transformed into an onimusha. A demon samurai who is sworn to serve his new Shogan, the Genma Lord. He resides in the Genma realm to this day. With the aproach of the Mortal Kombat tournamet the Barrier Realms will be weakend and he will be sent through to thrust the world in darkness again. Leading the way to the arrival of the Genma Lord.
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08/09/2004 09:57 PM (UTC)
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Character Name: Shou Lee
Age: unknown
Height: 5.7
Weight: 60
Sex: male
Alignment: wind makers
BloodType: a
Weapon: short wooden stick
Fighting Styles:shoalin kungfu, teakkwondo

Weapon Styles:
fighting with a short wooden stick.

Arena:
shoalin temple

Arena Weapon:
wind sword

Arena Fatality:
get kickt out of the ring and then get brutaly killed bij following shoa lin studends
with all kind of weapens and bleed to dead

Arena Death Trap:
get kickt trough a wall and fall on a wooden pillars with sharp points

Arena Interaction:
kick oponend trough rise paper walls
en kick them trough the ground to a lower level

Special Moves1: wind maker shou lee creates a lot of wind bij moving very fast with his arms
this will not harm the opponent but it wil protect hem from any kind of special move performd on shou lee for 10 seconds

2: meditation gives back a little health to shou lee and also protects him for magical moves

3: aura control: take over your opponent for 5 secondes this move gives you to chance to make the opponent harmes his zelf by attacking him zelf with al kind of moves.

4: wind teleport: very vast teleport move

5: fast as wind: makes shou lee unbelievebly fast
in movement and attacking until he gets hit.

Fatality1: shou lee meditates and takes over the fictims body. and rips the whole oponend a part starting with the legs until he reaches the head
and ake him suffer and bleed to dead.

Fatality2: shou lee creates a lot of wind and shoot the opond trough the air and he jumps up
and with a very hard punch he punches down the oponend back tp the ground which will fall down
and break all bones and a lot of blood.

Story: with every new dangerus enemy born a good guy will be born also. ever sins shang shung was the ultimate bad guy, shou lee trained to become
so strong to defeat shang shung. but that did not happen. lui kang was the one who defeated shang shung. but also let him alive. shou lee kept on training waiting for a new fiend to arrive. a fiend that was so strong that it could hardly been beaten. and there it was the dragon king.
a opponend that had to be beaten, or else the whole world would be distroid. and shou lee also knew that lui kang would arrive. shou lee hated lui kang ever sins he let shang shung alive.
and wanted to challance lui kang for a fight to prove that lui kang was worth noting.
to show lui kang to reason why he lui kang died.
so shou lee desided to take part on probely the harderst mk tournament ever.
with full believe he starded his quest en he believed that he would distroi the dragon king and show lui kang he's nothing.



Character Description: he only likes his following studends and his family.
and hates everything that is bad and lui kang

Character's Signature Quote:
where there is wind there is there is shou lee
shou lee is also the fasttest character from the mk series.

see a quick made pick of him here

http://home.planet.nl/~foth0000/fotos/shou%20lee.jpg

i tried to symbolate the fast movement of his arms
grin

i may have used some wrong words but i did my best

hope you like it grin

it's also out there on the forums
but i agree this is a much better place for self made characters
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08/09/2004 10:05 PM (UTC)
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Great character! It reminds me of a character I've created a while back. He fallen monk under the service of Kahn who went by the name of Kim Shao. I can't find him anywhere on the forums, so I'll probably end up retyping him here. Once again, cool character.
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"Retirement my ass!"

08/09/2004 11:20 PM (UTC)
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Name: Tai Tsung

Age: 11054yrs

Height: 5'7"

Weight: 137 Pounds

Fighting
Styles:
Tae Kwan Do
Xing Yi
Double Bladed Staff

BIO:

Back when Shang Tsung and Goro won the 10th Mortal Kombat that would allow Shao Kahn to conquer Edenia, one of the first things that Shang Tsung did was take an Edenian woman named Traya and he used his dark sorcery to make her carry his demon offspring. Shang was not foolish, he knew that at some point in time, he would surley fall in battle. So he decided that he needed a son to continue his dark legacy. Nine months later Traya gave birth to a baby girl whom she named Tai. Shang was furious that Traya ended up with a girl, He scoffed at the idea of a girl taking his power. He left, but not before using his dark arts to infect Traya with a disease that would kill her painfully and slowly. Traya had to pay for her insult. So for a time life went on as usual. Being half Edenian, Tai inherited the extremely long lifespan of an Edenian. Soon after Tai's 11th birthday, Traya was finally killed by the disease. Tai had always seemed emotionally void and didn't really care that her mother had died. Probably due to the demon blood running through her vains. She did, however, want to know more about her father whom she heard was a powerful Demon Sorcerer. She was fascinated with that kind of life. Tai had known for a long time that she wasn't like other Edenians, she liked to be evil to people and had no desire to do any good at all. She viewed being "good" as being very weak. Being good didn't get you power or riches; and Tai wanted both. She decided to look up her father, with the intention of becomming his pupil.
When she turned 17, Tai began training in the arts of Tae Kwan Do and Xing Yi. She had quite an aptitude for the martial arts and quickly became a master of both styles. Tai also decided she needed to become skilled with a weapon; she chose the Double Bladed Staff and mastered it in an equally short amount of time. It wasn't until years later when Tai was 1458 years old, that she found Tsung. Shang Tsung denied having a daughter and didn't even acknowledge Traya. He threatend to kill her if she did not leave his sight immediately. Tai left, but at that same moment she made vow. She would take everything Tsung had for herself and see him beg at her feet. Tai secretly watched her father from then on, learning everything she could gather about sorcery and the dark arts. she followed her father's conquests, including the 10th tournament that Shang lost. She found it rather funny that of all the opponents that Shang and Goro have crushed over the centuries, a lowly mortal like Kang was the one to beat them both. She made a quick mental note not to underestimate Liu Kang if she ever came up against him.
On her 11023rd birthday, Tai went to spy on her father again and found that he was not home. Tai decided to take advantage of this and let herself into the palace. She made quick work of the guards and continued to his personal study. She searched through all drawers and closets trying to find someting useful. Tai came across a rather strange looking cloak. Along with the cloak she found a notebook. Appearently Shang knew the cloak had mystical properties, but had been unsuccessful in unlockin them. Tai couldn't shake the feeling she had seen the cloak before. Suddenly it came back to her; she had seen it before in one of her aunt Serenity's spell books. She wasted no time in gathering up the cloak and escaping the palace. She went to Serenity's house and found the book. She found out that the cloak acted as a link to the Dark Dimension giving the user power over dark matter and the ability to open doorways into the dark dimension. However the user must first have the sacred mark tattooed over the left eye. This is the piece of information that Tsung was missing, as well as the fact that the cloak only worked specifically for women. In the book there was a picture of the tattoo and Tai wasted no time in getting the mark on her face. She put on the cloak and immediately felt infused with power. She tried a few different tricks with it, including being able to mentally shift it from a cloak to an outfit more to her liking, and decided to keep practicing with it until she could use the cloak to it's full potential. When she had completed this task, she was finally ready. Ready to take down her father and claim all the power that was his to command. However, the Earth Warrior Kung Lao (For Tai's story I am taking Kung Lao's ending in DA to be true.) killed him before she could do so. Tai was not sorry her father was dead, nor did she desire any revenge. She felt Shang to be pathetic, beaten by two different Earth Warriors and even Killed by the second one. He was less than nothing. This changed her plan slightly. Tai decided she would make her father turn in his grave by accomplishing the one task he could not; she would crush the earth Warriors and take Earth Realm for herself.


Special Moves:

Return-To-Sender - Tai uses her power over dark matter to open up a portal to the Dark Dimension which swallows any projectile thrown at her and almost instantly a new portal opens up behind the opponent expelling the projectile (at about double speed) back at them. *This affects Scorpion and characters with projectiles similar to the spear differently. The projectiles will dissappear in the first portal, but will not return to sender.

Dark Force Shards - Tai motions with her hands at the opponent and fires 5 shards of dark matter energy at them. The shards fly through the air and barrage the opponent, one after the other, causing a 5 hit combo.

Shadow Port - Tai can step into one of her own Dark Dimension portals and reappear above, behind or to the side of her opponent.

Shadow Phase - Tai has the ability to make herself a living Shadow. In this mode she cannot be hit by any form of physical attack, excepting certain projectiles (gotta make it fair after all). Also her speed will increase dramatically while in shadow mode as she becomes virtually weightless. However this does have one major disadvantage (to again keep things fair) - while in shadow mode Tai may NOT use any of her other special moves (i.e...Return-To-Sender, Dark Force Shards, or Shadow Port) Shadow mode lasts approx. 8 seconds, and Tai may not use it again before at least 10 seconds have passed (to prevent abuse of this move.)

Fatalities:

Have Limbs Will Travel - Tai opens up five portals around the opponent's body. One at the head, one at each arm, and one at each leg. Tai then promplty closes these portals while the opponents limbs are still in the Dark Dimension, leaving only the bloody torso.

Dark Decapitation - Tai opens up one of her Dark Dimension portals in from of her and another deirectly behind the opponents head. She then takes out her Double Bladed Staff and Thrusts the end of it through her portal. It comes out at the opponents portal and stabs the back of the throat coming out the front, she then gives the staff a quick twist; taking the opponent's head off.

Hara-Kiri - Tai opens a portal near herself and steps half of her body through it and then immediately closes the portal leaving behind only half of her body.


Stage...hmmm.

Tai's Stage is an abandoned OLD Castle that she found in the aftermath a Edenia's initial destruction at the hands of Shao Kahn when He invaded. There is only torches on the wall for light and It's kind of got debris all over the place, It's structure is so weak that If a strong enough wind blows, the castle begins to shake. Every now and then a piece of the ceiling will fall sometimes hiting the players....For a Deathtrap if you knock your opponent through wall with a rather regal looking crest on it, On the other side of the wall the opponent gets attacked and then torn apart by the spirits of the past owners of the castle for violating their home.
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Currently working on: MKD & MKA - The One Ring Theory
08/09/2004 11:33 PM (UTC)
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Nemesi’s bio

Name: Nemesi

Owner: tgrant/Nemesi

Age: Eternal (unknown if he is immortal)

Sex: Male

Weight: Unknown (slim - slight build)

Race: God/Human

Family: Father: Raiden

Mother: Unknown

Group: Aligned with Jada, Raiden and the Earth warriors.

Clan: N/A

Side: Good

Eyes: None. Electrical. Change colour dependent on mood. Occasionally flare.

Hair: Short, black and spiky. Electricity runs through it (up and down the spikes too), making the hair stand on end. Because of his charged hair, he can use himself as a lightning rod when he is weak. The lightning bolt will give him extra strength and power, whilst also rejuvenating his health. (He can also change his hairstyle at will because of he charged nature.)

Look: Wears a long dark blue trench coat that is tied around the waist. Wears black gloves that have a lightning bolt on the palm. Wears a necklace, made of silver that his father gave to him. It is shaped like a lightning bolt and has some very special powers.

Weapons and styles: Nemesi is skilled with many earthly weapons, due to his long time on Earth. He has more skill with most weapons than those who use them expertly on Earth do. Due to his godly nature, he can wield any unknown weapon expertly too. However, his weapon of choice is the Staff. Unlike his father however, his staff is made from pure electrical energy. Although it is in a solid unmoving state, which he can manipulate at will. (Behaves just like a normal staff. If he thrust it through someone he would then have it return to its normal energy state, meaning the electrical energy is released in that persons body, killing him or her instantly.) When struck, the enemy is shocked slightly, even when they block an attack, allowing him to take advantage and attack once again. (Also allows for extra damage when hits actually connect.)

No one else can wield this weapon. (Except his father!)

Nemesi is trained in many styles. He has learnt Mantis, Shaolin Fist, Crane, Tae Kwon Do, Judo and Ninjitsu, to name a few. He has also learned several styles not known to mortal men. His vast expertise in styles and weaponry make him a force to be reckoned with. Has trained with his father, who taught him Nan Chuan and Jujutsu. He has trained for many years in these styles among others. He is unpredictable in Kombat, for the enemy will never know what he will unleash.

Styles of choice:

Crane

Tae Kwon Do

Staff

Powers: Wields the wrath of thunder and lightning just like his father. Has enhanced telekinetic and psychic abilities. (He does not use cheesy arm movements when using his telekinetic abilities. He will just stand there and move things with his mind. Looks almost thisthingisdisabledless.) These psychic abilities are enhanced due to his mix of human and godly intelligence. Also, he uses telekinesis and his flying ability to allow himself to do many moves others would find impossible. Due to the mix of his powers, styles, agility and expertise in weaponry, he is extremely formidable in battle. He mixes all of these in battle, proving to be extremely formidable in battle. (But has yet to defeat his father, Raiden in friendly Kombat.)

However, there is one drawback. Nemesi is prone to severe headaches if he uses his psychic abilities too much without rest or if he focuses to hard. The headaches result in his powers not responding and sometimes unleashing themselves independently. These independent triggers are powerful, and can be a help or a hindrance. Nemesi must rest in order to restore his control once again. He can still fight with his staff, but the pain from the headaches will eventually overcome him and he’ll pass out.

Special Moves:

Disable (1): Disables all of the opponent’s special attacks temporarily.

Disable (2): Disables opponent completely. They are unable to move. Allows for a free attack.

Confusion: Uses his psychic powers to make the opponent confused. They attack other adversaries or themselves.

Torpedo: Same as Raiden’s.

Lightning Blast: Standard electrical projectile.

Lightning Strike: Summons a bolt of lightning to strike the enemy.

Psyonic Jolt: Induces the enemy with a headache using telekinesis to transfer electricity into their head.

Thunder Wave: Throws a spark of electricity on the ground. It splits in thousands of different beams that seek the opponent. They will seek the opponent, even if jumped.

Thunder Cloud/Lightning Summon

These two moves act as aerial counters or juggle finishers. Thunder cloud sees Nemesi summon a cloud that wraps around the opponent shocking them and they fall to the ground instantly. Lightning Summon strikes them knocking them out of the air and face down on the ground. This would be extremely fast and the camera could rise maybe to show the full bolt.

Path of Thunder:

This works like Cyrax’s bombs, only a lightning blast from the ground knocks the opponent into the air.
(Before anyone asks how can lightning come from the ground, I suggest you learn some more about the weather!)

Seismic Stomp: Using a powerful uppercut, Nemesi launches the opponent into the air. After a quick teleport he appears above the enemy, steps on them and slams them to the ground!

Air Hawk: An aerial counter move. Nemesi performs a diagonal dragon kick from the ground to the air catching his opponent in the chest. A quick spin brings around his other leg, which sends the opponent back to the ground.

Flip-kick Toss: A quick forward flip kick to the opponent ends with Nemesi jumping onto the opponents shoulders and landing and tossing them overhead through the air.

Split Trip: Nemesi performs a quick leg split and then uses telekinesis to spin his body, tripping the opponent.

Staff: Can control his staff using his mind. Prefers to ride (surf) on top of it. Whilst surfing on the staff, Nemesi shoots projectiles at the opponent as well as throwing random objects from around the arena at them. (Can have a small number of weapons simultaneously attack the enemy).

Fatality 1: Telekinetic Rip.

Levitates the enemy in the air. He begins to concentrate on their body. The opponent’s arms stretch out. They become rigid and they scream in pain. After a few seconds, their arms fly off, flying across the arena. After more screaming, their head and torso split down the centre. Their body pieces drop to the floor in a pool of blood.

Fatality 2: Impalement Electrocution.

Rams his lightning staff into the opponent (as explained before). The staff glows and then it disappears as it takes its true form, as pure electrical energy. A wave of electricity is seen spread across the opponent as they explode. Their few tiny remains are scattered around the arena.

Fatality 3: Corruption of Mind

Using his psychic abilities, Nemesi channels into the opponents’ mind and soul. He is then able to tap into their power and release it’s power upon the opponents’ body, having it feed on their very essence. They’re consumed by their own power, and die in extreme pain. He saves this Fatality, for those he considers worthy of its torture.

Bio:

Nemesi has kept himself as a recluse for centuries, training in many martial arts forces and honing his powers and skills. He has been fuelled by his anger towards the Elder Gods, those he believed him to be an outcast, because he is part human. Those who believe that he will never amount to anything great. Those who believe he can never live up to his father. He has ignored his father’s wishes to help him aid the Earth warriors against the forces of Outworld, despite the fact that he knows how important the situation is. Now Nemesi abandons his training. He chooses now to fight alongside the Earth warriors and his father. He will attain revenge for his father by destroying the bane of his existence Shao Khan. He will make himself known as one of the great warriors of Earth realm and he will show the Elder Gods that he is no mere mortal. He has his own stand to make towards the eyes of the Elder Gods and he will make this stand and show them that he is more than the mere mortal they claim him to be. He hopes that one-day he will join his father in the Pantheon and become a god such as he. Though he has gained the respect from his father, Nemesi wishes for respect from the Elder Gods. Only time will show if he will receive his long life dream - to be seen and respected as a god by the Elder Gods.

Stage - The Sky Platform:

This is a square arena with no walls or barriers. It sits on a dark thunder cloud and floats along through the thundery sky. In the background you can see the lightning. You hear thunder and there is rain of course. Falling off the edge means falling into the thunder clouds below, resulting in you being shocked to death. The camera will lower showing your blood, limbs and flesh raining form the sky! (No cheesy KI fall to the ground here! This is MK!!)

The arena itself is huge! Why? Because as you travel through the sky, lightning bolts destroy the edge of the arena and sometimes central parts (randomly) and so you have to keep from falling off as best you can.
Also, the arena can also conduct electricity. There a resistor pads around the arena that you must step on before the lightning strikes the ground, preventing you from taking damage. Thunder will be the warning telling you to move onto them. Since lightning comes before thunder, the first lightning strike will strike one of the pads showing you that it is resistant to it. There’ll be an option to have that feature on or not. One or two weapons lie be on resistor pads and for a deathtrap, there will be a lightning conductor in the center of the arena. If an opponent is knocked into it, since they’re wet because of the rain, they’ll be blasted to bits. A stormy wind also blows on occasion and blows you towards the edge.
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"Retirement my ass!"

08/09/2004 11:50 PM (UTC)
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Name: Gabrielle

Age: 11015 yrs. (Being Edenian)

Ht: 5' 7"

Wt: 128



Fighting Styles:

Savate

Pencak Silat

3 Sectional Staff



Bio:



Gabrielle is Tanya's half sister. Her father had been involved before his life with Tanya's mother, and this resulted in the birth of Gabrielle. Gabrielle went to live with her father after her mother was killed trying to fight a theif in their home. Her mother was thrown out of a window and the impact made one of her ribs puncture her lung...she did not survive. Gabrielle is only 2 yrs older than Tanya. Their father, being the Embassedor of Edenia, felt that both of his daughters should be well trained in the martial arts to protect themselves...as his political position could lead to dangerous situations. They were both extensively trained in the arts of Pencak Silat and Savate, styles that took full advantage of their agile and lithe bodies. Even back when they were young and training, it was easy for Gabrielle to see that Tanya had a cruel, competative streak in her. Tanya was insanely jealous of Gabrielle. She wanted her father's affections, and the perks of his status all for herself. Tanya attacked Gabrielle many times, the two seemed more than evenly matched. Gabrielle knew that this was only a shadow of things to come, Tanya was going to get worse as her life progressed. She would become more cunning and decietful, and more importantly....more dangerous.


Gabrielle kept a close eye on Tanya as the years passed by, forever mistrustful of Tanya no matter how sweet and pure she pretended to be. Tanya didn't dissappoint Gabrielle either. One night Gabrielle was hiding in the shadows and saw Tanya talking with the Evil Sorceror Quan Chi. They were planning to help Shinnok overthrow Sindel, and conquer Edenia. Tanya's part in the plan was to keep Raiden and the other earth warrior's suspicions from rising until it was to late. As they would surely interfere if they knew about Shinnok's plans. This was especially important as far as Kitana was concerned. Tanya said it would be no problem for her to keep Kitana in check as they had been close childhood friends. Gabrielle was not surprised at Tanya's treachary, however she did not know how to warn Sindel or Kitana. Kitana would not believe such things about one of her best friends without solid proof. She would have to find another way. Gabrielle listened to the rest of the conversation and slipped away unnoticed.


Gabrielle knew she was running out of time, but still had no solid proof of Tanya's betrayal. Then a break came in the form of her father. He asked to speak to her privately, and told her of his fears about Tanya. He too, had begun to be suspicious of Tanya. Gabrielle told her father of what she heard of Tanya's plan to help Shinnok take over Edenia and possibly Earth, but that she hadn't gone to Sindel or Kitana because she had no proof. Her father told her that she was right about Kitana probably not believing the accusations on Tanya without any proof. But he told her she should warn Sindel of the looming tragedy, she may be more open to the idea of Tanya being a traitor and would see things more clearly than Kitana. Also, she was sent to warn Raiden and the Earth warriros of Shinnok's plans, as a result the Earth Warriors overcame Shinnok and Edenia and Earth were saved. However, Gabrielle was also told she must continue to protect Queen Sindel and Kitana with her life if necessary as Tanya was never captured, Gabrielle agreed and was set to carry out her orders when word came of Kitana's capture at the hands of Tanya for the Dragon King. The Dragon King had been revived, and Kitana was his prisoner. The Embassedor was familiar with the tale of the Dragon King and knew if he succeeded every realm was doomed.

Gabrielle was immediately dispatched to Queen Sindel to warn her of Kitana's fate. The two set off together to rescue Kitana at any cost.... Gabrielle vowed that her sister would be taken....dead or alive.



Special Moves:



*NOTE* Gabrielle is not Mystical or Magical in anyway. All of her moves are performed with her body (legs mostly) Except for Throwing Knife Flurry which of course is self explainatory.



Kick Crusher- Gabrielle takes advantage of her speed and does a hard round house to her opponent's face then fluidly goes into a lightning fast foot sweep, and as the opponent lays on the ground she jumps up and comes down hard with both feet on the chest of the opponent.



Cartwheel dizzy - Gabrielle does three fast cartwheels kicking her opponent each time, this dazes the opponent, as they stand there dizzy, Gabrielle performs a strong upward axe kick sending the opponent skyward. (This moves opens the door for juggle combo oppertunities as it ends in a pop up)



Throwing Knife Flury - Gabrielle takes out three silver throwing knives and throws them at her opponent. (Once thrown, if they connect, the first three throwing knives will stay in the opponent for the rest of the match, one in the shoulder, one in the leg and one in the stomach, it's like an impale type move. Any other knives thrown will cause damage but will dissapear.



Hurracanrana - Anyone familiar with Lita from WWE, knows what this move is. I think it fits nicely with her style of fighting. for those who don't know it's a throw move that entails jumping and wrapping your legs around your opponents neck either from the front or back and then taking them down to the ground slamming them hard into the floor. Gabrielle's is done from the front.



Break Arm/Leg - This is more of a defensive move, when performed Gabrielle will catch the opponent's attaking limb, then uses one of her free legs to trip the opponent to the floor while still holding the opponents attacking limb, and then Stomps hard on the arm/leg in question breaking it. There would be a sick crack soun effect for this move. And, of course, being MK the opponent will get up an still be able to use the limbs just fine. .



Fatalities:



Throat Slit - Gabrielle steps behind the groggy opponent and kicks them in the back of one of their knees forceing them into a kneeling position, then grabs their chin from behind and lifts the head exposing the throat, and takes out one of her throwing knives and slits the throat ear to ear.



Foot Neck Snap - Gabrielle brings her foot across her opponents face three times (Back and fourth with the same foot) She then cocks her head to the side and looks at the dazed opponent...and lets loose with a furious roundhouse that twists her opponent's head all the away around to the back, a very loud nasty cracking sound is heard and the opponent falls in a heap on the ground.



Hara Kiri - Gabrielle take out one of her throwing knives and drives it swiftly and deeply into her forehead.



Stage:



Gabrielle's stage is the Edenian Embassy Courtyard. You can be knocked inside the Embassy by the SW wall of the building. If you remain Outside you can be knocked to the lower level of the courtyard (You initially start out on a large balcony attached to the courtyard. Once you get to the actual courtyard the fighter will have to contend with would-be assassins in the woods sourrounding the Embassy throwing things like knives, and bombs at them. the knives take little damage, but if you do not move in time one of the bombs will take a large protion of energy. There are two death traps....Outside if a figher is knocked into a spot light that moves around the NE corner of the courtyard the fighter will be taken out by Sniper fire. If you have been knocked inside the Embassy there is a door that is marked "Embassedor's Office" If the opponent is knocked through this door a bomb goes off as there was a bomb placed in the office in an assassination attempt on Gabrielle's father. The opponents limbs fly about and there is blood everywhere.
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08/09/2004 11:53 PM (UTC)
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Name: Ghost
Age: Unknown (believed to be well over 25,000)
Height: 6'5"
Weight: 215 pounds


Fighting Stlyes:

Mantis
Kenpo
Raknar: Self made Weapon that can be thrown.

Bio:

Ghost was King of Edenia, before Jarred's rule. His name was Collin. He was a fair and just King, beloved by his subjects and his Queen. For a long time life was peacful for Collin and his Queen, Shivrea. However, what was not known by the Royal couple, was that treachery was upon them. Treachery that was years in the making. Jasal, King Collin's brother, was ever resentful of Collin's status. Not just as King, but his status with the people of Edenia as well. It sickened Jasal to see that they loved him so. Jasal beilieved that Kings were meant to feared and rule with iron fists! He decided this insult could continue no further. So he planned and schemed and waited....well now his time had come.

King Collin recieved an urgent message. Word had come for the North...his cousin, Serba, needed help defending his city from the Shokan Army. The King wasted no time in gathering his army and heading off immediately. However, before he left, Shivrea told him to hurry back to her...she had important news to tell him. Collin promised he would be back as soon as he was able, and with that was gone.

Shivrea looked at Jasal, who was watching her husband leave with a rather disturbing grin on his face. A sense of overwhelming dread came over Shivrea and she prayed her husband would be back soon.

When Collin reached the Northern city of Pavmai...he was greeted by a cheerful Serba. Everything appeared normal, no sign of war at all. Collin explained the events that had transpired and led him there. Serba said he sent no such message...his people hadn't heard from the Shokan in well over 10 years. Collin immediately thought of his wife and his Kingdom. He prayed it was not to late. The normal 5 day journey, only took Collin and his men 3 and 1/2 days. When they reached the heart of Edenia, they saw the streets were litered with dead bodies of men, women, and children. It was not long before Collin and his men were ambushed, and beaten by the army of Shokan that Jasal had waiting for them. Jasal explained that he had sent the message to get Collin out of the kingdom just long enough to take over with his allies the Shokan. Those who didn't comply with the new order were slain. King Collin learned that one of the people that didn't give in was Shivrea. She was one of the first to die at the hands of the dispicable Jasal. Jasal also went on to inform Collin that he was to be a father. This sent Collin into a rage and he freed himself from the grip of the Shokan holding him before Jasal. He hit Jasal hard and knocked him to the ground. He then grabbed Jasal by his throat and Slammed his head into the grond multiple times before he was again a prisoner of two Shokan this time. Jasal slowly got up shaking his head to clear the dizzyness. He than glared at Collin and took out the dagger at his waist. He told his brother goodbye and stabbed him in the heart.

Collin's body was taken to the royal crypt and placed in the spot reserved for him. Where he lay for the next few years. One night, in the dead cold of winter...A being made of pure bright energy entered the crypt.
"Sleeping King...You were cut down before your time. Rise again to take your revenge, make right what has been made so wrong." The being touched the decayed corpse of Collin, and he was made whole again...except he now had white eyes and pale skin.
"What is this sorcery? How have I come back? Why?"
"I have revived you my Lord. And do you not remember?"
"I remember...I remember...JASAL!! He has betrayed us all! Shivrea! My child! HE MUST ANSWER FOR HIS CRIMES!"
"Aye, my King, he does. And now you have been changed, granted the power to carry out your mission...restore Edenia to a realm of peace!" With those words the being was gone. Collin left the crypt immediately. His revenge would be long and bloody, none who stood in his way would be spared.

Moves:
Ghost out - Ghost has the power to become a literal ghost...he becomes intangable for a brief period of time. (While intangable his other specials may NOT be used)

Twin Destruction - Ghost has the ability to make a solid copy of himself. Then both he and the clone do an 8 hit kick combo to the opponent simultaneously.

Swift Vengence - Ghost takes out the Raknar and throws the blade which slices the chest...While the weapon does not stay impaled in the opponent and flies back to Ghost...it acts as an impale move would as the wound is too deep to stop bleeding.

Deadly Vortex - Ghost summons a tornado of lost ghosts, as the opponent is sucked into the tornado their life force is drained from them for a brief period.

Vitality Transfer - Ghost chants and his hands start to glow he fires energy at the oppent that swirls around them draining life, the energy then returns to Ghost swirling around him and adds the stolen life to his own vitality.

Fatalities:

Retribution - Ghost walks over to the opponent and punches them in the face, causing them to be dizzy, he then grabs the opponent, spins to get momentum and then flings the opponent into the air, he then throws the Raknar after them and the spinning blade slices the opponent in half at the abdomen. Both halves of the body fall to the ground as the Raknar returns to Ghost...who then gives the weapon a swift shake to get the blood off.

Ashes to Ashes - Ghost starts to chant, and summons a much bigger version of the ghostnado used in the move Deadly vortex and lets it lose upon the dazed opponent. Inside the Ghostnado you can see the shadow of the opponent writhing and struggling and you can hear terrible sceams coming from him/her. Suddenly the ghostnado dissappears and all that's left of the opponent is a pile of ash, which get's blown away by the breeze.

Suicide: Ghost switches to Ghost form and phases half of his body through the ground...once he reaches his waist he suddenly becomes solid again with the bottom half of his body in the ground. He screams in agony and then his top half falls over onto the ground.

Stage: Royal Edenian Grave yard

Ghost's stage is the Royal Grave yard of Past rulers. At first glance is like any other normal graveyard...with head stones and crypts placed about. As the fighters begin to fight however...dangers become apparent. If you get to close to certain head stones....Zombie arms reach out of the ground, taking hold of your ankles then the head of the zombie appears and he starts chewing on the fighters leg. Different ghosts fly about the arena constantly...if one flies through a fighter they become terrified and unable to move (stun move) and the other fighter is free to inflict easy damage.

Stage Death Trap: If the opponent is knocked through to the inside of King Collin's crypt, (marked by a lion's head on the door) The decayed corpse of Shivrea awakens and eats the fighter alive!
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08/10/2004 12:03 AM (UTC)
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Name: Gemini (Amara / Kraya)
Age: 26 (Amara) 30 (Kraya)
Height: 5'8"
Weight: 110 pounds
Alignment: (Amara) Good, (Kraya) Evil
Hair: Red (Amara) Black (Kraya) *Hair will change depending on who's in control*
Eye Color: Green (Amara) Blue (Kraya)

Fighting Styles:

Amara:
Leopard
Dragon
Jutte

Kraya:
Liu He Ba Fa
Hun Gar
Katana

Bio:

Amara was born, in Outworld, to Starvos and Laria Lynak. The first 4 yrs of her life were happy and loving. Her parents gave her everything they could, most times sacrificing their own needs to do so. The summer of Amara's 5th birthday, Laria was taken and killed by a group on Nomads. Starvos, beside himself with grief, decided he could not care for Amara properly in his current state of mind. He sent Amara away to live with her aunt Adrianna. Amara was heartbroken at having to leave her father, especially since she had just lost her mother. Added to her troubles, was the fact that she sensed something very wrong in Adrianna soon after meeting her. She seemed overwhelmed with evil vibes from this woman. At the time, Amara had no idea that she had vast psychic ability. Adrianna had acted very nice and sympathetic to Amara's father. However, the moment the door was closed behind him, Adrianna Showed a very different face. Amara was dragged upstairs and locked in a room with another young girl named Kraya. Kraya was very nasty to Amara, and Amara sensed the same evil on her that she did on Adrianna. Kraya was Adrianna's adopted daughter. She was horribly scarred, and very ugly. Amara soon found out that it was Adrianna's intention to switch the girls bodies. She intended to give her daughter the chance at a normal life, where she could be both evil and beautiful. To do this, she had planned on kidnapping a different girl. She was overjoyed, however, when Amara was practically dropped in her lap. Amara was beautiful, with green eyes and red hair. A most fitting body for Kraya, Adrianna thought. The first few tries at the spell were unsuccessful. Adrianna decided that she would need help. She enlisted the aid of her cousin Maya, a moderately powerful sorceress from the east.
Maya, however, sabotaged the spell. As a result, Kraya's body was destroyed and now both personalities resided in the body of Amara. Adrianna was furious at the betrayal and apparent loss of her daughter. She quickly grabbed her husband’s Katana off the wall and, in the blink of an eye, Maya's head was rolling across the floor. Believing her daughter gone forever, and not wanted anything to do with Amara, Adrianna sold her to a slave trader. From then on Amara's life was extremely hard and painful. She went from Master to Master, beating to beating. Sometimes when she had been weakened due to beatings, Kraya would become the dominant personality. When this happened, Amara's hair would turn black, and her face would change to that of Kraya - scarred and ugly. Kraya would then proceed to kill the master that had been beating the body she shared. Amara would eventually gather her strength and use her mental power to push Kraya back down. Often, though she was too late.
When she was fifteen, she was bought by a master known as Wei Tao. However, he was not like the rest. He treated her more of a daughter than slave. She eventually grew comfortable enough around him to tell him her full story. He found the fact that she had 2 personalities interesting. He helped her to hone her mental abilities, until they were strong enough to allow her to switch back and forth between personalities easily. After this, he taught her to defend herself. A master of many styles of fighting, he felt that Leopard and Dragon would be ideal for her. For her weapon he chose the Jutte. It was mainly a defensive weapon, and fit her personality nicely. Kraya on the other hand was a different story. Due to her rage, she was not an easy pupil. She did not like being put away, and called forth, like a jack in the box. She thought about the situation, however, and thought it would be best to take advantage of Wai Tao's teachings. Then she would teach the old fool a lesson of her own. Kraya ended up learning the styles Lui He Ba Fa, and Hun Gar. For her weapon she chose the Katana in memory of her father.
All went well for a while after that. There were never any complications. Until the night she saw her father. Starvos was walking through the market while she was picking up supplies. She saw him and immediately dropped everything in her hands. He didn’t even notice her, or anybody. The look on his face had such determination that she knew he must be on some mission. She followed him up over the hill that led just outside of town. Then she saw what he had been tracking. It was a group of six nomads! One larger than the others. This is the one she would never forget...Baraka they called him. He was the one that slew her mother. And this time they had a strange woman in pink with them. Her face covered by a veil. She seemed to be his mate. Starvos immediately charged the group. Amara called out to him to stop, but he did not hear her. She rushed down behind him to aid him in his fight. When he saw her fighting beside him he had no idea who she was, but seemed happy for the help. They did well, they killed 5 Nomads together. There was only Baraka and the woman left now. They charged the couple. Amara attempted to take out the female, who she found out was named Mileena, while her father attacked Baraka. Amara fought well but couldn't seem to deal with Mileena's speed. Starvos was not doing any better. Baraka got the upper hand on him quickly. Then while Mileena held Amara, Baraka smiled at her and split her father straight up the middle. He fell in two halves. The shock of seeing her father murdered before her eyes, caused the Amara personality to completely withdraw. Before Mileena's eyes the girl changed physically. Being a more brutal fighter than Amara, and due to surprising her, Kraya was able to defeat Mileena. Baraka not knowing what was going on decided to retreat. He took Mileena and left.
Kraya turned her attention to the dead body of Amara's father. For the first time she felt bad for someone other than herself. This quickly passed however as she realized that Amara was not trying to regain control. Kraya went over to the large chests that were apparently things that Nomads had collected from their victims. Among them she found an outfit that she took a liking too, as well as a Full face mask with a Ying Yang symbol on it. The irony of this did not escape her. Amused, she put it on to cover her scared appearance. Now it was time for her to collect her Katana, and take care of Wei Tao. When she arrived, Tao immediately knew it was not Amara before him. Concerned he asked what happened. Kraya did not answer. Merely attacked him. He fought well, but Kraya fought dirty and eventually got the upper hand. As she was about to kill him, however, Amara pushed herself forward. Not wanting to loose another "father". She helped Tao up, and told him what happened. She decided she was going after Baraka. But she knew that she would likely have to deal with Mileena first. Like it or not she was going to need Kraya's help. She decided to keep the mask that Kraya had found, and would call herself Gemini.

Special Moves:

Migraine: Gemini focuses her psychic enegy into a powerful mindblast that not only damages opponents, but also acts as a powerful knock back move, hurling the opponent across the arena.

Possession: Gemini Takes control of her opponent's mind, and causes them to fall to thier knees, and proceed to slam their head into the ground (Three Slams)

Identity Crisis: Gemini forces the opponent to beilieve that they are another randum fighter in the tournament. (The fighter chosen will always be randum.) The outward appearance won't change, however, the opponent will gain the moves and fighting styles of the randum fighters) This will last until the round ends. This move is a gamble because on the one hand, your opponent could get someone that they really don't know how to play and thus making the match easier for you to win. It takes the opponent's fav fighter (assuming that's who was picked) away from them for a round. On the other hand, it could transform the person into a fighter that they happen to be just as skilled with. Making the match harder for you. Also this move can only be used once per round.

Illusion Confussion: Gemini uses her mental abilities to make the opponent see lifelike illusions of her around them. There will be three Gemini's surrounding the figher, none of them real. This move kind of acts like a stun move, as the character will stumble around taking missing swings at the copies...leaving Gemini free to get an easy hit or combo. This move comes in the form of an energy ball from Gemini's head..so it is blockable if you are quick enough. So that it is not so cheap, and can't be abused.

Kraya Switch: This move allows the player to bring the Kraya persona to the surface. Giving Gemini two new fighting styles: Hun Gar and Lui He Ba Fa (taking away Dragon and Leopard) as well as switching the Juttes for a Katana. *You can only switch once per match. If you switch to Kraya, you are Kraya until the match ends. (both rounds)

Fatalities:

Brain Hemorage: Gemini puts her hands on her head and concentrates. Suddenly the opponet starts to stagger around screaming. Then the screaming get's more intense and the opponent is on their knees holding and shaking their head...and they suddenly stop cold. a second later the opponent's brain explodes blowing off the top half of their head. The body falls to the ground.

Puppet Master: Gemini Takes control of the dizzy opponent, and first makes them tear their own eye's out. Then, as they kneel, makes them punch their hand into their stomach and pull out guts, intestines, organs.etc... The opponent falls over dead.

Hari Kiri: Gemini switches to the Kraya persona and takes out her Katana. She swiftly stabs the blade through the front of her throat, then gives it a quick twist, taking her head off.

There! That's all four of them! And Smoke? I LOVE Kamon...Very nice new Character there man.
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Currently working on: MKD & MKA - The One Ring Theory
08/10/2004 12:10 AM (UTC)
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Ryoko's bio

Name: Ryoko-Hikari (Meaning: Force of Light)

Owner: tgrant

Age: Eternal

Sex: Female

Weight: Unknown

Height: Unknown

Race: God (Goddess)

Family: Unknown

Alignment: Good

Group: Earth warrior (Although she is unknown to all except Raiden)

Status/Occupation: Rogue Stealth Ninja Assassin Goddess. Destroys potential threats to Earth.

Eyes: White. She can make them glow and emit a visible light in order to light rooms and passages. Or she can produce a more powerful blast to temporarily blind the opponent. Her hands can also glow.

Hair: Details unknown. (Known to be a silvery colour to the deities.)

Look: Ryokos skins glows faintly (hardly ever noticeable.) In the day it has a gold/yellowish hue about it whilst it becomes silver at night. (Still working on a suitable art concept for her.)

Styles and weapons: Ryoko is trained in the way of the ninja assassin. Her godly abilities combined with her ninja training have rendered her a most formidable opponent. Due to training, her own godly strengths have been increased along with her powers. Her godly abilities have allowed her to take the training she has learnt and adapt it, making it more lethal and deadly. Adding her legendary stealth to all of this, Ryoko is the ultimate assassin!

Ryoko is trained in many ninja styles. She has learnt the unarmed fighting style, Tai-jutsu. She knows Ninjitsu and several other stances. In weapon training, she is skilled in Tessen-jutsu (steel fan), sai-jutsu (sai), staff and kama as well as being skilled with her own dagger weapon. Her weapon of choice (and the one she is most skilled with) is the Kyoujin-Hikari, which is also known as the Dagger of Light.

Ryoko sometimes uses the weapon known as the karasi-gama, which is a chain with a kama on one end and a spear tip on the other. It is a long-range weapon used in similar fashion to the nunchaku.

Ryoko also knows the sword fighting styles Kendo, Iaido, Fencing and Ninja-to.

Weapon of choice: The Dagger of Light (Kyoujin-Hikari): The evil destroying blade

The Dagger of Light is a weapon that is made from a mix of steel and light. The blade glows with a mysterious glow. Light can be seen flowing within the blade, appearing as a liquid metal mixed with light even though the blade itself is solid. The dagger holds the power of light and good within it. Because of this, evil can never wield it.

The dagger has the ability to heal, but it can only heal the good. This property makes it useful to expose traitors and potential evil persons. In order to heal, it must be placed over the wound. Also has advanced healing properties that can cure disease. It must make contact with the victims blood.

The dagger protects the wielder from dark magic, spells and curses. Can also be used to break spells and curses on others. Also, in Kombat, the dagger can absorb projectiles from the enemy. They are destroyed within the blades’ interior.

The Dagger of Light destroys evil in a unique way. It causes the victim to feel the pain and suffering they have inflicted upon others. Also, the victims focusing their vengeance into the blade causes more pain. It is this pain and vengeance, along with the pure good energy contained within the blade that kills the opponent. They die, consumed by the light of good. With the cry ‘Yami e kaere’ (Meaning: return to darkness), Ryoko will finish off her victim.

Powers: Wields the power of light and its force of good. Ryoko ability to manipulate light at will gives her incredibly powerful attacks. These include light beams, laser beams and heat beams. Ryoko can fly like the other gods and uses her ninja abilities to enable to glide at incredible speeds. Her ninja training has enhanced her fighting abilities to an extreme. She can also rebound off walls and has attacks/combos that involve using walls to her advantage.

Ryoko`s trademark ability is the one that has rendered her legend and unknown. Her ability to render herself completely invisible with no shadow has enabled her to become the deadly assassin that she is. Her stealth is matched no thing and no one!

Ryokos body absorbs sunlight like a plant does. In extreme sunlight (and intense light sources) her body powers up and becomes stronger and faster. Her already strong powers are made even more powerful and her most devastating attacks can be unleashed. At night, strong moonlight can give her a slight power increase also.

Special Moves:

Invisibility: Uses her powers of light manipulation to refract light away from her body rendering her completely invisible. (No shadow is cast, as light cannot hit the body at all. Refraction is the bending of light as it travels between different mediums – as in traveling from air to water. Ryoko bends light away from her body regardless of the medium, making her invisible and freeing herself of a shadow.) This lasts for a short amount of time. The time increases in extreme sunlight. Primarily used when assassinating a target. However, she cannot become invisible at night.

Flash: Creates a temporarily blinding flash. Allows for free attacks.

Teleport: The same as always!

Mirage: Ryoko uses light manipulation to create mirages and changes the opponents’ perspective of the arena and world around them to cloud their vision. Allows for free attacks.

Mirage 2: This time Ryoko uses the mirages to create copies of herself. Through careful light manipulation, she can fool the enemy into thinking there are many of her and have each mirage launch fake attacks whilst she attacks them.

Aurora Blast: A beam of light energy is fired at the opponent! (Projectile attack.)

Spectrum Blast: Powerful beams of light are released from Ryoko’s hands, however, these beams arc in a half circle and hit the enemy from the sides. (Like Shangs 3d fire) Because they curve, the light splits into rainbow colours!

Blitz Kick: Ryoko teleports behind the opponent, reappearing at head height. Ryoko brings her right foot across the left side of his/her face and then the same foot back across the other way (hitting with the heel this time.) Then for the final strike she quickly brings her left leg straight up (in a flip motion and still in the air) sending them sailing skyward. Ryoko lands just as the opponent is starting to fall back down leaving an easy juggle option open.

Extreme Speed: In a walled area, Ryoko uses the Dash attack to great effect. Moving at incredible speeds, she charges at the enemy but veers to the side, slashing them with her dagger as she passes them. Still running, she then immediately propels herself off a wall by performing a jumping spin kick and then launches herself back at the opponent for another attack. The wall jump is done two times. This move does three hits and in game would be done during a sidestep.

Super Attacks: (Only available in extreme sunlight.)

Light Speed Dash: (Unavoidable, except by deities) This dash attack sees Ryoko launching herself at the opponent at the speed of light, making this attack unavoidable and very powerful. Because of the speed of the attack, Ryoko can return to where she was stood before anyone even notices that she has moved.

Solar Beam: This is one of Ryokos most powerful attacks. In extreme sunlight, she can release a huge beam of focused sunlight energy. The beam can be split and directed towards multiple targets. (Only available in extreme sunlight.)

Fatalities: (Only one at the moment.)

See no more: Ryoko summons the powers of light and concentrates on her opponent. Their eyes begin to glow and they howl in pain. The light is really a concentrated, heated light. Ryoko stops and the light disappears revealing two scorched eyes. Ryoko takes her dagger and rams it into the opponent’s eyes, yanking them both out. She then slashes their throat and as they fall, she tosses the dagger into the air. As they land face down, the dagger lands in the back of their head.

Bio: Of all the deities of old, there is one unknown, an enigma. Her name is known only amongst the ancients. Her identity has been hidden from evil and as such, her skills and power have been regarded by the legions of evil as mere legend and superstition. And the legend of Ryoko-Hikari, the goddess of light, continues.

Bestowed with the powers of light and the ability to manipulate it at will, Ryoko-Hikari is one of the most powerful forces of good. It is this power that has kept her hidden and allowed her to strike fear into the very hearts of evil! This power is also the key to her most deadliest weapon – her stealth!

Ryoko uses stealth to overcome her enemies. Unlike most that would abuse her power, she has trained in the way of the ninja in order to enhance her abilities and be prepared to attack if exposed. And of course, her ninja skills help in her line of work – eliminating potential threats to Earth. This stealth has and her work has earned her the title of ‘The ArchAngel’ amongst the ranks of evil.

Because of her powers, Ryoko appointed herself as a rogue protector of Earth, a mercenary, despite the Elder Gods warnings. She would assassinate anyone who was destined to be a threat to Earth. Ryoko was not however permitted to eliminate anyone involved with the Mortal Kombat tournament. The Elder Gods forbade this. She was not to interfere. This one rule she followed, to show that she was still loyal to the Elder Gods. However, this rule was soon to be broken...

None of Ryokos victims ever lived once she had targeted them as a possible threat and chosen to destroy them. (None had lived to tell what she looked like.) However, the man known as Mavado had evaded her, simply by becoming involved with the tournament. Ryoko recalled how one other person had evaded her by doing the same thing - a man called Kano. She is now angered that her targets are eluding her. She will enter the fray and hunt them both down at any cost. Although she would enter the battle for Earth to kill Mavado and Kano, she would soon find her mission would change.

Upon entering the tournament, Ryoko would reveal herself to all. Her appearance would strike fear into the many evil hearts surrounding the tournament. The many stories of her exploits would come back to haunt them. She would take pleasure in their fear.

As for Raiden and the earth warriors, fighting alongside them would be for the greater good. Her enigmatic lifestyle would soon be unveiled and tossed aside and all would know her name.


My thanks to TomTaz for allowing me to use the Blitz Kick special move on Ryoko.

And thanks to nindz who gave me the styles and weapons (with the exception ot the Dagger of Light) to use to make Ryoko authentic.
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08/10/2004 05:14 AM (UTC)
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It's great to see some of the big name characters, such as Ryoko and Gabrielle on this thread. Thanks alot tgrant and TomTaz.
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Just like the pied piper lead rats through the streets. You dance like
marionettes, swing to the symphony of destruction.- Megadeth

08/11/2004 04:57 AM (UTC)
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Name- Vandon Sozek

Occupation- sorcerer, former assassin

Height- 6’3”

Age: unknown, he has been around since the rule of King Jerrod

Race: rumored to be an Edenian

Eye color- green

Hair- black and long

Alignment- Neutral

Weapon- A gold plated, dual bladed staff with a large ruby embedded along the shaft of it. The staff can be detached into two swords and reattached into a staff during battle making for stylish and deadly combos in his weapon stance. It is called the Blades of Carnage.

Fighting Styles: Kithna Ton- An ancient fighting style of the edenians used primarily by assassins. It is quick and well balanced.
Shadow Fist- A slower but more powerful style coming from the ancient scripts of the Book of shadows.
Blades of Carnage- A weapon which Vandon created himself which is extremely fast and can be used in insanely intricate combos.

Outfit 1- He wears a long black hooded cloak with the sleeves ripped off. On his hands he wears ornate gauntlets with sharp blades at the tip of the finger of each. On his face he has a black tattoo which twists along the side of his face in a serpent like pattern. A long scar runs down the side of his arm and on his chest is a medallion with a ruby placed directly at the center of it.

Outfit 2- A full iron helmet decorated like a demon’s face covers his entire head with two red slits for his eyes to see through. He has no shirt on but has a black cloth wrapped around his arm just underneath his shoulder. The scar remains on his arm and he wears the same gauntlets from the first outfit. He has black somewhat baggy pants which are tucked into armored boots. The buckle of the belt he wears is the medallion from the first outfit. A long black cloth is draped around the back of his belt, one side of his waist to the other, which hangs down to his ankles.

Special moves: (button commands done for PS2)
Black Dragon- Stepping to the side, Vandon holds out his arm and fires a black fire ball with the head of a dragon at front of it. When it hits the opponent it bites into them and then explodes sending the opponent into the air, setting up for a possible juggling combo. (forward, forward, triangle)

Shadow Teleport- Vandon disappears and appears either in front of or behind the opponent flying at them with his hand out in front of him, grabbing them by the throat and choke-slamming them to the ground. (back, down, square)

Seeking Black Dragons- Vandon slams his fists together, knuckle to knuckle, and three black dragon fireballs fly out, one goes up in the air a few feet, another goes to the right of him the same distance, and the third flies to the left of him same distance as well. The triangle button sends one of the fireballs at the opponent no matter what distance they are from Vandon. This can be done until all three have been sent at the opponent. The attack can be cancelled either by hitting the circle button or by not launching any of the fireballs within 4 seconds. (back, down, forward, triangle triangle x3 to launch . Circle to cancel attack)

Dark drain- Vandon grabs the opponent and lifts them into the air, a dark energy flows into Vandon as some of the opponents life is drained and partly replenishes the health of Vandon. Afterwards he tosses them to the ground and jumps back.(back,forward, x)

Fatalities:
The Shadow Dragon: Vandon raises his arms straight up into the air and emits a dark aura as a giant black dragon jumps out of the ground and growls loudly. It nosedives back into the ground and then bursts out from underneath the opponent, biting down on them, eating their entire body except for the head which goes falling to the ground and is caught by Vandon, he throws his head back and laughs loudly.

Blood Lust: Vandon slams his fist into the opponents face causing them to fall to the ground. He then takes out the Blades of Carnage and picks the opponent up with them. He teleports quickly from one side of the opponent to the other as he butchers them with his weapon, blood flies everywhere and he continues until there is nothing but a skeleton left.

Hari Kari:
Dark Sacrifice- Vandon falls to his knees and lowers his head as his hands are held up in the prayer position. The head of the Shadow dragon slowly raises fron the ground behind Vandon as he stays entirely still. The Shadow Dragon opened his mouth widely and snaps down upon Vandon, diving back into the ground.

Key quote: "Lay before me as I crush you beneath my fist!"

Story:
As Vandon had grown up he was always preoccupied with making himself stronger and stronger. His obsession with fighting and strength was so noticeable that his family consented to sending him to a clan of warriors in the kingdom of Edenia. He became so much of a handful, even for this group of powerful warriors, that he was sent out of the clan for his insatiable lust for battle and for having tried to kill the leader of the clan in order to proclaim himself leader. Eventually Vandon became part of the Royal army, moving up in ranks with awe-inspiring ease.

Vandon came to work under King Jerrod as an assassin, and he excelled at what he did. He had became marvelous at sneaking past enemies defenses and his fighting skill was renowned throughout the kingdom, even being hailed the kingdoms grand champion of fighting by Jerrod himself. Jerrod considered him to actually be one of his closest allies and friends since they had been through many wars together and had always fought side by side. Vandon was extremely ambitious, however, and had been trying to find a way to overthrow the king of Edenia and place himself in the place of power. Secretly he also lusted after Queen Sindel and many a time had tried to seduce her. Sindel would dismiss his advances as childish games, nothing to be taken seriously. This often angered Vandon and he became more and more obsessed with her, almost as obsessed as with his lust for power. He bode his time and awaited an opportunity to take both Jerrod's throne and his wife as his own. When Shao Kahn's invasion began, Vandon saw his opportunity to satisfy his ambition. Jerrod sent him to assassinate the conqueror of realms but he had his own plans. Sneaking into the stronghold of Shao Kahn, he was able to sneak his way before the throne of Kahn himself. Kahn immediately sent his guards to kill him but they were struck down and dismembered like nothing as they lay upon the floor at Vandon’s feet. Kahn was impressed, so he asked the purpose behind Vandon’s intrusion.

“I have come to offer a proposal to you” he stated.

Shao Kahn tilted his head a little and glared at the Edenian assassin. “I do not make deals with pests, especially with one who comes from a realm I am to conquer.”

“Well I have just come to you offering Edenia to you on a silver platter,” Vandon spoke slyly.

Kahn smiled a little then studied the assassin for a moment, “And what is it that you want in return for aiding my cause?”

Vandon spoke confidently, “to rule Edenia under you, taking Sindel as my queen, to act as a king over these lands under your authority of course.”

Kahn let out a mighty laugh as he heard this and smiled as he thought for a moment, “very well, if you do as you have promised you may rule over this realm underneath me.”

From that point on, the Edenian assassin would act as an advisor to Kahn, helping him exploit all of the weaknesses in the defense of King Jerrod’s kingdom. After Jerrod had died Shao Kahn took Queen Sindel as his wife and claimed the throne of Edenia, thus breaking his end of the bargain with Vandon. Vandon approached him furiously, “I was supposed to be given control over these lands! What happened to our agreement!?”

Kahn laughed and stood up, his towering figure casting a shadow over Vandon, “You were a fool to think I would ever give you control over this realm, I used you and now your usefulness has been lost.”

“You liar! I will kill you for this!” With those words Vandon charged the emperor with an enraged cry.

“You fool, you cannot win!”

A battle took place between these two that lasted only a short time before Shao Kahn held Vandon by the throat above the ground. “I do owe you a debt of gratitude for having helped me easily overthrow your king and for this I will reward you,” suddenly a portal opened beneath Vandon and Shao Kahn dropped him into it.

Vandon spent the better part of a millennia trapped in the depths of the Netherrealm, his anger and his hatred were all that kept him moving forward. The Vandon of that era truly died, for his lust for power and queen Sindel faded from view, all that burned in his mind now was revenge. While in the Netherrealm, Vandon came across a dark book hidden in one of the many caverns of this hellish place, it was entitled, the book of shadows. It held secrets to a power over the shadows and a beast known as the Shadow Dragon. For a good deal of time Vandon spent his days studying this book and practicing the arts within it, becoming more and more powerful, the next time he and Shao Kahn would meet the outcome would be different.

He escaped the Netherrealm during the events of Deadly Alliance and was disturbed to hear of the supposed assassination of Shao Kahn. He traveled all the way to the throne of the Emperor to view the evidence for himself, but the area where the body had been was devoid of Shao Kahn’s corpse. This lead to certain suspicions which arose into Vandon’s mind about the truth of Shao Kahn’s death. He explored the mighty fortress and came across a huge hole in the wall which appeared to be caused by a heavy weighted bludgeoning weapon of some sort. Vandon smiled widely as he realized his chance for revenge has not been taken away from him.

When the Dragon King arose to try to claim the realms of Shao Kahn and continue forth with the empire, Vandon realized that this threat may lead Kahn to return in order to reclaim his empire from him. If this should happen, this reborn Edenian will be there awaiting him to strike him down.

Ending: As Vandon made his way, battling to get to the stronghold of the mighty Dragon King, he came across the Queen of Edenia reborn. Sindel was in a moment of disbelief as she gazed upon the man who betrayed her kingdom to Shao Kahn so long ago. Vandon smiled, "It's been a long time my lady."

"Not long enough," Sindel growled.

Vandon's smile turned to a serious look, "enough catching up on old times I have an appointment with a certain scaly weakling."

"What makes you think I'm letting you go?" Sindel prepares to fight.

Vandon laughs, "I may have wanted you once but make no mistake, you will die if you stand in my way."

Sindel leaps forward trying to hit Vandon but Vandon disappears. Sindel stands still, confused for a moment as the blade of Vandon's staff penetrates through her stomach, raising her up into the air as she shrieks out in pain. He dissappears again and begins teleporting all around Sindel tearing her to pieces with his staff, leaving her a bloody mess upon the floor. "I told you not to get in my way."

Vandon finally makes his way to the castle of the Dragon king and all the way to the throne room of the legendary King himself. The Dragon King arises and snarls as he looks upon Vandon, "Vandon Sozek, you were foolish to come here, I'm afraid I'll have to kill you before you can get the chance at revenge."

Vandon smiles confidently, "So you know who I am, I'm surprised, but you are wrong if you think that even you could stop my vengeance. I've been called a fool before and I shall not let the same outcome occur this time. It's you who will die!"

A great battle took place as these two opponents viciously attackeded eachother. The Dragon King was able to, in several pints of the fight, totally beat into Vandon, sending him to the ground bleeding. Vandon smiled as he sent his seeking black dragons at the king to knock him back into utter disorientation. Seeing his chance Vandon summoned the Shadow Dragon who brought the dragon king between its powerful jaws. Suprisingly, The Dragon King pried himself from the jaws of the dragon and continued to battle strongly. Vandon proved, in the end, to be the superior warrior and the Dragon King fell to his knees as he was decapitated. Vandon took his head and placed it upon the throne and sat, awaiting the true purpose behind his annihilation of the Dragon King and his minions.

After a day or so, a huge commotion occurs through the Dragon King’s palace as the doors to the throne room are busted open with a large war hammer and a tall muscular figure stands there staring directly into Vandon’s eyes. Vandon smiles widely as he pulls out the Blades of Carnage, his time has come.

Stage:
The Dead City- This is a crumbled city within the realm of Outworld with several dark figures creeping around in the background. The sky is black and screams echo throughout the city. The characters fight in front of a decrepit temple along a street and can fight their way up the stairs of the temple and knock each other through the stone door of the temple. The floor is broken inside the temple and whoever is knocked through the door falls down into the basement of the temple which has a stone torture table and a large portal swirling on the side of the wall.

Stage Weapon:
Ritualistic Executioner’s Axe- Near the torture table in the basement of the temple the axe stands. This axe is used for beheading people in sacrifice to the gods.

Stage Fatality:
Netherrealm Portal- Knocking the opponent into the portal, they are sent to the Netherrealm and burn to nothing but a charred skeleton.
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Name- Dymune Domina

Age- unknown

Family- Father, Lucifer; mother, Alural Domina

Allignment- Evil

Eye color- Brown (glows red when angry)

Hair- long, black and red

Skin- Tan

Facial Hair- Down along the side of his face his facial hair begins and travels down underneath his chin. At the very center of his chin a thin spike of hair points down.

Outfits-
Outfit 1: Dymune’s hair is in a sectioned ponytail which reaches down to his belt. He wears two-layered shoulder armor with a spike on the top of each. An armored plate covers his chest down to the very last set of abs right above his crotch, the plating is layered. A cloth hangs down from the shoulder armor around his back that reaches to the middle of his back, underneath this cloth hangs a cape that drapes down to his calves. He wears a bracer on each arm and arm bands underneath both shoulders.

Outfit 2: His hair is free and drapes all around his body. He wears a sleeveless, hoodless robe with a low cut v-collar that has netting connected between. He wears smaller bracers on each wrist but has the same arm bands under each shoulder. Two straps make an x shape on the front of his body and wrap around his torso. His boots are knee-high and his pants are baggy and tucked into them.

Styles-

Devil: A fighting style developed by Lucifer himself. Only he and his son know it. It is a quick powerful style that allows for powerful hits along with quick evasion. The concentration in this style is more with the upper body of the fighter using the style.

Demon Hand: Developed by Dymune while he was in the seclusion of the unexplored Outworld forests. It is faster than devil but the individual hits are not as powerful. To balance this out, combos can be initiated and if the first attack connects the rest of the hits fire forth in rapid succession making it difficult to block.

Damnation Blades: Weapons that Dymune forged out of the hatred and darkness of his own soul, using his newly realized demonic power to create weapons vicious enough to match his own soul. This style is quick and has several combos.

Weapon- Damnation blades: These are dual weapons with blades that come out of both ends of the hilt. The hilt itself is not the handle, a handle branches off to the side of it which the user holds (think strider hiryu’s weapon). The hilt extends from the end of the fighter’s fist to the end of their elbow and is strapped to the user’s fore arm. The first blade is a 2 foot long serrated one which originates from the end of the hilt which touches the fighters elbow, it is blunt on the end which would touch their arm but the other side is razor sharp. The second blade is a foot long dagger-like blade protruding from the opposite end of the hilt. The fighter has one on each arm. The wielding of these weapons is in essence an extremely modified version of Muay Thai.

Special moves- (done in PS2 command format)
Darkness: Dymune holds his hand in front of his face then jerks his head back a little as the screen goes black and Dymune rushes toward the opponent in the dark to connect a hit with the confused opponent. After it connects the screen goes back to normal. (back, foreward, down, circle)

Hell’s Explosion: Dymune falls to one knee and hits his fist to the ground as a fiery wave spreads out in a circle around him. (up down square)

Shadow- Dymune disappears leaving only his shadow to be seen moving. He cannot hit or be hit while doing this move. The player can travel to any area of the stage and appear there by hitting the circle button. (forward foreward down triangle circle to reappear or automatically reappear in 3 seconds)

Dark Pulse: Dymune creates a circle of four balls of dark energy and fires them foreward in rapid succession (down foreward square)

Fatalities-
Heed My Words: Dymune slowly chants something inaudible as a portal in the floor opens and dark shadowy arms reach out clawing and scraping at the floor. As this happens the opponent starts holding their head as they stumble, hearing Dymune speak to them. They walk towards the portal and the arms rip the opponent into pieces, one ripping out their spinal chord, another tearing half of their face off, and so on and so forth. They then drag the opponent into the portal as Dymune kneels in prayer as an evil grin comes over his face.

Dymune’s Birthright: Dymune sprouts black demonic wings and his hands become claws as he walks up to the opponent and jams his hand into their chest. He flies up into the air with the opponent a few feet and his eyes glow deep red as he backhands the opponent’s body to the floor still holding their heart in his hand. The opponent writhes on the floor with his hands hovering around his chest as he screams loudly, blood running from the whole in his chest and forming a large puddle on the floor. Dymune takes a bite out of the heart and then does a powerful pose in the air with a deafening scream.

Weapon Fatality-
Eternal Damnation: Dymune takes his blades and in a spinning combo cuts deep into the opponents throat, chest and stomach, which bleed profusely. Then with the dagger-like blades on the end of the weapons, stabs them into the opponent and lifts them up in the air. The blades begin to glow red as the opponent catches fire, then falls to the floor in a charred skeleton as it slowly is enveloped in a black mist.

Hari Kari-
The Suffering: Dymune breaks his own arm then, inverting it, stabs himself in the stomach with the two foot serrated blade of the Damnation blades. As he falls to his knees bleeding, he rips his arm completely off and drives the blade upward, making a slice from the wound in his stomach up to his lower jaw, slicing it in half as each half dangles off his head and he falls to the ground in a puddle of blood.

Story-
Lucifer ruled the Netherealm for many millennia before being overthrown by the fallen elder god, Shinnok. During this period of time Lucifer engaged in an undocumented affair with a woman in Edenia. Her name was Alural Domina, she was a princess who’s beauty was legendary and body was unclaimed by any man. Lucifer grew infatuated with her beauty and decided he must have her. He proceeded to visit her in her sleep, leaving his realm, and took advantage of her for many months. Alural conceived his child during this time. At the surprise and realization of this, Lucifer ended his lustful visits with the beautiful princess. The discovery of her pregnancy lead her reputation to be tarnished, even her family rejected her, calling her a whore.
Alural fled from her kingdom to a small village far from her home, it was here that Dymune was born. Being all the once great princess had left she held him close to her heart and loved him with overwhelming affection. Dymune himself showed nothing in his physical appearance leading to the fact that he was the son of the devil himself besides the fact that his eyes glowed a crimson red when he became angry. He inherited his mother’s beauty and charm. His mother’s considerable coddling of him, though, resulted in his hate for her, feeling like he was her prisoner. He prayed day and night to be rid of her bondage, his father heeded his call. At the age of 15, Lucifer kidnapped his son and took him into the Netherealm with him. His mother searched day and night for her lost son, after a year of hopeless searching, she ended her tragic life. Lucifer raised his son and even taught him to fight in a fighting style he himself developed. Dymune became quite the warrior under his father’s tutelage but strangely despised him. He was jealous of his father’s strength and resentful for his superiority over him.
Lucifer did not get to raise Dymune too long before Shinnok lead an uprising against him for control over the Netherealm. In a last act before Shinnok’s impending victory, Lucifer transported his son to the unexplored Outworld forests where he would be safe. Dymune saw this as a betrayal of sorts and grew with a deep-rooted hatred for all living things as a result of the loss of everything within his own life. Having enjoyed the thrill of battle he trained in his father’s style within the woods and, in his father’s foot steps, began developing his own style which he named the Demon Hand. As he grew older he soon began to become aware of the dark power which was his birthright. He learned to bend darkness to his will and utilize an explosive power. Using this power he forged two weapons out of his hatred and darkness called the Damnation Blades.
One day, he finally walked into the civilized world around him and became aware of another power he possessed, manipulation. He could send words deep into the soul of a mortal and lead them to do anything he desired. Most easily succumbed to his power and he took great delight in the chaos he created amidst mortals as he led them down the path to their own self destruction. Brother killed brother, child killed parent, kings turned on their kingdoms, and wars were fought at the heeding of his words. The Elder Gods themselves decided to put an end to this and trapped him within an ethereal prison originally designed for rogue Elder Gods of extreme cases.
There Dymune waited, reminded of how his father had superiority over him and resenting the Elder Gods for their superiority now. His mind dwelled on the retribution he would gain if and when he escaped this horrid cell. The opening of the portal to the heavens by the Deadly Alliance many long millennia afterwards inadvertently opened his cell, releasing him. He quickly escaped back to the realm of Outworld, changed from the time he was there previously. He watched as the Dragon King arose and watched the beginning of an epic war. “This is perfect,” Dymune stated in his deep haunting voice as he smiled evilly.
He would use this war to destroy all that the Elder Gods protected, every realm would fall and eventually both sides of this war would destroy themselves. Then he would unleash the Netherealm upon the heavens themselves and destroy the Elder Gods leaving the realms in a state of anarchy and chaos, an existence in which he would fully appreciate.

Ending-
Several of the mortals he faced were not as easy to manipulate as he thought they would be so he faced them in combat. He greatly enjoyed the bloody battles in which he participated and continued forth, turning allies into foes and killing any who were not easily controlled with his own hands. He appeared before the Dragon King and after a long battle weakened him to the point where he put up no resistance to the words of Dymune. The Dragon King ripped off his own head and fell to the ground bleeding as Dymune laughed.
The realms knew times of darkness as many wars continued after the end of the Dragon King’s war. Dymune finally achieved his ultimate goal and released the force of the Netherealm upon the heavens. The Elder Gods stood no chance. Dymune created his perfect order, or disorder rather and took part in the chaotic existence of all living things which remained.

Arena-
Burning Forest/ Netherealm Gates: In the middle of the uncharted Outworld forests, where Dymune lived for a portion of his life, the fighters battle amidst an incredible inferno. The fire creeps closer and closer to the combatants as the fight and if they are knocked into it or are touched by the encroaching flames they catch fire and suffer damage. If Dymune is not in play, his silhouette will be seen in the background, arms crossed and eyes glowing as he watches intently.
Eventually a fiery portal will open to the side of the arena and if a character is knocked into it they fall to the molten rock floor that lay in front of the gates to the Netherealm itself. Oni, shadows and all manner of suffering creatures encircle the combatants as they continue their fight. These creatures can reach and grab opponents doing harm to them if they get too near. Eruptions occur at different areas of the floor and can cause damage to the fighters if they are standing upon the area where the eruption originated, being knocked into the air and burned.

Arena Weapon- Inferno Chain: Located right in front of the gates of netherealm. Many of netherealm’s inhabitants are chained and tortured even by the means of their bondage itself. The handle of the chain is cold steel but every link of the fiery chain burns with the rage of the netherealm’s wrath.

Stage Fatality- Welcome to your New Home: If a kombatant is knocked into the gates of the Netherealm the body of the kombatant busts through the gates to the other side. A huge burning hand comes from behind them as the scream in burning pain and clasps around them, crushing their bones as blood flies out. It then drags them deep into the netherrealm as they scream helplessly.
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I worte this guy in a hurry since I have to go soon. He isn't done yet, but I'll try to finish him tonight.
Name:Anuran
Age:Unkown
Height:6'5
Weight:240
Eye Color:Electric blue (light) Flaming red (dark)
Hair Color:Silver (light) Red w/ black streaks (dark)
Occupation:Balance Gaurdian
Alignment:Nuetral
Disciplines:Unknown. Witnesses lable them only as Light and Dark. Elements of various styles, such as Kick Boxing can be seen.
Weapon(s):Seperated sword.(think Soul Calibur when joined together.) Sword can also be seperated into two smaller swords.
Weapon Name:Balance(together) Salvation/Suffering (apart)
Special Mastery:Control of opposing forces, time, and deminsion.
Family:None. He is the latest incarnation of the origional balance gaurdian, and has been around for eons.

Design:
Light-In this form Anuran imbodies all that is good and pure. He wears sapphire blue pants with gold symbols going down the side. He wears a gold sash around his waist which drapes by his side. He wears a second sash around his torso. It goes from the left shoulder down to the right hip. It also has a cut-off sleeves that rests around his bicep. The sash has white dragon symbol on it, in a spiral design facing out. He fights bare footed, with tape around his feet, and fists, like a kick boxer. His hair is tied back into a pony tail, leaving the front free, but keeping the majority out of the way. He also has tatoos on the left side of his body which encompass his whole left side.
Dark-In this form, Anarun imbodies all that is dark. He wears a cape, which is black on the outside and red on the inside. The cape extends out of his left shoulder blade, draping his left side. He wears a red sash which comes down from his right shoulder to his left hip. He wears black pants which have armour plating. He wears black boots, with skulls on the knees. His right forearm is cracked, revealing the essence of evil flowing inside. His red sash has a black dragon on it. He has tattoos on his right side which encompass his body. He also has a scar across his face, and small horns on his forehead.

Weapon: Anarun's weapon, Balance is a mighty sword. It is the perfect harmony of light and dark. However, the sword's current state is much weaker than what it once was, an ethereal blade, forged out of the depths of the Abyss. The origional gaurdian new that when his time had passed he would need to find a successor. As no mortal could handle the Balance blade in it's purest form, it had to be dumbed down, giving it a physical form. The blade would be tossed into the Abyss and would awaken when a new gaurdian was chosen. However, later on the demi-god Sensui found the blade. With one touch, he corupted the blade, over powering the light with darkness. As such, the blade created an second incarnation, the Malice Blade. The Balance blade, now in harmoney once again waits for a new gaurdian.

Specials:
Double Team: Anarun calls forth his other side and they surround the opponent. With the Balance Blade seperated into Salvation and Suffering Anarun unleashes a vicoius slash combo with the blades. It ends in a dual uppercut and a roundhouse kick from both versions, sending the opponent into the back ground, usually out of the stage.

Flashpoint: A move where Anarun charges a ball of energy and unleashes it into the air. It explodes with a brilliant glow and blinds the enemy, leaving them open for an attack.

Dual Impact: An espicialy usefull move. Anarun glows with a white nd black aurua, as he strikes, the opponet will suffer twice the damage, considering as both his light and dark versions are doing the same, one after the other. This move works as a damage amplifier for all of his attacks, including his specials.

Opposition blast: When a character shoots any projectile, Anarun shoots out a ball of opposing energy and sends the projectile back at the opponent.

Pulse Pulse:Anarun glows with a black and white spiraling energy. He shoots it into the ground, and creates a wave of energy which hits the opponent hard, instantly shooting them across the areana.

Demension Combo: Anarun bends reality around himself and slips out of site. He then appears behind his opponent, delivering an uppercut shooting them in the air. He disapears again and reappears in mid-air along side the opponet, and does an axe handle strike to their back shooting them to the ground. He then apears underneath them. As the opponet comes down he delivers a roundhouse kick shooting the person into the distance. These first three moves are automatic, however the move can be prolonged by reentering the command and pressing different attacks. If done right, this move can take atleast half an opponets life if done correctly, which is much harder than it seems.
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Glad you agree. To start off I'll put my newest character up.

This is a new character that I have created which hails from the same realm as slim3ddi3g's Keilienaten. He's not done yet and I'm only posting him up to get some thoughts on if I should continue or not.

Name: Kamon
Age: Unknown (Rumored to be a couple of years older then Keilienaten)
Eye Color: Glow with sapphire blue flames
Height: 6’4
Weight: 234 pounds
Alignment: Neutral (Serves Anubis)
Hair: Black goes down past shoulders.
Skin tone: Copper, (Greyish blue in his true form)
Disciplines: Egyptian Martial Arts, Judo, Jujitsu, Pyramid Staff.
Place of Origin: Realm of Rahankutat.
Current where-about: Hamunaptra (City of the Dead)
Power: Can control the Plagues as well as a hidden power unknown to all but Anubis and himself.
Status: Undead General in Anubis' army.
Quote: "Like the Plagues, my wrath is unstoppable."

Weapon Description: The Pyramid Staff is an other worldly weapon. It is given to a general in Anubis' army and can only be used properly by a warrior with exceptional skill. The staff is made of an unknown metal. However, its eerie glow in the night sky resembles the light of a dying soul, glowing with a brilliant sapphire blue. On each end there are three blades, which come to a point, resembling a pyramid on both sides of the staff. They also glow a brilliant blue. The staff itself has a golden luster and has a intertwined serpent stretching the length of the weapon. There is a slit down the middle of the weapon which allows it to be separated with an ethereal chain and used as a flail type weapon. It must be noted that with this transformation, Kamon's reach infinitely increases as the chain isn't made of solid material.

Design
1st outfit: Desert Ninja
Kamon's whole head is wrapped in a turban to keep his identity secret from those around him, allowing him to move freely through the masses. The turbine covers his mouth, nose and head leaving only the eyes open. He wears a white vest with no sleeves and is opened in the front. The vest is kept on by a blood red sash that's wrapped around his waist. He also wears white pants which look much like the Prince of Persia's pants. They are tucked into black boots which have golden shin guards. He wears white arm guards which have curved blades coming from the middle of the fist and extend six inches past the fists. The blades are dual edged for easy inward slashes as well as outward strikes. This whole outfit renders Kamon virtually invisible in the desert sun.
2nd Outfit: Undead General
Kaman’s true form. He wears a jackal headdress in honor of his god. It's cobalt black with sapphire blue eyes. (Think Anubis from Stargate the Movie). He still retains his wrist blades, as well as his arm guards. He now wears a robe around his waist which has shorts underneath. He wears an upper bracer on his left arm in the shape of a cobra. He wears two golden gauntlets. However, these aren't in one piece. The wrist piece which holds the gauntlet together has five small apendages which go down the knuckles and are connected to five slots which is where the fingers go. The guantlets basicaly outline the bones on the back side of the hand. The tips of these gauntlets have diamond etched claws which makes them suited for a very effective close range weapon. Kamon's headdress is opened, revealing his face when he's not in battle, however when he sinks into his stance, the helmet closes and he sees through the sapphire eyes of the Anubis helmet. His boots are made of an unbrakeable steel, said to be used for the weapons of Anubis' army.


Moves: Serpent's Bite: Kamon sperates his whip and turns it into its flail form. He then shoots one end of the staff at the opponent. The blades at the end open up as the head of the staff gets close. When it makes contact the blades snap shut around the opponent's chest causing massive damage and heavey blood loss as Kamon pulls back to retract the chain.

Demonic Sling: This move uses the flail function of the staff to catch an opponent's projectile in between the blades and then shoot it back at them with twice the power and twice the speed.

Clawed Frenzey: Kamon locks his helmet and his eyes flare up. His body glows an undead sapphire blue flame as he rushes the opponent with his hand blades burning blue and unleashes on them a swift ten hit slash combo.

Savage Assualt: Kamon unleashes a series of strikes with his hand claws. However, they stay right infront of him until twenty slashes are suspended in mid-air, right in front of Kamon. He then lifts his hand and points to the opponet. The suspended slashes suddenly shoot out with blazing speed cutting and lacerating the opponet on the pass by.

Wave:(An update to Jax's Multi Slam) Kamon shoots one end of his staff into the opponet. The blades dig in, just like in Serpent's Bite. However, instead of letting go, Kamon starts to toss the opponet around the stage multipile times while holding on to the other end of the staff.

Undead Wind:Kamon charges a ball of spectral energy in his cupped hands. He then releases it in a blast of ethereal wind, filled with the hungry souls of the Undead. If this move makes contact, after the initial blast, the left over souls latch on to the opponent slowly draining his health.

Flaming River:Kamon powers up his hand and shoots it into the ground, unleashing the river Styks into this demension. The river burns like fire as it courses through the stage and at the opponent, surounding them and then igniting them from the feet up.

Strength of the gods:Kamon channels the power of his master into his body. This boost of power will increase his attacks exponentially as well as repelensish his some of his life.

Skeletal Cyclone: Kamon surrounds his opponet in a violent cyclone. The cyclone then rips the skeletal remaints of dead warriors from the ground and fuses it into itself. The bone shards become deadly projectlies as they shoot at the opponent inside.


Fatalities:
Scarab Eruption: Kamon shoots his staff into the ground unleashing a shock wave. Seconds later the ground splits open and a sea of flesh eating Scarabs shoots out of the cracks. The scarabs spot their prey, being the opponent and rush towards him. The opponet tries to flee, but it's too late. The scarabs overrun him and dig into the flesh. You can see the scarabs running around underneath his skin. The opponet screams in agony as blood drips out of his pores. Scarabs start pouring out og his mouth and on to the surface of his body. Soon the opponent is coverd in scarabs and then you hear a sickening crunch. The scarbs retreat, only leaving a hallowed out corpse, filled with holes and only parts of their bones.

Final Dawn: Kamon uses his power to cast the final plauge. He eclipses the sky. The fading light focuses on the opponet as the shadow envelopes everything. As soon as the shadow touches the opponet, he is instantly engulfed in flames. His skin melts, his organs rupture, his muscles burn. He bleeds uncontrolabley. The sky turns black and a cinder grey as the clouds are set on fire. A meteor storm starts and on of the meteors comes down on the victim. On impact the remaints of the opponents disintegrate in a cloud of blood and fire. As a visual flare, just to show the sope of this, the camera pulls back out of the areana showing the undead army of Anubis, numbered in the billions swarming the surrounding landscape, all summound by Kamon.

Story:
As a young boy, Kamon belonged to a well off family, which served under the pharoah Akhenaten. His father was a high priest and grand counceler to the paroah. As a young child, Kamon was a free spirit. He always ran off on adventures and caused mischief. But the kind hearted pharoah would only dismiss this as childs play. As Kamon grew older, he became intreseted in the art of combat. He wished to join the pharoah's mighty army. His natural ability to fight made him one of the top candidates for the position of General in the pharoahs army. His prefered styles were anything with short strong strikes and take downs. He learned the anatomy of the human body and therefore increased his knowledge of combat by studying the affects of pressure points and critical hits in important zones on the human body. His prefered weapon was the bladed staff. It's long reach and twin blades on both sides, made it ideal for long range and short range combat. As the years went on, Kamon's training increased as well as his skills. At the young age of 200 he became General in the pharoah's army. He lead them to countless victories against a rival empire. Kamon had a good heart, and instead of finishing off his opponents, he recruited them into his army, and made took rival empires under one rule. The pharoah's kind heart and Kamon's military expertiese allowed the empire to flurish, eventually encompassing the entire realm. However, their were still pockets of terrorists who threatened to break the ties of the empire and throw it into chaos. Among these terrorists, was the former general of Akhenaten's army, Sekhmet. He always held an ever deepening hatred for the pharoah's new general after being bested in combat, and loosing his right eye, to Kamon. His ties to the underground terrorists called, The Eyes of Ra. They were called so, because before a new member could be sworn in to the faction, he had to gouge out one of his eyes and replace it with a golden one, modeled after the Eye of Ra. Sekhmet developed a plan to get rid of Kamon and establish his rightful place at Akhenaten's side. In the fallowing weeks, their have been a number of strange disappearnces in the capital city. The officals believed that the Eyes of Ra terrorist faction was gathering hostages, for an upcoming ransom demand. Knowing that the pharoah would not want any harm to fall on his subjects, it made him an easey target. The officials reported to Kamon, telling him that they have uncovered the location of the hostages. It was at Scorpion's Gorge at the Desert's Bones, a rocky wasteland devoid of all life. Kamon lead a small task force to retrive the hostages. As his forces got closer, they were ambushed by a guerilla attack. Kamon was the only one who survived. Filled with anger at the death of his comrades, Kamon rushed towards the location. As he got their he witnessed a horryfic sight. The so called hostages where skinned and put on pikes as markers of the terrorist factions. The fouls smell of death filled the gorge as rotting flesh decomposed in the heat of the sun. Within minutes the Eyes of Ra jumped out of numerous outcroppings in the gorge, surrounding Kamon. Against all odds, Kamon, fueled with rage abondoned all honor and dignety and slaughtered the terroist factions. The caves of the gorge ran red with the blood of his enemies. He, did not come out unscathed however. His injuries severe, he knew he wouldn't be able to return. As Kamon wandered through the gorge, his life coming to an end he said his final prayer."Ne reku, no ham ne kewam ishtan amshare. Ti setzu ki kon aruer, no remier de rue karistar." "As I pass through the valley of darkness, I'm not afraid. And with my dying breath I am at peace." Kamon collapses and dies in the gorge. However, as his spirit passes into the next world, he is met by the death god Anubis himself. Anubis tells him, that Kamon's life was cut short. His valor has no meaning, he was decived and therefore threw his life away by surrendering to hatred. Anubis tells Kamon that he has a strong spirit and great potential. If Kamon agrees to a pact, he will be returned to the world of the living, to avange his death, and possibley save the lives of many others. In exchange, he turns over his soul to Anubis and becomes his general. Kamon agrees to the pact and is instantly returned to his body. He feels a new sense of purpose, and a new power growing inside. Anubis tells him that he has been bestowed with tremendous power. He can tear apart the heavens and bring forth the Wave of Drakness, Anubis' army. In exchange, he gives up almost all of his free will to Anubis after his revenge is complete, and honor restored. Kamon returns to his beloved city in disguise. He finds out that Sekhmet has once again become general. As he searches for his traitor he runs into the young princess Kielienaten, who doesn't recognise Kamon at all. Kamon's new gift lets him see a darkness growing inside of her but says nothing. Kamon finally corner's Sekhmet in his chamber. Before Sekhmet can react to his ressurected rival his blood is spilled on the walls, and entrails littered all over the room. As his opponent dies, Kamon can feel his free will being torn from his body. He is now the bringer of death, and weilder of plagues under the command of Anubis. His orders are simple, increase the army of Anubis, and crush all who stand before him. In the upcoming years Kamon would lay siege to what he helped build, as Anubis' army swept the realm. the pharoah and the queen are dead, and the empire has all but fallen into chaos. Keilienaten rules mercylessly, and the ranks of the Undead increase. Soon they will be unleashed like a plague on all the realms, ending the existance of the second race of humanity, just like they did eons ago, with Kamon leading the charge, from his own throne at the city of Hamunaptra a dark time will fall to the human race.


SmokeNc-017, WOW! That's all that can come out of my mouth. WOW! This story and plot is amazing. I loved it. COngratulations. MAN, I;m still amazed. I really love this. Maybe I can write a seperate story with these characters. If you want. Or we can do it. I am-- WOW. "applauds" Tell me what you think?

N sorry, i just happened to read it.
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08/13/2004 07:45 PM (UTC)
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TomTaz Wrote:


Tai Standard Outfit

Tai Alternate Outfit

Click the links for her look.

Stage...hmmm.
what links?
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rehab is for quitters...

08/13/2004 08:27 PM (UTC)
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Name: Ahmose-saneit the scarab assassin
Age: unknown
Sex: male
Height: 6’2”
Weight: 250 lbs

Fighting styles:
Ancient Egyptian arts
Scarab (custom style)- he focuses on many low attacks and gets on his hands a lot to kick the opponent. This isn’t like capoera because he isn’t spinning around it is just a swift kick and he is back on his feet. Not what you would call a normal style (like drunken master) and he might get down on all fours bent low to the ground and scuttle around the opponent. Also this style focuses on more on leg attacks and arm support.
Weapon style: custom made gauntlets, a back plate, and shin-guards that have blades inside them and have a likeness of a scarab. When chosen 3 smaller blades spring out from each side of the gauntlets and two longer ones from the front to make it seem like the scarab’s legs and pincer. The back plate springs out with about 10 blades going out in a semicircle upwards and the three middle ones are the longest. The shin guards have some spikes drive out forward in two rows that he uses to kick with.

Specials:
Teleport attack- his body is sort of replaced by thousands of scarabs (or maybe sand if the scarab idea don’t work) and he disappears into the ground and can be different depending on what you press
A.uppercut- he appears under the opponent and uppercuts them making them do a backflip.
B. tornado kick- he appears above and away from the opponent. When appearing he is in a kick stance and spinning like a spiral and kicks them.
deadly scarab- basically a projectile where he throws it by putting his arm out in front of him and his body spins to make his arm go down, around, over his head, and then he throws it (kinda like jin kazamas throw in tekken 4 but he throws something). When the scarab comes in contact with the person it runs around their body and blood comes out for about 1 second like quan chi’s skull which is valuable time to attack with.

theres mine so far...still workin
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"Retirement my ass!"

08/14/2004 05:41 AM (UTC)
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Sub-Zero315: hehe(had forgotten those)..sorry. Actually in the orginal posting of this character, there were links to her pics in the Fan Art section. I actually didn't want them here, because some people, who don't know about bumping might reply to said pics and get them closed. She's still in the Fan Art section though under my name if you want to see her. And thanks for pointing that out for me, I'll remove that part from the post.

Smoke: NICE character so far. Hope you come up with those moves soon!
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08/15/2004 07:40 PM (UTC)
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Name:Sensui
Age:42,000 (appears to be only eighteen)
Height:6'3
Weight:187 lbs
Eye color: Red with green snake slits
Hair color:Red with blonde streaks.Spiked up
Race:Demi-god/demon
Alliance:Pure evil
Disciplines:Bui Zui Xuan Quan, Wu Shi Kempo, Judo, Copiara, Twin lava scimitars, lava cat claws
Special intrest:Tsunami (demi-goddess of water)
Elemental Mastery(s):Fire, Soul control, lava, negitivity
Domain:Tenth Level of the Netherealm, Chaos Sanctuary
Quote:"Fire has no equall.My fury will consume all!"

Design:Since Sensui is the demi-god of fire and his appearance is young he has a punk look. His hair, as stated before is spiked up, not in a mohawk but like Jacky's from VF. His eybrows burn with a white flame flame. He has an earing on his left ear. He has a soul patch goat-t and he also has fangs. His final facial detail is a scare that goes across his face.
He fights shirtless. His back is completely covered in a giant tatto which also reaches to his front. His skin is tan with a redish glow. His forearms have gold bracers with black cloth. His fists have orange "cracks" and are on fire.
He wears half red, half black pants with twin dragons of opposite colors on the side. His pants tuck into his boots. The boots have knee gaurds which are shaped like skulls. The shingaurds are made to look like ribs that reach to the back and wrap around on his calves.
He wears two side plates on his hips which go up just below his ribs and show off his abs. A gold sash is wrapped around the bottom of his waist.

Moves:
High Riser Hell Kick:Sensui uses his power of soul manipulation to toss the opponet into the air. Once in the air Sensui flies at them ingulfed in flames, kicking them in the chest, setting them on fire and finishes them of with a spinning axe kick in mid-air sending them to the ground like a blazing meteor.

RyoKoshen:Sensui creates a fire bomb and shoots it into the ground. The bomb causes the ground to shatter releasing magma and fissure flows to ingulf the opponet.

Soul abduction. Sensui breifly tears the soul out of his opponets body and grips it with his hands. He sets the soul on fire and shoots it back into the opponet setting them on fire.

Magma blast: Much like Sub-Zero's ice blast except not only does it immoblize the opponet but it also does damage. Sensui launches a ball of molten magma at his opponet. It incases the opponet in a cacoon of fresh rock, scorching their body inside. Sensui can is free to either attack the opponet or let the blast drain their life away.

Ground Sicle:Sensui does a ground sweep which creates a wave of fire to shoot at his opponet.

Spectral shift: Sensui takes out his own soul out of his body. His body becomes ice cold. The player can now control the soul of Sensui. In this form, anytime Sensui does damage to his opponet, his attacks become exponentialy stronger and regenerate his health. However, if the opponet manages to attack Sensuis material body Sensui will automatically die.

Scimitar Spectral Wave: Sensui molds two scimitars out lava which comes from the cracks on his fists. He then focuses his spectral arua and two X shaped waves of spectral energy at his opponet. The first wave breaks the persons gaurd, the second ingulfs them with spectral fire.
Soul Chain:Sensui uses his power of soul manipulation to bind the opponet with a chain made from their own soul.
Dark gate: Senui uses the energy from the his dark power open a gateway which he steps through, alowing him to warp any where he pleases.
Darkness Cannon: Sensui uses the power of negativeity to shoot out a blast of pure evil at his opponet. This is much like Hatsuma's Extinguished Humanity, only Sensui isn't phased by it.
Crimson tear: Sensui cuts his arm open, allowing it to bleed. He then launches the blood at his opponet marking them with it. It then combusts and sets the opponet on fire.
Dark Lightning inferno:Sensui's hands glow black as the channel pure evil, and malice. His hands start to spark, as the energy begins to extend from his forearms and into the center of his palms he then releases the energy in the form of a giant streak of black lightning at his opponet.
Demonic tempest:Sensui uses his super speed, along with his lave scimitars and charges at the opponet. He first does an 8 hit ground combo, then uppercuts the person in the air and fallows them up there. He then uses both scimitars as helicopter blade and slices down verticaly in a series of 13 dedly rotations. The last one igniting the opponet in fire, spectral, and dark flames as they hit the ground. He then does a back flip and lands on the ground with one foot in the air.
Fatality:
Dragon of lost souls: Sensui charges his fist with the energy that he channels from the Tenth Level of the Netherealm. The energy's glow is first green and then turns black because of all the malice and hatered that dwells on that level. Sensui then launches the energy from a plam blast at his opponet. The energy morphs into the shape of a devil dragon, roaring as it approaches the opponent. It quickly intagles itself around the opponet and stares at them for a split second. Then it grows to enormous size as it lurches back and suddenly shoots into the opponets mouth, at this point the dragon is twenty feet long, and all of it goes inside. The opponet is then dazed and staggers back and forth. Then their body begins to pulseate. Green and black lightening courses on the surface of their body. Blood starts to trickle out of theri mouth, nose, eyes, and ears. The opponet starts screaming as spectral light shines out of their eyes and mouth. Their chest beggins to swell and something is clearly growing inside. All of a sudden the dragon rips out of their chest cavity with their soul in its mouth. The opponet screams in agony as the dragons full length starts to sprout out of a fountain of blood which used to be the opponets chest. The opponet falls to his knees with their inerds falling all over the floor. The dragon eats the opponets souls and returns back into Sensuis fist. Sensui then glows with a green flame from the newly aquired soul. The opponets chest, now ripped to shreds is completely hallow as he is left their, dead on his knees. Fatality
Eternal Damnation:Sensui creats a pentagram of fire around the opponet. The flames go inside the opponets mouth and set them on fire internaly. However they do not die. Instead they are transported to Sensuis Chaos Sanctuary where they are instanly hung from a cross. Sensui appears in front of them and puts his hand on their chest and burns another pentagram onto their body and walks away. The opponet is then instantly engulfed in flames on the cross. Fire shoots out of their mouth and their stomach as the demonic flames eat away at their flesh. The complete midsection is eaten away completel leaving only the spine, and other organs that fall in place of where the stomach once was. The opponet is still alive as now their blood ignites on fire and they are a hanging torch. The opponet never dies as they are left there to burn for all eternity for Sensuis amusement.

Update: Level Design:Chaos Sanctuary The chaos Sanctuary is a demonic structure which is located on the final level of the Netherealm, Level 10. It is located on an island in the middle of the River of Fire. There is no way of of this island by land. The sanctuary is built in the shape of a demonic cross. In the center is a flaming pentagram used for the execution of those who aren't fit for an after life. There is no roof to this place so fair balls come crashing in constantly. Souls are chained to horrific torture devices. Some are put into cages which are lowered slowly into lava pits others are torn to pieces by giant gears. Fountains of blood run down the walls of the Chaos Sanctuary. For those who are sent here, death would be a release. There are half eaten corpses impaled on spikes from walls which are always bleeding. Pools of flaming blood are everywhere, they feed the oni who act as the gaurds in these structure. Screams fill the air. Most of the sanctuary is shrowded in darkness only flashes of sillohutes on walls show some of the victims here. Hazards:There are hotspots for fire ball strikes all over the floor. The walls have jets of flames shooting out of them. Parts of the floor collapse to pools of lave below. Stage Weapon:Malice Blade The Malice Blade is a gaint two handed sword which has a serated blade. The blade has a black luster which which is a sign of pure evil. The blade constantly courses with evil lightning. The hilt of the sword is made of bones from the strongest oni. The arm gaurd is made of a demonic metal which is the materialization of evil and malice of all those who were tortured in the Chaos Sanctuary. It is directly extracted from their soul. The blade deals massive damage, in exchange for striking speed. It's power move is called Curtain of Sarrow. The blade is smashed against the ground and a wall of dark energy is shoot at the opponet, tearing up the areana floor.
Story: Sensui was once a rightouse demi-god. He was held in high regard by the Elder Gods and was thought to be the succeesor to the postion of Earth Gaurdian. His only flaw was that he enjoyed the thrill of killing and the sight of blood. As he grew, he became more arrogant and careless. He eventually refused the position of Earth Gaurdian for a greater thirst, the thirst for power. By dishonoring the Elder Gods, he was banished to Earth. Stripped of his rank and nobility, Sensui was enraged and decided to destroy the human race. He slaughtered thousands, innocent and guilty alike. The constant carnage fed his hunger and twisted his mind. He loved every moment of it. His mastery of fire and the human spirit had left hundreds of graveyards in his path. He had no mercy or remorse for his actions. He kept killing because it made him feel superior. Young women and children were decapitated or hung on spikes. The Elder Gods feared of what they unleashed on Earth. Sensui was exiled once more, only this time, he was sent to the tenth and final level of the Netherealm. This however didn't side track Sensui from his mission. He was sent to the Chaos Sanctuary for all eternity. The Elder Gods believed that keeping him in insane tourment would eventually break him. It took little time for Sensui to establish dominance over the Chaos Sanctuary and all of its surroundings. He eventually ate the soul of Lucifer and became the most feared demi-god in existence. He killed any oni who got in his way and devoured souls to increase his power. Sensui knew of the Mortal Kombat tournamet. His power wasn't enough to shatter the barrier between realms to escape on his own. However the time of the tournamet would weaken the realms creating possibilities for numerous break outs. He heard of the great Dragon King. Supposedly he was the most feared ruler of all realms. Sensui made it his goal to spill the Dragon King's blood on his hands and eat his soul. By doing so he would achieve ultimate power. This power would let him cross between realms and challange the Elder Gods themselves. Killing them would allow him to bring forth the Apacolypse and complete the merger between the realms. Along with an Army of S type oni and his newly acquired general Hatsuma, the Black Chaos Ninja, should Sensui succeed there will be no realm that is safe from the Crimson Wave.
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08/15/2004 07:44 PM (UTC)
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Character Name: Sabre

Age: 262 years

Height: 6"5

Weight: 275 lbs

Sex: Male

Alignment: Evil

BloodType: Dragon

Weapon: Dual Thrice Dragon(Triple Bladed Dagger)

Fighting Styles:Dragon,Hapkido

Weapon Styles:Thrice Dragon(Triple Bladed Dagger)

Arena: Ice Dragon Temple,a temple high in the mountains,only known by the Ice Dragon race or allys.Ice surrounding the arena,a giant cave is held there,rumoured to be where the legendary and only existing Ice Dragon alive today,pillars are surrounding the arena with a path of pillars leading to the cave with unknown writing on them.
Arena Weapon: Dragon Sword,a legendary sword used only by the allys of the rare Ice Dragons,placed in the middle of the Ice Dragon Temple,infront of a cave.

Arena Fatality: The opponent is kicked in front of the cave,a loud roaring sound is heard as the opponent scrambles to his feet,the noise eventually stops as the opponent begins to walk away yelling at Sabre.As the opponent is walking away a dragons head appears behind him and grabs him in his mouth,the dragon violenty swings his head around then stops,the opponent is seen laying in his mouth,almost all in blood,as the dragon freezes him then bites him clean in half.The dragons then proceeds back into the cave.

Arena Death Trap: The opponent is kicked off of the mountain,falling over 50 feet onto a bed of ice spikes.

Arena Interaction:The pillars can be destroyed and the opponent kicked into walls cause ice shards to fall causing minimal damage,but stunning them.

Special Moves1: Sabre grabs opponent by the throat,lifts them,choking them and violenty throws his opponent across the arena.

2: Takes out the Thrice Dragon and throws them at the opponent.

3: Looks at opponent and quickly dashes behind them,with the opponent not knowing where he is,sort of like a teleport.

4:Grabs opponent flips them upside down and drives their head into the ground in one quick motion.(aka Tombstone.)

Fatality1: Sabre stands infront of his opponent,you can hear him saying something to them but cant make it out,he crosses his arms and lets out a scream,punching the opponent over 20 times in less then ten seconds(think brutality),he then stands infront of the victim and reveals a thrice dragon in each hand,while the opponent slowly falls apart.

Fatality2: Sabre grabs the opponents head and tears it off,he then throws the head up high in the air as he slices the opponents arms and legs with the thrice dragon,does his victory pose with the thrice dragon in the air as the head falls onto the blade.Fatality.

Story: Sabre,once thought to be nothing more then a myth,a legendary ice breathing dragon,only known as the protector of a castle once called Danaria.He had been used only to keep out invaders with his icy powers.

The story goes that once,long ago,after years of being abused by the leaders of Danaria,the legend snapped and destroyed the whole castle unleashing a vicious attack freezing and killing everything in its path.

After years of regaining his strength Sabre set his sites on the earthrealm.But the thunder god Raiden had learned of this attack and readied himself for the battle of his life realizing that Sabre was much more than just a myth.

The two fought furiously Sabre with his ice and Raiden with the power of lightning,Raiden power of lightning came out on top in the end,but not without a fight.When the fight was over Sabre collapsed into a forest and stayed there.

After over 20 years of secretly searching,the sorceror Shang Tsung had finally found what he had been searching for,the legendary Sabre.Tsung had healed the injured dragons wounds trying to tame him,Tsung soon found out that this could not be done.

Refusing to except it,Tsung had come up with an alternative,as he one night,while the legendary creature was sleeping,he turned his body into a humans.

Sabre woke up the next morning looking for Tsung relizing what he had done to him.When he found the sorceror he was near killing him before he explained the advantages of his new form to him,his strength being increased,his speed being increased,at a cost,he could now never use his ice powers ever again.

Sabre with his new found strength is now out for revenge against the thunder god,Raiden.

Character Description: Ninja type mask,blue skin,similar to some ninja's,but also completely different.Alot is unknown about his clothes,but the fact that it was all provided by Shang Tsung himself.However the mask,that noone knows about except Sabre himself,not even Tsung,his savior has any idea.But it is believed to be built right into to his body and that he cannot survive wtihout it.
Character's Signature Quote: "Let God have Mercy,for I shall not."
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