Ok here is mine.

Name- Quake
Sex- m
Eyes- brown
Height- 6'1
Weight- 200 pounds
Outfit- brown luin kuei ninja suit
Styles- Luin Kuei, Ninjitsu, Hapkido
Weapon- Whip
Special Moves- Earthquake(oppoent becomes unable to move for a short time), Ground blast- (earth rises up from the ground, damaging the opponent).
Fatalities- Gaia smasher( Quake forms two small rock-walls near the opponent. They smash together, with the opponent right in the middle, and his head flys off and onto the floor in a bloody heap.), Rock Impaler- (Quake Uppercuts the opponent, and while the opponent is in the air, he forms a sharp rock on the ground. The opponent falls onto it, impaleing themself.)

Story- 10000 years ago, Quake was the founder of the Luin Kuei in outworld. He had mastered the powers of earth, and began teaching his fighting skills to other pupils. Then the 4th Mortal Kombat tornament had arrived in outworld. Shang Tsung saw the uprising power of the Luin Kuei, and told Quake to fight in the tornament and win, or Tsung would destroy the Luin Kuei. Quake entered the tornament, only to lose to Shang Tsungs previous Champion, Goro. He fled the tornament, seeing what happent to all who lost in the tornament, and told his people to escape into Earthrealm, where they would be safe. The luin Kuei did so, but Quake was captured by Shang Tsung and killed. Before he died, he intrusted the dragon amulet to his most efficient pupil. The Luin Kuei would live on, in Earthrealm.

ok itz been my dream to do this

name:CJ (me)
natinality:American!
looks:ermac style suit w/o mask anime style blond hair
fighting styles:ninjitsu,shotgun,hand gun.
sex:male
alinment?sp?:good


bio:
umm he is a ninja with guns... im to lazy to write it all now so ill go back and forth reporting on the rest of his bio.

I was just thinking of a character who would have a special move that kicked the opponent in the crotch three times in one quick motion. lol i dont know why but it seemed original to me. Or how about When subzero dies he can pull of his mask and have a skull too, but he breaths ice on the opponent and deep freezes them.

Character Name: Keilienaten

Age: Very Old (but looks 24)

Height: 5’7

Weight: 110 lbs

Sex: Female

Alignment: Evil

BloodType: Unknown

Weapon: Two Egyptian Falcon Knives

Fighting Styles:1 Lua

Fighting Styles: 2 Koshi Mawari

Arena: The Tomb

Arena Weapon: Anubi’s Spear: It’s very long, thick, and shoots huge white fireballs.

Arena Fatality: Pit of Souls: There’s a strong earthquake causing the ground to open
under losing opponent. He/She will fall but will hang on the edge trying
to pull him/herself up. In the pit there are millions of burning souls,
trying to pull him/her down. The winner will stomp on loser’s hands
making him/her lose grip and fall into the pit. The burning souls rip
him/her apart before they burn to ashes.

Arena Death Trap: The Tomb has many different rooms where opponents can be knocked
through. In every room there are four huge Anubis statues, very hard to
even be pushed. These statues prevents from the beetle-like flesh
eating critters from entering. What every room also has are these
critters all over the room, and background. Once a statue is knocked
down, the critters invade that section. Now, and opponent can be
pushed unto the swarm of the beetle-like critters devouring them. Winner must stay in between the perimeters from the three remaining Anubis statues, or he/she will also get eaten.

Arena Interaction: There’s lots of interactions in The Tomb. There’s always earthquakes, causing the ground to crack open. You start where Pharaoh’s are
mummified. They can be knocked over, but then a poison gas is released, slowly killing both opponents. There’s two more rooms you
can knock an opponent. One is full of traps and weapons. Here you can
be harmed with spikes that come out from the ground, arrows that shoot
from the walls. Another room is the treasure room. You can used huge gold things to throw at opponent, but if you pick up the wrong thing, more poisonous gas is released. The last section an opponent is knocked through is the underground. You have to do this once the
quake has cracked the ground big enough to fit through. Down here
is the only way you can do the Stage Fatality. There’s also no death
traps down here.




Special Moves 1: Fireball: She creates a basketball size fireball and tosses it roughly.

2. Double Fireball: She shoots two basketball fireballs(one after another)
3: Slow Fireball: She makes the same basketball sized fireball, but this
one spins around fast. She doesn’t toss it. She just lets it go, and even
though it’s spins fast, the fireball floats towards the opponent very slow. Slower than a turtle. This fireball comes handy, you can leave three fireballs, do a combo, and then knock opponent unto one of these, and they’ll ricochet to the other two fireballs, then shoot a regular fireball, and continue your combo juggling opponent in air.

4. Slam Dunk Fireball: She leaps up in the air, forming a fireball, and once she hits the ground, she slams the fireball on the ground, causing a huge explosion around and over her.

5. Fire Uppercut: She does a flying flaming uppercut.

6: Teleport: She just teleports to another side of the battleground.

7: Teleport Stab: She teleports behind opponent and stabs him/her
repeatedly.

8: Tornado Kick: It’s similar to the bicycle kick, but swirls around
upwards while kicking opponent. The hard fall also takes good
damage from opponent.

9: Energy Theft: She grabs opponent, and sucks some energy away to
regain some of her loss of energy.

Fatality1: An Egyptian Surgery: She slices his/her throat. He/she falls to his/her
knees. She kicks them, so he/she falls on their
back. She summersaults, landing on his/her stomach and pinning their hands on the ground
with her knives. She then jams her entire hand
through opponents mouth, as they scream in agony, and pulls out the head’s inner organs(brains and attached the eyes, vocal cord, and the tongue)

Fatality2: Getting Rid of the Old: She holds his/her head tight, and starts to french
kiss them. [Male opponents respond back happily, but Females try to fight her off] She slowly pulls her head away sucking out the opponent’s life. The opponent starts to get old. Once she’s done, she releases opponent, leaving him as a very old weak man/woman. Still holding opponent, she poses happily. The she looks at opponent, and frowns. She raises the old opponent off of the ground, by the neck. She charges up fire from the same hand she holds the opponent, and fires. The fireball blows the head away, but then the fireball slowly slides and blows up the rest of the body, from the chest down.

Hari Kari: Poison Bite: Keilienaten is a sore loser, and has always hated to ever be killed off by winning opponent. She has her own suicide plan, of course, if she does it quick enough.
She pushes winning opponent away, and magically appears a cobra around her neck. The snake wraps around her neck, biting her face repeatedly. The cobra releases her neck. She’ll fall to the ground puking blood and vomit. She turns different colors, then she’s left looking like a bulimic person. She just drops dead on her blood and vomit.
The cobra wants to attack winning opponent, but he/she stomps on the snake’s head.

Story: Keilienaten has warped through a portal no one, not even the Dragon King, knows it’s open. After the Dragon King was reborn, lots of portals and gates were opened, and the Elder Gods immediately chose warriors to guard them. The Elders were too blind to see the invisible portal that leads to a world much stronger. It’s a world just like the Egyptian, but with powers never witnessed that can destroy an Elder God and powerful sorcerers. This place is called Rahankatut.
Keilienaten is said to be daughter of Pharaoh Akhenaten and Nefertiti, but was raised by the Goddess Isis. She was brought up to serve and protect those who are weak. The only thing was that Keilienaten has grown with an evil mind. She cares for no one but herself. She had murdered her guardian, Isis, and claimed her position as Goddess. She then took her own parents life, and took over the entire Egyptian Realm, Rahankatut For the last thousands of years, she has ruled this land, always wanting more. She has now found the portal that warps through her world and the Outworld opened. Something she has been waiting for a long time. Always planning an invasion on Outworld, and now that the portal is open, Keilienaten has gathered her troops, but waits for the perfect moment to attack.
First, she travels through the portal along with one of her guards, Anubis, to check out the alien Realm to her. In Outworld, she has aligned with the Dragon King to destroy the Earth warriors. She will help the Dragon King to the end, and secretly plans on bringing him down right after, and sneak her clan through the secret portal, and kill all of Dragon King’s minions, and those who get on their way, to claim Outworld as her own. After that, it’ll be easier for her to travel through different portals, and out rule other realms, and become Queen of all that is living and the non-living.

Character Description: She has a very slim and sexy body. Her look is almost like the girl on
“The Mummy Returns”. She has the same small gold skirt, and a gold top. She has smooth long hair, with bits of golden locks. She has golden high heels that have thick golden laces wrapped around her thick juicy legs. She has lots of thin golden bracelets on both hands. Her makeup is astonishing, and makes her look even sexier. [I love Egyptian chicks]

Character's Signature Quote: “I curse all who dare discover me!”

Character Name: Celestial

Age: 500, 000-years-old

Height: 5’9

Weight: 150lbs

Sex: Male

Alignment: Neutral

BloodType: Unknown but loves drinking it

Weapon: Ji (Halberd)

Fighting Styles:1 Taijiquan

Fighting Styles: 2 Long Fist

Character Description:
Being a vampire, he has the same image as the old Vampire in “Underworld. He’s dressed all in satin black with a silver belt. He has long black hair, huge blood red eyes, paled ass face, and long sharp teeth. Like Nitara, he also has wings, but he has them much bigger. When he spreads them, they extend like the Creeper in “Jeepers Creepers”. He is also Chinese. His alternate costume is of an ancient Chinese Emperor. He was an Emperor long time ago.

Arena:
Celestial’s Temple (ancient Chinese Temple)
It’s a very neat stage. It looks like the ancient Chinese Temple from the dynasty era, but it also has the image of Dacula’s castle. It has the horrific, yet some beauty.

Arena Weapon:
Chut Gieh (Seven Sectional Chain)

Arena Fatality:
This Stage fatality can be done in either room, or in the outside arena. Losing opponent is knocked through the ground, and fall into a dark pit. The moon shines in, as the opponent is getting up. He/she had fallen into a cave of filled with a lake of blood. Soon, we hear loud screeches and hisses. In matter of seconds, female vampires, attack opponent, and feast on his/her blood. They tear him apart as the devour his/her blood.

Arena Death Trap:
There are two different death traps in this stage, and it’s outside in the fighting arena.
ONE: since Vampire’s worst enemies are chained up around the battleground, when the full moon is revealed these humans will turn into werewolves. The will try to get free, but can’t. If a fighter is near, they will try to grab him/her, or just scratch them, or just bite. If the opponent(s) is way too close, the wolf will grab opponent and begin to tear him apart.
TWO: An opponent can also be knocked through the brick wall from the arena, and have them fall to pile of huge rocks. Opponent will fall about fifty feet and after hitting the rocks hard, they will simply spit out their inner organs.

Arena Interaction:
The battle begins inside the temple. It’s in a huge room where masked parties are held. Then opponents can be knocked to another room where people prepare before battle. The last portion of the stage is the fighting arena. There are people chained up on along the walls of every corner on the battleground. Since the skies are always covered in huge dark clouds, and it rains, the area is safe for the fighters. When the clouds fade, revealing the full moon, the chained-up people transform into huge wolves. They are dangerous if a fighter gets nearby. They can scratch anyone with there huge claws. The good thing is that the clouds will cover up and uncover the full moon, torturing the beasts, as they transform back and forth.


Special Moves 1: Spark Ball – He throws a ball of electric sparks stunning the opponent for a while. This
will slam opponent hard or through walls.

Special Moves 2: Spark Slam – He shoots a flow of energy spark at opponent and lifts him off the ground,
And them slams them to the ground.

Special Moves 3: Hypnotize - He flashes a huge bright light from his eyes, totally hypnotizing opponent.
This is good to have opponent just standing there doing nothing. He can
run do a combo.

Special Moves 4: Self Brutality – This is another cool move, but can only be done after opponent has been
hypnotized. He makes opponent beat him/herself with their own
weapon.

Special Moves 5: Fly - He spreads his wings and flies around arena.

Special Moves 6: Glide Attack - This is an AIR MOVE. He glides down, grabs opponent and slams them
to the ground.

Special Moves 7: Glide Kick – Another air move. He glides down kicking opponent. Like a bicycle kick.

Special Moves 8: Invisibility – He has the power to make himself invisible.

Special Moves 9: Orb – He can orb anywhere around the battleground.

Fatality1: Eat You Alive -
Celestial hypnotizes him/her, and mockingly dances around with them. Once slowly spinning them, opponent levitates off the ground, and floats in mid air. Smiling, Celestial also levitates and meets opponent. He caresses his/her face. He then floats back two feet away from opponent. Celestial hisses loudly, and spreads his huge wings. His mouth gets huge, as all the teeth get longer and sharper. Celestial leaps on opponent and jams his teeth on their head. He bites off the whole top portion of the cranium, revealing his/her brains. He spits the cranium to the ground, and begins to feast upon the brain. Opponent had already come out of hypnotism and is screaming in agony.
Celestial looks up, covered in brain crumbs, and full of blood all over his face. He hisses, and continues to eat. He then rips what’s left of the brains, and lets the opponent’s dead body drop to the ground. He continues floating, and eating.

Fatality2: Ripping Cage –
Celestial mockingly dances around, levitating himself. He floats over opponent, and then glides down, behind him/her. Still mocking, he bows down, smiling at camera. He then hisses again, and just like the first fatality, his mouth gets bigger, and teeth longer. He then grows huge claws on his hands. He stabs them on opponent’s back. He stabs his both hands, and begins to twirl around the opponent’s rib cage. A loud snap is heard, and then Celestial rips out the entire rib cage from the opponent, and the organs inside the cage are still intact. The rib cage-less body falls, while Celestial holds up the rib cage up, screeching horribly. The organs begin to fall. Celestial slams the rib cage on opponents head, breaking both head and cage into pieces. Celestial picks up the heart and start squeeze it over his head, drinking the blood that drips on his face.

Hari Kari: Heart at Stake-
Not like he’s ever thinking of committing suicide, but if her ever did, this is what he would definitely do to die
quick. He’ll take out a wooden stake, and jam it right through his heart. His skin peels off, then his inner
muscles, and organs burn away, and then hw just turns to ashes.

Story:
Celestial comes from way back, even before Mortal Kombat was ever born. Celestial was known to be the
be the best ruling Emperor in the Western part of China, during the dynasty wars. He’s real name is Tai
Khan Nuan. He led his troops to destroy a powerful king known as The Dragon King. It took years of battle,
but in the end, they locked the beast inside an egg , that could only be awaken by another beast. They
placed the egg inside a cave surrounded by lava, so no one could ever go in. Everything was at peace for
many years, until one night, when Celestial was having a party for his people, they were attacked by
creatures they have never encountered. It turned out to be Dracula and his band of female Vampires. His
entire town was destroyed, and the vampires feasted upon everyone wiping out Tai’s people. Dracula and
the vampresses left.
The vampires were just hungry, and had gone out to feed.
Tai was left dying, bleeding tremendously. A female Vampire, Nitara, had stayed behind. She was the only
Vampire who hadn’t killed anyone. She found a dying Tai, and was going to kill him to end his suffering, but
Had a change of heart, and instead fed him with her blood, turning him into a vampire. They joined as an
alignment to kill Dracula. After a long battle, they destroyed the Vampire, and Tai became Celestial, the Lord
of the Vampires. Through out the years, they have learn to feed on animals, instead of humans.
Celestial made Nitara his bride, and have had many children.
Celestial and his Vampresses are neither good nor evil. They are their own personality. That is what
Celestial has taught his people. When Mortal Kombat was born, Celestial was forced to join battle, after his
people were being killed. He destroyed the powerful Shinnok, and sent him to the depths of hell. Shang
Tsung then came to offer him a chance to stand in Mortal Kombat once more, and in return he would have
given Celestial back his normal life. As much as Celestial wanted, he refused and attacked the sorcerer.
Celestial almost killed Shang Tsung, but Nitara begged him to let it go.
The years passed and Celestial has witnessed kings, queens, sorcerers, emperors fall, and as evil has
taken over lots of worlds.
He became good friends with Emperor Jerrod, and his family. Travesty came when Shao Khan killed him
and took over Edenia. Still, Celestial did nothing. He then witnessed when Shao Khan took over Earth and
stole souls of innocent humans. He felt a great pain of anger, but yet he did nothing. He didn’t want to put
his people in danger. Then, matters got worse when Quan-Chi and Shang Stung formed an alignment. The
end was very near, and if Celestial didn’t help out, it would be all over. Still, Celestial stood back and did
nothing. He said it wasn’t his battle.
One day his bride, Nitara, was missing. He desperately searched for her, until he found out she had joined
the Earth Warriors in the tournament to stop the deadly alliance. She was tired of all the evil, and the falls of
many worlds. He didn’t arrive to where the battles took place until it was over. The deadly alliance was
beaten, but evil was far from over. Celestial witnessed the birth of the Dragon King as his bride, Nitara,
forced a robot to grab the egg. It turned out that Nitara wanted to awake the Dragon King, and has being
plotting it for many years. It’s a plan her and Dracula had in mind. They wanted to awaken the Dragon King
and drink his blood, to be as powerful as him.
After the Dragon King was born, Nitara offered Celstial to join her, but the tragedy occurred. The Dragon
King has killed Nitara, shredding her to pieces. This has made Celestial furious, and now his anger has
turned him into a the beast he never wanted to be. He is on the quest on his own to avenge the death of his
bride. He is neither with the good nor the evil. He will stop at nothing to destroy the Dragon King, again.

Character's Signature Quote:
“I’ll have you over for dinner”

I'm working on three new character concepts.

Two male and one female.

Zodiac will represent the stars and the constellations of the zodiac signs of both China and those used normally. His power will be to use the star signs themselves to attack. This one I'll be working on and presenting to you all first.

Cerelle shall be an interesting character and my fave of the three. She will be pretty deadly. You'll find out why soon enough.

And finally, we have Cirrus. He's a god, but unlike Shinnok and Raiden he is a neutral. And he's going to be a lot of fun.

You will see them all soon enough!

SmokeNc-017 Wrote: Glad you agree. To start off I'll put my newest character up. This is a new character that I have created which hails from the same realm as slim3ddi3g's Keilienaten. He's not done yet and I'm only posting him up to get some thoughts on if I should continue or not. Name: Kamon Age: Unknown (Rumored to be a couple of years older then Keilienaten) Eye Color: Glow with sapphire blue flames Height: 6’4 Weight: 234 pounds Alignment: Neutral (Serves Anubis) Hair: Black goes down past shoulders. Skin tone: Copper, (Greyish blue in his true form) Disciplines: Egyptian Martial Arts, Judo, Jujitsu, Pyramid Staff. Place of Origin: Realm of Rahankutat. Current where-about: Hamunaptra (City of the Dead) Power: Can control the Plagues as well as a hidden power unknown to all but Anubis and himself. Status: Undead General in Anubis' army. Quote: "Like the Plagues, my wrath is unstoppable." Weapon Description: The Pyramid Staff is an other worldly weapon. It is given to a general in Anubis' army and can only be used properly by a warrior with exceptional skill. The staff is made of an unknown metal. However, its eerie glow in the night sky resembles the light of a dying soul, glowing with a brilliant sapphire blue. On each end there are three blades, which come to a point, resembling a pyramid on both sides of the staff. They also glow a brilliant blue. The staff itself has a golden luster and has a intertwined serpent stretching the length of the weapon. There is a slit down the middle of the weapon which allows it to be separated with an ethereal chain and used as a flail type weapon. It must be noted that with this transformation, Kamon's reach infinitely increases as the chain isn't made of solid material. Design 1st outfit: Desert Ninja Kamon's whole head is wrapped in a turban to keep his identity secret from those around him, allowing him to move freely through the masses. The turbine covers his mouth, nose and head leaving only the eyes open. He wears a white vest with no sleeves and is opened in the front. The vest is kept on by a blood red sash that's wrapped around his waist. He also wears white pants which look much like the Prince of Persia's pants. They are tucked into black boots which have golden shin guards. He wears white arm guards which have curved blades coming from the middle of the fist and extend six inches past the fists. The blades are dual edged for easy inward slashes as well as outward strikes. This whole outfit renders Kamon virtually invisible in the desert sun. 2nd Outfit: Undead General Kaman’s true form. He wears a jackal headdress in honor of his god. It's cobalt black with sapphire blue eyes. (Think Anubis from Stargate the Movie). He still retains his wrist blades, as well as his arm guards. He now wears a robe around his waist which has shorts underneath. He wears an upper bracer on his left arm in the shape of a cobra. He wears two golden gauntlets. However, these aren't in one piece. The wrist piece which holds the gauntlet together has five small apendages which go down the knuckles and are connected to five slots which is where the fingers go. The guantlets basicaly outline the bones on the back side of the hand. The tips of these gauntlets have diamond etched claws which makes them suited for a very effective close range weapon. Kamon's headdress is opened, revealing his face when he's not in battle, however when he sinks into his stance, the helmet closes and he sees through the sapphire eyes of the Anubis helmet. His boots are made of an unbrakeable steel, said to be used for the weapons of Anubis' army. Moves: Serpent's Bite: Kamon sperates his whip and turns it into its flail form. He then shoots one end of the staff at the opponent. The blades at the end open up as the head of the staff gets close. When it makes contact the blades snap shut around the opponent's chest causing massive damage and heavey blood loss as Kamon pulls back to retract the chain. Demonic Sling: This move uses the flail function of the staff to catch an opponent's projectile in between the blades and then shoot it back at them with twice the power and twice the speed. Clawed Frenzey: Kamon locks his helmet and his eyes flare up. His body glows an undead sapphire blue flame as he rushes the opponent with his hand blades burning blue and unleashes on them a swift ten hit slash combo. Savage Assualt: Kamon unleashes a series of strikes with his hand claws. However, they stay right infront of him until twenty slashes are suspended in mid-air, right in front of Kamon. He then lifts his hand and points to the opponet. The suspended slashes suddenly shoot out with blazing speed cutting and lacerating the opponet on the pass by. Wave:(An update to Jax's Multi Slam) Kamon shoots one end of his staff into the opponet. The blades dig in, just like in Serpent's Bite. However, instead of letting go, Kamon starts to toss the opponet around the stage multipile times while holding on to the other end of the staff. Undead Wind:Kamon charges a ball of spectral energy in his cupped hands. He then releases it in a blast of ethereal wind, filled with the hungry souls of the Undead. If this move makes contact, after the initial blast, the left over souls latch on to the opponent slowly draining his health. Flaming River:Kamon powers up his hand and shoots it into the ground, unleashing the river Styks into this demension. The river burns like fire as it courses through the stage and at the opponent, surounding them and then igniting them from the feet up. Strength of the gods:Kamon channels the power of his master into his body. This boost of power will increase his attacks exponentially as well as repelensish his some of his life. Skeletal Cyclone: Kamon surrounds his opponet in a violent cyclone. The cyclone then rips the skeletal remaints of dead warriors from the ground and fuses it into itself. The bone shards become deadly projectlies as they shoot at the opponent inside. Fatalities: Scarab Eruption: Kamon shoots his staff into the ground unleashing a shock wave. Seconds later the ground splits open and a sea of flesh eating Scarabs shoots out of the cracks. The scarabs spot their prey, being the opponent and rush towards him. The opponet tries to flee, but it's too late. The scarabs overrun him and dig into the flesh. You can see the scarabs running around underneath his skin. The opponet screams in agony as blood drips out of his pores. Scarabs start pouring out og his mouth and on to the surface of his body. Soon the opponent is coverd in scarabs and then you hear a sickening crunch. The scarbs retreat, only leaving a hallowed out corpse, filled with holes and only parts of their bones. Final Dawn: Kamon uses his power to cast the final plauge. He eclipses the sky. The fading light focuses on the opponet as the shadow envelopes everything. As soon as the shadow touches the opponet, he is instantly engulfed in flames. His skin melts, his organs rupture, his muscles burn. He bleeds uncontrolabley. The sky turns black and a cinder grey as the clouds are set on fire. A meteor storm starts and on of the meteors comes down on the victim. On impact the remaints of the opponents disintegrate in a cloud of blood and fire. As a visual flare, just to show the sope of this, the camera pulls back out of the areana showing the undead army of Anubis, numbered in the billions swarming the surrounding landscape, all summound by Kamon. Story: As a young boy, Kamon belonged to a well off family, which served under the pharoah Akhenaten. His father was a high priest and grand counceler to the paroah. As a young child, Kamon was a free spirit. He always ran off on adventures and caused mischief. But the kind hearted pharoah would only dismiss this as childs play. As Kamon grew older, he became intreseted in the art of combat. He wished to join the pharoah's mighty army. His natural ability to fight made him one of the top candidates for the position of General in the pharoahs army. His prefered styles were anything with short strong strikes and take downs. He learned the anatomy of the human body and therefore increased his knowledge of combat by studying the affects of pressure points and critical hits in important zones on the human body. His prefered weapon was the bladed staff. It's long reach and twin blades on both sides, made it ideal for long range and short range combat. As the years went on, Kamon's training increased as well as his skills. At the young age of 200 he became General in the pharoah's army. He lead them to countless victories against a rival empire. Kamon had a good heart, and instead of finishing off his opponents, he recruited them into his army, and made took rival empires under one rule. The pharoah's kind heart and Kamon's military expertiese allowed the empire to flurish, eventually encompassing the entire realm. However, their were still pockets of terrorists who threatened to break the ties of the empire and throw it into chaos. Among these terrorists, was the former general of Akhenaten's army, Sekhmet. He always held an ever deepening hatred for the pharoah's new general after being bested in combat, and loosing his right eye, to Kamon. His ties to the underground terrorists called, The Eyes of Ra. They were called so, because before a new member could be sworn in to the faction, he had to gouge out one of his eyes and replace it with a golden one, modeled after the Eye of Ra. Sekhmet developed a plan to get rid of Kamon and establish his rightful place at Akhenaten's side. In the fallowing weeks, their have been a number of strange disappearnces in the capital city. The officals believed that the Eyes of Ra terrorist faction was gathering hostages, for an upcoming ransom demand. Knowing that the pharoah would not want any harm to fall on his subjects, it made him an easey target. The officials reported to Kamon, telling him that they have uncovered the location of the hostages. It was at Scorpion's Gorge at the Desert's Bones, a rocky wasteland devoid of all life. Kamon lead a small task force to retrive the hostages. As his forces got closer, they were ambushed by a guerilla attack. Kamon was the only one who survived. Filled with anger at the death of his comrades, Kamon rushed towards the location. As he got their he witnessed a horryfic sight. The so called hostages where skinned and put on pikes as markers of the terrorist factions. The fouls smell of death filled the gorge as rotting flesh decomposed in the heat of the sun. Within minutes the Eyes of Ra jumped out of numerous outcroppings in the gorge, surrounding Kamon. Against all odds, Kamon, fueled with rage abondoned all honor and dignety and slaughtered the terroist factions. The caves of the gorge ran red with the blood of his enemies. He, did not come out unscathed however. His injuries severe, he knew he wouldn't be able to return. As Kamon wandered through the gorge, his life coming to an end he said his final prayer."Ne reku, no ham ne kewam ishtan amshare. Ti setzu ki kon aruer, no remier de rue karistar." "As I pass through the valley of darkness, I'm not afraid. And with my dying breath I am at peace." Kamon collapses and dies in the gorge. However, as his spirit passes into the next world, he is met by the death god Anubis himself. Anubis tells him, that Kamon's life was cut short. His valor has no meaning, he was decived and therefore threw his life away by surrendering to hatred. Anubis tells Kamon that he has a strong spirit and great potential. If Kamon agrees to a pact, he will be returned to the world of the living, to avange his death, and possibley save the lives of many others. In exchange, he turns over his soul to Anubis and becomes his general. Kamon agrees to the pact and is instantly returned to his body. He feels a new sense of purpose, and a new power growing inside. Anubis tells him that he has been bestowed with tremendous power. He can tear apart the heavens and bring forth the Wave of Drakness, Anubis' army. In exchange, he gives up almost all of his free will to Anubis after his revenge is complete, and honor restored. Kamon returns to his beloved city in disguise. He finds out that Sekhmet has once again become general. As he searches for his traitor he runs into the young princess Kielienaten, who doesn't recognise Kamon at all. Kamon's new gift lets him see a darkness growing inside of her but says nothing. Kamon finally corner's Sekhmet in his chamber. Before Sekhmet can react to his ressurected rival his blood is spilled on the walls, and entrails littered all over the room. As his opponent dies, Kamon can feel his free will being torn from his body. He is now the bringer of death, and weilder of plagues under the command of Anubis. His orders are simple, increase the army of Anubis, and crush all who stand before him. In the upcoming years Kamon would lay siege to what he helped build, as Anubis' army swept the realm. the pharoah and the queen are dead, and the empire has all but fallen into chaos. Keilienaten rules mercylessly, and the ranks of the Undead increase. Soon they will be unleashed like a plague on all the realms, ending the existance of the second race of humanity, just like they did eons ago, with Kamon leading the charge, from his own throne at the city of Hamunaptra a dark time will fall to the human race.

Anything Ancient Egyptian like is fine with me. I was thinking of doing the same kinda thing,lol. I seriously think that should be a new character in Mortal Kombat, they need egyptian kombatants.

Here's my character, the French fencist Count Pierre Etienne:

Count Pierre Etienne

Age: 35
Nationality: French
Occupation: Count of Vichy/ Leader of French Operations for the Red Dragon
Allignment: Evil
Blood Type: O -
Religion: Capitalism
Sex: Male
Affiliation: Red Dragon

Favored Fighting Styles: Crane and Wu Shu

Favored Weapon: Saber (fought as fencing)

Bio: (Overview)
The Etienne clan has always have had links with radical movements and crime organisations. They were once the highest finacial supporters for Hitler and Nazi Germany. The current Etienne that holds the leadership title of Count of Vichy, Pierre, has been the most ruthless yet graceful of the Etiennes. His skill in fencing has placed him high in the ranks of the Red Dragon, and his influence in French politics forced the French not to support America in the War against Iraq. Rumor says that Etienne is an extreme Saddist, and is a close ally of the Islamic extremist group, el-Raadia-Islamia.

Origin:
During the attempts of destroying the Black Dragon, Etienne allowed Mavado and the Red Dragon to reside in his manor. The Etienne clan were one of the founding groups of the Red Dragon. Immediately, Mavado made Etienne a high ranked offical for his hospitality. He has given the Red Dragon alot of funds, including funds to buy a miniture nuclear device to destroy the Outerworld Agency's portal.

Current Situation:
The Red Dragon have struck a deal with Sektor's clan, the Tekukein. Sektor has agreed to assist them if the Red Dragon keeps their member countries dormant while the Tekukien take over Asia. Etienne is keeping the French quiet, like he did with the War on Iraq. Also, he suspects Galman, the opperative working undercover as a Lin Kuei student, of turning away from the Red Dragon cause. Galman's mission was to become a student of Grandmaster Sub-Zero, codenamed Fury. When he has gain enough of Zero's trust, would destroy the Lin Kuei on the inside. Frost, the opperative before Galman, tried to take the Dragon Medallion off Sub-Zero to better her chances of succeeding, but failed. Even so, Etienne hasn't spoken of it to Mavado or any other Red Dragon members. Has Galman found out something about Etienne's personal life that might jeopodise his position as Leader of French Operations for the Red Dragon?

Stage: Etienne Manor - The Ballroom
This 18th-Century French manor is full of history and beauty. And what comes with history comes with misery. Inside a room near the ballroom of the manor, there are an abundance of ghosts, believed to be former Etienne clan members.
The stage starts off at the viewing box room on the ceiling of the ballroom. This room is Etienne's office, where Etienne views fights from his desk. Knocking the opponent into a window will bring them down to the actual ballroom. The ballroom is full of tables and chairs which can be used against the opponent ala Powerstone. There is a big door with a spooky face on it. That leads to.........
Death Trap: Ghastly Possession
After knocking the opponent into the ghouly doors, they fall into a dark room. White ghosts appear and start entering the opponent's body. Running out scared, the opponent explodes before reaching you. The ghosts fly back into their chamber.
Stage Weapon: Double-Sided Battle Axe.
This is found underneath one of the tables in the ballroom. The name says it all.

Special Moves:
Ear Smack - Etienne dashes up to the opponent and smacks their ears. This causes the opponent to lose their hearing for a few seconds (not good in dark arenas at all)
Tube Dust - Etienne throws a flask of radioactive material at the opponent, blinding them for a few seconds.
Vichy Strike - Etienne jumps and slices an X on the opponent with his saber.
Fatalities:
Organic Nuclear Reaction - Etienne grabs a syringe from his jacket, which has a radioactive symbol on it. He injects it into his sword, then cuts the opponent's face. The opponent starts screaming, but then stops in bedazzlement as his scar starts scabing up. His head starts to "bubble up" to inlarge his head, until when his head cannot take anymore. The opponent head explodes with a fleshy mushroom cloud. The remains of his head flop over his neck like a busted can.
Slice and Dice: Etienne pushes his opponent. While the opponent falls from the push, Etienne rapidly slices him with his sabre into multiple pieces. What falls on the ground are only fragments of gore and bone.

Hari-Kiri:
Penetrating the SirFace
Etienne grabs his sabre and raises it above his head, with the tip of the blade closest to his head. He rams it through his skull entirely, and dies instantly.

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dagumit everyone uses my ideas for egyptians...yes i know that i havnt posted them or anything (im sure this has happened to a few of u) and then people say your copying...gosh i hate that lol...so to put out who i thought up there are these characters
1. scarab assassin, he is a ninja type chara, uses lotsa scarab attacks (teleports, projectiles) and has scarab blades on his legs arms and back (custom)
2. pharoah- mummy type chara, wears golden pharoah mask but his body has various clothe strips on it....more sand and dust teleports and projectiles on this guy, does plague and junk for fatality...so if this looks like one of your ideas it isnt...its completely origional for me i dont plagiarize, you just posted it first