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wyndrain
03/16/2004 05:49 PM (UTC)
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Phatfu311 Wrote:
Blah Blah Blah. Praise the Lord you don't work for Midway. I think you and Scorpio should hang out. You guys write the stupidest stuff. I mean come on, where do you get this crap from.


LMAO!!! I kept laughing so hard each time I read this guys posts, I mean...is he really that stupid??? jealous????? Poor, poor thing.

About the story, I have to say: WOW!!! The last one is even better then the first!!!! I love it!

Probably the best MK story I have seen around for years.

Great stuff dude!
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03/16/2004 05:51 PM (UTC)
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wow, bravo......bravo......If I could write like that, Id be so cool, writing stories and all, mostly MK Sotries. When they stop making MK Movies they could make it like that, for once, evil would prevail1!!!!
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zaggot
03/17/2004 04:22 AM (UTC)
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wyndrain Wrote:
Phatfu311 Wrote:
Blah Blah Blah. Praise the Lord you don't work for Midway. I think you and Scorpio should hang out. You guys write the stupidest stuff. I mean come on, where do you get this crap from.

LMAO!!! I kept laughing so hard each time I read this guys posts, I mean...is he really that stupid??? jealous????? Poor, poor thing.

About the story, I have to say: WOW!!! The last one is even better then the first!!!! I love it!

Probably the best MK story I have seen around for years.

Great stuff dude!


HAHAHAH! I totally agree!!! Not even a little kid can be that stupid, but the best part is, this guy never realized how "inteligent" his posts where...what a fool he made of himself.

Back to the story, That is wonderful!!!

I love them both! The second one was even better!!!

Great job!!! Keep writting more!
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deathring
03/17/2004 05:18 AM (UTC)
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Its so annoying to see members like Phatfu311 alive....

Anyway, I posted in your other thread the same thing. This one is simply so much better then the first.

great job! The use of dark words like someone said is awesome!!!
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queve
03/17/2004 05:55 PM (UTC)
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Thank you guys! I'm really flattered that you all liked my stories.

I haven’t forgot about the Kahns request but you might want to check out Tgrants story! It was awesome! And your fave character killed everyone.

Once again thanks guys!
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shadow51
03/17/2004 06:46 PM (UTC)
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Excellent work really! even though there are jackasses that think down grading people is just "stating thier opinion" are truly, for lack of a better word,"retarded". You have a gift for this stuff keep up the good work. Im looking forward to some more of your work.



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The warriors of light have failed to defeat the Great Dragon King, now, his undefeatable army of dead soldiers and loyal allies have managed to enter the realm of earth, thanks to the brutal act that has been committed .Deception.

Thousands of Vampires leaded by their Queen Nitara attack the helpless humans as the life in the world drowns quickly in chaos. The deadly Onis, leaded by Drahmin destroy everything they come across with, along side the Centaurs and mutants, who joined the King in battle. The world has come to an end.

The remaining warriors watched helplessly as the bright sunny sky becomes red as blood and darkness covers each corner of the world. They know there is no hope, but they have chosen to die in battle.

A great and magnificent Palace emerges from the ocean, transforming the once clean waters of earth into dark poison. Colossal waves are out of control as they lift high destroying all the islands and countries nearby.

THIS are the EVENTS that took place in OUTWORLD before the INVASION:

- A furious battle had shocked the very core of the Earth as the Great Monk KUNG LAO fought bravely the Dragon King in Mortal Kombat sadly; his life was violently consumed by the power of the King, his body exploded as it made contact with the incarnation of EVIL. His soul was forever lost, cursed to be tortured by the King.

- The Ninja specter known as SCORPION had managed to defeat MOLOCH in battle, but his mission was far from over. Moloch had managed to escape, but he only cared for the sorcerer known as QUAN CHI, to put an end to his long story of revenge. He found himself in battle once again with is old rival. It is told in ancient writings that it was one of the most brutal fights to ever take place in Outworld. Quan Chi shook in fear when he realized he was no match for the dead ninja, and as he tried to escape, Scorpion knew there was only one way to end this he conjured a storm of fire that consumed their bodies in flames to death. Quan Chi’s soul was stolen by the Dragon Kings power, so was Scorpions, but he extinguished with peace, he knew he had finally completed his mission, life wasn’t important now; he died, this time, forever, bounded to eternal torment.

- KITANA and Queen SINDEL died in battle defending the realm of Edenia from the forces of darkness. MILEENA leaded the attack, hundreds of mutants died by the hands of the Royal family, but they were no match for the fury of Mileena. They captured them in the Kuatan Palace were the SHOKAN RACE was extinguished forever. They lowered Queen Sindel and Princess Kitana in the hot lava, alive. Only their painful screams could be heard, and thanks to this, Sindel managed to produce one final Fatal scream that destroyed the Palace, killing everyone inside. Mileena died instantly.

- The Lin Kei warrior known as SUB-ZERO fought bravely. His partner FROST and his Lin Kei students marched in battle against the terrible Red Dragon Clan. Unknown to Sub-Zero, SAREENA had informed MAVADO (who had killed Kano) about their plans, Frost was killed by Sareena in a surprise attack, Sareena was badly injured, Frost had been a great adversary. The Lin Kei warriors were strong, but they were outnumbered, they were defeated by the Red Dragons. Sub-Zero was the last member to stay alive, but he was weak, he was brutally tortured to death by Mavado and his clan. All traces of The Lin Kei were erased that day, a New Era was awakening, the Red Dragons.

- JAX ignored that his life would soon end in the most unexpected way. He had managed to kill the Red Dragon Member known as Hsu Hao long ago, but he was told by his partner and best friend SONYA BLADE, that the Black Dragon Member known as KANO was still alive. She radioed him the location. Jax found himself inside a dark room that contained a deadly GRINDER spinning around. Something was wrong, he could smell the blood he could smell DECEPTION. He couldn’t act when he saw her coming; he was shocked to see his BEST FRIEND attacking him. Sonya Blade kicked Jax inside the grinder, where he suffered a most painful death. Before his life was torn apart, he looked into Sonya’s face, a single TEAR kissed his eyes as he watched her smile evilly, seconds later, the Grinder destroyed his body and Sonya left the room smiling with satisfaction.

- Lord RAYDEN had been fighting the most powerful sorcerer, SHANG TSUNG. It was a terrible battle, a mix of blood and thunder. Rayden could feel his powers vanishing; he soon realized he was being punished by his own allies, the Elder Gods. By defiantly leaving his status as an Elder god, they made his powers consume his own life. Knowing this, Rayden managed to cast one final apocalyptic storm. Shang Tsung had been laughing at the powerless god, but he late realized what was happening, his laughs became screams of “shock”, as his body exploded and millions of souls were set free, to later be consumed by the great King, including his own, Rayden’s and the dead warrior, LIU KANG. All cursed to live in eternal torment.

THIS are the EVENTS that took place in EARTH after the DESTRUCTION of Outworld, the remaining warriors left to fight the Apocalyptic and Alarming New HELL:

There was no hope left in Outworld. Fire and shadows consumed all the life that was left there. The souls of millions were eaten by the Great Kings Power:

- BO RAI CHO was determinate to die fighting AND drinking, he killed many mutants with his powerful skills, but he died facing one of his old friends. He could see in the eyes of one of the death walking soldiers of the undefeatable army of the great King, that LI MEI was fighting to escape, but she was cursed to live forever inside the soldier, who cut Bo Rai Cho in half. Li Mei could not escape this torment, she was bounded to the King, she was a eternal slave. She had failed her people she had failed her world.

- BLIND KENSHI could sense the darkness invading his mind. He could not focus. Even though he showed his true powers and skills when defeating the vampires, he died helplessly at the claws of NITARA. He was no match for the Vampire Queen. Nitara celebrated her victory drinking the blood of his victim. ERMAC watched the scene from a hidden place he was laughing. Ermac had joined the Kings side.

- GENERAL SONYA BLADE had led the Special Forces to battle. Even though her agents were strong, none could resist the force of the Onis, Centaurs and Mutants, their weapons weren’t any help, for most of the powerful ones, were destroyed during the invasion by someone who worked inside the Special Forces.

The TEAM late realized that their weapons had been CORRUPTED they destroyed themselves not knowing someone inside their base had programmed a lethal VIRUS inside the computer system that corrupted the weapons.

- CYRAX killed many of the Onis and mutants, including DRAHMIN. Help came when the forgotten warrior SMOKE joined him in battle after discovering that his old friend SUB-ZERO had died. Terror stroke both of them when the lost cyborg ninja known as SEKTOR appeared with his army of TEKUNIN that had joined the King in battle. They fought bravely, but knowing they had no choice, both programmed themselves to auto-destruct; by doing so, they exterminated Sektor and part of his giant army of robots.

- The Magic of NIGHTWOLF and his people was very useful in battle, but sadly not enough. Their lands were invaded and easily destroyed. Nightwolf had known this day would come, he and his ancestors knew about the legends of the Great King, but they had done nothing to stop this from happening in the past now, they paid most painfully for their ignorance. It is known Nightwolf died at the hands of DRAHMIN, before he had been killed by CYRAX and SMOKE.

- STRYKER had been injured during SHINNOKS invasion. He fought RAIN and ERMAC who had escaped Outworld to serve the great King. Stryker defeated Rain in an incredible display of kombat, he fought bravely, but Ermac’s power destroyed his life. Stryker was no more.

- ERMAC was later killed by JADE, who had been captured in SHAO KAHN’S castle (he was killed by TSUNG and QUAN). She had managed to escape. After knowing of the death of her friends, princess Kitana and Queen Sindel, she decided to fight with all her might to show her loyalty, here on earth, for Outworld was already lost, forever.

- MAVADO had returned to earth to celebrate with blood the downfall of Outworld, and hell of earth he did not expect to die at the hands of this warrior. MAVADO was shocked to see KABAL standing in front of his eyes. He could not believe the once black dragon warrior was still alive. The furious battle ended with Kabal’s victory. He claimed his hook-swords, and used them to cut in half the Red Dragon member.

- KAI later found JADE in the chaotic scenery. Kai had been badly injured during Shinnoks invasion. The two fought an army of Centaurs, but the centaurs were no match, hope came when the god of WIND FUJIN joined battle and finished them all.

- NOOB SAIBOT attacked Kai by surprise, Kai died when Noob consumed with his shadow powers the body of Kai. Seeing this, FUJIN fought Noob and destroyed him. JADE was then facing the lost mutant BARAKA who had joined forces with Noob to finish the chosen warriors. Jade was brutally killed by Baraka who had awoken in fury when he discovered the death of his friend Mileena.

- BARAKA was killed by JOHNNY CAGE in a furious battle. Baraka had managed to cause some serious damage, but CAGE proved to be the best. With a powerful uppercut, he sent Barakas head to the red sky.

- TANYA and REIKO (both believed dead) faced FUJIN and KABAL (who had joined the god) in a deadly battle, they were facing the Kings undefeatable army. Seeing they had no hope against the army, Fujin produced a wind tempest that swept his life along side Reiko’s, Tanya’s and his friends, Kabal’s.

-SONYA BLADE was fighting herself. A VOICE was screaming INSIDE her soul, telling her to stop. She could not control her acts, but when she came across the demon SAREENA, she finally managed to awake from the spell she was in. She remembered all. A dark shadow had blinded her eyes with tears, she remembered how Sareena hypnotized her. The fake WEDDING that took Place in Outworld.

This BRUTAL act caused a terrible disturbance between the worlds. By marrying the mortal woman, the GREAT DRAGON KING had the right to claim the Realm of Earth as his own. This allowed him to unite the divided the realms.

With pain and Fury, she realized she had not only killed her own Team by destroying them with their own weapons, but also, she had killed her best friend, JAX. With a most frightening fury, Sonya tormented the demon and brutally killed her in battle. Sareena’s spirit was consumed by the great King.

- Super star JOHNNY CAGE found SONYA alive, he declare his love to her before the end. With one last passionate kiss, they fought the forces of the King in separate ways, that was the last thing she ever felt of Johnny Cage. With his incredible power, he killed many of the Onis, including MOLOCH. Then he faced the vampire, Queen NITARA, who died when Cage ripped her body apart with a powerful shadow kick.

Johnny Cage fought bravely till the end, he was defeated by the army of the King, that stabbed him to death with spears and swords. His agonizing screams could be heard from distance .

- SONYA knew what she had to do. Knowing the spell she had been in, she remembered the Kings location and how to enter the castle. Pretending she was still under his control, she dressed herself in the long beautiful bride dress she had used when she involuntarily married the King.

She found herself at the side of the Great King, she watched with pain the apocalyptic hell and the death of all her friends and innocent people from the highest Tower of the castle, as tears blinded her eyes and silent screams of eternal torment could be heard inside her soul.

It is known she was the last survivor of the Forces of Light. Forgotten songs will tell about her brave acts, legends will sing about her incredible display of courage and power, and also they will tell how her thoughts betrayed her. The KING realized she was no longer under his command, and he no longer needed the mortal woman, Earth and Outworld were his.

Sonya fought bravely, but lost to the great king. He grabbed his beautiful bride and with the most evil of all laughs, he threw her down to the shadows and watched her white dress turn red into blood. He was the supreme Emperor darkness ruled over the Universe.

His Undefeatable Army marched victorious in the world betraying their own allies (The Tekunin, Mutants, Vampires, Centaurs, etc. were being killed by the Kings power, he no longer needed them. He was to rule the world alone.

An incredible, enormous Dragon lands in the new born castle. Watching with satisfaction from above all the death and chaos his shadows have brought. He turns into a smaller reptilian figure, after throwing a powerful cold scream; millions of souls fly to his castle. Reptile, the incarnation of the Great Dragon King...has won.
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This is like an update of my old story. It has new ideas and stuff on how to dramatically end the games story. I had done it before since many people were saying how much they would love to see the bad guys win for once.

Now, note that I hope none of this EVER happens. I don’t want Mk to end especially not like this!

I killed everyone.
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03/17/2004 07:05 PM (UTC)
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WOW! Thats fuking amazing.
I would absolutely love that as an ending to the last MK (Hopefully not MKD) That would bring the series to a climatic end, good fucking job Queve!
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queve
03/17/2004 08:09 PM (UTC)
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shadow51 Wrote:
Excellent work really! even though there are jackasses that think down grading people is just "stating thier opinion" are truly, for lack of a better word,"retarded". You have a gift for this stuff keep up the good work. Im looking forward to some more of your work.


Thanks dude!! Im glad you liked it. smile I promise to do more. Thanks! smile

tyrant-cenobite Wrote:
WOW! Thats fuking amazing.
I would absolutely love that as an ending to the last MK (Hopefully not MKD) That would bring the series to a climatic end, good fucking job Queve!


LOL, thanks dude! Im very happy people liked my story. Feels good. Thanks! smile
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vikiv
03/17/2004 10:11 PM (UTC)
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That is one Awesome story!!! Even better then the first one!

Great job!!!
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03/17/2004 10:49 PM (UTC)
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WOW, that's a great story Queve. You are really creative, thanks to your story i'm beginning to fear the Dragon King now and wonder how it will be wink. I just hope it wont be like this becuase i wanna be there for MK7.

Good work, i'm looking forward to you next thread
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JoRdANMan
03/17/2004 11:33 PM (UTC)
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yay yay blah blah blah u just ramble on with these stupid stories huh? Lol im so kidding, that was so awesome that story, that first story u wrote like this was awesome and this version is even better. I love how the dragon kings palace came out of the ocean and turned it into poison, that is so crazy. This would make the best damn movie ever made. But maybe instead of the ocean turning to poison, maybe blood? But eaither way its still cool. U also made Cage seem cool, now thats hard to do, not even the midway team could do that good. It kinda remined me of the Titanic how Cage and Sonya kissed and u said that was the last time they would, it was so sad *cry*. But i must point out a couple of bad things, i didnt think Nitara was evil, i thought she was just nutreul, but o well. Also i didnt get it what u did with Sindel, did she die ro what?? She better not have shes the best!! Well overall great story, u should make others
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03/17/2004 11:37 PM (UTC)
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JoRdAnMaN Wrote:
yay yay blah blah blah u just ramble on with these stupid stories huh? Lol im so kidding, that was so awesome that story, that first story u wrote like this was awesome and this version is even better. I love how the dragon kings palace came out of the ocean and turned it into poison, that is so crazy. This would make the best damn movie ever made. But maybe instead of the ocean turning to poison, maybe blood? But eaither way its still cool. U also made Cage seem cool, now thats hard to do, not even the midway team could do that good. It kinda remined me of the Titanic how Cage and Sonya kissed and u said that was the last time they would, it was so sad *cry*. But i must point out a couple of bad things, i didnt think Nitara was evil, i thought she was just nutreul, but o well. Also i didnt get it what u did with Sindel, did she die ro what?? She better not have shes the best!! Well overall great story, u should make others


LOL. He killed EVERYONE!!!!! They all died. Including SINDEL!

I think this is the best story I have seen!!! Its AWESOME! So dark and cool! I LOVE IT!

SIndel destroyed the kuatan palace before she was lowered in the hot lava with Kitana, so yeah, she died but killed everyone inside at the same time.

AWESOME SHIT!!!!! smile
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JoRdANMan
03/18/2004 12:59 AM (UTC)
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OhHhHhH, well atleast Sindel goes out in style with a bang grin
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midgetman007
03/18/2004 03:58 AM (UTC)
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great story. loved it. its exciting. be a great end to the mk3 movie. but yea like the rest said dont want it to happen cause mk would over and that would suck and kung laos my favorite.

keep on truckin and writting thise stories cause there really great
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jokerjoker
03/18/2004 05:25 PM (UTC)
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Yeah, I love the second story even more! That was dark and evil!

Great job dude!
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queve
03/18/2004 07:33 PM (UTC)
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JoRdAnMaN Wrote:
yay yay blah blah blah u just ramble on with these stupid stories huh? Lol im so kidding, that was so awesome that story, that first story u wrote like this was awesome and this version is even better. I love how the dragon kings palace came out of the ocean and turned it into poison, that is so crazy. This would make the best damn movie ever made. But maybe instead of the ocean turning to poison, maybe blood? But eaither way its still cool. U also made Cage seem cool, now thats hard to do, not even the midway team could do that good. It kinda remined me of the Titanic how Cage and Sonya kissed and u said that was the last time they would, it was so sad *cry*. But i must point out a couple of bad things, i didnt think Nitara was evil, i thought she was just nutreul, but o well. Also i didnt get it what u did with Sindel, did she die ro what?? She better not have shes the best!! Well overall great story, u should make others


Thank you!!! LOL, Yeah, I made Cage look like a hero. Im glad you liked the romance sad parts!!!

Thanks to everyone again!!!
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sektor101
03/18/2004 10:04 PM (UTC)
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damn queve youre good at this thing you should keep writing these kind of storys you have an exellent imagination keep it up. this are the words of sektor101
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mkrulz456
03/18/2004 10:37 PM (UTC)
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Your ideas are amazing and creative, that would be a great ending to an amazing game. Hopefully it doesn't end soon though. Excellent job again.
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queve
03/19/2004 01:45 AM (UTC)
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Thanks guys! I feel happy all of you liked my stories. I still need to do a Kahn one for someone who asked, but Tgrant made a very cool one!

Anyway, thanks again!
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zaggot
03/20/2004 10:24 AM (UTC)
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The second story is AMAZING! More bloddy and dramatical then the first one!

Excellent gothic style! It was incredible!
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wyndrain
03/24/2004 11:55 PM (UTC)
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I love the way you killed my favorite character!

It was sad to see Scorpion go in such way, but so cool at the same time:

"he died, this time, forever, bounded to eternal torment."

That was amazing. I see you also decided to add your dream idea of an evil Sonya getting married to the evil beast. Cool dude.

The way she killed Jax actually made me feel sorry for the bastard. And the way Sonya died and realized what she had done was cool.

LOL, the drama of Sonya/Cage was so "sweet". *starts to cry*

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03/25/2004 12:17 AM (UTC)
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THAT WAS THE STUPIDIEST STORY EVER, i rather have Jax and hsu huo be the only 2 fighters in MK:D. LOL, first off, u killed all my fav. good guys, and then the good guythat i wanted dead, lived and killed 3 more ppl. JOHNNY CAGE, u let him kil baraka, i think and sonya, you are a piece of crap.

but i have to PM u someting funny, my friend mortalkombat for life got banned, b/c ppl called him a lyar bout khan being confirmed in next game, and u were his witness, but he got banned, his email doesnt work so he cant send a review. thankx for being his witness, i am pissed that ICY.x got his way again, with calling ppl lyar, he even called konrr a lyar, who he is the backbone of this forum..icy should be the one that gets banned.

BTW horrible mk story.
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I heart the black plague and queves ending, and Hyugas my idol.

03/25/2004 01:05 AM (UTC)
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IOWNYOU Wrote:
THAT WAS THE STUPIDIEST STORY EVER, i rather have Jax and hsu huo be the only 2 fighters in MK:D. LOL, first off, u killed all my fav. good guys, and then the good guythat i wanted dead, lived and killed 3 more ppl. JOHNNY CAGE, u let him kil baraka, i think and sonya, you are a piece of crap.

but i have to PM u someting funny, my friend mortalkombat for life got banned, b/c ppl called him a lyar bout khan being confirmed in next game, and u were his witness, but he got banned, his email doesnt work so he cant send a review. thankx for being his witness, i am pissed that ICY.x got his way again, with calling ppl lyar, he even called konrr a lyar, who he is the backbone of this forum..icy should be the one that gets banned.

BTW horrible mk story.


r u a retard this is 1 of the best storylines ive ever seen, i like it better than the black plague!!! And i love the black plague.
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03/25/2004 01:32 AM (UTC)
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It's a good piece of writing, and quality work, but I must agree with Phatfu that you should never work for Midway. As a piece of its own, this is good, but for the storyline to a game, it ruins the series. I realize that you mean this as a series ending thing, but that would leave players feeling that after all the series worked up to, though the last game built up to a climax, the bad guys won. It's as simple as that. No player wants all their favorite characters to either die or turn heel. That's called a great to lose out on merchandising, and nothing more. Once again, I too find Phatfu rude, but he's right in many respects.
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03/25/2004 06:01 PM (UTC)
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IOWNYOU Wrote:
THAT WAS THE STUPIDIEST STORY EVER, i rather have Jax and hsu huo be the only 2 fighters in MK:D. LOL, first off, u killed all my fav. good guys, and then the good guythat i wanted dead, lived and killed 3 more ppl. JOHNNY CAGE, u let him kil baraka, i think and sonya, you are a piece of crap.

but i have to PM u someting funny, my friend mortalkombat for life got banned, b/c ppl called him a lyar bout khan being confirmed in next game, and u were his witness, but he got banned, his email doesnt work so he cant send a review. thankx for being his witness, i am pissed that ICY.x got his way again, with calling ppl lyar, he even called konrr a lyar, who he is the backbone of this forum..icy should be the one that gets banned.

BTW horrible mk story.


Phatfu is that you again!!????

If not forgive me, but you are just like the stupid idiot that got banned some time ago.

I think its you though. wink
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