Story:
Chimera is the powerfulliest of the three Onis. She has the ability to control the two others. When Quan Chi asked them to help him, she rejected. Quan Chi was angered and used his medallion to paralyze Chimera and take control of the two other Onis.

After the Dragon King was reborn, he caught Drahmin and Moloch, but he couldn't break Quan's spell over them. So he travelled to the Netherrealm and freed Chimera from her paralyzed prison. Chimera thanked the Dragon King and wanted to serve him untill she repaied him. She went to Outworld with him and broke Quan's spell and took control over the Onis once more.

Moves:
-Fire Pillar: Chimera's two upper stings shoots out fireballs at the ground in front of her, which causes a pillar of fire to appear.
-Spider Sting: The four stings rapidly stings the opponent, while Chimera walks five steps forward.
-Mind Crusher: Chimera grabs the opponent by the face and shoots out fire through the hand while crushing the opponents head with her claws. After a few seconds, she throws the opponent away from her.
-Teleport: A regular teleport, either behind the opponent or away from the opponent.

Fatalities - If the subboss is going to have fatalities, these are the ones I would like her to have:
-Eternal Torment: Chimera summons stings like her own to appear under the opponent, which grabs the opponent and tears the opponent down into the Netherrealm. (kinda like Shinnok's great hand fatality).
-Terror Ripper: Chimera grabs the opponent by the face, while her stings starts to tear and rip the opponents body apart. When the only thing left is the opponents head, she put it into flames and throws it away.
-Hara Kiri: Chimera's two upper stings charges with flames and then stabs herself in the head, causing her body to enflame and explode.

Appearance:
I'm not sure about the colours or the outfit, but it's something like this...

Cool concept jaded-raven!!!! Love the Oni!!!! Now I need Judges and participants!!!!jaded-raven, thanx for entering your Oni!!!

You welcome ;)

I really need judges and more participants!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hey Johnny_Cage_Rules, this is my ONI. One of two. I'm not finished with him yet. I just finished the basics. I will update him later.



Oni Name: Malo
Age: Unkown
Height: 6’1
Weight: 200lbs
Sex: Male
Alignment: Very Evil
BloodType: Unknown
Weapon: Iron Claws

Special Moves
1: Fire Breath - He shoots out fire from his mouth for a while like a dragon
2: Camouflage – He can make himself camouflage
3: Fireball – Throws a regular fireball
4: Two Fireballs - Throws a fireball from one hand, and then another from the other hand
5: Homing Fireball – He throws two fireballs, one from each hand, at the same time (like Shang Tsung in MK:DA) and hits where the opponent stands
6: Teleport – Teleports from one side of the arena to another
7: The Claw – He grabs opponent and stabs his claws on their chest, repeatedly
8: Spinning Claws – He spins around with his hands spread open, and claws sticking out (like Baraka in MKT)
9: Firestarter - He raises his hands and fireballs shoot out from beneath the ground
10: Fire Wave - He charges up fire from his hand, and slams the ground shooting out a huge wave of fire

Fatality1: Rest in Pieces:
Malo sinks his claws into opponent and raises him/her of their feet. He spits out fire from his mouth, burning opponent’s head. While head is burning, opponent is screaming slapping their head. Malo takes out his claws from his other arm, and shrieks. He then slices off his/her head off. After, he tosses it to the air, and before the headless body can fall, he shreds them to pieces with his claws.

Fatality2: Freak Show Puppet
Malo gets behind opponent and cute open their back. He sinks his claws back into his hands, and jams his dirty fist through the opening cut. After seconds of digging, and opponent screaming in agony, Malo pulls out some body organs, and digs back inside, and pulls out some more organs (intestines, heart, stomach, etc.) Once he has pulled every organ out he brings out his claws again and jams them through the opening on the opponent’s back. Malo kicks the organs out of the way as he lifts the opponent up where he/she gives the last breath of life. Malo then begins to use opponent’s body as a puppet, moving his/her arms, legs, and mouth.

Story:

Oni Description:


Fight!!!!!!

I'll make one, if no one minds Judges you don't have to vote on this when the tournament starts:

Name:Creon(K-ree-on)
Bio:A former policeman who was kept under a spell by Sho Kahn that makes Creon grow in strength, but turns him into an Oni, the Oni that he really is.Now Keeping his human form as a dicuise, he plans to over throw Sho Kahn.

Known Relatives:
Father:(deciesed)A human, Name:Leon.
Mother:(Deciesed)An Oni, Name:Creetordox.

Looks:I'll post a pic soon!!!!!!!


I really need judges and more particapents.

name:Elbirroh
age: a lot
height: really tall
weight: really heavy (i copied this two from eyedol's bio)
alignment:none
fighting style: his own
weapon: blades

attacks:
poison spit: like the reptiles poison spit just with the diference that this keeps reducing the enemys health slowly until they dies.
stomp: elbirroh jumps and stomp the oponent
poison grab: he grabs the oponent by the head and spits on them after that he smashes em in the floof.

fatality:

head cut: with his blades he ct the op. head by the half and take the brain out.

bio:
he was a tormentor in the netherealm much before drahmin or moloch were, but all that years in the netherealm and a lot of fights with enraged specters and even onis, made him gone mad, he now wanders attacking everyone he sees.

I'll Judge... tell me the rules..

Okay here's mine.
Name:Xion(She-on)
Age:423
Height:6'7
Weight:268 lbs
Alignement:Nuetral
Family: All taken by sickness.
Wife was mysteryosly slaughtered via decapitation.
Race:Demi-oni, half human
Place of origin: Fuedal Japan
Blood type:Changed in transformation,Unknown
Disciplines: Boshido, Genma, Oni, Batojitsu
Weapon:Cursed Twin Kitetsu, Sheild Gauntlet, Demon Fang blade.(Much like in Onimusha except this sword is made of an ancient oni's fang and is pure evil, like th Soul Edge)
Eye color: Glowing red.
Skin color:deep green w/ black muscle outlines
Hair:Long, white
Oni Rank: Genma Onimusha(Demon Ogre Samurai)

Design:Xion has pointed ears, and really dark green skin. Only his torso is visible. His upper arms and torso have three orbs, each a different color, white9torso), green(Right tricep), and red(left tricep). Since he was in the feudal area, and studied boshido, he's a former samuria. So he wears to samuria armor plates on his hips, black samuria pants, with golden dragons embroidered in them and black samuria tai boots with steel shin gaurds. He has his twin kitetsu tied on his left hip, one long and the other slightly shorter to compencate for a double unsheething with the left hand. His oni shield gauntlet also has a jewel inside it, which glows blue, which gives him tremendous power. He has demon wings, bat like in appearance that have a twenty foot wing span, which act as a cape to cover his oni body. His Bishoman sword is in a sheith on his back.

Special Attacks:
Oni Sight:
The oni gauntlet's jewel glows bright blue and charges up a ball of energy in Xion's palm, the blast is shot at the opponet with extreme speed enlarging with every second causing massive damage to the opponet.
Devil's Eye laser:
A third eye opens in Xions forehead, the gijon eye. It glows an electric blue and shoots a crippling laser at the opponet. It can be shoot, at head level, up into the air at a jumping opponent, and it can be shot into the ground, traveling at the opponet.
Oni barrier:
Xion creates a barrier of demonic energy around himself, rendering him invincible for a shor time.
Gauntlet Quake:
Xion slams his fist into the ground, sending energy into it casuing an earthquake to accure.
Possesed Sepoku:
Xion shoots one of his kitetsu into the opponet's chest, binding them with oni energy. He takes his kitetsu and stabs himself in the stomach, transfering all of his damage to the opponet.
Blood pyro:
Xion cuts himself and shoots his oni blood out of his wound and throws it onto the opponet, igniting them.
Genma Tornado:
Xion channels all of his energy into his twin kitetsu they atart to fly around him and circle, They start moving so fast that the energy they give off makes them look like onsolid ring. he then lifts his hand at the opponet and the blades flyin in a tornado fassion at the enemy. They then return to his hands, blood stained.
Wing lift:
Xion unclasps his wings and fully extends them. He then gives one giant swing, causing a tornado to appear under the opponet lifting them into the air.
Oni Chains:
Xion uses oni magic to immoblize the opponet in a chain of demon fire.

Fatality;
Fragile Humanity:
Xion immoblizes the opponet with his Oni Chains, making them fall to their knees. He then walks up to them and sticks his twin kitetsu into their shoulder, causing extreme pain and in the process cutting of their arms completely. The opponet screams in pain as blood drips from bloody stumps where their arms used to be. He then takes his Demon Fang and puts it to their forehead. He tilts their head back and plunges the glowing blade through their forehead and out the back of their skull. He then slices down the middle cutting through the mouth, spine and rib cage slicing the opponet in half, letting loose a fountain of blood from the vertical slice. The oni chains are then released and the opponet falls in two different directions.
Ceremony of Blood:
Xion takes his hand and extends his nails. He plunges them into the chest, through the heart. He ignites it with oni magic, causing it to boil the person's blood inside their body. The heart ruptures and explodes, with blood and chunks coming out of the persons mouth.
Xion takes the opponents head and cuts the top off. He scoops out the organs inside and creates a goblet. He then rips the head off the opponents body, causing a fountain of blood to shoot out of their neck. He fills the skull goblet with the victims own blood and drinks it. He then glows with blue flames, letting out a fearsome roar.

Story:
Sarakishi Tomukagi was a great samuria in the sixteenth century feudal Japan. His skills were on matched on the battle field. His disregard for death made him the perfect candidate for suicidal missions. He killed swiftley and silently, without regret and without mercy. His slices were presice to the point of inhuman. Before every mission it was said that he bathed his swords in holy fire to imbune them with mystical properties which would guide him on the battle fields. This was thought since, on late and foggy nights the only thing of his that was visible was an eerie blue glow from his twin kitetsu. He rightfuly earned the title Hitokiri Batoetsie with the list of people he killed.
On one of his missions for the Shogun however he was ambushed by the Kunai Clan a pack of renagade Shinobi who were sent by a corrupt businessman called Sekora Terakumo. He hired the Kunai clan to take out Tomukagi because he got wind that he was his next target. Terakumo was suspected of selling large quantities of Opium to small businesses. Tomukagi was well on his way to finishing the mission when he was shot through the heart with a poison arrow by one of the memmbers of the Kunai clan. As his last momments came to a close, he made a pact with the Genma lord that if he gave him one more chance at killing his target and diying with a perfect record he would sell his soul. His wish was granted. The wound in his heart, and the poison in his veins were removed. It was a rainy night, two days into his assassination and Tomukagi once again was imbuing his kitetsu in a holy flame. However, he accidently cut him self over the flame, and his tainted blood corrupted it and his kitetsu. As he grabbed the hilts of his weapons he felt a dark power surging through him. Any sense of honor and remorse was instantly stripped away. He finally apeared in front of Terakumo's door, with lighning shining and his kitetsu glowing blood red he came in with a sinister smile. Terakumo tried calling for help but Tomukagi slaughtered all of the maides, mistresses and servants in the house. The final things heard in the house were Terakumo's last screams before he was diced into pieces. With his mission completed, it was time to keep his end of the bargin, his body was then engulfed in a white flame and he was sent to the Genma Realm. The Genma Lord decided that Tomukagi would serve him better as on oni. The Ceremony of Blood was preformed. He was layed on a stone alter as lesser oni fested on his organs and drank his blood while he was still concious. The Genma King then made him drink his blood out of a goblet, which was his wife's skull. He resisted but then was force fed his blood. By swallowing it, he made a pact with the Oni Genma and he was transformed into an onimusha. A demon samuria who is sworn to serve his new Shogan, the Genma Lord. He resides in the Genma realm to this day. With the aproach of the Mortal Kombat tournamet the Barrier Realms will be weakend and he will be sent through to thrust the world in darkness again. Leading the way to the arrival of the Genma Lord.

heres another one

name: cheetosaurus rex
age 1
height: giant
weight: few for his height
style: cheeto
weapon: cheeto

attacks:
cheeto storm: make a rain of mortal cheetos fall to the oponent reducing a lot of his health

fatality:
cheeto smash: smashes the oponent reducing hi to dust

bio: after falling from his package he had to survive the most hard days of his life, now one year has pased and he wants revenge...

Oni Name: Cralar
Age: Unknown: appox. 300 years old
Height: 10' 6"
Weight: 230 lbs.
Sex: Male
Alignment: Evil
Blood Type: Unknown
Weapon: Claws

Special Moves1: Bane of Fire: Fire surrounds Cralar, and acts as a shield against projectile and hand to hand combat attacks.

2: Bane of Diseise(spelling sorry): Cralar fires a green cloud towards his opponent. If hit, his opponent will lose health slowly (like impale) for 7 seconds.

3: Bane of Darkness: Cralar fires a slow moving black orb towards his opponent. If not avoided, the orb will explode, causing major damage and slowing the opponents movements for 10 seconds.

Fatality1: Claws of Doom: Cralar leaps onto his opponent's shoulders and begins stabbing them through the shoulders, then uppercuts his opponent through the chin, killing them.

Fatality2: Gate to the Netherealm: Cralar creates a portal to the Netherealm, then toss him, screaming, into the portal. After a few seconds, there is screaming and blood flies out of the portals in excess, then finally his opponent's head is thrown out at his feet.

Story: Not much is known of Cralar, except that, in life, he was a wealthy lord who mistreated his subjects, and tortured and murdered them simply for his enjoyment. Eventually he was brutally murdered by his own son. He was sent to the Netherealm. But no matter how hard they tortured him, no matter how much pain they gave him, he never screamed, never made a sound, and the only noise he ever made was a grunt as his tortuers arrived. The demons were so unnerved by his behavior that, instead of torturing him, they created a body for his soul that suited his evil nature. No longer a victim, Cralar is now the chief torturer of the Oni. But now that the Dragon King has returned to power, the Netherealm released Cralar to do the bidding of the Dragon King. It is unknown if the warriors of Earth will be able to stand against the pure evil of Cralar.

Oni Description: A giant monster of an Oni, at least twice as tall as a normal human being, his face is a collage of cuts and bruises, with no nose and a mouth that has 3 rows of sharp teeth. His eyes glow a sickening green color. And he has only a dozen greasy strands of hair left. His body is scarred horribly, with a vertical gash in his stomach. Both of his arms are long and end in 4 claws, sharper than daggers. His long legs end in a reptile-like foot, with several sharp claws on each foot. The most terrifying aspect of him is that he is pitch black, all over, making his pearly white teeth and claws and horrible eyes stand out even more.

ur-soul-is-mine Wrote: I'll Judge... tell me the rules..

Well the rules are:
1:Revewe Braket(When I make one)
2:PM me with vote.
3:Name a reason why you want to keep or get rid of that Oni(in your pm).
4:I'll put a post up saying(example)

Oni's~name vs Oni's-name.

you will pm me like this

Keep Oni's~Name Rid of Oni's-name.

I Hope this helps!!!!!!

Oh yeah!!!!!1the judges so far are
1.me
2.ur-soul-is-mine
3.MkFrEAK

I need 3 more judges!!!!

And I need 11 more enteries!!!!!!!!!

Name: Bartoch Age: 14,000 years old.
Height: 8 "4
Weight: 2-tons
Sex: Male
Alignment: neutral
BloodType:
Weapon: redclaws
Fighting Styles: Oni and Jujutsu
Weapon Styles: Redclaws (Long sharp poisonus red claws)
Special Moves1: Bartoch grabs his opponent by the throat and begins sticking them in the back with his Redclaws and then he nails them into the ground.
2: Bartoch uses his foot to hold the opponent hostile on the ground and he then begins to bite their stomach.
3. Bartoch uses his magical powers to create a ball of acid and throws it at his opponent making them burn.
Fatality1: Bartoch runs up to his opponent and kicks them in the chest leaving a huge hole, blood drips out and then Bartoch bites on their head really fast and they start to convulsing and shaking.
Fatality2: Bartoch picks up his opponent and bites them in half, blood starts squirting out and Bartoch sticks his mouth under the draining blood like a water fountain. Then Bartoch eats the remains and burps really loud. LOL

Story: Bartoch was an oni to be reconed with, he was mostly feared by alot of the oni kings, One day one of the kings became angry because he felt that it was wrong to have such fool be feared by everyone. The king went looking for Bartoch along with the other king's and demanded that he battle them, Bartoch refused to fight and said he was not going to commit a crime against Kings. The Oni kings became angered by his words and attacked. Bartoch did not attack but only defended himself, after being hit too much Bartoch had no choice, He slahed and clawed at the kings until they were all defeated. Later on, Bartoch was captiured by Elite Oni's after one oni prince reported that he saw Bartoch make the first move, the boy was ACTUALLY defending his now dead father and wanted revenge against his father's killer. Therefore, Bartoch was taken to the castle for execution but for some reason it did not seem right to kill him for their only evidence was a mere prince, Bartoch was sealed into a magical orb for life. Now, After being held captive in an ancient orb by Molochs father for 2 millenia, the oni Bartoch magically breaks the seal and begins to seek revenge against Moloch to make him pay for his ancestors mistakes, only to find that Moloch has a new compatant, The reincarnated oni Drahmin who has already planned for Bartoch to come. However, these two oni have yet to learn that Bartoch has a plan of his own...

Oni Description:
After being held captive in an ancient orb by Molochs father for 2 millenia, the oni Bartoch seeks revenge against Moloch to make him pay for his ancestors mistakes, only to find that Moloch has a new compatant, The reincarnated oni Drahmin who has already planned for Bartoch to come. However, these two oni have yet to learn that Bartoch has a plan of his own...
Oni Description: Bartoch is dark red and has cuts and bruises all on his body from where he was supposedly tortured and beaten with a metal chain. He also has long sharp poisonus claws that can easily poison someone if they are struck hard enough. Bartoch has long fangs and bright glowing green eyes, He wears no clothes but only a belt that gives him protection from johnny cage's nut-punch.

Please Please God, please please send me more judges!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

First of all, forgive me my english, I'm from Hungary
and I hurried.

Thanks.

Name: Rosin

Height: 173 cm

weight: 79 kg

Sex: male

Alignment: evil

Blood type: ?

Weapon: called zoral, i have mede a few

sketches you can see them on my web page.

Fighting style 1; 2 :Oni, Alma

Weapon style: Zoral

Specials: 1: "Arm bite"
He simply goes to the opponent and bites it's
arm a few times, wich causes a lot of
blood loss.

2: "Jumping Jack"
He performes a sweep kind of thing, he
kicks out your legs, while he is still standing
one of his leg. He/Shefalls on their back, after that, while you are still
on the ground, he quckly start jumping on
you, 5 times. 2 times on your leg, 2 times on your
upper body and once on your head.

3: "Suprise kick"
He kick you up wery high, and while he/she/it is
still in air, Rosin goes behind you, and after
you landed on your head, another kick comes in
your spine. Of course you shall be landing
on the other side of the arena.

Ftality 1: "Shin"
First a litle kick in your leg, wich make the kombatant
do knee down. After that, an emormous kick
in your head. It'll fly str8 up, mean while,
he take out his weapon and wait for the
head to fall down. When it does, he spears the
head with it. The head naturally ?fall's, cuts, breaks how do you say?
of the boddy. And lift it up to the direction of the sky.

Fatality 2: "Choppin' the sandwich"
At the begining, just a litlle prod, after that,
you'll fall back on your back. The wepon comes again,
mekas stripes of your body. Starting from your
feet, to your head. These cuts come about
3 inches often. These cuts are so strong, they cut
trought bone, metal.

Charachter's story.
Once a kombatant who had a fight in the first 10th
anniversary of the first tournamont of MK.
But he had lost the fight. After his death, his
body was thrown to the netherealm. There he had awaken,
and tourtored by his defeated enemy's. A yet
unknown clan had collected the "useless elemnts"
of the Netherealm. So he was forced to do slavery,
and wanted to take revange on who made this
to him. Unfortunatly his plan to destruction
was revealed, so was punished. His arms were tied to each other,
and had to carry enormus weight on his back forever.
He's arms were ?tied? with a special metal. The irony of fait,
that material was mined by him self.
He had to escape somehow, and to reach that goal, he
made partnership with a guard. Rosin promised him, if he get his
message to his friend, Drahmin, he will be ruler of this planet. The
guard accepted the offer, and secretly sent the message. He was a mutant
who grew up on a wasteland, like Baraka, so didn't mined to
take kontrol of the planet. Getting ready for his escape, hi bit his arms down
so he can fight if necesarry. After Quan Chi AND Scorpion AND the
2 known Oni's have left the realm Drahmin came for Rosin.
Most of the guards and the bad guys were killed in battle to free our man.
Unfortunatly that particular "sentinel" was killed, so he's promise
couldn't be accomplished.
The two Oni went back their to their hiding place where they met
with Moloch. They all made weapons for them self's and wauted for
the tournament begin. But still, Rosin had to finish with all
of his enemies, so couldn't start the battle. He is still looking
for revange, punishment and truth...

Character Description:
He is quite like Drahmin at 1st sight,
but than, you see no arms, and very strong legs,
because the strong physical work he done
in the mine. Being a prisoner who have
just escaped from prison, he's clotes are were
lame, dirty. He's upper body is a bit skin and bone.
No hair, hat, ear. But that doesn't mens,
that he can't hear. Concepts are being in progresson.
I'll post some later.

NOTE: I CAN' EXPRESS MY SELF AS I WANT TO, 'CAUSE
I'M NOT ENGLISH, AMERICAN. SO IF YOU HAVE
IDEAS I SHOULD PUT IN TO THIS TEXT DON'T BOTHER...

That's about Rosin for a while, I'll put
my sketches on the a few day later. If you are
interested.

If any one Knows anyone who could judge or enter please let me know

Name: Pykarrah
Age: 10056
Highth: 6'8
Weight: 306
Sex: M
Eyes: None
Allignment: Psyco-Evil
Family: None
Story: When the Netherealm was first created it needed a guardian to make sure no one would escape. Pykarrah was one of the few selected for this job. Pykarrah is a two-headed, lizard-like oni, with razor sharp teeth and a rotton flesh and bone corspe..with eyesockets, but no eyes. He wears human flesh and skin as his armor. Truly fearsome in battle, no one in the netherealm attempted to try to escape, in fear they would be ripped apart by this devil-beast.
Centuries after the netherealm was built, 10094 years later, to be exact, the tormented soul, known as scorpian, brought forth a sorcerer by the name of quan chi. Quan chi, fearing scorpian would kill him, desperately ran, to escape out the netherealm, but Pykarrah, stopped him in his tracks. Just when Pykarrah was about to maul open quan chi, quan used his sorcery to brain-wash the tormented oni into aiding him to escape the netherealm. Once Pykarrah and Quan chi had escaped, Pykarrahs true powers were lost, and Quan chi left Pykarrah for dead. However, a year later, Pykarrah was dicovered by the Outworld investigation agency. They had spent the entire day analyzing his dna, to find out were he came from. All of a sudden, sektor storms the agency, with his sektor junkie robot clan, and destroys everything. Sektor finds the corpe of Pykarrah, and then in an attempt to gain control over him, tries to transform him into a robotic junkie..but son finds that he becomes more lethal then ever. With Pykarrah on Sektors side, Sektor would take over Outworld, and Earthrealm in one clean blow...

Special Moves: Twin fire bite, Devil tail
Fatality- Pykarrah's one head bites the opponents head off, the other head rips his torso off.

Ending- Scorpian had seen Pykarrah before..but never had the opportunity to fight him...In the end..Pykarrah lay dead..next to his once befriended master...Quan chi.

Ill judge

Can I get some impressions on my oni? Just asking.

SmokeNc-017 Wrote: Can I get some impressions on my oni? Just asking.

I haven't read it all, but I was most interested in the story! It's great!

cheetosaurus is gonna own all

i'll judge. OK!

All right, welcome Sub_Zero!!!

Now I need 1 more judge and 10 more enteries!!!!!!!
Every one, That only made 1, you can make a second one if you want

Leon
Age:19
height:6ft4
Weight:slim,but ohisically fit
sex:male
Allianment:good
Weapon:Warrior"s spear
fighting stance1:Jet-Kun-Do
Fighting stance2:Sombo
Weapon stance:Warrior's spear
Bio: A former native American
Warrior trapped in an oni's body
he must now kill Shang Tsung for
trapping him in Drahmin's old body!
Looks:Like Drahmin, but doesn't wear the mask!
special moves1:Warrior's prance, Leon prances around the victome stabbing them in their side.
2:Kiss my axe, Leon throws a battle axe at the opponet's chin.
3:Spear, Leon tackles the opponet to startle him/her.
Fatality1:The circle of arrows, Leon takes out 2 huge arrow-heads and cuts a circle on the opponet's stomach (about 2ft in leinghth and width.)runs around, and kicks them in their back so that the circle of their stomch, organs, guts, and blood circle the opponet's limp body laying on the ground.


Well it's better then Creon, my first one!

Again, Judges you don't have to vote for this when the tournament starts!!!
I will not vote when my Characters are in a battle!!!!!