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Thanks for making this one up, they should make this one sticky so i'm posting my character idea again.
KUAN-YIN
Origin: Earthrealm
Age: 18
Height: Unknown
Weight: Unknown
Alignment: Good
Status: Monk
Links: Kept Secret.
BIO
After the rising of the Dragon King it was only a matter of time before outworld was taken over. The kings power grows as his army gets bigger and the war has spread throughout the realms. Undefeatable forces marched through the realm of Edenia, but Kitana was nowhere to be found. A young warrior named Kuan-Yin was training his martial arts skills at the Whu Shi Academy under the guidance of Kung Lao. Rumors have spread the academy of a mysterious runaway woman who hides in the shadows. Learning these rumors Kuan-Yin made ready to compete in Mortal Kombat. Although Kung Lao did not approve because his training was far from complete there was no stopping him. Kung Lao did only pray for his survival and the secrecy of his true identity.
ENDING
Kuan-Yin fought the Dragon King with all is might but could not stand the power of the Great King. The mysterious woman also known as Kitana has set up a diversion witch gave Kung Lao the opportunity to help Kuan-Yin escape. During this escape there was no chance for Kitana and she was captured by the Dragon King and Edenia fell to complete darkness. After returning to the Whu Shi Academy Kung Lao revealed his true identity and importance to the warriors of Earthrealm. Because KUAN-YIN was in fact CHEN KANG, the one and only son of Kitana and Liu Kang and only heir to the throne of Edenia who has been kept secret all these years. Kung Lao continued his training because Chen Kang must be ready for the Dragon Kings invasion of Earth Realm
KUAN-YIN
Origin: Earthrealm
Age: 18
Height: Unknown
Weight: Unknown
Alignment: Good
Status: Monk
Links: Kept Secret.
BIO
After the rising of the Dragon King it was only a matter of time before outworld was taken over. The kings power grows as his army gets bigger and the war has spread throughout the realms. Undefeatable forces marched through the realm of Edenia, but Kitana was nowhere to be found. A young warrior named Kuan-Yin was training his martial arts skills at the Whu Shi Academy under the guidance of Kung Lao. Rumors have spread the academy of a mysterious runaway woman who hides in the shadows. Learning these rumors Kuan-Yin made ready to compete in Mortal Kombat. Although Kung Lao did not approve because his training was far from complete there was no stopping him. Kung Lao did only pray for his survival and the secrecy of his true identity.
ENDING
Kuan-Yin fought the Dragon King with all is might but could not stand the power of the Great King. The mysterious woman also known as Kitana has set up a diversion witch gave Kung Lao the opportunity to help Kuan-Yin escape. During this escape there was no chance for Kitana and she was captured by the Dragon King and Edenia fell to complete darkness. After returning to the Whu Shi Academy Kung Lao revealed his true identity and importance to the warriors of Earthrealm. Because KUAN-YIN was in fact CHEN KANG, the one and only son of Kitana and Liu Kang and only heir to the throne of Edenia who has been kept secret all these years. Kung Lao continued his training because Chen Kang must be ready for the Dragon Kings invasion of Earth Realm
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| spike81 Wrote: Thanks for making this one up, they should make this one sticky so i'm posting my character idea again. KUAN-YIN Origin: Earthrealm Age: 18 Height: Unknown Weight: Unknown Alignment: Good Status: Monk Links: Kept Secret. BIO After the rising of the Dragon King it was only a matter of time before outworld was taken over. The kings power grows as his army gets bigger and the war has spread throughout the realms. Undefeatable forces marched through the realm of Edenia, but Kitana was nowhere to be found. A young warrior named Kuan-Yin was training his martial arts skills at the Whu Shi Academy under the guidance of Kung Lao. Rumors have spread the academy of a mysterious runaway woman who hides in the shadows. Learning these rumors Kuan-Yin made ready to compete in Mortal Kombat. Although Kung Lao did not approve because his training was far from complete there was no stopping him. Kung Lao did only pray for his survival and the secrecy of his true identity. ENDING Kuan-Yin fought the Dragon King with all is might but could not stand the power of the Great King. The mysterious woman also known as Kitana has set up a diversion witch gave Kung Lao the opportunity to help Kuan-Yin escape. During this escape there was no chance for Kitana and she was captured by the Dragon King and Edenia fell to complete darkness. After returning to the Whu Shi Academy Kung Lao revealed his true identity and importance to the warriors of Earthrealm. Because KUAN-YIN was in fact CHEN KANG, the one and only son of Kitana and Liu Kang and only heir to the throne of Edenia who has been kept secret all these years. Kung Lao continued his training because Chen Kang must be ready for the Dragon Kings invasion of Earth Realm |
Great idea man. I liked his story and the idea of someone like a "darker" Liu Kang. I would definately have to check this character out. Good job man.
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Nemesis bio
Name: Nemesi
Owner: tgrant
Age: Eternal (unknown if he is immortal)
Sex: Male
Weight: Unknown (slim - slight build)
Race: God/Human
Family: Father: Raiden
Mother: Unknown
Group: Aligned with Jada and the Earth warriors.
Clan: N/A
Side: Good
Eyes: None. Electrical. Change colour dependent on mood. Occasionally flare.
Hair: Short, black and spiky. Electricity runs through it (up and down the spikes too), making the hair stand on end. Because of his charged hair, he can use himself as a lightning rod when he is weak. The lightning bolt will give him extra strength and power, whilst also rejuvenating his health. (He can also change his hairstyle at will because of he charged nature.)
Look: Wears a long dark blue trench coat that is tied around the waist. Wears black gloves that have a lightning bolt on the palm. Wears a necklace, made of silver that his father gave to him. It is shaped like a lightning bolt and has some very special powers.
Weapons and styles: Nemesi is skilled with many earthly weapons, due to his long time on Earth. He has more skill with most weapons than those who use them expertly on Earth do. Due to his godly nature, he can wield any unknown weapon expertly too. However, his weapon of choice is the Staff. Unlike his father however, his staff is made from pure electrical energy. Although it is in a solid unmoving state, which he can manipulate at will. (Behaves just like a normal staff. If he thrust it through someone he would then have it return to its normal energy state, meaning the electrical energy is released in that persons body, killing him or her instantly.) When struck, the enemy is shocked slightly, even when they block an attack, allowing him to take advantage and attack once again. (Also allows for extra damage when hits actually connect.)
No one else can wield this weapon. (Except his father!)
Nemesi is trained in many styles. He has learnt Mantis, Shaolin Fist, Crane, Tae Kwon Do, Judo and Ninjitsu, to name a few. He has also learned several styles not known to mortal men. His vast expertise in styles and weaponry make him a force to be reckoned with. Has trained with his father, who taught him Nan Chuan and Jujutsu. He has trained for many years in these styles among others. He is unpredictable in Kombat, for the enemy will never know what he will unleash.
Powers: Wields the wrath of thunder and lightning just like his father. Has enhanced telekinetic and psychic abilities. (He does not use cheesy arm movements when using his telekinetic abilities. He will just stand there and move things with his mind. Looks almost thisthingisdisabledless.) These psychic abilities are enhanced due to his mix of human and godly intelligence. Due to the mix of his powers, styles and expertise in weaponry, he is extremely formidable in battle. He mixes all of these in battle, proving to be extremely formidable in battle. (But has yet to defeat his father, Raiden in friendly Kombat.)
Special Moves:
Disable (1): Disables all of the opponents special attacks temporarily.
Disable (2): Disables opponent completely. They are unable to move. Allows for a free attack.
Confusion: Uses his psychic powers to make the opponent confused. They attack other adversaries or themselves.
Torpedo: Same as Raidens.
Lightning Blast: Standard electrical projectile.
Lightning Strike: Summons a bolt of lightning to strike the enemy.
Psyonic Jolt: Induces the enemy with a headache using telekinesis to transfer electricity into their head.
Thunder Wave: Throws a spark of electricity on the ground. It splits in thousands of different beams that seek the opponent. They will seek the opponent, even if jumped.
Staff: Can control his staff using his mind. Prefers to ride (surf) on top of it. Whilst surfing on the staff, Nemesi shoots projectiles at the opponent as well as throwing random objects from around the arena at them. (Can have a small number of weapons simultaneously attack the enemy).
Fatality 1: Telekinetic Rip.
Levitates the enemy in the air. He begins to concentrate on their body. The opponents arms stretch out. They become rigid and they scream in pain. After a few seconds, their arms fly off, flying across the arena. After more screaming, their head and torso split down the centre. Their body pieces drop to the floor in a pool of blood.
Fatality 2: Impalement Electrocution.
Rams his lightning staff into the opponent (as explained before). The staff glows and then it disappears as it takes its true form, as pure electrical energy. A wave of electricity is seen spread across the opponent as they explode. Their few tiny remains are scattered around the arena.
Bio:
Nemesi has kept himself as a recluse for centuries, training in many martial arts forces and honing his powers and skills. He has been fuelled by his anger towards the Elder Gods, those he believed him to be an outcast, because he is part human. Those who believe that he will never amount to anything great. Those who believe he can never live up to his father. He has ignored his fathers wishes to help him aid the Earth warriors against the forces of Outworld, despite the fact that he knows how important the situation is. Now Nemesi abandons his training. He chooses now to fight alongside the Earth warriors and his father. He will attain revenge for his father by destroying the bane of his existence Shao Khan. He will make himself known as one of the great warriors of Earth realm and he will show the Elder Gods that he is no mere mortal. He has his own stand to make towards the eyes of the Elder Gods and he will make this stand and show them that he is more than the mere mortal they claim him to be. He hopes that one-day he will join his father in the Pantheon and become a god such as he. Though he has gained the respect from his father, Nemesi wishes for respect from the Elder Gods. Only time will show if he will receive his long life dream - to be seen and respected as a god by the Elder Gods.
Name: Nemesi
Owner: tgrant
Age: Eternal (unknown if he is immortal)
Sex: Male
Weight: Unknown (slim - slight build)
Race: God/Human
Family: Father: Raiden
Mother: Unknown
Group: Aligned with Jada and the Earth warriors.
Clan: N/A
Side: Good
Eyes: None. Electrical. Change colour dependent on mood. Occasionally flare.
Hair: Short, black and spiky. Electricity runs through it (up and down the spikes too), making the hair stand on end. Because of his charged hair, he can use himself as a lightning rod when he is weak. The lightning bolt will give him extra strength and power, whilst also rejuvenating his health. (He can also change his hairstyle at will because of he charged nature.)
Look: Wears a long dark blue trench coat that is tied around the waist. Wears black gloves that have a lightning bolt on the palm. Wears a necklace, made of silver that his father gave to him. It is shaped like a lightning bolt and has some very special powers.
Weapons and styles: Nemesi is skilled with many earthly weapons, due to his long time on Earth. He has more skill with most weapons than those who use them expertly on Earth do. Due to his godly nature, he can wield any unknown weapon expertly too. However, his weapon of choice is the Staff. Unlike his father however, his staff is made from pure electrical energy. Although it is in a solid unmoving state, which he can manipulate at will. (Behaves just like a normal staff. If he thrust it through someone he would then have it return to its normal energy state, meaning the electrical energy is released in that persons body, killing him or her instantly.) When struck, the enemy is shocked slightly, even when they block an attack, allowing him to take advantage and attack once again. (Also allows for extra damage when hits actually connect.)
No one else can wield this weapon. (Except his father!)
Nemesi is trained in many styles. He has learnt Mantis, Shaolin Fist, Crane, Tae Kwon Do, Judo and Ninjitsu, to name a few. He has also learned several styles not known to mortal men. His vast expertise in styles and weaponry make him a force to be reckoned with. Has trained with his father, who taught him Nan Chuan and Jujutsu. He has trained for many years in these styles among others. He is unpredictable in Kombat, for the enemy will never know what he will unleash.
Powers: Wields the wrath of thunder and lightning just like his father. Has enhanced telekinetic and psychic abilities. (He does not use cheesy arm movements when using his telekinetic abilities. He will just stand there and move things with his mind. Looks almost thisthingisdisabledless.) These psychic abilities are enhanced due to his mix of human and godly intelligence. Due to the mix of his powers, styles and expertise in weaponry, he is extremely formidable in battle. He mixes all of these in battle, proving to be extremely formidable in battle. (But has yet to defeat his father, Raiden in friendly Kombat.)
Special Moves:
Disable (1): Disables all of the opponents special attacks temporarily.
Disable (2): Disables opponent completely. They are unable to move. Allows for a free attack.
Confusion: Uses his psychic powers to make the opponent confused. They attack other adversaries or themselves.
Torpedo: Same as Raidens.
Lightning Blast: Standard electrical projectile.
Lightning Strike: Summons a bolt of lightning to strike the enemy.
Psyonic Jolt: Induces the enemy with a headache using telekinesis to transfer electricity into their head.
Thunder Wave: Throws a spark of electricity on the ground. It splits in thousands of different beams that seek the opponent. They will seek the opponent, even if jumped.
Staff: Can control his staff using his mind. Prefers to ride (surf) on top of it. Whilst surfing on the staff, Nemesi shoots projectiles at the opponent as well as throwing random objects from around the arena at them. (Can have a small number of weapons simultaneously attack the enemy).
Fatality 1: Telekinetic Rip.
Levitates the enemy in the air. He begins to concentrate on their body. The opponents arms stretch out. They become rigid and they scream in pain. After a few seconds, their arms fly off, flying across the arena. After more screaming, their head and torso split down the centre. Their body pieces drop to the floor in a pool of blood.
Fatality 2: Impalement Electrocution.
Rams his lightning staff into the opponent (as explained before). The staff glows and then it disappears as it takes its true form, as pure electrical energy. A wave of electricity is seen spread across the opponent as they explode. Their few tiny remains are scattered around the arena.
Bio:
Nemesi has kept himself as a recluse for centuries, training in many martial arts forces and honing his powers and skills. He has been fuelled by his anger towards the Elder Gods, those he believed him to be an outcast, because he is part human. Those who believe that he will never amount to anything great. Those who believe he can never live up to his father. He has ignored his fathers wishes to help him aid the Earth warriors against the forces of Outworld, despite the fact that he knows how important the situation is. Now Nemesi abandons his training. He chooses now to fight alongside the Earth warriors and his father. He will attain revenge for his father by destroying the bane of his existence Shao Khan. He will make himself known as one of the great warriors of Earth realm and he will show the Elder Gods that he is no mere mortal. He has his own stand to make towards the eyes of the Elder Gods and he will make this stand and show them that he is more than the mere mortal they claim him to be. He hopes that one-day he will join his father in the Pantheon and become a god such as he. Though he has gained the respect from his father, Nemesi wishes for respect from the Elder Gods. Only time will show if he will receive his long life dream - to be seen and respected as a god by the Elder Gods.
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IMO character concepts should be kept in seperate threads. They are few and far between and that way everyone sees them. It saves them having to go through a huge thread of them all!
I have a second character concept to post. I will post it soon.
I have a second character concept to post. I will post it soon.
| tgrant Wrote: IMO character concepts should be kept in seperate threads. They are few and far between and that way everyone sees them. It saves them having to go through a huge thread of them all! I have a second character concept to post. I will post it soon. |
I agree.. Great concept of Nemesi. It would be really interesting to follow his journey in becoming an Elder God.
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Thanks Spike81! Glad you like Nemesi. And you did right to make your own thread for your character. My third character will be posted in it's own thread.
Here is my second concept.
Jadas bio
Name: Jada
Owner: tgrant
Age: 22
Sex: Female
Height: Unknown
Weight: Unknown
Race: Human
Group: Best friends with the half God, Nemesi.
Costume:
Clan: Was born into the Red Dragon, but grew up outside of the clan. Raised by the Thunder God, Raiden.
Side: Good
Eyes: Jadas eyes used to be normal, but due to the blade which she wields, her eyes now have a slight flame around the iris and lightning flows around the eyeball. A light, icy mist (unnoticeable to Jada) swirls within her eyes. Jada is incapable of using emissions of energy from her eyes. (If you do not want her eyes like this, just delete and add what you prefer. This was just an idea to show her unity with the blade.)
Hair:
Weapon: A knife that wields the powers of fire, ice and lightning. The blade is wrapped in flames and lightning courses up and down the blade and around the flames. Around all of this, is an icy mist. This blade also absorbs energy of each of the three elements.
Special character powers: None
Special moves:
Arctic Heat: A long range, icy beam of energy is fired from the blade. Upon contact it sends a chill throughout the opponent, causing them to shiver uncontrollably allowing for a free attack.
Dancing Flame: Jadas blade bursts into flames, and emits several flames, which
Exploding Jolt: A sudden blast of electrical energy from Jadas blade knocks the opponent away from her when in close range. It also shocks them.
Fatality one: Elemental Split Jada delivers a quick swipe to the opponents waist, which freezes along the swipe path. Jada then swipes again however, this swipe is slower and the blade burns through the frozen flesh, whilst the opponent howls in pain. Eventually the opponents body is split and a quick blast of lightning from Jadas blade sends the body across the arena.
Bio: Jada is the daughter of two members of the Red Dragon clan. However, upon her birth, against the clan rules, they hid the child outside of the clan, not wanting their child to live the way they had under the clans rules.
The Thunder God Raiden and two Elder Gods (those of fire and ice) found the child and decided to look after the child. They knew that this child would become a great warrior and would be a great help in the battle of the realms in the future.
Jada grew up in Raidens care and formed a friendship with his son Nemesi. Both have trained for several years together, learning several martial arts. During this time, she was given a gift from the gods who found her. She was given a blade that harnessed the powers of fire, ice and lightning. Jada trained with this weapon, creating different attacks and utilising effectively the powers the elemental blade granted her. Also, under Raidens tutelage, she learned of the other realms, Earths many adversaries and the ways of Mortal Kombat.
Raiden, for as long as Jada could remember, had brought her news of her parents throughout her life so she never forgot who they were, although she had never really met them. Knowing that they were alive, Jada planned to one day free her parents from the Red Dragon and end the clan once and for all with Nemesis help.
However, the news Raiden brought one day, was that of her parents deaths. Jada was informed that their murderer was someone from within the Red Dragon. They had been killed whilst trying to flee the Red Dragon alongside others who had tried to escape.
With her sacred blade, Jada sets out to seek and destroy her parents killer, and ultimately the entire Red Dragon, with the aid of her friend Nemesi. Now would be the time one of Earths newest warriors would reveal herself, realise her destiny and learn of her true potential.
Here is my second concept.
Jadas bio
Name: Jada
Owner: tgrant
Age: 22
Sex: Female
Height: Unknown
Weight: Unknown
Race: Human
Group: Best friends with the half God, Nemesi.
Costume:
Clan: Was born into the Red Dragon, but grew up outside of the clan. Raised by the Thunder God, Raiden.
Side: Good
Eyes: Jadas eyes used to be normal, but due to the blade which she wields, her eyes now have a slight flame around the iris and lightning flows around the eyeball. A light, icy mist (unnoticeable to Jada) swirls within her eyes. Jada is incapable of using emissions of energy from her eyes. (If you do not want her eyes like this, just delete and add what you prefer. This was just an idea to show her unity with the blade.)
Hair:
Weapon: A knife that wields the powers of fire, ice and lightning. The blade is wrapped in flames and lightning courses up and down the blade and around the flames. Around all of this, is an icy mist. This blade also absorbs energy of each of the three elements.
Special character powers: None
Special moves:
Arctic Heat: A long range, icy beam of energy is fired from the blade. Upon contact it sends a chill throughout the opponent, causing them to shiver uncontrollably allowing for a free attack.
Dancing Flame: Jadas blade bursts into flames, and emits several flames, which
Exploding Jolt: A sudden blast of electrical energy from Jadas blade knocks the opponent away from her when in close range. It also shocks them.
Fatality one: Elemental Split Jada delivers a quick swipe to the opponents waist, which freezes along the swipe path. Jada then swipes again however, this swipe is slower and the blade burns through the frozen flesh, whilst the opponent howls in pain. Eventually the opponents body is split and a quick blast of lightning from Jadas blade sends the body across the arena.
Bio: Jada is the daughter of two members of the Red Dragon clan. However, upon her birth, against the clan rules, they hid the child outside of the clan, not wanting their child to live the way they had under the clans rules.
The Thunder God Raiden and two Elder Gods (those of fire and ice) found the child and decided to look after the child. They knew that this child would become a great warrior and would be a great help in the battle of the realms in the future.
Jada grew up in Raidens care and formed a friendship with his son Nemesi. Both have trained for several years together, learning several martial arts. During this time, she was given a gift from the gods who found her. She was given a blade that harnessed the powers of fire, ice and lightning. Jada trained with this weapon, creating different attacks and utilising effectively the powers the elemental blade granted her. Also, under Raidens tutelage, she learned of the other realms, Earths many adversaries and the ways of Mortal Kombat.
Raiden, for as long as Jada could remember, had brought her news of her parents throughout her life so she never forgot who they were, although she had never really met them. Knowing that they were alive, Jada planned to one day free her parents from the Red Dragon and end the clan once and for all with Nemesis help.
However, the news Raiden brought one day, was that of her parents deaths. Jada was informed that their murderer was someone from within the Red Dragon. They had been killed whilst trying to flee the Red Dragon alongside others who had tried to escape.
With her sacred blade, Jada sets out to seek and destroy her parents killer, and ultimately the entire Red Dragon, with the aid of her friend Nemesi. Now would be the time one of Earths newest warriors would reveal herself, realise her destiny and learn of her true potential.
Well done. Another great concept, I like the idea of her having an originally evil origin but raised by the gods as a good character. This way her story could have some nice surprises in it. And her weapon, the flaming blade sounds very cool. Good Job.
tgrant, u totally ripped off my character dude! i know u didnt mean it tho. but i've always posted my character concept of "jaKob" on every character posts to ever come out on this forum.
name: Jakob, son of raiden
alignment: good, half God
Description: Jakob is the son of raiden and an earth woman. he has the body and tone of an athletic 20 yr old despite the fact that he is centuries old. he has been in hiding with the monks at the wu shu academy for decades, bekuz raiden fears he would be a primary target of his enemies. but now that the dragon king has been released, raiden needs all the help he can get!
looks: jakob is really tan (kinda like jade and tanya) but with hereditary white hair from his father, which contrasts great with his skin. his hair is fixed in thick spikes identical to adult gohan from dbz, only white. he has a white patch of hair on his chin (like ultimate wolverine) and electric eyes. he wears the bruce lee lookin garments that yun and yang wear in street fighter 3, since that is kinda like kung lao from the wu shu academy. his shirt is the thunder god teal with silver buttons and trim. the japenese symbol for "life" is on his back in sliver. he has extremely baggy black martial arts pants with some kool boots that i cant describe rite now. he has black finger gloves that connect to long forearm guards like the hardy boys wear.
moves: spark stun: he shoots out the same electric projectile his father has except it stuns u when it hits u. the opponent is shocked and an electic field flows thru them rendering them immobile for a few seconds, allowing a tight combo.
lightning: jakob summons an unblockable bolt of lightning like rain in mk3.
charged kick: jakob does the flying kick his former wu shu hero used to do, liu kang. only he modified it. his feet are charged with electricity and as he is flying, he is leaving a trail of light from his feet. (picture electro flying in the old spiderman comix)
if he had a 4th sp. move it would be a teleport.
name: Jakob, son of raiden
alignment: good, half God
Description: Jakob is the son of raiden and an earth woman. he has the body and tone of an athletic 20 yr old despite the fact that he is centuries old. he has been in hiding with the monks at the wu shu academy for decades, bekuz raiden fears he would be a primary target of his enemies. but now that the dragon king has been released, raiden needs all the help he can get!
looks: jakob is really tan (kinda like jade and tanya) but with hereditary white hair from his father, which contrasts great with his skin. his hair is fixed in thick spikes identical to adult gohan from dbz, only white. he has a white patch of hair on his chin (like ultimate wolverine) and electric eyes. he wears the bruce lee lookin garments that yun and yang wear in street fighter 3, since that is kinda like kung lao from the wu shu academy. his shirt is the thunder god teal with silver buttons and trim. the japenese symbol for "life" is on his back in sliver. he has extremely baggy black martial arts pants with some kool boots that i cant describe rite now. he has black finger gloves that connect to long forearm guards like the hardy boys wear.
moves: spark stun: he shoots out the same electric projectile his father has except it stuns u when it hits u. the opponent is shocked and an electic field flows thru them rendering them immobile for a few seconds, allowing a tight combo.
lightning: jakob summons an unblockable bolt of lightning like rain in mk3.
charged kick: jakob does the flying kick his former wu shu hero used to do, liu kang. only he modified it. his feet are charged with electricity and as he is flying, he is leaving a trail of light from his feet. (picture electro flying in the old spiderman comix)
if he had a 4th sp. move it would be a teleport.
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| warrior Wrote: tgrant, u totally ripped off my character dude! i know u didnt mean it tho. but i've always posted my character concept of "jaKob" on every character posts to ever come out on this forum. |
I DON'T think so dude! Not only is Nemesi an original piece of work on my behalf he is also my first ever character cocept and one I'm extremely proud of! Also, he is one of the main characters in an MK story that is also the main attraction of one of the MK sites I visit!
I would never steal ideas! Or rip-off someones work! Nemesi took me along time to come up with!
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Name: Max
Alliance: Nuetral
Race: Human
Realm: Earth
Fighting Styles: Pi Gua, Boxing, Machete
Special moves:
Lock down: traps the opponent in a headlock and punches them 3 times
Gotcha Grab: Lifts opponent by the neck and punches them in the stomach.
Fatality:
Death lock: Pushes opponent to the ground and then slams opponents head in the ground repeatedly until the opponents is covered in blood.
Look:
First costume: Orange jump suit with 90123 written on the back.
Second costume: A Red Dragon Uniform.
Third costume: A Lin Kuei uniform.
Story: After being falsly convicted of murder,Max is sent to the Special Forces maximum security prison.One day he over heard Jax and Sonya planning how to defeat the Deadly Alliance Max decided it was time for him to break out.After Jax and Sonya traveled to outworld Max made his move.He slipped past security and was about to exit the prison when he saw the inter-realm transporter.Curious he stepped toward it and was instantly tranported to outworld.Upon reaching outworld he was shocked and confused at what he was seeing.While traveling in outworld he met the grandmaster of the Lin Kuei,Sub-Zero.Sub-Zero offered him food and shelter.After overhearing that The Lin Kuei had a rival clan named the Red Dragon,Max abruptly left the Lin Kuei's temple.Wanting to repay Sub-Zero for his help he set out to find the Red Dragon.He crossed pathes with a member of the red dragon named Mavado.Mavado fought Max.After an intense battle,Mavado saw how well trained Max was and offered him a place in his clan.Max accepted and traveled to the Red Dragon's hideout with another motive in mind.
Ending: After hearing about the Dragon King's return from Mavado,Max suited up for battle.Unknown to Mavado,Max has been secretly leaking information to Sub-Zero.While on there way to confront the Dragon King,the Red Dragon ran into the Lin Kuei.An intense battle broke out but the Lin Kuei had the upper hand because they knew all of the Red Dragon different attacks.After the Red Dragon was defeated Sub-Zero offered Max a place in the Lin Kuei.Max accepted and the Lin Kuei gained another member.
Alliance: Nuetral
Race: Human
Realm: Earth
Fighting Styles: Pi Gua, Boxing, Machete
Special moves:
Lock down: traps the opponent in a headlock and punches them 3 times
Gotcha Grab: Lifts opponent by the neck and punches them in the stomach.
Fatality:
Death lock: Pushes opponent to the ground and then slams opponents head in the ground repeatedly until the opponents is covered in blood.
Look:
First costume: Orange jump suit with 90123 written on the back.
Second costume: A Red Dragon Uniform.
Third costume: A Lin Kuei uniform.
Story: After being falsly convicted of murder,Max is sent to the Special Forces maximum security prison.One day he over heard Jax and Sonya planning how to defeat the Deadly Alliance Max decided it was time for him to break out.After Jax and Sonya traveled to outworld Max made his move.He slipped past security and was about to exit the prison when he saw the inter-realm transporter.Curious he stepped toward it and was instantly tranported to outworld.Upon reaching outworld he was shocked and confused at what he was seeing.While traveling in outworld he met the grandmaster of the Lin Kuei,Sub-Zero.Sub-Zero offered him food and shelter.After overhearing that The Lin Kuei had a rival clan named the Red Dragon,Max abruptly left the Lin Kuei's temple.Wanting to repay Sub-Zero for his help he set out to find the Red Dragon.He crossed pathes with a member of the red dragon named Mavado.Mavado fought Max.After an intense battle,Mavado saw how well trained Max was and offered him a place in his clan.Max accepted and traveled to the Red Dragon's hideout with another motive in mind.
Ending: After hearing about the Dragon King's return from Mavado,Max suited up for battle.Unknown to Mavado,Max has been secretly leaking information to Sub-Zero.While on there way to confront the Dragon King,the Red Dragon ran into the Lin Kuei.An intense battle broke out but the Lin Kuei had the upper hand because they knew all of the Red Dragon different attacks.After the Red Dragon was defeated Sub-Zero offered Max a place in the Lin Kuei.Max accepted and the Lin Kuei gained another member.
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| warrior Wrote: tgrant, u totally ripped off my character dude! i know u didnt mean it tho. but i've always posted my character concept of "jaKob" on every character posts to ever come out on this forum. |
Oh, calm down. Rayden's an immortal and has lived thousands of years. Who knows how many children he could have fathered.
Name: Orin McFerrin
Height: 6'4"
Weight: 250 Lbs
Hair: Red (Long down to sholders. Long Braided beard)
Eyes: Dark Blue
Outfit 1: Green Kilt with leather strap around chest.
Outfit 2: Brown Leather pants with green shirt.
Weapon: Large Iron battle axe
Special moves:
Lock: Knee to croch sweep to ground and punch in the face.
special 1: Green light beam
Special 2: Acid canaster toss
Styles: Celtic Wrestling, Savate, Axe
Story: After many years of working up the ranks in the Red Dragon organazation Orin did not argee with the direction the Red Dragon was headed with Mavado as it's leader. Unknowingly to Mavado Orin had secretly made a deal with Thor (Raiden) that he would follow Mavado and pose as his body guard until the right oppurtunity appeared to kill Mavado. When Orin heard of the Dragon King he was reminded of the olden tales of how dragons plauged his lands. Orin then knew that it was his purpose to kill the Dragon King himself.
Ending: When Mavado engaged with a battle with Kabal and was defeated Orin saw his oppurtonity to kill him but was interuped by the Native Shaman Nightwolf. Nightwolf also a practiconor of mystic powers saw that Orin also possessed mystic powers and asked Orin to help him to defeat the Dragon King. The two warriors entered the Dragon King's palace Axes blazing there fate never reveiled.
Height: 6'4"
Weight: 250 Lbs
Hair: Red (Long down to sholders. Long Braided beard)
Eyes: Dark Blue
Outfit 1: Green Kilt with leather strap around chest.
Outfit 2: Brown Leather pants with green shirt.
Weapon: Large Iron battle axe
Special moves:
Lock: Knee to croch sweep to ground and punch in the face.
special 1: Green light beam
Special 2: Acid canaster toss
Styles: Celtic Wrestling, Savate, Axe
Story: After many years of working up the ranks in the Red Dragon organazation Orin did not argee with the direction the Red Dragon was headed with Mavado as it's leader. Unknowingly to Mavado Orin had secretly made a deal with Thor (Raiden) that he would follow Mavado and pose as his body guard until the right oppurtunity appeared to kill Mavado. When Orin heard of the Dragon King he was reminded of the olden tales of how dragons plauged his lands. Orin then knew that it was his purpose to kill the Dragon King himself.
Ending: When Mavado engaged with a battle with Kabal and was defeated Orin saw his oppurtonity to kill him but was interuped by the Native Shaman Nightwolf. Nightwolf also a practiconor of mystic powers saw that Orin also possessed mystic powers and asked Orin to help him to defeat the Dragon King. The two warriors entered the Dragon King's palace Axes blazing there fate never reveiled.
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I made a thread like this a while ago, but it disappeared into nothingness. I don't think I'll post the full stories of mine here, I think they belong in the Story Thread.
Name: Lazzara
Race: Vampire
Allignment: Evil
Fighting Styles: Nitara's second style from MKDA, A variation of Karate and the Scythe.
Special Moves: Blood Spit, Invisibility, Fly, Garlic Breath
Fatalities: I've done them, but I'll list them at a later stage in full detail.
Relations: Nitara
Links: Secret Vampire Leader, Nitara, Cyrax, The Dragon King.
Bio: (It's in the Story Thread)
Name: Lazzara
Race: Vampire
Allignment: Evil
Fighting Styles: Nitara's second style from MKDA, A variation of Karate and the Scythe.
Special Moves: Blood Spit, Invisibility, Fly, Garlic Breath
Fatalities: I've done them, but I'll list them at a later stage in full detail.
Relations: Nitara
Links: Secret Vampire Leader, Nitara, Cyrax, The Dragon King.
Bio: (It's in the Story Thread)
ladyraiden and tgrant- i guess yall didnt read the part of my post that yall 'copied' where it said "i know u didnt mean it tho" i was just playin. but anyway, jakob was my sole creation just like what every other character concept is to their owner. i actually had several ppl draw him for me bekuz God knows i'm no artist. nemisi sounds tight, but he sounds like he'd be in his own mk rpg, and not a vs. game. i guess thats y he is the lead character of that story yall have on that other site
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Just for the hell of it, I'll randomly select one of your character's information, and create that character if I get MK:D, so you won't be able to use the name you originally hoped to use. You will have to resort to adding random numbers at the end of your original names.
I so hope that one can create more than one character, to use for name holders or guinea pigs.
Sweet, sweet pwnage.
Evas...The MKOnline Anime Authority...
I so hope that one can create more than one character, to use for name holders or guinea pigs.
Sweet, sweet pwnage.
Evas...The MKOnline Anime Authority...
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Name: Makavelli
Origin: Earthrealm
Age: 36
Height: 6"0
Weight: 179
Alignment: Good
Status: Ninja
BIO : He was born into an american family. When he was 18 he decided to move to Japan to become a great martial artist. He learned about the Lin Kuei. He decided to join them so they could teach him martial arts and fighting skills. He learned the power of fire. He can shoot fireballs at enemies. He could do all sorts of attacks with fire. He was real good friends with Sub-Zero. He was another ninja who was to be automated by the Lin kuei. He was captured, but he manages to murder the Lin kuei technicians. He was to be the last ninja automated but he escaped. He wears the standard ninja outfit. His mask is orange, and the rest of his outfit is black and orange. His weapon of choice is a Double-Ninja sword. It is two ninja swords in one. He has dragon symbols on his belt and on his shin guards. The same with his wrist armor. He disapeared after MK3. He moved to Tokyo. He participated in local street fights at night. You were paid if you won. He would whoop anyone's ass in a fight. He was the guy who was on top. His final fight, he was about to lose, and he got so enraged. He engulffed his opponent in flames and disappeared from tokyo. Now, the time of the dragon king's army to be reborn, and the invasion. He knew about Sektor's Tekunin clan. He joins with the earth warriors to defend his homeland from the Dragon King. He finds sub-zero as the invasion begins. He unmasks himself to reveal to sub-zero, and sub-zero remembers who he is. Sub-zero asks him to be a part of his new Lin Kuei and he accepts.
Ending: Makaveli survives to the defeat of the Dragon king but there is another threat to the earth warriors. Sektor's clan has finally been completed and they wage war with the earth warriors. Everyone is beat up and injured. They manage to destroy most of Sektor's army. Makaveli decides to go after Sektor by himself. He doesn't realize how much more Sektor is advanced in technology since the old days in the old lin Kuei. Sektor defeats him, but he lets him live. Sektor captures him and takes him back to his clan and automates him.
About Me
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| smoke2789 Wrote: Name: Makavelli |
Aint that Tupac ( 2-pac) ?!?!
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I would have a real Roman Gladiator champion, abducted by Shang Tsung from the past to act as his bodyguard and champion in MK and granted abilities by Tsung. He would appear as an authentic Gladiator and look very cool therefore and breathe some real freshness into the series.
I would have such a character as a hidden character but when discovered joins the selectable characters permanently.
When first discovered your character would be warped through a portal to the Colliseum of Rome to fight him. The arena would be massive with a massive crowd that is chanting, "Kill,Kill" when "finish him" happens at the end. If a fatality is performed the crowd would roar their approval, if not they would boo and objects will be thrown at your character. The stage would also be interactive with Tigers on chains that can tear chunks out of fighters who wander too close (yes, like the film).
As your character steps from the portal to fight this champion Shang Tsung is already there, sitting in the Emporers throne, the crowd chanting "Hail Caesar" to him. He has hypnotised the crowd. This ties in with the Gladiators storyline.
I would have such a character as a hidden character but when discovered joins the selectable characters permanently.
When first discovered your character would be warped through a portal to the Colliseum of Rome to fight him. The arena would be massive with a massive crowd that is chanting, "Kill,Kill" when "finish him" happens at the end. If a fatality is performed the crowd would roar their approval, if not they would boo and objects will be thrown at your character. The stage would also be interactive with Tigers on chains that can tear chunks out of fighters who wander too close (yes, like the film).
As your character steps from the portal to fight this champion Shang Tsung is already there, sitting in the Emporers throne, the crowd chanting "Hail Caesar" to him. He has hypnotised the crowd. This ties in with the Gladiators storyline.
Name: Scott
Alliance: Evil
Race: Human
Realm: Earth
Fighting Styles: Taijutsu, FreestyleFighting, Machete
Special moves:
Jumps Behind them grabs there neck and bites it three times
jumps on victim throws head against the ground twice than kicks there head
Fatality:
1.Takes Machete hits there stomach than turns them around and hits there back than continuously hits neck until it is cut off
2.Breaks there arms and than slams head against the ground 2 times while blood goes everywhere than he breaks there neck
Look:
First costume: Wears straight Jacket but his arms are free
Second costume: a hospital outfit for patients
Story: After being convicted of 32 counts of murder,and was found clinically insane was sent to the Special Forces maximum security prison. He tricked everyone to believe he was insane so while no expected it he escaped and found his way to the DK tracking down Jax to kill(he is the one who captured him).
Ending: After he killed jax he found sonnya and killed her than returned to the Special Forces and tryed to kill everyoe there.(you can guess what happened to him)
the story sucks
Alliance: Evil
Race: Human
Realm: Earth
Fighting Styles: Taijutsu, FreestyleFighting, Machete
Special moves:
Jumps Behind them grabs there neck and bites it three times
jumps on victim throws head against the ground twice than kicks there head
Fatality:
1.Takes Machete hits there stomach than turns them around and hits there back than continuously hits neck until it is cut off
2.Breaks there arms and than slams head against the ground 2 times while blood goes everywhere than he breaks there neck
Look:
First costume: Wears straight Jacket but his arms are free
Second costume: a hospital outfit for patients
Story: After being convicted of 32 counts of murder,and was found clinically insane was sent to the Special Forces maximum security prison. He tricked everyone to believe he was insane so while no expected it he escaped and found his way to the DK tracking down Jax to kill(he is the one who captured him).
Ending: After he killed jax he found sonnya and killed her than returned to the Special Forces and tryed to kill everyoe there.(you can guess what happened to him)
the story sucks
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Name:Hollow Lotus
Age:Immortal
Description:
Mexican Male Bannadana With a skull on it Red Shirt Black Cargo Pants
Weapon:Sai
Story:thosands of years ago Hollow Lotus was selected to be an Elder god and was the Elder god Of Light.Eventually he and Shinnok Betrayed The elder gods and were banished Shinnok was On the far East side of the Neterrealm while Lotus was sent to the Earthrealm Learning from this experience he created a society named the White lotus now after being casted into stone by Shang Tsung In the First Mortal Kombat He waited for 100's of years to finally Awaken and now that Day has come.
Age:Immortal
Description:
Mexican Male Bannadana With a skull on it Red Shirt Black Cargo Pants
Weapon:Sai
Story:thosands of years ago Hollow Lotus was selected to be an Elder god and was the Elder god Of Light.Eventually he and Shinnok Betrayed The elder gods and were banished Shinnok was On the far East side of the Neterrealm while Lotus was sent to the Earthrealm Learning from this experience he created a society named the White lotus now after being casted into stone by Shang Tsung In the First Mortal Kombat He waited for 100's of years to finally Awaken and now that Day has come.
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Just for fun....
Name: Carlos
Race: Human/Mexican
Alliance: Nuetral
Realm: Earth/East L.A.
Fighting Styles: Street, Hapkido, Gun
Sex: Male
Costumes:
Costume1: White muscle shirt with baggy pants.
Costume2: Hooded black jacket with baggy pants.
Special Moves:
Gangsta Rush: He rushes his shoulder to his opponent.
Bustin' Caps: He shoots the opponent.
Gangsta take down: Slams opponent to the ground
Fatality:
Gangsta Beat Down: He beats the opponent to death with his bare fists.
Story: One day Carlos was summoned by Rayden to aid the earth warriors in the battle against the Dragon King.Upon reaching outworld he decided he would prove his strength and defeated all the earth warriors in order to face the Dragon King alone.When he reached the Dragon King he was offered eternal life and his own lowrider in return for aiding the Dragon King.He refused and challenged the Dragon King to Mortal Kombat.An incredible fight broke out and Carlos succeded in defeating the Dragon King.He returned to earth realm and told all his homies about his battle.After that he was forever known as "Carlos,the homie of earthrealm"
Name: Carlos
Race: Human/Mexican
Alliance: Nuetral
Realm: Earth/East L.A.
Fighting Styles: Street, Hapkido, Gun
Sex: Male
Costumes:
Costume1: White muscle shirt with baggy pants.
Costume2: Hooded black jacket with baggy pants.
Special Moves:
Gangsta Rush: He rushes his shoulder to his opponent.
Bustin' Caps: He shoots the opponent.
Gangsta take down: Slams opponent to the ground
Fatality:
Gangsta Beat Down: He beats the opponent to death with his bare fists.
Story: One day Carlos was summoned by Rayden to aid the earth warriors in the battle against the Dragon King.Upon reaching outworld he decided he would prove his strength and defeated all the earth warriors in order to face the Dragon King alone.When he reached the Dragon King he was offered eternal life and his own lowrider in return for aiding the Dragon King.He refused and challenged the Dragon King to Mortal Kombat.An incredible fight broke out and Carlos succeded in defeating the Dragon King.He returned to earth realm and told all his homies about his battle.After that he was forever known as "Carlos,the homie of earthrealm"
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