cartmansp Wrote: Just for fun.... Name: Carlos Race: Human/Mexican Realm: Earth/East L.A. Fighting Styles: Street, Hapkido, Gun Sex: Male Costumes: Costume1: White muscle shirt with baggy pants. Costume2: Hooded black jacket with baggy pants. Special Moves: Gangsta Rush: He rushes his shoulder to his opponent. Bustin' Caps: He shoots the opponent. Gangsta take down: Slams opponent to the ground Fatality: Gangsta Beat Down: He beats the opponent to death with his bare fists. Story: One day Carlos was summoned by Rayden to aid the earth warriors in the battle against the Dragon King.Upon reaching outworld he decided he would prove his strength and defeated all the earth warriors in order to face the Dragon King alone.When he reached the Dragon King he was offered eternal life and his own lowrider in return for aiding the Dragon King.He refused and challenged the Dragon King to Mortal Kombat.An incredible

Name: Hydro

Alliance: Evil

Race: Unknown

Realm: Unknown

Fighting Styles: Taijutsu, Ninjitsu, Ninja-To

Special moves:

Water Gun: Shoots Water At high speeds at person

Flood: Puts water all around the person hitting them back and forth against the ground


Fatality:

Flood 2: Floods whole arena drowning the victim

Look:

First costume: Ninja outfit

Second costume: White Ninja outfit

hydro was already a character in the mortal kombat comic book. he was a lin kuei assasin sent to stop skorpion and protect subzero. of course he failed tho. i always thought they should mix hydro with the earth god of water concept from mkm. maybe in mk7 huh brah?

I like the concepts so far, here is mine.

Name:Kamon
Race:Egyptian/Demi god
Age:ressurected(Died at 27)
Alliance:unknown
Height:5'9
Weight:160lbs
Origin:Amunra
Disciplines:Egyptian Martial Arts, Zan Quan(Brad Wong's style from DOA3)Segmented wip(Ivy SCII)
Blood Type:O
Hair:Black, tied in a rattail.
Eyes:Burn with blue flames
Fatalitiy:Death Bringer-Concentrates his latent energy to summon Anubus who takes your soul to the underworld.
FinalPlague-Shoots out a mist from his hand that,after taking your soul eats you from the inside.
Hari kari: Redemption-plunges his segmented wip into himself and lets it explode blowing himself to pieces.
Powers:
Horus strike-Shoots a solar flare at his opponent.
Ensnare-Shoots wip at opponent that wraps around him.(Has 2 actions)
1)Retracts like scorpion's rope dart.
2)Kamon uses it to throw his opponent around the ring.
Sonic Slash-Slashes his wip horizontaly or verticaly, depending on what button is pressed causing a sonic wave to shoot out at his opponent.
Outfit:traditionaly egyptian wardrobe.Gold arm bracers, silk shorts, eye highliner, gold plated boots, upper arm banned,Anubus tattoo on his back gold claw gauntlet on left hand.
Outfit 2:Free flowing hair, scarf that acts like a mouth gaurd, strapped wrist bands, white pants tucked into wrapped leg straps, bare feet, white armless vest that covers torso.(Desert Ninja look).

Story:
Long ago the world was ravaged by a sinister oni god called Anubus.(Has his own story in Character thread.)Although he was stopped by Rayden it wasn't without casualties. One of Rayden's best freinds as a human was taken away from him by Anubus. This boy was Kamon, a high preist in the city of Amunra. It was said that he could act as a medium betwwen the Earth and other worldly planes. Anubus witnesses this boy's power when he stood against him and called down the wrath of Horus to try and stop the invasion. Although it didn't affect any of Anubus' forces he was amazed to see that someone besides an oni could control this type of power. As Anubus slayed Kamon, he made him a slave to him. As Kamon layed dying under Anubus' feet he was scorched with the mark of his new master on his back. After Rayden's first defeat Kamon was trained to harness his rage and hatred, along with his power in the afterlife for the eternal servitude of his new master. Kamon was no longer human, but his power exceeded that of any oni.Anubus feared that one day Kamon would regain his free will and seek revenge. He ordered him banished to the final layer of the Netherealm.As he tumbled through the layers of the Netherealm his skin burned with white hot fire and a deepening hatred for the hypocrycy that damned him there. An eternity passed and his torement succeded, bringin him back from the presifice of madness. Somehow he was reborn. Because of his gift of spirit mediation the god Horus brought him back to the world of the living. He is channeled by the elder gods who tell him what has happened, and of Rayden's new status. Although Kamon had regained most of his humanity with the help of Horus the evil seed of Anubus was still burried inside of him. Each night he found himself drenched in blood of the people he has slayeb during his sleep. He forged a weapon that was based off a segmented wip back in ancient Egypt he used this to meditate and control the evil inside, channeling it through his weapon. He realized that if is ever to regain his own life he must destroy Anubus. He hears of a shaman called Nightwolf who can open a rift to the Netherealm. If he finds him and asks him for his assistance to exact his revenge.As he sets out on his journey, he wonders "Is redemption possible?"

warrior Wrote: hydro was already a character in the mortal kombat comic book. he was a lin kuei assasin sent to stop skorpion and protect subzero. of course he failed tho. i always thought they should mix hydro with the earth god of water concept from mkm. maybe in mk7 huh brah?

o sorry i wasnt aware of this

Name: (Unknown)

Alliance: None

Race: Outworld Human

Realm: Outworld

Fighting Styles: Reptile's sword, Dual Broadswords, Large Two-Handed Hammer/Axe/Scythe/Staff

Look: Shady old asian man

Special moves:

Charge: Lunges at opponent with his big weapon

3-d projectiles(Long&Short): Same as Shang Tsung's 3d-Fireballs attack in MKDA

Invisibility: just what it says

Super Uppercut: Dragon Punch style attack, similar to Drahmin's

Fatality:

Fatality Steal: My character likes to humilate his opponent with their own fatality, seeing as creating an orginal fatality is unlikely.

I also want to create my own MK ninja style character, but I've posted him several times already.

Name: Kithak Scorne

Height: 6'6"

Weight: unknown (floats above the ground so his wait is assumed to be ethreal)

Allignment: Evil

Weapon: A double sided blade which can be disconnected into two during a combo.

Outfit: His first outfit is a dark cloak with black angellic wings and a black iron mask covering his nose and mouth. His second outfit would be a black regal armored suit with no helmet and long flowing black hair and black wings of mist.

Eyes: Red pupils surrounded by black.

Special abilities:
Black fire: a series of 3 black fireballs encircle his opponent and explode

Soul of Darkness: A grab from across the screen where the opponent is lifted off of the ground and choked before being thrown to the ground by a black mist which flows out of the eyes of Kithak

Shadow snare: Shadowed arms reach up from the ground and grab the opponent dragging him toward Kithak helplessly.

swept away: jumps int the air and sends a huge gust of wind toward the opponent knocking them back

Fatalities:
Shadow Demon: He holds out his arm and a dark shadow with glowing red eyes appears and jumps into the opponent and slowly their body decays as blood flows to the floor until nothing but a skeleton is left which shatters to the floor as the demon hovers over it and Kithak laughs in the background.

Hatred Stare: Grabs the beaten foe by the throat and stares into there eyes as his glow a bright red. The opponent starts screaming as there skin begins to burn and then ashes fall to the floor and get blown away by the wind.

Bio: Kithak is an ancient Warlord from a forgotten Realm. He watched his realm get destroyed by constant lies, deciet and war. He learned to hate his world. Stumbling upon an old ruin when he was a young man he learned the dark arts of a group of Oni which lurked in the shadows of the Nether Realm. Feeling this power flow through him he understood what his purpose was... to destroy everything. Not much is known of what occured after that except that his realm no longer exists. Now he has appeared in Outworld, drawn to the violence and bloodshed linked to the rising of the Dragon King to continue his lust for the destruction of all Realms.

Ending: Leaving a trail of ashes behind as he approached the beaten Dragon King he lifts the Great King up with one arm and smiles. "You are truly pathetic you fool. You are a King of nothing and now I will send you to your kingdom in oblivion." The screams of the once dominant force of the Dragon king could be heard echoing throughout Outworld as the ground itself pulsed with an explosive power which tore reality itself to nothing.

In Earth realm the sky slowly blackens as the skull of the Dragon King falls to the soil and Kithak hovers silently above it staring at Earth Realms great Kombatants.

Name - Karl Edwards

Status - Escaped Convict from Riker's Island Maximum Security Prison.

Appearance - Standing at 6 feet and 6 inches and weighing 278 pounds, Karl is a very intimidating individual. He would either be clad in his prison issue orange jumpsuit or street clothes(Jeans and a T Shirt). His physique is very well defined. His head is shaved. He has grey eyes and is clean shaven.

History - (Sort of) - After a hard days work as a construction foreman in downtown NYC, all that Karl Thomas wants to do is go home, have a decent meal, play with his kids and make love to his wife. As he arrives at his modest home, he notices that all of the lights inside and outside of the house are off. He thinks that it is strange put doesn't pay much mind to it. As he approaches the steps to his front porch, he realizes that the front door to his house is slightly open. Again, he pays no mind to it. "Maybe one of the children left it open" he thinks to himself. As he enters the house, he sees it in complete disarray. Mirrors knocked off of the wall and shattered, couches flipped upside down, lamps broken, etc. He barely makes it past the front door when he hears a very faint cry. He follows the sound into the living room where he finds his wife, Amanda, curled in the fedal position behind a tipped over couch. He goes to her and askes her what has happened. As he does this, she turns over to reveal that she has been stabbed multiple times in the stomach. As she says "I'm sorry", she passes out. Karl frantically reaches for the phone to call 911, but the phone line is dead. He runs next door to have his neighbors call the paramedics and police, which they start to do immediately. Karl runs back to the house and tends to his wife. Her breathing and pulse are very low and almost non-existant. Again he goes over to his neighbors house and askes his friend Brian to tend to his wife while he looks for his children. He rushes up the stairs screaming his children's names "Andrew!!!! Jessica!!!!" He rushes past the bathroom first to Jessica's room only to find it ransacked and empty. he turns around and kicks down the door or his son's room, to find it the same way. Bewildered, he starts to head back downstair when something in the bathroom catches his eye. he slowly heads in and notices that there is water overflowing from the tub. He slowly pulls back the curtain to find his 2 children Jessica and Andrew laying in the water, drowned. Karl lets out a horrified scream and then pulls the two childrens lifeless bodies from the water. As he begins to perform CPR on his children, he hears some talking through his bathroom window. Two men is street clothes are sneeking over his fence and into his yard. Enraged by the death of his children and the condition of his wife, he rushes downstairs to confront the 2 individuals. On his way downstairs, he rips a bedpost from his son's bed. As he heads through his living room and then his kitchen, he can see the silouette of 1 man through the curtains of his sliding glass door. Without thinking, he runs and jumps through the glass door, tackling the individual. He quickly collects himself and sees the other man running towards him. Karl quickly picks up the bedpost and swings it at the man, knocking him to the ground. He proceeds to beat the man mercilessly with the large piece of wood, striking him only on the head. He then hears a loud pop behind him. He turns around to see the other man holding a revolver. Karl falls to the ground and passes out. He awakes to find himself disoriented, inside of a hospital, handcuffed to the bed. In the room are 2 uniformed officers, and a man that he recognizes as the man who shot him. He tries to jump from the bed but he cannot. The man in the suit says "I am Detective Ross Grover of the New York Police Department. You were shot in the back while myself and my partner were responding to a call at your home. I am the man who shot you. You killed my partner you son of a bitch!" At that, Detective Grover lunged at the bed, but he was restrained by the 2 uniformed police officers and led away.

To make a long story short, Karl Edwards was arrested for the murder of a police officer who was responding the the call that his neighbor made. Karl mistook the officers for the people who killed his family and killed one of them. He was sentenced to death at Rikers Island Maximum Security Prison.

The only way that this story will work is if the Dragon King and his minions invade Earthrealm. Rikers Island erupts in a large riot and some prisoner's escape. One of them being Karl Edwards. After his escape, he starts his own investigation to find out who killed his family and why. After turning up nothing in his investigation, he's desperate. He turns to a psychic who tells him that his family was killed by an unknown force. Something not of this world. Bewildered by this news, Karl wanders away wondering what to believe. Shortly thereafter, he is confronted by a large black man who introduces himself as Major Jackson Briggs. Major Briggs explains what happened to Karl's family. "Karl, your family was attached by what's called an Oni. A powerful creature not of this world. Somehow, it found a previously unknown interdimensional portal. For some reason, this portals exit was directly in your backyard. Literally. This creature butchered your family and then left through the portal."

OK. I'm rambling again. To sum it up, Karl joins the agency that also employs Major Jackson Briggs, General Sonya Blade, Cyrax and Kenshi. He has a score to settle with a particular creature. One that he only knows by the name Drahmin!

I know I skipped some parts of the story. For that I'm sorry. If you would like to hear more, just ask. Let me know what you think.


Weapon - Baseball Bat

Fighting Styles - Street Fighting and Breaking Aikido.

Special Moves:

Tackle - Karl lunges forward and spears his opponent, knocking then to the ground. He then delivers 2 punches followed by an elbow strike to the opponents head.

Big Boot - Karl kicks the opponent in their face, sending them reeling backwards. (stun)

Chokeslam - Karl grabs the opponent by the neck, lifts them up over this head and slam's them to the ground.

Projectile Reversal - After a projectile is fired at Karl, he swings his baseball bat at it, sending the projectile back at his opponent at twice it's normal speed.

Move Reversal - Karl grabs the limb of the opponent which is thrown at him, be it a kick or punch. He then takes the opponent to the ground and snaps either the wrist or ankle.

Jailhouse Uppercut - Karl throws a devastating uppercut which knocks the opponent into the air. (Juggle)

Fatalities:

Home Run Hitter - Karl begins by hitting the opponent in the gut with the baseball bat. After that, he then hits the opponent in the back, knocking him/her to the ground. He then swings the bat like an axe over his head and brings it down with incredible force onto the opponents head. Squish!

Broken Neck - Karl gets behind the opponent and puts him/her into a neck lock. After the opponent struggles for about 3 seconds, Karl snaps their neck with such ferocity, that he partially tears it off. (you can see part of the spinal chord, flesh and a whole lot of spurting blood.)

good story for karl i guess

Thank you. I could have taken if further, but I didn't want to spend any more time writing it. I was getting hungry. There's more to it than that though. I will add an ending soon.

Oravear Wrote: good story for karl i guess

This is my first time doin sumtin like so dont think I'm not good at making characters and bios...

Name: AMANDEZ(male)
Realm: Earth
Birth: Febuaray 15, 1980
Fighting Styles: Tae Kwon Doe, Manji Style
Weapon: Sais Alignment: Good Hight: 6'0 Weight: 192

Bio: After the death of his best friend Lui Kang, and the Deadly Alliance, now the birth of the Dragon King, Amandez was very furious. He entered Mortal Kombat to destroy the Dragon King and his brutal Army...

Ending: Thanks to Amandez, the Dragon King and his Army were finished. Everybody in Earthrealm was safe. The people gave me a special tribute for defeating the Dragon King. Earthrealm was safe once again...

I think It's retarted but I guess it's alright for my first try.

Fatality: Arm Breaker: He kicks really hard in the opponents gut, which makes his foot go through his opp. guts, then he grabs the opp. arms and uses is foot inside the gut to pull the arms apart. As hes holding the arms, he flicks his foot out of the opp. gut, then the opp. falls dead. lol

name- Hansuke Sakumaa

alignment- good

clan- Shirai Ryu

eyes- Hazel

hight- 6ft weight-196lbs. specials- spear(scorpion isnt the only one hu new it, its a clan secret)

bloodlust- Remembering the brutal merder of his clan enrages him adding extra damage to his attacks.

whip- uses his spear as a whip.

fatalities-

whip rip- Hansuke wraps his wip around his opponents nek and and wanks so its like a lynching.(decapitation)

crussifiction- Hansuke kiks his opponent agenst a wall and using throwing spike in his Shinobi Shozoku(ninja uniform) and throws the spike into his opponents wrists and ankles. Then he stabs them thru their chest with Tachi.

weapon and styles- Hapkido,Tang Soo Do,
tachi,throwing spikes

story-(alot like scorpion's) Hansuke was out getting the clan chinese food when Quan Chi brutaly merderd them all. Or so he thot. When ansuke reterned with all the food he found his clan ded. After weeping for his fallen brethren he vowed to discover hu killed his clan. After many years of doing odd jobs to bet by and put bred on the table, Hansuke takes an assasination mission and on his way to ge his pay, he spot scorpion trailing a strange man hu looks ghastly.
Hansuke then trails Scorpion and Quan Chi into Outworld where he finally cathes up to Scorpion and gets filled in on wats going on. Hansuke enters the ternament even tho Scorpion warned him of the dangers and being the last living member of the Shirai Ryu he must continue the clans traditions. Hansuke enters the ternament to avenge his clan with Scorpion as an ally.


thats it. hoped ya liked it.

These are all really good guys GJ

Bludgun the Unholy

story: While Shang Tsung was restoring the dragon king's undeatable army, Quan chi stumbled across an entrance to a dark well hidden tunnel. He hesitated at first but curiosity got the better of him and he proceeded down into the darkness. As he was walking down the tunnel a sense of fear began to creap over him, which suprised quan chi because he had never known fear,even when pursued by the vengenceful scorpion in his time in the netherealm.

As he got further and further down into the darkness his paranoia got worse.He even began sweating and shaking,he was now aware that there was something darker at work. Finally reaching the end of the tunnel,he came to a large set of doors lit by flames either side. He read the anciet texts and learnt of what lay behind the doors.

Sealed by ancient magics, lay Blugun the Unholy.The six hundreth and sixty sixth soldier in the dragon kings army.He who lead the dragon king's army into its countless victories and he who slaugthered and mutilated hundreds of thousands. Quan chi went onto to learn that Blugun was the one solier who did not need to have a soul placed into his body as the dragon king had himself created Blugun,trapping a soul within his towering,armour clad body.Quan chi decided not to tell any one of what he had discovered,especially when he read the final piece of text which told of Blugun's only obediance to the dragon king...and how he would be realeased from his tomb when the dragon king returned.
Quan Chi ran back through the tunnel and sealed it...

Blugun the unholy has been locked within his tomb since the death of the dragon king...Over the countless thousands of years Blugun has been slowly driven mad,as he is locked forever within his body,never being able to die.He yearns for the day he is realeased,yearns for the day he can taste the blood of battle..

Weapons:Two unholy battle axes,that can slice through the toughest metal.
Appearance: He towers above the other soldiers in the dragon kings army.He is covered in armour and knows no fear.Surrounding his neck are some of the skulls of his most prized victims.
Basically he would have been a sub boss and i want to go to bed...so thats all i can be arsed to write.Night

Name: Azrael Kailan

Height: 6'

Weight: 210lb

Allignment: neutral

Weapon: dual snake fang katanas

Outfit 1: He has long black hair tied back in a ponytail reaching to the middle of his back. He has no shirt on but is wearing shoulder plates and black pants with an emerald snake medallion on his belt.

Outfit 2: Black demonic shining helmet covering his entire head. Black armor plates covering his body and two snake eyes on the breast plate of the armor.

eyes: Glowing green

Special abilities:
Double vision: a copy of Azrael appears at the other end of the screen which mirrors all of his movements.

Ethreal fire: a green flame engulfs the body of the opponent from surrounding him.

Viper: three vipers crawl out of Azrael's arms and slither toward the opponent jumping on them slowly taking life away as they bite them. The snakes then head back to give the life they stole to Azrael unless Azrael gets hit or the snakes do.

Constrictor: A large python like snake forming out of Azrael's arm wraps around the opponent crushing them then tossing them backwards.

Venom sting: with the katanas in hand a black ooze covers them and if stabbed into the opponent paralyzes them and slowly drains there life leaving them open to an attack for 3 seconds.

Fatalities:
Feeding Time: hundreds of snakes swarm around the defeated foe engulfing them as you hear their screams. They slither away and only the skull is left from the opponent which Azrael crushes with his foot.

Venom: Azrael yells loudly as his body glows green and he slams his hand into the chest of the opponent. The body of the opponent slowly turns black as blood oozes out of his/her mouth and they fall to the ground and melt into a black puddle on the floor.

Head on a pike: throws the opponent high in the air and throws one of the swords spinning towards them which decapitates the opponent. The decapitated head falls onto a pike jutting up from the floor.

Bio: Azrael is part of a clan that was destroyed when Outworld was taken over by Shao Kahn. This underground clan of warriors had worshipped an ancient serpent god known as Ascenthia. They practised magic which involved merging ones spirit with that of a snake and using their strength as the warriors weapon. Azrael was a boy when the clan was destroyed but was already excelling in his training. With a secret vow to one day find Shao Kahn and kill him he continued training till he had the Strength to face the Emperor of Outworld. When the Deadly Alliance had supposedly killed Shao Kahn Azrael was enraged and thought his vow of revenge would go unfulfilled.
A stirring throughout Outworld begins as a new force known as the Dragon King arises to overtake the throne of Outworld and conquer the other realms as well. Rumors of Shao Kahn surviving and waiting for his chance to reclaim the throne made it to Azrael and he decided that he would not miss the opportunity this time and entered the battle to find his enemy and destroy him. No One would get in his way.

Ending: Every fighter who got in his way he destroyed and left in heaps of pain. Making his way to a cave which the rumors had lead him to believe Shao Kahn was hiding in, his eyes blaze brightly in anticipation. He enters the cave as he sees a tall lumbering shadow cast on the wall. He draws his swords, he'll finally get his chance.


Tell me what you guys think of this one

Name: Lemmewinks

Alliance: Nuetral

Race: Reptile/Nomad

Realm: Outworld

Sex: Male

Fighting Styles: Ninjitsu,Dragon,Axe on chain

Special moves:

Dragon Slam: Lifts opponent over head then slams opponent to the ground.Then jumps on opponent.

Chain Reaction: Uses chain to grab opponent then pulls opponent to him.Then kicks opponent away

Acid Slip: Spits acid at the ground and then the opponent slips on the acid.

Fatality1

Dragon King: Morphs into a dragon and then engulfs opponent in flames.

Fatality2
Axe Slice: Swings axe and cuts opponent in half.

Hara Kiri:
Acid Rain: Spits acid up in the air then gets killed by the acid when it falls down.

Look:

First costume: Ninja suit covered in green metal.

Second costume: Black ninja suit with green medallion on waist.

Story: After growing up in a hidden village in outworld,Lemmewinks says good bye to his nomad father and reptilian mother.He sets out to collect the sacred green medallion rumored to be hidden in the forest.While he searches for the medallion he meets Rayden who summons him to help earths warriors in the battle against the Dragon King.Lemmewinks is shocked to see the Thunder god,Rayden,right in front of him.He agrees to help the warriors.

Ending: Upon reaching the Dragon Kings fortress,the earth warriors are ambushed by the Dragon Kings army.After defeating the group of army men the warriors are all very injured except for Lemmewinks.Lemmewinks eventually meets the Dragon King,a spectactular fight breaks out.Lemmewinks emerges as the winner.After defeating the Dragon King,Lemmewinks returns to his village.A statue is built in his honer.Lemmewinks is forever known as the savior of outworld.

2000 years later a movie is released starring Mel Gibson called"The Passion of the Lemmewinks"

Did anybody like my Kamon character on the first page?

ok.... just wanted alittle feedback on my character but whatever

Darkase

alliance : controlled by quan chi

sex :female

fighting styles : dragon,hapikido

weapon : the universe

attacks :eclipse of the sun
7 consecutive planets
meteor annihalation

fatalitys : heat or restoration (sun) burns alive
portal of paralysis
oblivion

Darkase goddes of the galaxy came to earth to stop the dragonkings monstrous ways. little did she know that there was another saddistic evil man bent on destruction standing right be hind her. Quan chi has casted a trans on darkase,and with darkase controlled by quan chi there is no telling what could happen to any world.

I thought that kammon idea was actually really impressive and i thought the story for that karl bloke was very well written.But I think maybe his family should have been wiped out by the red dragon clan. As it possibly gives it more intrigue then just a random killing by an oni. How about Karl has had a tattoo on his shoulder blade of a black dragon.Hes never been able to explain it or known where it has come from,hes just always had it. Maybe he doesnt know nethin about his farther and it turns out his dad was in fact a member of the black dragon,so Karl is now a marked man because he is one of the last blood members of the black dragon.OooOo Maybe this could be like the Godfather where Karl starts off a regular guy...but gets dragged into this gang warfare..and he gets darker and darker as the games go on...Until he becomes a ruthless leader of the black dragon, Reuniting them and making them a force once again.PLus he is constantly searching for the member of the red dragon who wiped his family[new character] and the guy who ordered it[mavado].NEwhos this is jus a suggestion for whats an already good story...i aint trying steal ur idea or nothin heh

Name: Karla

Alliance: Evil

Race: 1/2 vampire,1/2 human

Realm: Now lives at Vampire Rhelm

Fighting Styles: Kenpo,Lu He Ba Fa,Sai Scythes

Special moves:

Flying Roll Kick-Rolls at the enemy and ends with
with a jumping kick.

Diveing Palms-Karla jumps over her enemy and dives
with her palms at her enemy.

Back Roll Kick-Karla rolls under her enemy to go
to the other side and kicks them by the ass!

Grow And Roll Attack-Karla rolls at her enemy
then she uppercuts her victim in the air and she does a spin kick.

Fatalities:

Tornado Blood Scythes-Karla uppercuts her enemy in the air and starts fighting her victim by circiling around them,creating a tornado. The tronado stops and Karla throws her Scythes at the enemy's chest. The oppenent starts moaning and groaning till they bleed to death. Karla takes the sais out of her enemy who starts groaning again and Karla sucks the rest of their blood out,leaving a bite mark in the victim's neck.

Scythe Tear Attack-Karla digs her scythes into
the enemys chest with some screams and groans.
Karla tries to tear the enemy into 2 and she does it.

Look:

First outfit:
Head-A red headband over her forehead
Chest-Red Bra and one Vampire wing with a tear
Legs-A red dress what reveals some of her legs
Feet-Red high heels

Second outfit:
Head-Nothing
Chest-Tae-Kwan-Do Vest
Legs-Tae-Kwan-Do Pants
Feet-Wooden Sandals

Name: Ching Guai
Origin: Unknown
Residence: Nether Realm
Status: God of Fire and The Nether Realm
Age: Unknown
Alignment: Nuetral

Bio:
Ching Guai is the god of fire and the Nether Realm. He has a limited control over all of the things that pass though the Nether Realm, and tends to get involved in the affairs of mortals for entertainment. Ching Guai is neither a good nor an evil god, but tends to loom on the darker side of things. It is rumored that he taught Shinnok and Shang Tsung their dark ways and was the one who enveloped Drahmin in evil when he was on earth. Ching Guai is the father to Shinnok and it has been said that another of his spawn is Moloch.
Apearance:
Outfit: Ching Guai favors the colors red and gold. He has long silvery hair that most of is pulled back into a high ponytail on the top-back of his head. His silver beard and mustache hangs down to his thick black cummerbund belt. He wears a long, red, baggy-sleeved Kung Fu style top shirt with gold dragon designs flowing all over it. His eyes are white with no visible pupils and his pants are in the same style of his shirt, long with huge legs, except for the fact that at the bottom they turn black. Ching Guai is extremely skinny, and has the apearance of an old Chinese man with long spindally fingers.
Alternative: All of Ching Guai's hair is down and his eyes glow red. There are various gold peircings in his ears. He wears robes in the style of Shang Tsungs first robes. At the waist, they are tied tight with a thick red and gold cummerbund. His nails are longer than usual and painted black. At the corners of his eyes, there is dark black make up, making his eyes look more slanted than usual.
Styles:
Oni
Tai Kwon Do
Chain Whip (spike tipped)
Special moves:
Raining flame (small and big bursts of fire rain down on the opponent)
Black flame (Ching Guai shoots a black and red flame at the opponent, causing them to go into a dizzy spell)
Fire Teleport (Ching Guai engulfs himself in flames and shoots himself across the screen, knocking over opponent as he goes)
Fatatities:
1. Flaming Decapitation (Ching Guai makes himself a flaming demon, raising just out of the opponents reach. He lets the flame descend quickly on the victim, engulfing them. The fall to their knees screaming and Ching Guai lowers himself slighty, turning and kicking their head off, sending it, flaming across the screen)
2. Hell soul (Ching Guai's dark, fiery soul rises out of his body, looming over the victim. It smiles, showing black, blood stained teeth. It goes down the opponent's throat, causing the opponent to caugh up blood. As the opponent coughs, their mouth starts to smoke. Ching Guai's soul comes out of their mouth, on fire as the opponent's body burst into flames. The soul is now dragging the victim's soul, screaming from the body. The victim's soul is clawing at Ching Guai's as Ching Guai's soul drags him into a flaming pit in the floor. The dark soul comes back up and implants itself in the still Ching Guai. He goes into a victory pose)

Well, here's my character...

Name: Alex Walker

Race: Human

Alliance: Good

Realm: Earth

Group/Clan: Special Forces

Fighting Style: Tae Kwon Do, Judo

Weapon: Kali-chaku (it's a kali stick which can be pulled in half still being held by chains and turned into a nunchaku)

Gender: Female

Hair: Dark brown which falls down to her waist. Always leaves it down.

Eyes: Light blue

Height: 5'6''

Weight: 130

Costumes: (it's not that creative but it was all i could think of for now) First costume is a black leather jacket over a white tank-top and blue, black, and white camoflage jeans. Her second costume is minus the jacket and the camoflage pants which is replaced with short blue jeans. In both costumes, she wears black ankle length combat boots.

Fatalities:
1: Backpain: She goes behind her opponent and kicks them hard enough to break their spine in half. The opponent's upperhalf bends back quickly, the broken end of their spine pushed forward and pierce right throught their stomach. a quickly scream follows, then they fall to their ground dead, their head right next to their feet.

2: Back At Ya: She takes the opponent's weapon and uses one of their combos before stabbing them. If a weapon, like a tonfa or kalistick is involved, she does a combo and follows it with a hard blow to the back of the neck, breaking it.

Bio: Agent Alex Walker was with Special Forces for only a few months when the Deadly Alliance occured. When Special Agent Kenshi was sent to Outworld to search for the missing Agent Cyrax, she was next in line to go to Outworld in case anything happened to him. Just before the destruction of the OIA, Alex received injuries during an unrelated mission and was unable to go to Outworld after the OIA's destruction. She had fully recovered just as the Deadly Alliance ended. Immediately after, the Special Forces base was being attacked by the Dragon King's Army, who had invaded Earth to dominate it and Special Forces were one of their first priorities. Agent Alex and Agent Kenshi were the only survivors of the attack on Special Forces. After the attack, they were approached by an unfamiliar Goddess named Ashrah, who had told them that mankind was in danger and offered them to fight alongside others to destroy the Dragon King and his undefeatable army. Both of them agree and follow her to Outworld.

Ending 1: During the search for the Dragon King, Alex was accidentally separated from Kenshi and the rest of the few Earthrealm warriors after a battle with some of the comrades of the Dragon King. Alex found herself on her own on the search for the Dragon King and had hoped to find the warriors eventually. As she did, she was approached by an man in black, who said he knew where the warriors were. She followed him, not taking note of the red dragon design on the back of the man's trenchcoat. When they reached what looked like a cave, the man turned to her, hookswords in hand, and attacked Alex. She fought back, but eventually he overpowered her and impaled her with his weapons. He left her behind to die in the dark cave. as he stepped out, he was attacked by kenshi, who had sensed the fight between him and alex. they fought for a bit, but the man escaped after kicking kenshi far enough back to be able to escape. kenshi came to alex's aid. ironically, she received the same injuries as he had when he first went to outworld. kenshi took her back to the portal that would take them back to earth. after getting her to a hospital and the few doctors there have her settled, kenshi resumed his mission in outworld, leaving alex wondering if he would ever come back alive.

OR

Ending 2: Alex and the rest of the warriors finally made their way to the Dragon King's lair. The fight was long and hard, but they managed to destroy the Dragon King's army and the Dragon King himself. When they returned to Earth, Alex and Kenshi rebuild Special Forces and the OIA. they recruited new soldiers who dedicated themselves in protecting Earthrealm from criminals and from evil forces in other realms. With the Dragon King gone, it seemed as though Earth would enjoy peace for many years. little did anyone realize was that a former Outworld Emperor has escaped from the Netherealm to reclaim Outworld and to reclaim all other realms, especially Earth.

*So what do you think? Constructive criticism is welcome*

I already posted this Character in the 'MK Fan Art Discussion'But I think I'll post him here aswell.
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Name: Flicktion
Realm: Outworld
Weapon: Two Katana's
Gender: male
Height: Unkown
Weight: Unkown

Story:
Many years ago Shang Tsung came across Flicktion in outworld. From the first moment Shang Tsung sore him he thought he was worthy of playing a major role in Shang Tsungs war against the Kombatants of earth.

Flicktion wasn’t evil; he just wants to protect his kid sister ‘Layer’ by any means. Shang Tsung promised Flicktion he would care for Layer like she was his own daughter. But Shang Tsung wanted Flicktion to become more evil. So to bring out his dark nature Shang Tsung ordered Gore to murder Flicktion’s sister.
When Flicktion found her blood covered, lifeless body on the ground Shang Tsung said Raiden had killed her.

Flicktion travailed threw a mystical portal to earth and hunted down the God of Thunder. Flicktion was enraged, with every blow Flicktion gave Raiden another tear fell free to the ground. Raiden tried to explain while they fought he knew nothing of Layer’s death.
But after a long hard fought battle, Flicktion had the mighty Raiden defeated.
But before Flicktion finished him, for some reason he believed Raiden.
Raiden told Flicktion Shang Tsung would do anything to have a strong army on his side. Even if it means manipulating those that don’t join his army on there own free will.

So Flicktion left Raiden broken and defeated on the ground, he travailed back to outworld on the hunt for Shang Tsung, filled with unanswered questions he entered Shang Tsungs fortress threw a secret entrance. Where he over heard Shang Tsung talking of how he had tricked Flicktion and it was Gore who had killed his sister.

Flicktion attacked Shang Tsung but still weak from his battle with Raiden, Shang Tsung defeated Flicktion with the help of Gore and tossed him into a never ending portal.

Now he exists in an eternal state, falling into nothingness.
It’s only a matter of time before he is freed from this prison and seeks revenge on Shang Tsung.

Maybe The Dragon King could set him free?.....

This is my character scythe i've revamped his story and you can see the picture of him in the Fanart section (made by TomTaz).

Name :Scythe

Age: 10770

Sex: Male

Height: 6'9"

Weight: 254 pounds

Race: Human of Edenia, he is of Black ethnicity

Clan: I'm not part of a clan but Scythe is leader of the Brotherhood of the Oscura .The brotherhood of the Oscura was founded 7000 years ago by Scythe himself, their main goal is to find and/or steal the sacred scriptures that may let them resurrect their Elder Demon god known as Lucifer which was vanished from the Netherealm millenia ago in a war against Shinok. Scythe's interest in Lucifer was born when he was lost in the 3rd plane of the netherealm (after being tricked by one of his most deadly enemies, princess Kitana) suffering tortures by the Oni Warlock named Moloch, in an intent of escape Scythe, coincidentally found Lucifers Magical Scythe which let him escape from the Netherealm before The Oni could destroy him. The Scythe contained the inscriptions on Lucifer's legend and the necesarry elemtns to bring him back from the vanquishment. After that, Scythe founded the brotherhood of the oscura siding up with the worst criminals of the Edinia Realm. Note: I hope this is enough for the clan story

Side: Neutral/Evil depends on who is the best bidder for his alliegance

Eyes: Green

Hair: Black Hair, Long hair full of dreadlocks, very dirty and with some red lights in it.
Weapons: He holds the mighty Magical Scythe of Lucifer in which he weilds the power to resurrect his fallen Demon. It has some onscriptions along the handle, it has a big blade and a little spike on the tip.

Fighting Styles:

1.-Lima Lama

2.-Outworld Nunjutsu

3.-Scythe

Powers:

1.-Scythes blade shock: he swings his blade and unleashes a green-shockwave in the form of the scythe's blade

2.- Oscura Touch: Scythe apporaches his foe and pokes five point in his head just to temporarily blind his opponent. some black ooze pours from his opponents eyes.

3.- Oscura Curse: With his abilities as a master of wicked tricks scythe focuses the Power of his scythe through his eyes and directly to the opponents insides where he retorts in pain letting scythe beat them up.

Fatality one: PLASTIC SURGERY: Scythe approaches the foe and pokes the foe's eyes, till the eyeballs burst, the opponent screams in pain while bloodpours form his eyeholes, then he sticks both his hands inside the opponent mouth, breaking some teeth, the hands are grabbing each jaw, then he suddenly cracks oppen the foe's jaw in a horrible sound of bones breaking, after that, he sticks out his Scythe and slices the opponent vertically from the throat to the lower abdomen, the opponent falls on his knees while the slice opens and the insides come out, the opponent dies on his knees with his insedes out, mouth craked and no eyes.

Fatality two: THE OSCURA LEGEND: Scythe approaches his opponent and with his large fingernails he makes little cuts in the shape of the Oscura brotherhood logo (see the drawing in art section), he starts an old chant (thatis actully written in his arm tatoo) as he finishes the chant the opponent starts screaming in pain as blood starts spourting out of his ears, eyes, nose, mouth and other bodily holes. the body of the opponent starts aging and aging more until the opponent starts Rotting alive!Note, the head doesnt rots at all just the body.

Bio: He was born in a family of servants to the Royal Family of Edinia Scythe early childhood was full of mishaps as his father was tortured and exectued after he was unfairly accused of high treason to King Jerrod ( Scythes Father was one of the most loyal servants to king Jerrod, he was an obstacle for Shao Kah in his Quest for assasination of the king, so Shang Tsung with his morph abilities schemed a plan to make Scythes Father (Named Akhan) seem guilty of the assasination of a high court priest) after that Scythe decides to work hard for his mother and sisters just not to let his family fall in disgrace, but in a shocking event his mother and family were assasinated ( coincidentally) when they were surprised in a crossfire between Jerrod Army and Shao Kahns Extermination Squads. After this event he swore to avenge his family, for his purpose he decided to start a journy to hone his skills. On one of this journeys he encountered with the young sorcerer Shang Tsung which offered him what he most wanted: REVENGE. Tsung Personally trained Scythe in all the fighting skills he could as well as in some black Arts. After many years of training, he was commanded personally by Shao Kahn along some of his generals, to assasinate King Jerrod. In a extremely brutal battle against Jerrods Army Scythe emerged victoriuos and finally killed the Edinia so loved King Jerrod..........

After this events, Shao Kah showed no interest in Scythe anymore and sent him on useless missions across Edinia, in one of this missions he was ambushed and tricked into a portal by a young beautiful lady named Kitana (he didn0t knoe she was the heir to Edinias Throne) and this portal lead nowhere but the 3rd plane of the Netherealm. After many adventures and mishaps in the Netherealm (See Clan story above), Scythe finally returns with nothing but the long lost Elder Demon Lucifer's Magical Scythe and with no other objective than the resurection of the evil Demon. For this to be done , he needed to collect the scattered Oscura writtings where the ancient legend of Lucifer is Written, as for this Scythe founds the Brotherhood of the Oscura along wioth some of the most terrible criminals in Edinia. During the next 1000 years they tortured, killed and brutally asassinate hundresds of Ednias most sacred Priests (that were in charge of the scriptures), he killed, destroyed temples and villages in the searh of them until he was captured byt the personal guards of princess Kitana and Sent to The Long Forgotten Barrened Edinian Prision where he stayed for 3000 years surviving with mutants, zaterrans and other earthlings, fighting for survivale and making his mind terribly insane and paranoic. After that time in a shocking explosion and battle he was freed by non other thatn Quan Chi, now general of the Dragon Kings armies, Scythe will become on of the main parts of the DK plan to destroy realms as he is the key to the resurection of Lucifer, on of the DK greatest allies and a terrible weapon himself.